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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: dhvanisoni

hmm...we landed in toronto...scarbotough mein ek rishtedaar rehte hain toh unhi ke ghar hum 1month the..and then we moved over here with them...on July 7th we will finish 1year over here...so v came on july7th 2006...and now its ll b a year,...but it fells as if v r still new...and v have still just arrived...haha

aray dhavni i m n toronto too😆

to ap log pehlay humaray shehr aye thay😉.par yahan say bhag kyune gaye??😆(just kidding haan😉)

janti ho story par kay maza kyune ata hai cuz ya sab apna apna sa lagta hai . u no same skool rules , n skool stuff amd also because ya younge generation sujal kashish hain😆

nice part yaaaaaaaaaaaaar👏

acha is hi liya aya tha us kay gharaya 😆

manay kaha pata nahi kay howa hoga😆😆😆bechara rasta bhul agay ho ga ya god noz ekta main style wo sab ik sunehra sapna hoga😆

kher i bet next pat bhi buhat acah hoga cuz hez goana tell her how to ride a cycle n u no a lil bit roamnce too😆

cant wait plzplzpzlpz cont soooooon😳

rajeev rox👏

Edited by me2kool - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: fravashi

OOOOHHHHHH!!! I SEE THAT'S HOW HE REACHES AT HER PLACE 😉 .THAT WAS A VERY GOOD DIRECTION IN THE STORY 👏 . HMMMMM BIKE LESSONS!!! TOO GOOD 👍🏼 . BUT YAAR THAT'S DAMN SHOCKING KI SHE IS IN HIGH SCHOOL BUT DOESN'T KNOW HOW TO RIDE CYCLE 😕 . THAT'S FUNNY 😆 . BUT KNUCH NAHI APNE SUJAL HAI NA USSE TEACH KARNE KE LIYE 😳 . CAN'T BELIEVE THAT SUJAL GIVING LESSONS TO KASHISH 😆 .HEY U SAID NEXT PART IS GOING TO BE LONG. GOD CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN KNOW THAT HE IS GIVING HER THE LESSONS ALONE IN THAT PARK 😳 . IT IS SO DAMN EXCITING 😉 . CONTINUE SOON YAAR PLZ..... CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER. BYE.TAKECARE. 😊 😛 😊

WAISE DHVANI I WANED TO ASK ONE QUESION THAT WHERE DO U LIVE IN CANADA? AND IN WHICH PROVINCE. IF UR COMFORTABLE U CAN ANSWER HERE BUT NOT CAN PM ME.BYE 😊 😛 😊


haha...i lik reading ur comments...haan now c ke kya turns and twists aate hain...and for tht keep reading😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey very good part...bicycle part was so cool


thnx...keep reading😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ImPrEsSiVe_Grl

hey dear nice part 👏 👏 👏 ....kashish dont know how to ride a cycle and now sujal will teach her...interesting..cont soon dear 😊 ...


haha...yup...always interesting if they r sk...😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_M

u r so lucky u have time i envy u😆😆 trust me once u strt to work and uni, the schedule will be so hectic u will go crazy sometimes😆

enuf abt my babbling abt the part it was fabulous👏 👏 👏is sujal ki nazeeb sirf girna hi likha hain kya😆thank god he didn't faint this time😆

haan...girna hi lakiha hai samjlo...woh bhi by kashish...😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: me2kool

aray dhavni i m n toronto too😆

to ap log pehlay humaray shehr aye thay😉.par yahan say bhag kyune gaye??😆(just kidding haan😉)

janti ho story par kay maza kyune ata hai cuz ya sab apna apna sa lagta hai . u no same skool rules , n skool stuff amd also because ya younge generation sujal kashish hain😆

nice part yaaaaaaaaaaaaar👏

acha is hi liya aya tha us kay gharaya 😆

manay kaha pata nahi kay howa hoga😆😆😆bechara rasta bhul agay ho ga ya god noz ekta main style wo sab ik sunehra sapna hoga😆

kher i bet next pat bhi buhat acah hoga cuz hez goana tell her how to ride a cycle n u no a lil bit roamnce too😆

cant wait plzplzpzlpz cont soooooon😳

rajeev rox👏


haan yaar...sab kehte the tht in toronto job milna hard hai...aur yahaan achha hai..so v came here...haan yaar...muje bhi apna school yaad aa raha hai..yahaan wala...vacations jo chal rahi hai...waise mein kal party mein jaa rahi hoon mere friend ke ghar...dont worry...yeh story toh aise hi chlegi...regular...ab yeh cycle chalana sukhyega yaa dono kya karne wale hai...uske liye...tohda wait..shayad thoda bhi nahi...mein abhi post kar deti hoon....thnx...and keep reading😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
part 16

She tries but then she loses balance,she is too cautious so she lets the cycle go off and keeps standing,sujal ke upar whole cycle jhor se gir padti hai..

S:ahhhhh…uuhhhhhh…..hhaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

K is laughing…su also laughs but use thoda pain bhi ho raha hai, but seeing k laughing sab pain gayab…

S: ok lets try again…

k:umm..ok…


sits again,tries but falls,but sujal saves her…ab she is in sujal's arms…and suddenly uth jati hai

k: koi baat nahi..aise try karti rahungi tabhi to aayega..

s:ya true,..

she tries but again falls…this happens 20 times…now sujal is tired and kashish is tired too…

su: ok lets try it the other way, uthro,now,keep one leg on opposite paddle and then push the ground by another leg and then when u get the balance ,u can sit

she tries and now she is going…uska balance ho jata hai

ka: heyyy….yipppppppyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy…ho gayaaaaaaaaaaa….muje aa gayaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

suj:abe ruk…itni fast mat jaa….takra jayegi us ped se…..[he goes behind her,but kash is going very fast]

she tarkaos with the tree,and falls meanwhile sujal is also running and comes…and laughs on her

ka:has kya raha hai be…

sujal keeps on laughing…he doesn't know tht kashish's leg is in between his legs, kashish is angry and woh uske leg se sujal ka leg ko marti hai and sujal loses balance, gira deti hai and sujal falls..

su: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

ka:has raha tha naa mere pe…

su: ok baba I won't laugh…khee kheeee[still laughing]

badal garajte hai…

su: u know wht…the weather over here is really really varied..

ka: achha…ab kyaa..main toh umbrealla bhi nahi layi

its starts raining…they both stand up and go towards a tree..but they r already wet..

under the tree

su: are …we r already wet…chalo barish mein

ka: wht !why!…ok chalo…who cares..haha they both r dancing in the rain on this song..(song dekho guys)(fro some reason video khul nahi raha.so yeh sing is ON the roof,In the rain from film masti which has vivek oberoi and lara dutta)

http://youtube.com/watch?v=ICqjPger4AI

(waise they r in garden,not on the roof,but chalta hai, samaj lena/just assume guys)

the next song on her MP3 player

na re naa re ..nana ree…barso re megha megha…(from Guru film)

su: yaar,this song is stupid and how will I dance on this one…

ka: noooo I luv it…I wanna dance on it…

su: jo bhi ho…u can't dance lik aish…!!

Ka: u r challenging me!?mujhe award mila hai dancing ka

Su: kuch bhi ho…u just cant..,aur kis bevakoof ne award diya tuje

Ka: dekh mein tuje batati hoon

She dances exactly lik this:(watch it guys)

http://youtube.com/watch?v=li5RraRfMKg

Sujal ki ankhe phati ki phati reh jati hai…he is amazed…

Su: wakai tum achha nachti ho

Next song is,dhoom 2 title song

Su:oye…this is my favorite

sujal dances on this song…

exactly lik this:

http://youtube.com/watch?v=x_Ee-P_gEiM&mode=related& search=

kashish ki ankhe phati reh jati hjai…he is dancing exactly the same way hrithik does…

ka: waise tum bhi bure dancer nahi ho

su: aur kya tum kya samajti ho..nachna sirf tumhe aata hai

now it starts raining very heavily…

su:chalo udhar…its too rainy..

they go towards the tree,its very windy,kash ke baal ud rahe hai,and sujal uske peche chal raha hai and her hair come on Sujals face,now sujal cant see anything,uski ankho mein baal ja rahe hai,uska pair rock se takraata hai and he falls dowm aur kash ko bhi saath main leke girta hai


now,woh gire bhi toh kaha,in kichad,now in kichad kash is totally inside,puri mud waali ho gayi hai kash,and sujal has almost fallen on her,sujal ke baal r very watery and muddy ,woh apna head shake karta hai and all the mud falls on kash ka face,kash ki ankhon mein mud goes,she cant see anything,her eyes r itching and watering,

su:umm…sorry[for mud]

ka:ouch…ahhhh…its hurting

su: ok wait,mein hatatha hoon,[apna muh kash ke muh ke aage se hatatha hai and lets some rain fall on her face to drive the mud out]

ka:ooouuucchhhh..its still burning…

su:ruko…relax..ankho ko dhela chodo…[he slowly takes his mouth towards her eyes ,aur paass...aur passs....aur paass......ekdum paas...and uski ankh mein phukta hai]

ka: haan ab thik hai…[she opens her eys and sees ke sujal is almost on her and very very very near to her]

sujal use dekhta hi rehta hai

ka:umm…sujal…

su:hmm?

Ka:umm….hato…utho….umm…

Su realizes and achanak uth jata hai

They both go turn their faces in opposite directions and blush….

song in the background...waise MP3player mein yahi song baj raha hai and guys sirf consider rajeev and aamna in the video...abhi ke liye ignore others...😆

http://youtube.com/watch?v=sk1bXFbtuPM

now they both come to reality and dono apne aap ko sar pe marte hai with a look tht "ahhh wht am I thinking"

mp3 mein gana bajta hai-

aaaa…ohho oo hh uuoooaaaa aaa

kyun aaj kal neend kum khwab zyada hai

lagta khuda ka koi nek irada hai….

haan mujhe pyaar hai yaaa

kaisa khumar haii…aaaa…

ohho oo hh uuoooaaaa aaa(from film who lamhe)

this one http://youtube.com/watch?v=raavVjuH2Ko&mode=related& search=

Both start dancing again…

Now this song comes..(its the time to disco-from kal ho naa ho)

Dil hai mera diwana kya

Kehta ha ab ghabrna kya

Taal pe jab jhume badan

Hichkichana sharmanakya

Khul ke jhoomo

Khul ke gao

Ayo ao ye khul ke kaho

IT'S THE TIME TO DICSCO…tara taraaaaa

su: ho jaye…

ka: ho jaye..

they both jump into the kichad and keep on jumping inside and they r all wet and muddy ,both keep on dancing on the tune…both fall down a several times but they get up and start dancing again…like this.. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bVM0ktaO2Qs

[only consider the dance steps guys]

and then all the bachas from the residence area come out ,in the garden and they all dance with sujal –kashish in rain on this song exactly lik this:(just dekho guys iss song ko..maza aayega in imagining srk as sujal and madhuri as kashish...) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=du3wQz1ieY4 and at the end of this video ,jaise srk madhuri ko ghar chhodta hai,sujal bhi use aise hi ghar chodta hai aur who aise hi sharmake bye kehti hai….


Edited by dhvanisoni - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
wooooowwww .too good...u r just a superb writer ..just love ur story n this part was gr88 👏 👏 ...specially the cycle wala n kichad wala scene superb.... 👏 do post the next part soon...cant wait more 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey very good part..and very good choice of songs 😆 i cant belive they were dancing like crazy in rain.... 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
g8 part dear 👏 👏 👏 .......maza a gaya ....all the scenes were very gud especially mud scenes..
Edited by ImPrEsSiVe_Grl - 18 years ago

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