Kya yahi pyaar hai? - Updt pg 8: THE END - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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RECAP: rohan & mukti are out on their so called "date" and prem is feeling really jealous.

He walked back to his car and went inside remembering all those times he spent with Mukti and now when he just saw her with her so-called "best friend" who know as he knows her boyfriend.
Prem started his car and drove off towards having flashbacks of him & mukti spending time together. Their first dance at sneha & sharads beach party, then at Panchmeshwar (when mukti was dreaming away - how that dance got into Prem's mind, I have no idea lol), their dance at the disco and then valentines night. All these memories kept on flashing past him as if he was re-collecting something really precious.
He felt a urge of jealousy and headed straight towards the disco as that was the only place he could get her out of his mind.

BM - bar man
P - prem

P: hey give me a drink please
BM: yes sir.

prem started drinking away. Just then he saw someone, someone who he thought would never be here in her entire life. There she was, standing looking at him. Prem shook his head to see what he saw was true or not. He slowly went upto her and tried reaching out to her. Mukti was there, beyond his reach. He tried to reach out but then she just disappeared out of thin air. She was gone. Prem felt banging into someone. After saying a quick sorry he left the bar and made his way towards the car re-calling Mukti.

Meanwhile, at the restaurant, Mukti and Rohan were re-calling Prem's behaviour towards their's. An uncontrolling laughing Mukti sat up and made her way towards the car while Rohan went to go and pay the bill.

R: did you see his face when i held your hand? it was so good to see his reaction u know that Mukti.
M: oh yes it was. I'm telling you, he always gets on my nerves but this time the attitude we showed him got on his. Oh man, this is going to be so much FUN!
R: you are rite Mukti. this is going to be alot of fun. can't wait for the next lot faces that he is going to be making the next time he sees us 2 together.
And with that, they drove back home finding prem's car there and him looking out of his window.
Rohan kissed mukti's hand before going inside the house leaving an absent-minded prem staring at that scene he saw a few seconds ago.

He couldn't believe what he just saw. Basanti let that guy kiss her. Ewwww, nasty that was.
'Prem, why do you care? Its not as if you love her now do you?
Do you? Do you love Mukti prem?

He felt drowsy with that question in his mind and drifted off to bed.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
awwww prem is falling for her! haha jealous prem is awsome! keep up the good work!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
hey great update plz continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this is great so please continue soon
Patel 1993 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for replying.
will surely try to update this one once i have done the other 2
Patel 1993 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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can some-one please tell me on how to upload pictures on I-F? desperately need help




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Posted: 18 years ago
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umm u can go to www.tinypic.com and upload it there then 4 links will come up, u have to copy the second link tht comes up and paste that one on IF.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Recap: prem is feeling very confused about his feelings for mukti

THE NEXT MORNING:
Prem comes down and sees Rohan sitting on the sofa reading the paper (sports page), Rohan also sees him.

R: hey prem

Prem re-called last scene with rohan kissing Mukti on the hand be4 coming inside the house and became angry 😡 and replied back a simple yet hollow 'hello'. Then asked where his mother india was and rohan said in the kitchen preparing breakfast.

P: okay and sat down on the sofa with his legs stretch out wide. Just then he asked
How was dinner last night after I left? you know, you and basanthi, on your date. He emphasized on the word date hoping to get a resonse from rohan.
R: It went wonderful, we ended up feeding each other lovingly. It was so great prem, you should have seen her (mukti), she was really gorgeous last night. You saw right?
P: yeah re-calling that beauty he saw with rohan at the restuarant last night.
R: you know, since i'm going next week, back to U.S, i was thinking in asking her whether I should propose to her or not and maybe she would like to come along with me and live there & then maybe you know, we could get married and oh you would be the guess of honour of corse. you have become my friend and are choti ma's son, so you have to be there, but don't tell no-one about this, not even Mukti coz she don't know and I wanna surprise her with the ring. He showed prem a diamond ring


It was a beauty. No-one would be able to deny that gorgeous little thing. One slip on that finger of hers and she could been gone 4ever!

Prem thought his ears were deceiving him when he heard the word 'propose' & 'married'. Did he just hear what he thought he had heard? Basanti, getting married and moving up to America with this guy who was sitting talking about it as if it was completely normal. But why did he care if mukti would go? it wasn't as if he had cared for her now did he? Maybe there was a little attraction towards but he didn't like her of any sort. Did he?

R: what do you think prem? you think she would agree or not to my proposal?

Prem didn't know what to say. He just sat there dumbfounded remembering all his moments with Mukti. As if he had realized something, he rushed out of the room and made his way towards Mukti's house. Yes he was in love with her! All those times that they had spent together were finally meaning something to him. He had always loved her, only was just to stubborn to realize it. He re-called every single moment with her (there theme song playing in the background) and also re-called his talk with Rohan just now. He heard rohan voice talking about proposing to her and to come and live with him when he goes back to America next week. He made his way on towards Mukti's house when he saw........

Mukti was standing there with a white skirt on and brown top with and inside layer of white. To make it more simple, she threw in a white duppatta. Prem thought she looked like a goddess. She was really beautiful he thought. So beautiful that he couldn't see any thing that missing from the image that he had just seen. Walking over to her to tell her how he felt, he was side-tracked by someone who also was walking over to her.

Rohan, he saw was with Mukti and was complimenting her on her looks (atleast that was what Prem thought he was doing). She was smiling so much. Prem just thought "what she smiling about? all he did was compliment her on how she is looking 2day!(i think), mind you prem, she is looking GORGEOUS! ain't it? no-one like her is there who could be like that. So bossy and noisy - in other words Prem, a complete BASANTI! and this basanti is only mine. I'm gonna becum her veeru one way or another if it is the last thing i do and with that he whisked off towards her as rohan had left to go somewhere.
Edited by Patel 1993 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lve it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊 😛 😉 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
Edited by zeefan 1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
oh god sum u r a master at dis 😉 😃

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