*~KANCH KYE RISHTY~*[SK Last part] - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
Par agle hi pal sujal ki nazru ky samny wo sub scene aa jaty hai jub kashish ky ghar walau ne sujal ky maa baap ki insult ki etc etc.Ab jesy sujal ne apny hosh hi khuu diye os ne ju sharaab ki bottle hath mei pakdhi hai wo pichy mud ky zor sy window py marta hai eak zor ki awaz ky sath botle tot jati hai kashish apny muu py hath rakh ky rony lagti hai ab sujal kashish ki tarf turn lyta hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wo kashish ki tarf badhny lagta hai ahista ahista kashish phati phati ankhu sy sujal ko dykh rahi hai aur sujal osy ab apni kashish nahi bulky os insan ki beti aur behan dikh rahi hai jis ne os ky maa baap ko ghar sy nikala kashish bilkul diwar ky sath judh jati hai wo tu darwazy sy bahir bi nahi ja sakti kyu ky door tak puhnchny sy phle osy sujal ky paas sy guzarna ho ga door sujal ky pichy hai aur sujal pura rasta ghery khara hai ab sujal bilkul kashish ky qareeb puhunch chuka hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
hey anam wowwwwwww man what a rocking part šŸ‘ . was eally very nice šŸ˜‰ . u know u r right that when a person is in verge of taking revenge he can't see anything else in front of him,like whether the person he is harming is right or wrong 😔 . in this case i think ki kashish is wrong 😔 . i mean ki sujal kashish se itna pyaar karta hai and also somewhere ahe also likes him and loves him lekin dad aur bhai ke wajah se she is not able to confess her love 😔 which is hurting sujal like hell and also baar baar uske parents aur sujal ki insult karte hai 😭 . like itna bhi fayda nahi uthana chahiye na unhone just because sujal will not do anything cause he loves her . but i think it's enough 😔 . kashish ke liye bura bohot lad raha hai 😭 , lekin everything is fair in love ā¤ļø and war 😔 , and this is kinda war i think šŸ˜‰ . joh sujal kar raha hai that is wrong , but u know what ki shayad iss sab se kashish sujal ke paas aajaye 😳 though after some time cause she will really be hurt, lekin baad mein usse ehsaas hoga ki why he did such a thing 😭 . and it was just cause of her because her family always insulted him and his parents and she didn't even said a word when everything was happening 😔 . gosh!!! really excited to know what will happen šŸ˜‰ . continue soon yaar plzzzz....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 šŸ˜› 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ab sujal kashish ky bilkul qareeb puhunch chuka hai kashish ko apna sans badh hota mehsus ho raha hai wo diwar ky sath bilkul judh ky khadhi hai aur roye jaa rahi hai oss ky muu sy dabi dabi siskiyan nikal rahe hai &nb sp; k: sujal please... Wo sujal ko apny itny paas aty dyekh kar darr rahi hai sujal nashy aur gusy mei hai...
Edited by Anam azhar - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
Sujal touches on kashish cheeks by his hand.[ahista sy] sujal zor sy kashish ka hath pakar ky osy bed py dhaka dyta hai kashish falls on the bed badly she wants to get up quickly but sujal pulls her again on the bed & hold her hands tightly & kiss on her cheeks kashish is crying[zor zor sy] k: sujal chudu muje please aaahhh aahhhh mama koi bchau muje but sujal can't hear anything like a stone kashish chekh rahi hai sujal chodhu muje par sujal jesy suny ki takat khu chuka hai SUJALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL [ye kashish ki akhri chekh thi os ky badh wo hoshu-hawas khu dyti hai i mean behosh ho jati hai]
Edited by Anam azhar - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
Don't ask mai ne ye scene kesy likha aj tak ka sub sy mushkil scene tha mery liye aur meri ff ky liye.Uffff it was very deficult%
Edited by Anam azhar - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohhhhhhh my god, ohhhhh nooooo..... part padh kar lagta hai that sujal ne yeh nahi karna chahiye tha uske saath 😭 . hey anam u have written this part very well šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘šŸ¼ . i mean it really pissed me off!!! ki sujal ne uske saath aisa nahi karna chahiye tha abb lagta hai cause the way she screamed was aweful yaar . bechari kashish and now also she is unconcious 😭 . god!!! anam darr lag raha hai that what she will do now 😭 .how will she react aur sujal agge kya karega šŸ˜• . it is damn interesting anam šŸ˜‰ . continue soon yaar plzzz....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 šŸ˜› 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kashish ko hosh ata hai par tub jub wo apna sub kuch khu chuki hai kashish bed py lyti hoti hai she feels bad jesy kisi ne osy bohot zor zor sy pita ho wo uthna chahti hai par uth nahi pa rahi bohot mushkil sy wo uthti hai aur bed py take laga kar bhethti hai os py chadar udhai hui hai kashish ki ankhu sy anso jari hai os sy roya bi nahi ja raha jesy sari taqut khu chuki hai room mei light on hai kuch dyr tak kashish uthny ki koshish karti hai wo bed sy uth kar khari ho jati hai ek dum room ka door khulta hai aur sujal enter hota hai kashish ky qadam eak dum ruk jaty hai [next part is coming in few minutes]
Edited by Anam azhar - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sujal nazry churata hai jesy osy ehsas hai ky nashy mei os ne bohot badhi galati ki hai s: au tumhy tumhary ghar chor au [ankhy churaty hoye] kashish os ki tarf dykhti hai ansu bhari ankhu sy par chahny ky bawajudh os sy bola nahi ja raha sujal ye keh ky bahir nikal jata hai aur kashish apna dupata bed sy utha kar apny ap ko ghasitti hui bahir ati hai jaha sujal car ky paas khara os ka intzar kar raha hai k s ky paas sy guzar ky car mei bhetna chahti hai par s ky qareeb sy guzart hoye osy bohot zor sy chakar ata hai....
Edited by Anam azhar - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Plz one request to all of u plz do comments.Meri fingers likh likh ky thak jati hai new ideas soch soch ky mera sar dard hony lagta hai par ap sub pardh ky comments bi nahi dyte siwaye farvashi ky.Arry muje show tu kar du ky kon kon meri fan fic padh raha hai pasand aa bi rahi hai ya nahi agar nahi aa rahi then u can tell me everything.Umed karti ho ap meri umedy nahi todhy gye.I love ur comments & all of u too.Thanx
Edited by Anam azhar - 18 years ago

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