My fan fiction- ak&rk(intro)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi boys and girls this my fan fiction which I don't have names if u have any suggestions please tell me. I write a story before but nobody comment so I try again and please please comment whether it is bad or good. This story is by indiancutie13 aka Mani and banju aka Kanza rite now I am writing

Angad Khanna- is 25 year old and is a famous rock star. Loves his wife kripa and sometime call her krips when she is in the bad mood. Hate children. Think that children burden on the parents. Never want children. He is carefree and good at heart. His best friend is Robbie who is just like his brother. Think Kasturi as sister cuz she is his sister-in-law

Kripa Khanna- Was known as Sharma but now Khanna. Is 23 year old and is a rock star and work with her husband Angad. Love him a lot and sometime call him angu as nickname when he is in bad mood. She loves children. Always try to explain to angad that children are not burden on parent. Very mature and sweet. She loves her little sister Kasturi. Robbie is like her brother. Angad and Kripa always trying to make Robbie and Kasturi friends because they are always fighting.

Kasturi Sharma- is 21 year old. She is a famous actress in the bollywood but unlike any actresses she is very down to earth and very sweet. She loves her big sister and her brother-in-law who is just like his brother. But hate her brother-in-law best friend becuz he is very flirty and she hate flirty type of people.

Robbie Sabharwal- is 25 year old and famous rock star just like Angad. He is very flirty and short-temper but is very sweet who is very close to him. His best friend is Angad who is just like his brother. Kripa is like his sister but hate his sister best friend Kasturi who is always make him angry.

Please and please comment on this story

Please comment indiancutie new story Jhoom Barber Jhoom

I need aleast 6 or more comment

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Posted: 18 years ago
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interesting concept
waiting for the first part cont soon


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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks u
the first part is comming up
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Posted: 18 years ago
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interesting...i only have zee/sony so i dont know who robbie/kasturi are. but still soundz fun.

i lyke it so far, cont soon! 👏

<3 kiran
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Posted: 18 years ago
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First Part
You can see that there is big crowd of people and u can predict there is concert going on. On the stage there is person who is the host says:
Host- Hello everybody welcome to AK concert
The crowd shout-YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY Y!
Host- r u ready for Kripa and Angad
The crowd shouts- Yay
Host- well u has to shout AK so say with me AK
The crowds shout – AK, AK, AK, AK
You see a person coming to the stage who is wearing leather jacket with blue shirt and wear blue and he turn around to the stage and it not other than ANGAD!
Angad- Hello gentlemen and hot, sexy lady
A lot of girls faint
Angad- so r u ready to listen this sexy voice
The crowds shout- yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
He start to sing Ya Ali
ya ali reham ali
ya ali yaar pe qurbaan hai sabhi
ya ali madad ali
ya ali yeh meri jaan yeh meri zindagi
ishq pe mita doon luta doon
main apani khudi
yaar pe haan luta doon mita doon
main yeh hasti
ya ali reham ali
ya ali yaar pe qurbaan hai sabhi
ya ali madad ali
ya ali yeh meri jaan yeh meri zindagi

mujhe kuchh pal de purvat ke
faki hampe chahat ke
rahe bechain dil kab tak
milen kuchh pal toh raahat ke
chahat pe ishq pe haa mita doon luta doon
main apani khudi
yaar pe ha luta doon mita doon
main yeh hasti
ya ali reham ali
ya ali yaar pe qurbaan hai sabhi
ya ali madad ali
ya ali yeh meri jaan yeh meri zindagi

bina tere na ek pal ho na bin tere kabhi kal ho
yeh dil ban jaaye pathhar ka na ismein koi hulchul ho
sanam pe ha ishq pe ha mita doon luta doon
main apani khudi
kasam se ha luta doon mita doon
main yeh hastii
ya ali reham ali
ya ali yaar pe qurbaan hai sabhi
ya ali madad ali
ya ali yeh meri jaan yeh meri zindagi

Then u see a lady coming to the stage wearing a blue sari and Angad smile at her and give the mike to her and go the backstage. The lady turn around and it not other then Kripa
Kripa- hello ladies and sexy gentlemen
Angad heard that and he was getting jealous
Kripa grinning cuz she know that Angad would jealous
Kripa- so r u ready for me
The crowds shout- yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Kripa start to sing Bedi from Omkara
Na gilaaf, Na lehaaf
(Na gilaaf, Na lehaaf thandi hawa ke khilaaf sasuri) - 2
O itni sardi hai kisika lehaaf lehi leh
O jaa padosi ke chuleh se aag lehi leh

(Bedi chalayi leh jigar se piya
Jigar maabadi aag hai) - 2
Wadaa nikari o lab se piya aah aa
Wadaa nikari o lab se piya jeh duniya badi dhank hai
Haan bedi chalayi leh jigar se piya
Jigar maabadi aag hai


Na gilaaf, Na lehaaf thandi hawa ke khilaaf sasuri
O itni sardi hai kisika lehaaf lehi leh
O jaa padosi ke chule se aag lehi leh

O jaa padosi ke chule se aag lehi leh

Na kasoor, Na fatoor
Na kasoor, Na fatoor bina juraam ke hajoor maar gaye
O maar gaye


O aise ik din duphari bula liyo re
Bandh ghungroo kacheri lagaliyo re
Bula liyo re, Bula liyo re dupehri


lagayilo re, lagayilo re kacheri


Angeethi chadayi leh jigar se piya
Jigar maabadi aag hai
Bedi chalayi leh jigar se piya
Jigar maabadi aag hai)

(Ho na toh chakuon ki dhaar
Ho na tan raati na kataar) - 2
Aisa kaate ke daat ganisaar chod de
Yeh katayi toh koi bhi kisaan chod de
O aise chalim ka chod de makaan jod de re bilo
Chalim ka chod de makaan jod de
Aise chalim ka, O aise chalim ka
Aise chalim ka chod de makaan jod de


Na bulaya
Na bataya
Na bulaya, Na bataya maane neend se jagaya hai re
Aise chonkele haath mein naseeb aa gaya
Woh ilaychi khilayike kareeb aa gaya
Koyila jalayi leh jigar se piya
Jigar maa, aag hai


Itni sardi hai kisika lehaf lehi leh
O jaa padosi, O jaa padosi, Jaa jaa padosi
O jaa padosi ke chule se aag lehi leh


Now it Angad and Kripa singing Bol Na Halke Hakle from Jhoom Barber Jhoom
(Dhaage tod laao chaanadani se noor ke
ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke) - 2
sharm aa gayi toh aaghosh mein lo
ho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2
aa nind ka sauda karein, ik khwaab de, ik khwaab le
ik khwaab toh aankhon mein hai, ik chaand ke takiye talein
kitane dino se yeh aasamaan bhi soya nahi hai, isako sula de
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2

umarein lagi kehate huve, do labj the ik baat thi
woh ik din sau saal ka, sau saal ki woh raat thi
kaisa lage jo chup chaap dono,
ho pal pal mein puri sadiyaan bitaayein
bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke
o dhaage tod laao chaanadani se noor ke
o ghoonghat hi bana lo roshani se noor ke
sharm aa gayi toh aaghosh mein lo
ho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein
(bol na halke halke, bol na halke halke
honth se halke halke, bol na halke) - 2
Kripa and Angad was lost in song but was back by crowd shout

The scene change

Angad and Kripa were outside and was surround by people who was trying to take their autographs. Angad was angry and Kripa know why he is angry. By the help of Guards AK was in the car. They were in the silent treatment. They went their house and they were in the their bedroom
At last Kripa was tired of silent treatment so she speak
Kripa- Angad look I am sorry
Angad say nothing
Kripa know what to do
Kripa- Angu I am sorry baby
Angad smile. He love it when she call him Angu
Angad- it ok krips but I will forgive u on one condition
Kripa- what
Angad start grinning at her and kripa was getting that
Kripa- Angad , no way
Angad- to late for that Krips
Angad kiss her and the scene start to blurry

Well this was my first part
I need to have 4 or more comment

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow. very cute. im really excited 2 read this fan fic. cont soon. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great first part..lol angu and krips are soo cute! and yay u have robbie and kasturi too! 😃 😃
plzz cont soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wohooooooo u have RK 😳 my fav jodi wat nice a ff 😍 😍 iam dying 2 read it 😆 plzzzzzzzzzz post soon d nxt prt 😊 LOL
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Posted: 17 years ago
#9
great concept... seems like an awesome ff, cnt wait to read more, sooo plssss u hav to cont soon!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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loved first part
hmm.jealous angad,teasing kripa gr8 combination

love
nihita

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