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Part 3

Sharma Mansion

Kripa is all ready. She comes downstairs and has breakfast with her mom and dad.

Kripa: Mom-Dad, much aap sab se permission chahaye thi.

Kripa's mom: kis cheez ki permission beta

Kripa: wo mere saare friends aaj shaam ko Goa ja rahe hain

Kripa's dad puts the newspaper down and looks straight up to Kripa.

Kripa's dad: aur tum unke saath jaana chahati ho?

Kripa: please dad

Kripa's dad: ek sharat par

Kripa: kya?

Kripa's dad: tum Goa ke trip se aane ke baad us topic par gour karogi jo hamne last time discuss kia tha

Kripa: I promise, I will think about it

Kripa's dad: well then you're free to go

Kripa gets up from her chair and goes to her dad and hugs him.

Kripa: thank you dad, you're the best.

Kripa's mom: what about me?

Kripa runs to her mom and hugs her too.

Kripa: mumma, you're the best too.

Kripa's mom: acha bataa ke tum kitne bajhe ja rahe ho?

Kripa: mom hum sab evening ko jahan se jaayenge, around 4 or 5.

Kripa's mom: acha main aur tumare papa office ja rahe hain. Tum packing kar lena

Kripa: maine already packing kar li hai

Kripa's parents are stunned.

Kripa's mom: already kar bhi li

Kripa: haan much pata tha ke papa much jaane ki permission de dein ge

Kripa's dad: shitaan

Kripa: sorry papa

They all laugh and after short minutes Kripa's parents go and Kripa goes to as well.

Bose Mansion:

A young man is walking down the stairs, and we see a lady sitting at dinning table waiting for someone to come, so they can have breakfast. The young man comes, kisses lady's cheek and its none other than Prithvi and Damini Bose.

Prithvi is only son of Damini Bose. Damini Bose has an event organizing company (same as in the serial). Prithvi helps his mom in the business. Prithvi is very down to earth guy, very simple, never jealous, helps his friends out. He is very caring. He is exactly like how he is the serial but he is always irritating his best friend. He teases her all the time. He is rich as Angad and Kripa.

Prithvi: Good Morning Mom

Damini: Good Morning Beta

Damini: Beta tum breakfast karo, mujhe abhi office jaana hai, bohat important meeting hai aaj meri

Prithvi: okay mom

Damini leaves and Prithvi is sitting by himself at dinning table having breakfast.

Prithvi: aaj phir se akele breakfast karna parde ga

A voice comes from behind.

Gal: aaj akele breakfast nahin karna padhe ga

Prithvi turns around, and we see a beautiful girl standing at the door, wearing beautiful light blue chooridaar suit. She walks by the dinning table and now we see it's Kripa.

Kripa: aaj tum akele breakfast nahin kar sakta, aaj main bhi breakfast karoongi tumare saath

Prithvi: kyat um ghar se nahin kah kar aayi

Kripa: aayi hoon, par mujhe aur bhookh lagi hai

Prithvi: kitna khati ho tum

Kripa: aaj toh main aur khaaoongi

Prithvi: kis khushi main

Kripa: mom-dad ne mujhe permission de di hai, goa jaane ki

Prithvi: mujhe pata tha

Kripa: kaise

Prithvi: har baar ki tarah uncle ne koi sharat rakhi hogi, aur tum ne zaroor kaha hoga ke shochoongi. Hai na?

Kripa: tume kaise pata

Prithvi: mujhe saab pata hai

Kripa (in her mind): toh phir tume mere dil ki baat bhi pata honi chahaye.

I'll post the next part tomorrow.

Take care everyone 😃

Evee jaan, you are gonna love me after 2-3 more parts. Its gonna be all about Angad and Kripa and Prithvi is gonna disappear. Awwww poor prithvi, I am being mean.

Originally posted by: Evee

what? why? tum ko bhi neha ka bhukaar!!!! are yaar angad ke hote hue how can kripa fall for prithvi???? lol

anyways...do continue... i know he will be disappearing soon!😉😆

Evee mujhe to nahin laga abhi tak!! lolz!!

Happe- plz cont!! ur fan-fic is awesome!! don't wrry i'm w/ u on the writers block situation!! lolz!!

Wow happe plz continue tum tu hum ko apna addict kur logee apney fan fic sey.

Evee jaan, you are gonna love me after 2-3 more parts. Its gonna be all about Angad and Kripa and Prithvi is gonna disappear. Awwww poor prithvi, I am being mean

no happe u r not at all being mean😉

YAY!!! prithvi will go bye-bye and kripa will have a much better and hotter looking guy around her😳😉....(just dont kill him cuz he was killed in already two fan-fics!! hope you make him not like kripa in a love kind of way)

Part 4

Prithvi and Kripa both have breakfast. Kripa leaves as she had to go home and finish some packing which she thought she was already done with.

Kripa: Prithvi, ab main ghar jati hoon, mujhe kuch kaam jaad aa gaya

Prithvi: acha theek hai

Kripa: tum toh chal rahe ho na

Prithvi: haan, mujhe bhi abhi office jaana hai. Main shaam ko tume pick kar loonga

Kripa: okay

Kripa leaves from there. After short minutes Prithvi also goes to office.

Khanna Mansion

Angad comes downstairs to have breakfast and his parents are waiting for him.

Angad: good morning, mom, dad

Naina-Dilip: good morning beta

Angad sits on one of the chairs and makes him self comfortable.

He starts eating his breakfast.

Naina: Angad aaj tumari meeting hai, uske baad tume aaj Goa jaana hai

Angad: aaj mom, but I though hamari Goa wali meeting teen din main thi

Naina: haan thi, par unho ne meeting pre pone karti aur meeting kal ki hai toh tume aaj hi nikala na hoga

Angad: okay mom if that the case

Naina: aur haan tumare aane ke baad hume aus theez bar gaur karna hai kise tum har baar avoid kar dete ho

Angad: hum ruk nahin sakte

Naina: ANGAD!

Angad: as you wish

They all leave for office. Angad has meeting. In the afternoon he comes home to pack his things as he will be staying in Goa for 2-3 days.

Its evening now and Angad leaves for Goa.

Sharma Mansion

Kripa is all done with her packing and she is waiting for Prithvi to come pick her up. Prithvi calls Kripa.

Prithvi: Kripa

Kripa: Prithvi kahan ho tum, main kab se wait kar rahi hoon

Prithvi: Kripa I am sorry par main Goa nahin aa paonga

Kripa: kyon? Kripa is sad now as she wanted to go with Prithvi.

Prithvi: Kripa much bohat jaroori kam ke liye out of the country jaana pard raha hai.

Kripa: tum aaj hi ja rahe ho

Prithvi: haan aaj shaam ki flight hai

Kripa: kab wapas aaooge

Prithvi: pata nahin, maybe 3 weeks or a month ( does that satisfy you evee, or should I make a year or one full janam hehehehe)

Kripa: agar kaam hai toh jaana hi pardega.

Prithvi: I am really sorry Kripa.

Kripa: It's okay Prithvi. Not your fault. Acha I think I am gonna cancel the program too.

Prithvi: no way Kripa, you can't do that

Kripa: But I don't feel like going now.

Prithvi: Kripa you have to go. You have been so excited to go to this trip. Everyone is waiting for you. Aur haan maine rajiv ko keh dia hai, who sab tume jahin se pick kar lein ge.

Kripa: okay

Kripa hears a car coming in front of her house so she checks frm window.

Kripa: Prithvi wo log aa gaye, main chalti hoon

Prithvi: take care Kripa

Kripa: you too

Prithvi: have fun but not too much

Kripa: Prithvi tum bhi na

Prithvi: main wahan nahin hoonga, es liye much malum hai tume koi rokne wala nahin hoga

Kripa: tumare spies to honge wahan

Prithvi: yes my spies, my buddies rajiv and rahul

Kripa: okay bye

Prithvi: bye

They both disconnect the phone.

Since Kripa's parents were home, she says bye to them and leaves with her buddy.

Minor character, just for few episode

Rajiv, Rahul, Mona, Dia

These four are close friends of Kripa and Prithvi. Rajiv and Rahul are very protective over all the gals, especially over Kripa because she is known to be the baby of the group. She is very traditional and emotional that they never want to see her get hurt.

I'll continue tomorrow. Take care everyone. 😃

i like the one janam idea happe😉...awsome job!!