Dil Ka Rishta... (ak)note pg 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART ONE

TRRING!!TRRING!!

the phone rung for the third time...not being able to ignore it anymore... Kripa finally picked up teh phone...

KRIPA: itni raatko kyu phone kiya angad?
ANGAD: tumhe kaise pata mein hu?
KRIPA: itni raat ko aur kaun phone karega?
ANGAD: arun bhi toh ho sakta hai...
KRIPA: usse pata hai itni raat ko mein soti hu... aise disturb karna sirf tumhe hi aata hai....
ANGAD: tum soti hi itni jaldi ho...disturb karne ka man karta hai... i wonder how does arun put up with you...
KRIPA: hey now lets not go to my married life... soo what did you want?
ANGAD: food...
KRIPA: well mr.hungry beggar... how about you go to somethign called restaurant?
ANGAD: i wont go there ... mujhe tumhaare haatoka khaana haneka man ho raha hai!
KRIPA: gosh... kaha ho tum...
ANGAD: tumhaare ghar ke bahar...
KRIPA: okk... get in...you know where teh keys are... kitchen mein jao... there are lefts overs in teh fridge... heat adn have them... let mee sleep plss?
ANGAD: NO! i came all thsi way to eat with you... soo meet mee in teh kitchen....

both hung up and kripa sighed... when was angad growing up? she thought... she grabbed her robe and wore it over her pjs... tied herhair in a bun adn walked downstairs to eth kitchen....

an hour later...

KRIPA: arun ne tumhe mere khayal rakhne ke liye kaha tha..aur yaha bilkul ulta ho raha hai...
ANGAD: kya karu... tumne hi mujhe spoil kar rakha hai...
KRIPA: ha..eh to hai... meine hi tumhe spoil kiya hai...

angad stared at kripafor sometime...

ANGAD; i cant believe you're pregnant...
KRIPA(sighed): me neither...

she touched her belly... adn smiled... and looked at angad who was staring at her...

KRIPA: aise kya dekh rahe ho?
ANGAD: dekh raha hu... ki tum woh irresponsible kripa sharma se...responsible kripa saxena kaise ban gayi... saisa klagat hai...kal hi humne friendship ki thi... hum high schoolmein arunse mile the... prom night par woh fight... phir achanak arunne tumhe propose kiya...and now its been 4 years and you're pregnant... it just doesn't seem right... i always thought we would either get married at teh same time... or maybe i will marry before you...
KRIPA: i know... everything seems like a dream... i think you should consider arrying yourself now...
ANGAD: well i am always ready...(he looked at kripa) divorce arun adn marry me kripa... we'll go away from here... and you can always cook mee delicious food... i am not fussy like arun...really!

kripa laughed... she slid beside angad and ptted his cheek...

KRIPA: well darling... you lost your chance...
ANGAD(frowning): all your fault... you were too eager to marry someone who you met ,what, three years ago... ?
KRIPA: atleast i didn't wait till i was 29..!
ANGAD: but you married when you were 25!
KRIPA: soo??? thats teh time to amrry... who will amrry you now? you're old!

angad frowned and kripa laughed again... she dropped her head on his shoulder and pu her arm around his...

KRIPA: if i weren't married... i would have married you...
ANGAD: yea who would marry you anywayss... it had to be mee...

after talking for a while... angad go tup to leave....

ANGAD: you dont have to come to work tomorrow... you have a check- up tomorrow...
KRIPA: but...
ANGAD: i am taking teh day off tooo... (he paused) remind mee to knock arun's head off when he returns...!

do comment!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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but why did she married to arun saxena
that's a bit sad lolz
altogeather gr8 part




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Posted: 18 years ago
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lol is arun gonan die?! lol!! cant help thinking that.. u cant blame me. i want him to die!! prolly in a car accident while coming back from wherever he is.. or is this gonna be like the movie? lol!! great part n cont soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: erier101

lol is arun gonan die?! lol!! cant help thinking that.. u cant blame me. i want him to die!! prolly in a car accident while coming back from wherever he is.. or is this gonna be like the movie? lol!! great part n cont soon!!

i agree wid u he should die in a car accident.lolz

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

i agree wid u he should die in a car accident.lolz



ohh you cruel...cruel peoples! how can you guyss hope for someone to die... lol j/k... just wait and watch what happens...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds awesomee... i cant really hope arun die...cuz the name itself keeps mee from hoping or saying that... soo i hope he goes away or something... soo that abgad and kripa can be together... btw..when are you continuing ziddi?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its sounds so good to me. i want to read more. do continue soon. i really want u to do something to that arun guy. do continue don;t stop this ff. pleaseeeeeeeeeeee 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great concept

who plays arun?

cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i iwll continue after i ifnish my other ff..."::.Ziddi.::" which has only three or four more parts...soooo i will continue then... till then be bye...and thanxx for the comments..!!!

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Edited by Disha=) - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooo interesting. plz continue 😉

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