Serendipity.....Sujal&Kashish....Last-Part...11/07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#921

wow ths part was just 2 amazing yaar
dubara shaadi is so exciting na😉
luved the romance b/w them
lekin ab subhe i;m damn sure dono ki achi tarah se band bajegi na?😆
plzz continue asap
eagerly w8ing 4 the next 1😊

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jyothi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#922

hey cool part just love this story but i really wish they get caught cont soon

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Pihu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#923

gr8 part kashish..!! vry cute.. plz cont. soon..

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heena mehta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#924

hey kashish wow wat a beautiful part................yaar ye dono thoda contro;l nahi kar sakte......aur ab maza aayega subhe.............

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swetha10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#925

WOW marriage again.. itz gr8..... The trial room bit was very cute...... luved it.... Cant wait for the next part... PLzz continue asap.............😊

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Samina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#926

mindblowing

having sujal and kashish wedding again was a great idea the scenes between SK were amazing and very romantic.

the trial scene room was really good.i liked the way u potray the love between sujal and kashish.

also the last scene between the two was really good.

cant wait 4 their wedding.

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#927

kashish dear pehli baat i'am so sorry, main itne time se story par comment nahii karr paayi.. woh darasal hua yeh kii i got stuck in some work... lekin now me back with my comment... i hope tumko mere comments pasand aaye..😊 pehle tho woh 97th part.. 97th part padne ke baad tho mere khushi ka tikhana hii nahii raha.. aakhirkaar tushaar, swayam aur rishi apne sahii jagah pohanch gaye.. these three deserved to be there from a very long time.. jail tho bas unhi theeno ka intezaar karr rahii thi.. i'am seriously so happy kii court ne faisla sujal, kashish ke hakh mein sunaya.. lekin is sab mein mujhe dukh bhii bohat hua..aur mera dil is liye dhuka kyun kii swayam, tushaar aur rishi ko sazza dilane ke chakkar mein, sujal,kashish had to relive all the painful moments that they have undergone in the past.. sujal, kashish ka joh kal tha, woh baatein joh unhe dard, takleef ponchathi hai, they both had to face the same situation again, by revealing the fact in the court.. isse bada dard sujal, kashish ke liye aur kuch nahii hoga.. har baar sujal, kashish apne dukh se ubarthe hai, aur phir unke kal ka kachcha-chitta unke saamne aa khada ho jaatha hai.. aur yeh sab bas un theeno kii wajah se... mujhe sachchi us tushaar, rishi aur swayam par bohat ghussa aa raha hai.. ab bhi when i think about them mera tho khoon khol uttha hai.. aur tho aur main yeh bhi kahoongi kii joh sazaa un theeno ko apni ghaltiyon, apne gunaahon ke liye mili hai, woh ab bhi bohat kum hai... jis tarah se kashish se court mein sawaal kiye gaye.. i wish i could kill the villain party lawyer to.. uski itni himmat kii woh kashish se sawaal kare.. woh jaantha hii kya hai sujal, kashish ke zindagi ke baare mein... aur jis tarah ka jawaab kashish ne diya, uske liye bohat himmat kii zaroorat hothi hai.. aur kashish ko yeh himmat, mili hai tho bas sujal kii pyaar kii wajah se.. kashish yeh baat jaanthi hai kii jab thak sujal uske saath hai, uske saath kuch bhi bura nahii hoga... aur yahii pyaar kashish ko himmat dethi hai to face the cruel world... aur joh kashish ne baatein kahii court mein, un baaton ko sunn kar tho mere aankhon mein aasoo hii aa gaye... i seriously wish i could kill swayam, tushaar and rishi jinhone kashish ko itna dard diya hai.. itne aasoo diye hai.. seriously yeh scene tho mere dil ko choo gaya... ab phir sujal ko bulakar sawaal poochna.. sujal i'am sure is maintaining his cool, bohat hii mushkhil se, warna agar koi kashish ko takleef pochatha hai tho i'am sure sujal usse chodega nahii... then ek ke baad ek gawaah, har ek saboot, swayam, rishi aur tushaar ke khilaaf jaa rahii thi.. and i'am sure un theeno ko apni naiyya doobthi hui nazar aayi hogi.. and anyway they deserve every bit of what they are getting... unhone chaha kii woh sujal, kashish ko alag kare na.. lekin ab dekho unki kismat ne unhe hii ulta haath de diya.. and now those three are in dooms.... ab swayam, tushaar aur rishi 18 years jail mein sadenge.. ab they can do all the scheming and planning sitting in the jail.. lekin waise bhi they can never put their work into action.. joh un logon ne sujal,kashish se cheena hai, woh tho kabhi louta hii nahii sakthe.. kashish ne theek kaha apne pyaar ka haath thaankar usne koi galti nahii kii.. sabko yeh hakh hotha hai kii woh apna pyaar chune.. us humsafar ko chune jis ke saath, woh apni saari umar guzaar na chahtha ho.. aur agar sujal, kashish ek doosre se pyaar karthe hai, aur ek doosre ka haath thaamthe hai.. tho yeh kahaan ka insaaf hai kii unki duniyaan se khushiyaan cheen lo. jaise yeh dushmaan party ne karne kii koshish kii hai.. unkii tho main.. mere haath aayenge na, tho main unka kachumbar bana doongi.. and then joh scene bahar hua, between rishi, swayam, tushaar and kashish... jab kashish unko sach baat sunathi hai tho bura lag gaya kya unhe... achcha hua unke saath.... aur yeh kya rassi jal gayi par bal nahii gaya in theeno ka... they still are the same egoistic irritating characters.. aur tho aur yeh rishi kashish ko thappad marrne ke liye haath uttatha hai.. haath na thod doon main uska.. lekin uske liye sujal hai na.. aur kya karara jawaab diya hai sujal ne un theeno ko.. maan gaye sujal ko.. shabash sujal..... aur ab main tushaar, swayam aur rishi se kehna chahthi hoon pyaar karne waale ke saath dushmaani mol loge tho uska yahii anjaam hoga.. ab jao aur bhuktho... khulli hawaa ke liye tarsoge... jail mein sado aatarah saal.. aur phir joh sujal, kashish ke beech ke scene the, jahaan sujal, kashish ek doosre ka support banthe hai.. unka ek doosre ko i love keh kar gale lagana.. hyeee.. hyee... kya baat hai.. sujal, kashish ko kissi ki nazar na lag jaye.... mujhe is baat ka yakeen hai kii jab thak sujal, kashish ek doosre ke saath hai koi unka kuch nahii bigaad saktha...un dono ka pyaar hii un dono ke liye sabse badi taakat hai... and then joh unki chaid-chaad hothi hai na.. joh sab unko tease karthe hai... too good.. very well written.. jis tarah woh log ek dusare kii taang kheenchthe rehthe hai.. all in a fun mood... too cutee.... now coming to the next part which you have posted... jahaan par sab khushi, khushi ghar pohanchthe hai, aur ghar pochanne ke baad un sabki khushiyon ka tho koi thikhana hii nahii raha... arre waah.. kya idea diya hai charu ne.. ek dum jhakkas idea hai.. sujal, kashish kii dubara se shaddi, woh bhi poore rasmo , reewazo ke saath.. yippeee.... bohat mazaa aayega.... lekin yeh kya condition laga dii sab ne, sujal, kashish ke milne parr hii rokh laga diya.. bechare ek dusare ke bina ek pal nahii reh sakthe, aur yahaan tho poora din, jab thak shaam ko mehendi kii function na shuru ho jaathi they have to be alag, alag.... aur phir kya tha sab log apne kaamon mein busy ho jaathe hai.. sujal, neev aur akshat ke saath shopping jaatha hai.. tho kashish bhi ussi mall ko prachi aur charu ke saath jaathi hai.. ab yeh kya yahaan bhi sujal, kashish kii nighahein sirf ek dusare ko hii dhoond rahii thi... and then joh baat kashish charu se kehthi hai kii jab yeh poori kashish hii sujal kii ho chuki hai tho uski pasand bhi tho sujal kii hii hui na.. very well said kashish.. and then jab kashish trail room mein jaathi hai, wahaan sujal ka aana.. then sujal, kashish ke beech kii woh baatein.. unki baatein sunkarr tho main sharam se paani, paani ho gayi.... Mashallah... un dono ke romance ko dekh kar koi bhi yeh tho keh hii nahii saktha kii un dono kii shaddi ko hue itna waqt hogaya hai aur woh ab dubara shaddi karr rahe hai... their romance in the trail room was just fabulous.. the kiss they share... the talk they have... i just cannot stop smiling reading all this... then phir jab woh dono bahar aathe hai un dono kii woh sharam and pleading the others kii woh ghar par kuch na bataye.. soooooooo sweeettttttttttt.... then coming to the night time mehendi ka function.. sujal ke tho hosh hi udd gaye kashish ko dekhkar... kashish tho jaise sujal ke dil par qayamat dha rahii thi... they seriously look like a couple who have very recently fallen in love... then coming to the scene jahaan sujal, kashish ke hatheli par apna naam likhtha hai.. nicee.. yeh baat alag hai kii sujal already kashish ke dil par apna naam likh chuka hai.. aur kashish bhi sujal ke dil par apna naam likh chuki hai.. sujal ka kashish ko khana khilana.. unka ek doosre ko tang karna... all this was completely superb.. mind-blowing... marvelous.. very beautifully portrayed... then function ka khatam hona aur phir sujal, kashish ka kamre mein hona, jab prerna ka aakar kashish se kehna kii aaj she has to sleep with her as shaddi se pehle you cannot be together.. aur sujal bechare ka justify karne kii koshish karna kii kashish is already his wife.. lekin yahaan bechare sujal kii sunn ne kaun waala tha... aur phir prerna ne order diya hai tho maan na hii padega na.. is dubara shaddi karne ke chakkar mein, sujal, kashish dono hii bure phase.. lekin is baat par main sujal, kashish se kehna chahoongi, sabar ka phal meeta hotha hai, tho bas thoda sa intezaar kar lo tum dono... aur jaise angad chidatha hai na sujal ko kii agar usse neend na aaye tho woh machchar maare.. hahahaha.. very funnyy... then majbooran kashish ko prerna ke saath jaana padtha hai... hmm.. bechare sujal,kashish mujhko unki bechaini par hasi aa rahii hai...hehehehehehe... then kashish aur prerna ke beech kii baatein were very nice... emotional... achcha tha... then sujal lying in his room, kashish lying down in prerna's room aur un dono ko ek percent bhi neend nahii aa rahii hai.. bas woh ek doosre ke baare mein hii soch rahe hai... i think un dono ke mann mein yeh gaana aa raha hoga "hye..hyee... kya majboori.. yeh mausam aur yeh durri.." haha... and then raat ke do baje kashish ka prerna ke kamre se nikal kar apne kamre mein chale jaana...uska kamra band karke sujal ke pass jaakar uski baahon mein sona.. sujal ka kashish se baat karna.. kashish kii sharam.. sujal kii naughtiness.. kya baat hai.. bole tho ek dum dhassu tha yeh scene tho.. dono ko ek doosre ke bina neend nahii aathi.. kashish is used to sleep in sujal's arms and sujal is used to hold kashish in his arms... aur unke beech kii baatein.. too good... i really loved the romeo, juliet part.... mazaa aagaya sachchi mein yeh dono parts padkar... keep up the good work going.. iu completely enjoyed reading the parts.. loved them totally.... keep up the good work going....👏now coming to my guess on the next part.. well i think kii agli subaah sab log milkar sujal, kashish kii taang kheench ne waale hai... koi bhi un dono ko chod ne nahii waala hai.. un sabko yeh baat patah chal hii jaayegi kii kashish raat mein apne kamre mein chali gayi thi.. and then the saara ched, chaad shuru hoga.. aur in sab mein hogi kashish kii sharam.. aur sujal kii embarrassment... aur phir bohat hii dhoom, dhaam se shaddi kii taiyaariyaan hongi.. aur phir se ek baar sujal,kashish shaddi ke woh vachan lenge.. phir se they will go round the fire, vowing to be by each others side for now and forever & ever... i think sabki zindagi khushiyon se bhar jaayegi.. aur waise dekha jaye tho phir se sujal,kashish kii suhaag-raat hogi.. hehehe... waise i also think kahiin na kahiin kii woh dushmaan party itni aasani se sujal,kashish aur unke pariwaar ka peeche nahii chodenge... may be they will come back to harm sujal,kashish.. i'am not sure about this though... as far as i know the next part will be full of happiness , and loads of romance between sujal,kashish.. so kashish dear kya mera yeh guess sahii hai, mujhe batana, i really want to know...😉kashish dear next part jaldi se post karna... me waiting for the next part very very damn eagerly....😊😛😃

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

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sofia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#928

wow!!!

i was waiting for this part soooo long...aakhir mein all the bad guys are shown their correct place...good job👏

finally...sk can have a peaceful life😳.....

loved the court scene...

hmmm...i wonder wat the surprise is😲😲😲 whatever it is i just hope it is a pleasant one....

good going....keep it up😃