Pyaar Mein Hulchul LAST PART/EPILOGUE p49 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice intro
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
oo, this is gonna be interesting!! cant wait i love a-k ff's !!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
sounds interasting can't wait for the first part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi, your ff sound very Intrarasting, nice and amazing 😛
cant wait.....
and i'am sure that your ff will be a hit 😉 ......
anyways
Good Luck...

Aisha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx you guys..and im working on the first part it will be up in a bit... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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MORE INTRODUCTIONS:

The Bose's:

Prithivi Bose - very cute, friendly, and is friend with josh, angad and zaib..is in love with aaliya

Mishti Bose - is a secret admirer of zaib...very nice..for now

Josh - is prithivi, zaib, angad, and mishti's friend...very sweet, and is a big flirt...

Gauri Kapoor (gauri from kaa) - friend of kripa, and tanya,...very sweet

Raj Kumar - is tanya's latest boyfriend...very hot!...

Part 1:

You see two, three year old girls playing with dolls, when all of the sudden two boys come up and pull their ponytails. The boys make a run for it, with girls right behind them..with sticks..... (scene changes ) four people are talking...dilip, naina, are bidding farewell to gayatri and suryaban..

Dilip: yaar main tujhe miss karoonga

Suryaban: areh yaar hum tumhe milne zaroor ayenge, ab bas karo bacho ki tara maat roh..acha ab hum chalte..flight ka waqt bhi ho gaya hai..

Gayatri: acha naina, milte hai..i will miss you

Naina: main bhi tumhe miss karoongi...bye phone zaroor karna waha jah ke

Gayatri: ha ha, main phone karoongi, acha ab bye..areh bache kaha hai….woh rehe..areh kripa, tanya, kya hua?

Kripa & Tanya: Mama..Papa...dekho naa angad aur zaib hum dhono ko pareshaan kar rahe hai

Naina: areh angad aur zaib..bas karo..ab chalo maafi maango..

angad and zaib: (pout)...and say sorry

Everyone then says there goodbyes, but before going zaib and angad one last time pull kripa and tanya's ponytail, to which kripa and tanya turn around and stomp on their feet, and walk away as nothing ever happened...leaving two little boys behind with tears in there eyes..

~18 years later~

A mansion appears in front of you, as you walk in..you go up the stairs, to a baby blue room...that has many pictures on the walls..and a few musical instruments here and there...you then see a girl walk out of the bathroom in a baby blue suit...she then goes and straightens her, leaving curls at the end. After adding light make up, and walks into the baby pink room next door, with pictures on the walls…and guitars lying all over the room..

Girl: ab chalo wake up..school bhi jaana hai, aaj akri din hai chalo utho..

Girl 2: nahin, mujhe sonha hai..

Girl: teek hai…tum aisa nahin manogi...(moments later comes back with ice cold water).... the next thing you hear is ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh..

Girl 2: you..kripa tumne yeh kya kiya

Girl: ha ha...pagal..jaldi anha..main niche hoon..but before the girl can say anything kripa runs from there

Girl 2: kripa..hmph! tujhe main dekhloongi...

She then gets ready, comes downstairs and eats breakfast, hugs her parents, and leaves..outside kripa is waiting for the girl..

Kripa: honk..honk..hurry up idiot mujhe late nahin ho naa..tanya..hurry up

Tanya: twin im coming hold ur darn horses..mujhe late nahin honaa..whats wrong with you..aaj akri din and still your..forget it… she then gets into the passenger seat and leaves with kripa to high school.., where as in Mumbai you see a dark blue room, where clothes are scattered everywhere...and the next thing you here is ahhhhhh!

Boy: bhai what is this...im gonna get you…

boy 2: catch me if you can..and is out before the boy can do anything..

Boy 1 then gets ready and comes down to meet the hot and sexy twin of his..exact duplicate...none other then zaib..yes people its him dont scream..

Boy 1: bro don't I look sexy today..im gonna get all the girls today..sorry none for you..

Zaib: sure..angad no one is sexier then me..now shut up and get in the car…

finally both get into angad's red Ferrari and drive off for school…

8 hrs. later....

Sharma mansion:

kripa: mom, dad guess what i got selected for oxford university...

tanya: wow, twin, nice job, congrats dear

kripa: thanx, sweety

gayatri and suryaban: congrats beta

kripa: thank you mamma, pappa

in khanna mansion:

zaib: mom, dad, guess what i got selected for oxford university...

naina & dilip: congrats bheta

angad: congrats bro..but guess what, i got selected to..

zaib: dude, did u get selected to oxford..

angad: even better...

zaib: dont tell me..u got selected into sukhi university...dude thats the best school ever..

angad: no bro,...even better...... mumbai university

zaib: dude thats the best school ever...wait...what?

naina, dilip, & angad: laugh

well thats it for now, i will update after replies...plz do tell how it is…

Edited by tweetylicious - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome Part Sukhi very cute and sweet
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good start sukhi...keep it up and lol angad is really getting on zaib's nerves but my sweetoos have not met yet.
that was a great update. 👏 👏 👏 i liked it.cont soon.don't make me wait as i hate to do so 😉 .love ya 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: amneet89

good start sukhi..thank you.keep it up and lol angad is really getting on zaib's nerves after all they are brothers but my sweetoos have not met yet. they will soon
that was a great update. thanx 👏 👏 👏 i liked it.cont soon.don't make me wait as i hate to do so i know and ur wish is my command 😉 .love ya 😳 love ya too

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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Part Sukhi very cute and sweet thanx im glad u liked it..😳

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