Pyaar Mein Hulchul LAST PART/EPILOGUE p49 - Page 33

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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry everyone for delays have been busy with school and all will post a new big part maybe 5 today depends if i can write all 5 parts today to make up for the last month....will post soon sorry once again everyone 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part. Poor Angad I wonder how hes going to take it. Continue soon. Take care.
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Posted: 17 years ago

will update in a bit guys😉

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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no more replies eh its okay i will still post a part😉

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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Today's episode:
Zaib came out of his trance when he heard angad say what…..he spoke….(its muted), and the next thing you see is a plane landing in london. The place that had taken his entire life away from him, he walked through the gates of gauri's apartments holding his bags with tears in his eyes, he would never forget his place after all the love of his life turned out to be his childhood sweetheart.
Silence echoed throughout the entire house as angad stepped into kripa's apartment, the bag fell out of his hands as he saw tanya with zaib, and a crying gauri but no kripa, the love of his life was gone forever, how was he supposed to except that? The one he loved the most was gone forever, but why, why did she have to leave him, if only he had known, perhaps his love would have saved her, if only he knew!
"hey angad, how are you doing kid?" zaib said as he reached forward hugging him if only he could get rid of the pain he had just heard of if only he could. Angad stared at tanya deeply as if trying to find his kripa in her but she wasn't her eyes didn't have that childness or that hint of mischief that was once in kripa's eyes. Angad lowered his gaze and looked towards gauri, she stood their with tears in her eyes but wouldn't let them come out. Angad looked deeply at gauri like a brother would do, he stretched his arms as she came towards him hugging him tightly soaking his shirt with tears of grief and he consoled her but who was there to console him, they were all there for each other, but where was his special someone by his side, where?
"im sorry angad bhai, I couldn't save her I tried so much but he…he…he im sorry!" gauri broke down shocking all of them. Zaib and tanya looked at each other while angad looked up, who did this to his kripa? Tanya ran towards gauri and helped her sit down on the couch and consoled her. After a few moments which felt like ages for the three she stopped crying when angad asked, "gauri yeh sab kaise hua? Kisna meri kripa ki jaan li? Kon tha who?" gauri looked up as she heard the pain in his eyes, she knew she couldn't hold it from him anymore.

FLASHBACK:
He entered through tanya's room but found no one there, he headed into the next room and found a girl fiddling through some magazines and making some phone calls. He walked in and carefully stood behind her and pulled out his knife. He grabbed the phone and cut it, she turned around and looked at him, she didn't recognize him. He was wearing all black…
"who are you, and what do you want?" kripa asked him. He laughed and said what are you talking about tanya, how could you forget me so easily I just met you 4 days ago, remember?" Kripa's eyes go wide in shock and says, "you it was you who…?" she decides not to say anything or he would hurt tanya. He goes forward and says, "did you miss me, I sure missed you, having fun eh hun?" and touched her cheek, kripa slapped his hand away and started walking backwards as he started walking towards her. He pulled the knife up and she looked at him, she started getting anxious, and the next moment felt as though life had ended for her, he stabbed her, tears started brooming in kripa's eyes, she couldn't take the pain, she was dying but she would do anything for the people she loved even if it meant killing herself. He looked at her shocked, she hadn't fallen to the ground. She started pleading towards him but he didn't listen, "nahin, nahin chodho mujhe, plz leave me," she said while crying through her tears. "nahin, ab main tumhe nahin chodoonga," he said as he pulled out a knife. "ahhhhhhhhhhh, gauri bagho yahaan se.…(kripa had seen gauri walk in through the door…" "nahin kripa main tumhe yahaan chor ke nahin jahoongi...never", she picked up her head, and screamed, "help, ....please hold on, tumhe kuch nahin ho ga" The man ran away, leaving behind an unconcious .... and gauri, crying for help...."ahhhhh", she cried in pain, she was rushed to the hospital, gauri by her side. "... dont worry tumhe kuch nahin ho ga, maine aunty uncle or ...phone kar diya hai, woh aate hi honge...hold on, please hold on..."
END OF FLASHBACK:

Tears continued running down gauri's eyes as she once again dreaded that horrible night that took away her older sister from her, if only she could have saved her. Tanya stood their shocked, gauri had told her everything that happened but who the man looked and why he was after her. "gauri, gauri look at me, kon tha who? What did he look like? Who was he? Gauri tell me please, I want justice for kripa…please gauri say something!" gauri looked up, tears flowed continuously and finally she said…. "R….A….J…!" tanya walked backwards in horror, she hit the wall unknowingly and slid to the ground crying.
Angad stood paralyzed for a second, all of this happened with his kripa, HIS KRIPA! Zaib looked at angad and then at tanya, he rushed towards tanya and hugged her trying to console her.

MOMENTS LATER:
Tanya had regained control when angad went near tanya and said with a deathening tone, "tanya yeh RAJ kon hai? Aur osihe ne meri kripa ko kyun maara?" tanya looked up to his fury filled eyes and his straight face, "angad who who who ….raj mera ex-boyfriend tha…who mujhse pyaar kaarta tha lekin maine osihe kahaa that I don't believe in love and when he got to possessive towards me I dumped him and got away, but I never knew that to get revenge and me back he would hurt kripa"……tanya stood shocked, her phone dropped out of her hands, everyone looked at tanya, while tanya fell on the couch, clutching the sides for support. Zaib bent down, "tanya what happened?" tanya looked into his chocolate brown eyes and said, "she gave her life to save me…..he was after me, she knew it but didn't let him know anything she risked her life to save me……..kripa, KRIPA TUMNE AISA KYON KIYA, HAMESHA SACRIFICE KIYA TUNHE…LEKIN YEH KYUN NAHIN SAMAJ PAYI KE KRIPA KE BINA TANYA ADHURI HAI….KYUN KYUN KYON KRIPA, TUMNE AISA KYUN KIYA?"

"hello doctor how are you?" the person turns around, you see the lips, the eyes and the entire face its none other then KRIPA…. "im fine roshni tum kaise ho?" "anjali main teek hoon aur tum kaise ho tum taak ti nahin ho kya, dinn raat kaam karke?" kripa just smiled at her, and laughed. They both walked out the doors when all of the sudden kripa began to stiffen it was as if she had lost her breath, he stood before her….it WAS HIM….she didn't know why but everytime she saw him she would loose her breath and want to run away from him. Roshni noticed the discomfort on kripa's face and helped her into the car and drove off.

(NOTE: ANJALI IS KRIPA, KRIPA LOST HER MEMORY AND DOESN'T REMEMBER ANYTHING AFTER THE AIRPLANE ACCIDENT)

Angad, Zaib and tanya walked in through the doors of the mall, angad had wanted to come here as soon as he found out that his kripa loved this mall especially the little kid's shop, "JUST FOR LIFE" he smiled. He waved goodbye to zaib and tanya who walked off towards the back of the mall while angad went upstairs to the right into the shop. He entered the shop when his heart began beating faster, there was a particular presence here that was killing him, it was though as if his kripa was here again.

KRIPA'S POINT OF VIEW:
I stood there looking at the little toys when I turned around immediately I felt as though someone familiar was staring at me as if though…eh forget it what am I thinking MS. ANJALI KAPOOR….ab chalo tumhe toys buy karne hai for the little kids, after all you promised get going now!

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Angad walked through the doors towards the stuffed teddy bear when he noticed a petite young woman in front of him with light brown hair in a blue indian suit. He smiled she reminded him of his kripa, but then his smile soon disappeared and his eyes became moist when she turned around and looked at him. HER HAZEL EYES WERE SHOUTING AND SCREAMING AT HIM TO RECOGNIZE HER, she stood there confused as angad stood shocked his kripa was standing in front of him, suddenly he remembered that was tanya, he smiled. But where was zaib, hmmmm maybe he is somewhere here. As he took a step forward she turned around and walked out the door, angad stood dumbfounded why had tanya not want him coming near her. He was broken out of his trance when he heard tanya call his name, he turned towards her and saw her beside zaib. He smiled maybe he was thinking too much when his eyes scanned tanya's clothes, she was wearing jeans and a white beater. His eyes grew wide in shock, how could that be he had just seen her in indian clothes?!

DOES ANGAD FIND KRIPA?!
Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome Part Sukhi

Kripas alive
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey!!just read the entire ff...i luv it...continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
next part up in like an hour or so 😉
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Today's episode:

Angad walked up to tanya and zaib with a confused and somewhat shocked look on his face. Zaib tried breaking out what angad was thinking about but came short with nothing. "angad kya hua tum tanya ko aise kyon dekh rahe ho?" angad came out of his trance and looked back at zaib and said, "zaib maine abhi abhi tanya ko indian suit mein dekha aur ab yeh in jeans mein hai, lagta main pagaal ho jaoonga!" tanya's eyes grew wide in shock, never had she NEVER worn an indian suit in her life only kripa had done that. She looked towards angad and stammered, "angad…..who….who kaise dekhti thi….konse kapre peine te aur osihe ki aankhon ka rang kya tha?" angad looked at tanya quizzically and said, "she was wearing a baby blue salwaar kameez with simple designs on the kameez, her hair was chocolate brown and her eyes…her eyes where light brown more like a milk chocolately color….." angad stopped right there and dropped his cellphone. (scene goes back to when he sees kripa) angad looks back to the girl he had seen and then he immediately recognized her it WAS HIS KRIPA, SHE HAD THE HINT OF INNOCENCE AND LOTS OF LOVE IN HER EYES…..he looked towards tanya and screamed, "it was kripa, who kripa thi, main jaanta hoon who kripa thi….she is ALIVE WHO ZINDA HAI, WHO ZINDA HAI….." tears ran down his eyes, he quickly turned towards the left and ran off into the direction where she had headed. He ran throughout the entire shop and then looked around on the second floor there she was going down the escalator. Zaib and tanya ran after angad and noticed him running towards the escalator when tanya's eyes noticed her TWIN, kripa was alive she looked radiant and had a peaceful look as usual. Tears ran down zaib's eyes his best friend was alive…..they both ran down the escalator but by then she was gone.

Angad ran towards the parking lot and found kripa jumping in to her car and driving off, he quickly ran into his car and drove off at full speed following her. Her car went up to a gorgeous mansion big enough for lots of people. Kripa got out of the car and walked inside, with angad at her heals.

MOMENTS LATER:

Kripa heard the door ring as soon as she had closed the door. Tired and angry she opened the door to find a man in his early 20's with chocolate eyes and tears running down his eyes. She looked at him as though something had just hit her, her head began spinning when she saw black and white flashes. In a flash of seconds she lay in angad's arms, unconscious. He cared her to an empty room and quickly called gauri, zaib and tanya who reached the address with a doctor. Doctor kiran walked through the doors rushing to kripa.

(DOCTOR KIRAN IS KIRAN WHO BROUGHT PRITHIVI AND AALIYA TOGETHER)

A few hours later kripa woke up with a banging headache and a weak body. She somehow managed to get up only to notice 5 pairs of eyes staring at her. She looked at all of them but her heart skipped a beat when she saw him and the girl that was very much alike with her. Shock covered kripa entirely she quickly got out of the bed and ran out the door to her car and drove off. Angad, zaib, tanya, kiran and gauri hopped into a car and drove off at full speed with them. Angad thought to himself, "WHAT THE HELL, WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH KRIPA HOW CAN SHE RUN OFF LIKE THAT SHE ISNT EVEN IN THE CONDITION TO DO SOMETHING OF THAT SORT AND THERE SHE GOES PRACTICALLY RISKING HER LIFE, IF ANYTHING HAPPENS TO HER, THEN HOW WILL I…..? NO NOTHING WILL HAPPEN TO HER AS LONG AS IM ALIVE AB MAIN DEKHTA HOON KAISE YEH MUJHSE BACCHE KE JAATE HAI AUR KAHAA TAK MUJHSE BHAAG THI HAI?" he snapped out his thoughts when what he saw stopped his heart…..tears ran down all of their eyes, their hearts skipped a beat as if the incident that had changed their lives had once again came back haunting them…….


PREVIEW - HOSPITAL.....

PROMO #1:

SHE SAT THEIR LOOKING AT HIM, WATCHING THE TEARS RUN DOWN HIS EYES HOW COULD THIS HAVE HAPPENED, AND WHY?

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey guys,

thank you to all who supported me and read this pathetic ff since it started it will soon end in like 4 parts....will try ending it this week if not then next week...thanx again everyone 😳 will also be ending main tum aur meri tanhai in a few parts.... 😃

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