Updates: pg.16 Part7 (Lakshentry)-KASHISH - Page 12

Originally posted by: sun_423

hey..i'am a new reader of the story... & i have liked all the parts you have written uptil now..very well written.... me liking every bit of it... keep up the good work going... story is too interesting... 😊 please do post the next part soon... me will be waiting for it eagerly....😃😛😊

aw thnx so much sun_423, love to see a great new reader 😳

as i said be4 will write one hopefully by 2morrow 😊

get well soon 😃

n ya plz cont soooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn 😳

hey u guys/ wow its been since forever,

actually i lost the link tothis, & i finally found it. 😆

hope my readers still wanna read & hope others will read this as well. 😳

will postsoon 😃

OYE!! Jess you meanie , didnt inform about the FF earlier ! 😡 😆 😆
Oh well !! Lovely FF , will catch up soon ! 🤗
Cont. soon ! 😉

Originally posted by: mz.jess

actually i lost the link tothis, & i finally found it. 😆

😆 😆

Anyway, awesome ff, my fav couples 😳😳😳, great going!!👏👏👏

Pleeeez update soon! 😃😆😳

@Mahi: 😆 i know eh, im so careless, 😛 but now i saved it, & yea i know fav couple. 😃

@Kitu: YEAA! you came herez! 😃 aw thnxx, & sorrrry i forgot about it myself, 😆

Part 7

At The Kher House.

KT: Dadu!

Dadu: Kya KT?

KT: aap mujhe bathoa naa, mai kal college kai liye kai paioon?

Dadu: tum mujhe kyun poochrahee hoon? mai koi fashion designer hoon ? Tum he tho sabh kuch patah hai.

KT smiles: hain woh tho teek hai. (smirks)

Dadu goes & turns the T.V on: ah, yea boring news, kuch maza dhar khabhar tho khabhi dhaithai nahin.

KT rolls her eyes: phir aap himasha dhow (2:00) vajai Khabrain kyun dekhthai, hai.

Dadu: Routine beti Routine. (smiles) KT beti mujhe ek glass pani dhow naa. Mera waqt hai..

KT pops up with the glass ofwater & medicine: yeh laio,

Dadu gives a confused look: tumhe..

KT: DADU! ROUTINE! aur abh aap koi apai dhowee lainee paraighee, mai college kal shorro karn wali hoon.

Dadu starts laughing: okay, khabhi khbahi tum bilquil Kashu jaise harthai karthee hoon.

KT: meri sis hain na, esliye (smiles, looks at the door and sees Kashish coming with her head down)

KT Thinks: aw di didn'tget the job.

Dadu sees Kashish coming & thinksthe exactsame thing.

Both Dadu & KT run up too her.

Dadu: beti, its ok, agar tumhe job nahin mili.

KT: hain, aur waise bhi es ka matlab hai, kai aap koi ek haur ache job milne wali. (smiles)

Kashish looks up & starts laughing.

Dadu & KT give a confused look: kya?

Kashish: aree, meri pyaree si Kher Fam, mujhe job mil gayee!

KT: KYA!? DI! seriously!

Dadu smiles: yeh tho perfecthai! KT sweets lai kai aoo-o.

KT: zaroor.. ek mint.

Kashish & KT look at eachother &grin.

KT: sweets?

Kashish: matahee?

Dadu: hain baba, aap dono mujhe hindi English kee translation kyun dhai rahy hoi?

Kashish: koi sweets nahin, dadu.

KT: aap humne kya samjathai ho. bewakoof?

Dadu smirks: hain, haur kya!

KT: DADU!

Kashish,KT & Dadu start laughing.

At The Walia House.

Ragu Kaka: Beti, Laksh betai-aa dhai college sai phone aa-aa,

Bani: kya kehrahi thai Ragu Kaka?

Ragu Kaka: yehhee,kai kal us ka college shorroon honewala hai.

Bani: KYA? laikun Laksh nai tho yeh kaha thaa kaih uska college shorron agalaai hafta honewala tha..

RaguKaka: beti, aap tho laksh koi jaanthai ho. (walks away)

Bani: hai, baghban, mujhe Sujal koi phone karan chaihee.

*Bani calls Sujal*

Sujal who is at the office, lookingthrough his files.

*Sujal's cell rings*

Sujal: hello?

Bani: Sujal Beta! woh..

Sujal: maa? kya koi baat hai ? aap teek tho hai ?

Bani: hain, mai teek hoon, lekin woh Laksh

Sujal: Oh God, abh yeh laksh nai kya kiya?

*Bani repatsthe whole story*

Sujal: Maa, aap chintha math karo, mai us ko phone kartha.

Bani: teek hai, laikun us par plz math chalanaa, aur Mr.Walia koi, kuch bhi nahin bathana.

Sujal laughs: teek hai maa. byee.

Bani: Bye.

Sujal calls Laksh on his cell.

*Some Girl voice picks up*

Sujal: Laksh, where are you?

Girl giggles: laksh is busy

Sujal rolls his eyes, he knows exactly what this is: oh really, well plz laksh koi batha naa, kai..

Girl: No hindi, only English

Sujal: yeh gori India mai kya karahee hai

Sujal: fine, please tell Laksh that he better be home tomorrow & that too before 11 am. Usliye maa nai aloo kai parathai banai-aai hoagay.

Girl's voice turns into Man's Voice: YES, maa kai allo parathai..!! uhh.. oops (voice turning into girl) umm okay I will tell him about those aaaa-loo paa-raatay.

Sujal laughs: hain hain, laksh im your brother don't try too fool me. I know these tricks well.

Laksh's voice (the camera does not show his face yet): bro! maine khabhi bhi aapkee jhaga lainai kee khoshish kiye? nahin, anyways don'ttell dad, but

Sujal laughs: kai tum apne friends kai saath koomraha hai, btw I already know whos going to win the race but good luck.

Laksh: BROOO! how did you know? that im going to race..

Sujal: cause I'm your BROO! & ive been where you are at.

Laksh's friend is calling him: teek hai bro, race shorro hone wali hai. Wish me luck.

Sujal: Break a leg. (smirks)

Laksh: haha, thnx.

*Sujal hangs up*

Then the camera shows hot motorcycles in a row with guys sitting on them. But thenteh camera stops at one motorcycle, which is the best out of them all, on this motorcycle no on one is sitting.

*Girls are yelling Laksh's name & the crowd is getting louder with excitement*

Annoucer: WELCOME, LADS & GENTS. THIS IS 2007 MOST IMPORTANTRACE EVER, WHOEVER WINS THIS WILL BE KNOWN AS THE MOST POPULAR GUY OF "SHIMLA COLLEGE".

LAST YEAR IT WAS NONE OTHER THEN LAKSH WALIA.!

*GIRLS CHEER: LAKSH! LAKSH! LAKSH! LAKSH!*

The camera focuses on a well-fitted body. Like below.

(hehe, he looks hot in anything)

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ok, now i haveto stop here. 😳. Have to work on a caption contest, so sorry, 😳. But i will try to have KT & Laksh's entry in the next part but i still havent properly done Laksh's entry. Hope youlike it. Please leave comments & Critizism. 😃❤️

❤️-Jessssi.

Yaiii lakshu entered ! xD

fab part .. HAHA !! sujal and Laksh talking on the phone was funny ! 😆😆😉

Continue soooooonn !! 👏

*sigh* haha..im in love w/ a character...yay! thanks for introducting laksh!! 👏