Serendipity.....Sujal&Kashish....Last-Part...11/07

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golu_1677

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Posted: 17 years ago

#881

awesome parts. last 2 parts were great. loved sujal and kash nok jhok.

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 17 years ago

#882

amazing part

i really enjoyed the small fights between sujal and kashish and the way sujal made kashish talk to him was really good.

the gifts were amazing.

finally tushar is gettin what he deserved.

also i really enjoyed the scene between kashish and akshat the way u potrayed the emotions in that scene were truly amazing.

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Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 17 years ago

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 17 years ago

#883

Hey that was a very cute part !! I luvd the cute fight and the cute manaoing way of sujal...........he is just the best !!!

Tushar ki to watt lag gayi.........hahaha!!

Continue soon !!

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Pihu

@Devotion.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#884

nice part kashish.....swyam's so bad..🤢...but sk are cute..😳........plz continue soon...!!

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#885

kashish dear i'am here with my comments on the part..hope you like my comments..😊 well the parts starting was very nice... so beautiful.. such a nice shuruwaat with our dearest sujal,kashish... unki subah kii shuruwaat itne ache se hui.... kashish ke chehre kii woh muskurahat...ab sujal aur kashish kii subah kii shuruwaat itne pyaare,romantic tarike se hui..really very sweettt....waise dekha jaye tho sujal ka din bohat hii achche se jayega kyunke uske subah kii shuruwaat itne achche se hui hai... ek dum mast tarike se...i really liked the start which you have given to this part... aur main kashish kii baat se sehmat hoon..what she said about the bird house.... aur humare hero sahab ko tho mazaak sooj raha hai, he just wants to irritate kashish tho woh kashish kii baat se sehmath nahii hai... yeh sujal bhi na... waise sujal joh karr raha hai woh theek hii hai, kyunke kehthe hai na bina takaar pyaar nahii badtha.. jab thak do logon ke beech takraar no ho, un dono ko yeh ehsaas nahii hoga kii woh ek dusare ke liye kya mayine rakhthe hai... the importance of one person is best known when he is away from you..jab woh naraaz hotha hai....yeh sujal tho mere khayal se jaan-bhoochkar kashish se aisi baatein karr raha hai... lekin yahaan tho sujal,kashish ke beech baat bohat agge badh gayi....ab kashish sujal se ruth gayi.. ufffoo.. sujal yeh kya kar diya tumne.. naraaz kar diya na kashish ko.. ab jao manao usse.... waise i liked kashish's attitude.. aur mujhko sujal, kashish ke ladayi par hasi aa rahii thi.. there meeti si nokh-jhokh brought a smile on my face....tum jaanthi ho why it bought a smile on my face, woh isliye kyunke yeh main bhi jaanthi hoon aur sab yeh
jaanthe hai kii the nokh-jhonk between sujal,kashish is nothing serious... woh bas aise hii ek dusare ko chida rahe hai aur ek doosre se ruthe hue hai.... waise the next scene jahaan par charu, anjali , kripa ne yeh observe kiya kii sujal , kashish ko bula nahii raha hai.... ohhh... i hope kuch serious na ho jaye... then the dining table scene.. jahaan sujal,kashish ek dusare se baat karr rahe hothe hai, indirectly getting in a third person in picture.. yeh dono bhi na.. bachche ke bachche hii rahenge.. unke shaddi ko itna waqt hogaya hai lekin baatein tho aise karthe hai jaise kal hii mile ho dono.. aur dono ko ek dusare ka saath ek aankh na bhatha ho.... aur yeh kya hua baaton hii baaton mein sujal,kashish ke beech kii baat aur bhi badh gayi... sujal,kashish ek dusare se roothe hii rahe... this is not good... you know mujhko hamesha sujal,kashish ka saath achcha lagtha hai... i'am very sad kii unke beech sulha nahii hui... the next scene of akshat and kashih... it was a perfect devar bhabhi scene... joh baatein kashish aur akshat ne ek dusare se kii.. it was all very nice... very emotional.. aur joh kashish ne sujal ko tie bheja..this showed kii kashish chahe kuch bhii ho jaye cannot stop herself from taking care of sujal... aisa anoka hai unka rishtha..and the message which kashish told akshat to give sujal..hehehe... was so cutee... funny... the next scene jahaan akshat sujal ko kashish ka message aur uski tie pohanchatha hai.. sujal kii irritation saaf dikhthi hai... uska mood bilkul achcha nahii hai as he has had a fight , not a fight but a argument with kashish... then jab sujal kashish ko call kartha hai.. and the way kashish teases sujal.. was so funny.. bechara sujal yahaan tadap raha hai aur kashish hai usse aur tadpa rahii hai.. waise dekha jaye tho yeh tadap bhii pyaar kii hii ek ada hai... woh ada joh sabko ghayal kar de.....then sujal ka trying to manaofy kashish pehle phool bhejna... kashish ka returning the phool with a note.. then sujal ka sending kashish bangles with a note...... awwwww... so romantic....... kitna achcha hai...... then kashish sending back a note to sujal... and wearing those bangles... all this was very damn perfect...i'am so khushhhhh..sujal,kashish ke beech sulha ho gaye... yipeee....yaayyyyyyyyyyyy..yahoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo....
now the next scene in the house... jahaan charu observes kashish's bangles.... , aur sabko samaj aatha hai kii sujal,kashish ke beech sulha hogayi nice... but the highlight scene was jahaan kashish ke liye ek parcel aatha hai.. and to kashish's surprise it is a bird house... sujal is a complete sweetttheart... kabhi kabhi tho mere mann mein yeh baat aathi hai kii yeh sujal itna achcha kyun hai....sujal,kashish ka ek dusare ke liye pyaar dekhkar aankh bhar aathi hai...and the talk which they had.. was so veery romantic... aur phir sabka kashish ko chidana.. kashish kii sharam..and uska wahaan se chale jaana.. hyee..hyeee... kya baat hai... yeh sujal,kashish ka pyaar dekhkar mujhko aise lagtha hai kii they are newly in love.. unko dekhkar yeh ehsaas hii nahii hotha kii they have been together for a long time now...sujal,kashish ko dekhkar gaane ko mann kartha hai "love is in the air..jaaniye..heeriye..." ab coming to the dushmann party.. pehle tho tushaar par pehla bomb , pehla jatka tho gir hii gaya hai.. usse patah chal gaya hai kii uske 10 crocre rupess gaye pani mein.. it would havebeen so nice to see tushaar ka waisa chehra... barah baje honge uske chehre par... and then jis tarah sujal ne yeh situation sambhala na , kya baat hai.. humare herojee tho bade hii hoshiyaar hai,samajdaar hai... yeh swayam ka main kya kahoon..he is a back stabber.... woh apne bhai ko hii dhoka de raha hai.... how disgusting.. aur tho aur ab tho tushaar ka diwala nikal gaya..his company is not in his hands anymore..achcha hua , he deserves it... and shayad joh swayam usse dhoka dena chah raha hai na, it is also good..kyunke joh log doosron ko dhoka dethe hai unke saath aisa hii hotha hai.. waise jab swayam ne sujal ko aake usse irritate kiya na..i felt like slapping swayam... aur sujal ne achcha kiya... mujhe dushmann party par aur bhi ghusaa aa raha hai, dear i request hai dushmann party ko aur barbaad karo.. unko sadak par leke aao... mujhe sachchi bohat ghussa aa raha hai villain party par...😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 now coming to the last scene of sujal,kashish..is scene par tho mere aasoo nikal aaye... joh darr kashish ko tha... sujal kii bechaine... his restlessness kii ek bhai dusare bhai ke saath aise kaise kar saktha hai... then kashish ka sujal ko samjhana.. i liked this bit very much..sahii hai kavya,angad aur akshat sujal ke liye kuch bhii kar saktha hai..aur sujal bhii unke liye zameen-aasmaan ek kar dega... the bond, the close knit joh us pariwaar ka har shaks ek dusare ke saath mehsoos kartha hai, is just so beautiful.. this shows kii relationships are not blood alone.. rishthe-naathe tho dil se bhi hothe hai... agar hum kissi ko dil se apna maanthe hai tho woh khud ba khud apna ho hii jaatha hai... i liked the talk betwwrn sujal,kashish very damn much.. aur sahi bhii tho hai agar sujal ke kadam ladkhadaye tho kashish usse samhalegi aur agar kashish ke kadam ladkhadaye tho sujal usse sambhalega.. woh dono hamesha ek dusare ke sahare bankar rahenge.... dono kii zindagi chalthi hai tho bas ek dusare ke presense kii wajah se... really very well scripted yaar....keep up the good work going...😳
kashish dear next part jaldi se post karna..i'am waiting for the next part very damn eagerly..... 😃😊😛
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Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

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sofia

@mystified

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Posted: 16 years ago

#886

very nice part kashish....👏👏👏

uff!! yeh sujal aur kashish bhi na bache hai donon😳😉😆...kitna ladthe hai...but it was too cute😳😳😳....and unka pyar bhi dikhtha hai😃😃...very beautifully expressed...👏👏👏

i liked all their dialogues👏👏👏...

aur yeh kya...abhi tushaar ka musibat tala nahi ki swayam aagaya🤢😡...pls don't let him create any trouble....

the last seen was too good😳😳😳.👏👏...

keep up the good work....

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samrah

@cute_samrah

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Posted: 16 years ago

#887

awesome & lovely part............................i liked the fight between sujal and kashish................................and who sujal make her happy....................nice con't soon

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ajnabi_sahil

@ajnabi_sahil

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Posted: 16 years ago

#888

Hi Kashish

Nice, nice, very nice; Nice, nice, very nice; Nice, nice, very nice, lovely and awsome part yaar well done..👏 very well-written and intelligently created the scenes....I loved reading every word of it......I like the cute fight between Sujal and Kashish ☺️..

Tushar ki barbadi par dil karta hai party kare..bure kaam ka bura natezza yeh to hona he tha..aur Sawyam to bhai ke naam par Kalank hai...ek bhai barabd horaha hai aur woh apne fayede ki baat soch raha hai..I cant beleive...

Sujal.......tum mere liye sab kuch ho...........meri dost.....mera pyaar.......meri patni.........meri humsafar..........kitna pyar hai dono ke beech ..just love bird they are so caring.. ☺️ ☺️ 😳😳😳

thanks for nice part

I can't wait for next part..please keep up the good work and continue soon

Take care

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#889

kashish firstly thankx for this lovely , cute n long part👏...........its was avery well written part i luved it completely........specially jo aajkal tushar ki din khrab chal rahe hain wo😆.bichara ka kya haal hogaya.waise jaisi krni waise bharni😡....................ab sadak par aagya.bahut bahut acha hai.ab pata chaega bure kam ka bura natiza😡😡😡

chalo ab sk ki baat karte hain...............oh all scenes b/w tthem were so lovely......u wrote them so beautifully👏.chahae wo unki lari ho ya pyar sab khuch😳 aur inke to laraiye bhi pyar jaise hai ab wala tie scene hi dekh lo😉..aur sujal how cute he is kitne sare birds lakar deta hai👏...........plzzzzzzzzzz akshish ab inki life me aur koi problem na aaye....coz ab mujhe lag raha ye sawayam khuch garbar karega............i hope sab acha ho😳.plz continue soon