Partner-Maayka FF Part 3 Pg 5

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Hey guys As I said I was going to make another fanfic it should be the second part of Destined To Fall In Love but I changed my plan! I am going to make a fanfic with a whole new fun concept and whole new fun characters😃It will be Kinda like the funny movie Partner😳

~*Character Intro*~

Veer Khurana:
He is a police officer and elder brother of Jeet Khurana. Veer has almost everything he wants only one thing is missing. He wants to be popular he wants to be cool....He was the nerd of school. Everytime Veer tried to say something to a girl the things he said would turn out wrong! The Khurana elders live in Delhi for some bussines while the youngsters live in Mumbai...it's a simple Punjabi family.

Jeet Khurana:
Jeet Khurana is a simple guy who works in a bank...He sees beautifull woman come and go everyday and he is dumbstruck when he sees them. This Khurana is afraid of girls everytime he sees a girl coming to his desk...well it's simple he hides under the desk.Jeet is a singer but he never ever dared to sing for anyone before only his close friends and people who he trusts know this. Jeet looks at his neighbour (girl) everyday with a telescope from the window.

Shabd Sareen:
Shabd is the cool dude and the cousin of Veer and Jeet. Shabd came from America to India because he is a doctor. Now we know doctors don't have to travel but Shabd is the other kind of doctor. Well Shabd is a date doctor. He helps people get over their fear and talk to girls. He is a kind of Cupid. He has had many girlfriends before. Always dumped them because they weren't the right girls. Or just make it simple he is a casanova! He is always busy with his mobile.

That were the Khurana's hope you liked them!

Now let's go to the Malhotra's!

Raaji Malhotra:
Raaji is the sweet and simple one. She never asked anything to anyone but she did everything for everyone. Raaji lives alone with her two sisters. She is the neighbour of the Khurana's. Though she never talked to them. Raaji can do everything for her sisters. Raaji is the one who anyone can love. She cooks, goes to the mandir, does the dishes, goes to the groceriesshop. Who doesn't want a sister like that?She goes to university third year!

Soni Malhotra:
Soni is the confused and funny one...It's always fun to hangout with Soni! Although she forgets things fast....no no it's not a dissease it's just a Soni. Soni doesn't like guys...they are so boring what can you do with them. You can't even talk about actors with them. Soni likes to tease her sisters everyday she can't live without it. But it's also true that she can live without them. I forgot to mention that they are Punjabi too. Also goes to university second year!

Mahi Malhotra:
Mahi is the talkative one...one tip...don't ever and I mean DON'T EVER....talk through her when she is talking! Mahi is short tempered and she doesn't like that. As some people say her anger is on her nose. And if you really don't want to die painfully then you really should NOT talk bad about her sisters when she is around. She may look pretty and nice but if you mess with her....see you in heaven! Mahi is only nice to her close ones if she doesn't know you then she doesn't want to talk to you. But if you know her better she is the best friend anyone can ever have. She goes to first year of university....

That was it guys! Hope you liked the character intro!😃

Do say if I have to continue or not

But if I should continue....

Then Your Welcome To The RollerCoaster Of Romance And Fun!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 oye kar na jaldi se aage likh 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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BALLE BALLE 😆

shoroo karh 😳
plz do continue 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hehe sounds cool and veryy different...haha our shabd is a love doctor 😆 😆 i love how ur making it like the movie partner!! i cant for ur first part!! 😃 😃 plzz cont soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you guys😆

The first part will come up tomorrow I am kinda busy with another fanfic right now😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great intro!!!!

cant wait for a maayka ff. no1 reads mine :(

newayz, cont soon!

<3 kiran
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 job hun.....do cont. soon....
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Part 1: Helloooo India!!

Khurana Mansion

It was a simple morning like everyday. People went to work or school. Or people just looked at their neighbours with a telescope....No sorry that's not even simple....Jeet was looking at his neighbour it was a girl she was dancing in her room while getting her bag ready for university.

Malhotra Mansion

Soni was dancing while getting her stuff ready.... She loved this song it was fast and cool. Soni maybe is a weirdo but when it comes to dancing she is number one!

Oh re Masti mein aaj jhoomo re...
Kar Masti mein aaj jhoomo re...
Tu bin bajae jhoom...
Ya tin bajae jhoom...
Wo ek lagay tmka...
Tu teen lagake jhoom!
Oh sa re ga ma ga ma sa re....
Choom le...
Phir ghoom le....
Aaj jhoomo re jhoomo re jhoomo re.......

Soni turned around and saw someone looking at her with a telescope her mouth dropped open...she was sooo ashamed that someone saw her like that!

S: Didi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Soni ran downstairs looking for Raaji she saw her by the small temple in the garden. Raaji was doing pooja. Mahi was standing next to her.

S:Didi didi didi didi didi!!!

Mahi turned around angry...well it was Mahi what can you expect from her!

M:Shhh!!!!!!!!

Khurana Mansion

Jeet looked horrified...what if she told her little sister. Everybody knows about her! She was as dangerous like the Charlies Angels. Jeet put the telescope away closed the window and put curtain infront of it. Jeet looked horrified and put his hand on his head. Then someone from behind put his hand on his shoulder. Jeet turned around in a jerk. It was only Veer.

V:Oye kya huwa?
J:Bhai woh...main...woh...main....main....
V: Kya main main kar raha hai? Bakra ban gaya kya?
J:Bana nahi lekin bann jaaon ga!
V: Kyun kya huwa?
J: Main woh telescope ke saath uss larki ko dekh raha tha to.....to usne mujhe dekh liya!
V: Acha huwa! Bohat Acha Huwa!
J:KYA!?!?!
V:Agar tu ek larki se baat bhi nahi kar sakta to usko dekhta kyun hai ab tu marrega!! Lekin mere paas kuch hai jisse tu bach sakta hai!
J:Kya?

Veer took his revolver out of his pocket.Jeet's eyes just popped out!

Malhotra Mansion

Raaij was done with her pooja and looked at Soni. Mahi looked angry and Soni saw that.

R:Ab kya huwa Soni?
S:Raaji didi....Mahi...woh....woh....
M:Woh kya?
S:Woh.....main bhool gayi....

Mahi and Raaji hit their head. Mahi pointed her hand towards her.

M:Fitte Muh Tera!! Kuch bhi nahi yaad rakh sakti!
R:Mahi....

Raaji shook her head...Soni was thinking....

M:Oye confused item! Yaad kar huwa kya.
S:Uhm....Haan yaad aaya!!!
R&M:Kya?
S:Uhm...
R:Uff!!!
S: Haan Haan! Woh humare saath waale ghar mein jo larka rehta hai naa woh mere dance ko telescope ke saath dekh raha tha apne kamre se.

Mahi was very angry rigt now and after hearing this her anger only got worse.

M:Abhi dekh ke aati hoon usse...!
R:Par Mahi....
M:Aaj mat roke didi!

Malhotra Mansion

J:Kya Bhai aap uski jaan loge?Pagal ho gaye ho kya!! Jail se bahar seedha jail ke andar ho jao ge!

Veer burst outin laughter after hearing that!

V:Are pagal main to mazaak kar raha tha!
J:Thank God!
V:Ab chal kaam pe bhi jaana hai.

Veer and Jeet went downstairs and the door went open as if there was very hard wind outside.

V:Are Jeet jacket pehen ke aaja....

Then Mahi came in Jeet stood behind Veer. Mahi came closer and closer talking and stood infront of Veer who's eyes were wide open...he was pointing at Jeet.

M:Pehli baat! Koi bhi pagal apna darwaza aisa khulla nahi rakhta!

Mahi looked at Veer who was pointing at Jeet...then Mahi looked at Jeet in anger.

M:Aap aage se hattye!

Veer tried to go to left but Jeet was holding him. Veer was still pointing at Jeet. Mahi looked at Jeet.

M:Aur doosri baat koi bhi aadmi kisi larki ke kamre mein telescope ke saath nahi dekhta! Yeh meri first time last warning hai! Agar yeh doosri baar huwa to mujhse burra koi nahi hoga!

Mahi turned arund to walk away but looked at Jeet on last time.

Then Mahi turned around and walked to the door when she bumped into a tall man! It was none other then Shabd!

S:Kahan jaa rahi ho!
M:Tumse Matlab?
S:Mera matlab kahan jaa rahi hai aap Jyoti di!!

Mahi looked confused.... Shabdhugged her!

S:I missed you so much!!!!

Shabd then picked her up....!

M:Oye main koi Jyoti nahi hoon!!!
S:Kya aap ko aapka Shabd yaad nahi hai? Jab main chota sa tha to America chala gaya isliye aap mujhe yaad nahi karr rahi naa!

From behind Veer was making a sign....actually cutting his neck! Telling him to stop or else he die!

M:Mera naam koi Jyoti nahi hai mera naam Mahi hai! Aur mujhe neeche utaro!! Abhi issi waqt!!!

Shabd let her fall!

S:Chi chi besharam meri baahon mein aane ke liya tumne Jyoti banne ka naatak kiya!!!
M:Kya!!?!?!

S:Tum itni shareef lagti ho pata nahi kiss larke ke saath pehle aisa kuch kiya ho!!!

Mahi raised her hand and she was about to slap Shabd. Shabd,Veer and Jeet closed their eyes!

R:Mahi!

Mahi stopped looking at Raaji and Soni...

So:Mahi tum ye kya kar rahi ho!
R:Mahi challo ghar chalte hain...

Soni and Raaji were holding Mahi before she would get eally pissed and give Shabd a tight slap. Shabd just looked at her and smiled.

S:Bye bye danger woman!

End!

Hope you liked it next part will be up monday!😃


Edited by am_786 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats amazing i love Shabd 😳 and attitude thanks a lot plz continue 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow i just loved mahi she is just like me.....hahaha....gr8 update cont. soon......

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