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Posted: 18 years ago
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i am working on part 3..and will post it soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice intro and loved the parts! i dont really go on the prc forum, but i do like their jodi, ur doing an awesome job! continue soon! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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goshh the amount of time you spent replying could of spent on part 3..you couldve finished it by now!! haha lolz..sorry..but what can i say im impatient..patience is a virtue wich i dnt av so jus hurry up yaar!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: zeenat_786

nice intro and loved the parts! i dont really go on the prc forum, but i do like their jodi, ur doing an awesome job! continue soon! 👏

thanks zeenat😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jattinder!

goshh the amount of time you spent replying could of spent on part 3..you couldve finished it by now!! haha lolz..sorry..but what can i say im impatient..patience is a virtue wich i dnt av so jus hurry up yaar!

Lol jattinder!😆i'l get it done by afternoon.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sory guys...been so busy! part 3 coming up.. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3 - (Chapter 3)

Hai Bhagwan, I don't know what do to, I think it was really stupid of me to run of like that, well now I've come so far..i don't even no how to get back, I don't have no money..what do I do..please god help me.. Zaara tunrs around looking disappointed and walks down the long steep steps going back down. Just looking around she see's a golden coin the side of one step, and she thinks to herself "yeah kya kar rahe hoon mein? I am a rajkumari and I can't be so not respectful to my cultures and traditions.

But Zaara had'nt eaten anything for days, so she picked it up the coin, and walked of to the nearby stall of food. She so some fruits there and decided to get how much she could afford with that coin.

Sales man – aree madam..this money is too less..you cant even buy a needle with this!

Zaara – acha? Ab…(looking upset)..ab main kya karo..

Sales man – if u want to buy..hurry up..i got other custormers waiting!

Veer who is also in the same market, sees all this happening, and notices this is the same girl who ruined his food. So he went up to her and said.

Veer : deeka..what real values of food are..and you just go reck mine? pani ke ek bundh ke liye loch taras rahe hain, aur tum..aram se..spoil my food!

Zaara – deeke.. I do not have time to argue with you..please leave my way. (she pushes him out the way, and hold on to her duppta and fiddles with it with her fingers)

Veer asks the sales man… what is wrong, why she didn't buy food? And he told him that she only had one coin. Which she could get nothing from..

Veer felt sympatric with the girl he just met, and decides to follow her. It is no late and He notices her shading under a tree, and goes and sits besides her.. and touches her shoulder..

Zaara – yeh kya pyaatameshe hai?!

Veer – sune..please forgive me for what I done with you earlier

Zaara – (looking down)

Veer pulls out a bag, out of his pocket, and says : will you eat something .

Zaara – nahin..im fine thank you..

Veer – I insists please.

Zaara looks up, and takes the piece of food item from the stragers hand..

Veer – soo..whats your name?

Zaara – huh? Main…zaara 😳

Veer – acha naam hai, im veer

Zaara smiles 😊

(To be contiued...)

-Dilbagh

😊

Edited by dramaholic - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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please post your coments 😊
Posted: 18 years ago
#29
wow dil..kool man u can be director & scriptwriter for sure 👏 ...awww so sweeet i love it & enjoyed..but where was this thread how cum i never saw part 2 & 3 ....if it wasn't ur pm..i wud have missed an entertaining story 😛

Cheers
Dil..me waiting for ur part 4

❤️Kai❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well done dilbagh it great

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