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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
thats is soo sweet!!
i want a guy like angad-- but who tells me he loves me! 😆
kripa determined to make him say 'i love u'.. i think he will soon!
cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
cute part 😳


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sana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
great story.........it keeps getting interesting by the minute....i swear it rly keeps me thinking of wut's gonna happen next.....continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
Thanks everyone 😊

[SIZE=7>PART 14: short but important update

Angad and Kripa returned home safely after there was a let up in the rainfall and flood water receded. Dilip was very worried, "shukr hai bhagwan ka tum dono theek ho….TV par kaisi-kaisi reports aa rahi hain….beti tu Prithvi ko phone kar lena…bechare ke kitney phone aa gaye hain kal sey….bas ussey yeh tassalli thi ki tum akeli nahin thi, Angad ke saath thi…."

Kripa and Angad looked at each other as Dilip said the last few words. They both felt guilty, not that anything had happened between them but a lot had been said by their eyes and body language. Last night at the shelter, they had been 'sheltered' not only from the rain, but also the rest of the world, the rules& norms of the society, man-made relationships….and now the reality had just hit them!

"Papa..main oopar se phone kar leti hoon," Kripa felt a little embarrassed and ran upstairs.

"Hello…main bol rahi hoon….nahin don't worry Prithvi, I am fine…..haan Angad mere saath hi tha….hum papa ke yahan se wapas aa rahey the…..don't worry…..Ok …bye…." Kripa hung up the phone and went to take a shower.

As the water from the shower fell on her body, she remembered all the events from last night….the piggy back ride…..the hair entangled in Angad's shirt…..his wet body so close to her….the fireside and his arms…..was it all a dream…..was that just an accident or was it fate?

Kripa had always been a clear-headed girl her whole life. She was never afraid to call a spade a spade, people marveled at her clarity of thought, but why was she so confused now? There was no doubt in her mind that her heart belonged to Angad only, but why did she feel guilty about last night? Was it Prithvi, her husband-the man she had 'saath pheras' with in front of the world-did she not have any responsibility towards him? He loved and trusted her a lot, in fact one of the reasons, he had gone to the US was to prove to her that he could achieve something on his own…..he did not say anything to her, but the events after their wedding had motivated him to do something "big."

Kripa turned the water off and came out of the shower. She dressed up in a green churidar suit and as she was putting bindi and kum kum in her maang, she thought "Yadi meri kismat mein Prithvi hi hai, tho mujhey poori koshish karni chahiye ki main ek patni ban sakoon……koyi insaan perfect nahin hota is duniya mein…..na main, na Angad…aur na hi Prithvi…..ussmey aur kitni khoobiyan hain….mujhey Angad ki chah ab chhodni hogi…..main jaanti hoon mera mann hamesha Angad ka hi rahega, par duniyadari sab ko nibhani padhti hai…..mujhey bhi…bas marney se pehle ek baar yeh ichcha hai ki ek baar Angad ke muh se I love you sun loon……mere liye yehi bahut hoga…."

song to describe Kripa's emotions- Katra katra from "Ijaazat"

http://www.dishant.com/album/ijazat.html


katra katra milti hai
katra katra jeene do
zindgi hai, bahne do
pyaasi hoon main pyasi rahne do

Tumne to aakash bichhaya
mere nange pairo main zameen hai
dekhe to tumhaari aarzoo hai
shayad aisi zindagi haseen hai
aarzoo main bahne do
pyaasi hoon main pyaasi rahne
do
...


Angad was lost in his own thoughts. After showering and changing up, he got ready to go to work. As he drove to work, he thought, "Mere aur Kripa ke raaste baar-baar kyon judhte hain……ab wo Prithvi ki amaanat hai par phir bhi mujhey aisa kyon lagta hai ki wo meri hai, aur mujhey hi uska dhyaan dena hai…..kyon main apney aap ko ussey door nahin rakh pata……why do I always want to protect her, save her, be there with her…..maine hi tho usse Prithvi se shaadi karney par majboor kiya tha, ab main hi kyon bhatak raha hoon…..kal raat hum dono jaante the ki hum ek doosrey se pyaar kartey hain…par yeh galat hai…..I cannot do this to my brother…….wo bilkul toot jaayega…..mujhey apney emotions par control karna padhega. ……BREAK! He did not realize, he was about to run someone over while driving. He shook his head, "Kripa…tumney mujhey kis duvidha mein daal diya…..main naa tho tum se door reh sakta hoon, aur tumharey paas aana bahut badha paap hoga…..," he banged his fists on the steering wheel and drove off.


.....to be continued....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
wow... both of them confused!
you've described their thoughts really well! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
Thanks bugsbunny and Sana.

Kripa and Angad are both responsible for getting into this situation. Kripa should have never rushed into the marriage just because she was upset with Angad and Angad should not have sacrificed himself for his brother's sake. How will they conquer their emotions when they live in the same house...under the same roof???
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
Thanks everyone 😊

[SIZE=7>PART 15:

Over the next few weeks, Angad and Kripa acted on their resolve to honor their relationship with Prithvi. Kripa purposely kept her distance from Angad and Angad spent more time at his new job, trying to distract himself from Kripa's constant presence at home. Suryabhan had also recovered from his stroke and got busy with his consulting work that he had started after retirement. Kripa made sure she called Prithvi everyday and filled him with the day's activities. Prithvi was really looking forward to coming home now.

Prithvi returned from the US after his 6 month training. He was pleased to see Kripa at the airport. He gave her a big hug, "I missed you so much……dekho tumhari yaad mein maine kitni kavitaayein likh daali….." Kripa smiled and said, "I am glad you are back…"

"Angad nahin aaya…..ab usey lagta hai ki meri shaadi ho gayi hai tho he does not need to care about me?" Prithvi complained as they drove back.

"I think uski koyi meeting thi shayad…." Kripa lied, as she knew Angad was trying to keep his distance from her, and give her more opportunities to spend time with her husband.

" Phone tho kar sakta tha!" Prithvi was still annoyed. Kripa looked at Prithvi as she was driving and thought, "Angad Prithvi ki zindagi mein kitni importance rakhta hai….in dono ka bandhan bahut gehraa hai….tabhi shayad Angad ney……" Kripa shook her head, as she had resolved, she would stop thinking about the circumstances that led to her wedding and try to focus on her future with Prithvi….after all no one had forced her to marry…..it was her choice, albeit on an impulse……

"Kripa…jaanti ho US mein meri dosti Kartik naam ke aadmi se huyi….wo US kayi saalon se hai par ab India wapas aana chahta hai…..he has a great business idea….main soch raha hoon uskey saath naya business start karoon…."

Kripa was happy for him, "yeh tho bahut achchi baat hai….," that would boost his self-confidence she thought.

They arrived home, where Angad and Dilip greeted them.

"Yaar….tu ney bahut kam phone kiye aur airport bhi nahin aaya….main bahut naaraz hoon" Prithvi complained as he hugged Angad.

"Ab tera dhyan dene waali aa gayi hai na…..now I have more time to find someone who can take care of me too!" Angad patted his back and winked.

Kripa smiled, as she knew Angad, as usual was just boasting-there were no girls, no dates- he just worked and took care of Dilip and the house…..he could be so deceptive…..he was indeed very different from what one would think about him on first impression…..kaash maine yeh baat samajh lee hoti tho aaj…..she shook her head again as she remembered her resolution again…..

[SIZE=7>NEXT MORNING AT BREAKFAST:


"Angad….main apni ek company kholna chahta hoon…US mein mujhey ek dost mila, uska naam Kartik hai….he will help me set it up….main chahta hoon tum bhi mere saath kaam karo…." Prithvi asked Angad over breakfast next day.

"Kaisa kaam?" Dilip asked , as he folded his newspaper

"Papa….yehi software business…aaj kal US ke saath off shoring mein bahut scope hai…."

"I think it is a good idea, but Prithvi I am happy where I am….mujhey business nahi karna…"Angad said chewing on his toast.

"Yaar…we can be partners….and in no time can become very big like the Infosys and the Wipros….those companies have done so well overseas…."

"Beta Angad…I think it would be good if you join Prithvi…..partnership achchi rahegi…." Dilip tried to convince Angad.

Angad was adamant, "Nahin chachaji….main interested nahin hoon….hamarey paas sab kuch tho hai…..mujhey aur kuch nahin chahiye….."

Kripa overheard the conversation from the kitchen but kept quiet.

" Main oopar jaakar tumhey business plan dikhata hoon….phir bataana mujhey…" Prithvi ran upstairs.

Dilip walked upto Angad and put his arm around Angad, "beta…I would like it yadi tum bhi partnership karo Prithvi ke saath…..tum tho jaante ho wo kabhi kabhi emotional ho jaata hai aur business mein ups and downs tho hotey hain….yadi tum saath rahogey tho uska hausla bana rahega…..aur main bhi chinta nahin karoonga….please mere liye kar do…aur haan…. tum ek baar Kartik se bhi mil lo…" Dilip trusted Angad's judgement in people's characters rather than Prithvi's. In the past, Prithvi had made erroneous judgments in choosing friends, which could have been disastrous, unless Angad had not stepped in.

Angad could never say "no" to Dilip, "achcha chachaji main partnership kar loonga par I will be a non working partner….I don't want to give up my job…"

"Thank you, my son….i know I can always count on you…." Dilip hugged Angad

Kripa was beginning to figure out the dynamics in the Bose/Khanna household. It looked like Prithvi had been over protected by Dilip, and Angad was used as an insurance policy against Prithvi's emotional upheavals…..it was a strange relationship…for the first time Kripa felt bad for Angad….Angad's life revolved around protecting Prithvi's interests…..Angad was really self less in his love for his brother……he could do anything for him and who would know it better than her…..she had tears in her eyes…..how she wanted to hug him and reassure him that she was always going to support him, no matter what!

Prithvi was elated to know that Angad would be joining him as a partner.

Kripa tried to talk to Prithvi one day, "Prithvi….tum itna bada business kyon kholna chahtey ho?….Shuroo mein chota business hi start karo…..Hamare paas bhagwan ki daya sey sab kuch tho hai…"

"Nahin Kripa….sab kuch nahin hai….main chahta hoon ki main tumhey duniya ki saari khushiyan doon- ek badha ghar, bahut sey naukar-chaakar, bahut si gaadiyan….kyunki main jaanta hoon maine tumhey abhi tak koyi khushi nahin di hai…" Prithvi lowered his eyes, as he knew she understood what he meant.

"Prithvi…..mujhey tumsey kuch nahin chahiye…bas tumhara saath chahiye….ek achcha dost aur ek achcha saathi….main tho tumhari kavitaaon sey hi khush rahoongi"

"Kripa….main bhi apna dharm hi tho nibha raha hoon…..apni patni ke liye saari khushiyan laana chahta hoon…."

Kripa did not argue anymore, she knew Prithvi's definition of happiness was different from hers….

Kripa thought she would support Prithvi in his new venture, if that is what he wanted…..she would try to be a supportive wife.

Prithvi and Kartik worked hard to get the business going. Prithvi had to travel a lot to get new clients. Angad just provided his signatures on all the paperwork as a 50-50 partner, but was not involved in the day-to-day business. Angad met Kartik a few times but was not too impressed with him.

Angad thought Kartik was more "talk" than "walk". He had promised Prithvi, "in 2 years, our company will be really big….we will be traded on the stock market…..tu dekhta ja Prithvi.." Angad tried to warn Prithvi a few times, 'yaar Prithvi…are you sure Kartik can deliver what he promises.?"

"Don't worry Angad…Kartik has worked many years in the US, he knows how the market works….I am planning to make him my chief financial officer….he would be a right fit."

"Prithvi…..don't make any important decisions in a haste…" Angad put his arm on Prihvi and tried to reason with him.

Kripa joined them at the table, "Angad….why don't you let Prithvi make decisions for himself…aakhir Prithvi kab tak tumhari parchayee bana rahega?" Both Prithvi and Angad were stunned by her comment. Kripa realized her mistake-she should not interfere between the brothers. She was trying to help both of them. She did not want Angad to feel pressured to "save" Prithvi every time. She also knew that Prithvi lacked self- confidence, and one of the reasons was his over dependence on Angad.

She got up and left, "I guess, I should stay out of this…."

Angad felt hurt by her comment…he always wanted the best for Prithvi and may be it was time that he handed over the reigns to Kripa…..she was probably right….after all, he had forced Kripa to get married to Prithvi, and she was just being a dutiful wife….

Prithvi just stayed quiet and pondered on her statement…..she was probably right…he had to take some decisions himself, "don't worry Angad…let me handle this one myself.."

Angad just nodded and walked to his room.

……to be continued..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
p taking his own decisions will lead him 2 trouble i think wid kartik being there. how will A-K get 2gether is wat i m wondering as now both r being distant frm each other 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
AWww pooor Angad I feel so bad for him 😭 😭 😭 This was such a sad part. My prediction is that now since prithvi will start taking his own decisions he is going to be mean at times with Angad, and like say bad stuff to him if he ever tries to help,prithvi might end up being over confident about his work, and then give karthic more importance than angad or something like that. But I am still confused about how AK will get back together 😕 maybe like prithvi will end up kicking Angad out of the house or something when something big happens between them, like a business loss or soemthing and then kripa will end up getting mad at prithvi and tell him everything Angad has done for him (KP marriage thing) and them will end up leaving the house with Angad or soemthing. Well this is just what I assume might end up happening, we'll see what happens, but plz hurry up and get them together again I cant see Angad in pain 😭 , hez such a sweetheart. Great part again 👏 and continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks Ice girl and Mita 😊

Good guesses Mita 😊 but let's see what actually happens. Of course AK are made 4 each other so they have to get together, no matter what 😉 I will post next chapter soon

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