Serendipity.....Sujal&Kashish....Last-Part...11/07

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Pihu

@Devotion.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#861

nice part kashish...very romantic....hope sujal ka sapna jaldi sach ho.........😉😳.......gr8 work...continue soon...

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aarti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#862

very nice part kashish wowwww!!! kya mast date thi awesome aur shyed sujal aur kashish ka sapna bhi jaldi pura hojaye........

amazing,, plzz continuee soon............

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ajnabi_sahil

@ajnabi_sahil

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Posted: 17 years ago

#863

Kashish dear..wow very nice part 👏"I totally and completely love this ff...It is wonderful... can't wait to read the next part.secene for sujal and kashish in farm house ..beutifull😳☺️ so romantic..wow sujal ko time bhi yaad hai mindblowing Sujal: aaj hi ke din do saal pehle subaah ke 11 bajke 18 minute 33 second ko hum pehli bar mile the.........kuch ab yaad aaya ............ab Tushar ke bure din suru hogaye hain..ab aayega asli maja........

thank you for nice part

Keep up the good work

please update soon

take care

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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Posted: 17 years ago

#864

hey kashish it was a fabiulous part.too gud dear👏

and wow kya uloo banaya tushar ko.............chalo 10 crore charity me dalkar sujal bechare ke khuch paap dhod ga😆 aur ab pata chale ga us tushar ko😡.tit for tat😆😆

and really kya romatic scene tha in farm house.main to blushing blushing☺️......hey kashish really i wish that sk's dream of a baby will get fulfilled soon😳😳😳😳

⭐️.

plz continue soon

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 17 years ago

#865

amazing part

i really liked sujals plan hope tushar gets wat he deserves

sujal is defiantly the nost romantic among the others in garewal house he even remembered wat day wat time they met.

Kashish i just love ur fanfic because u potray all kinds of emotions and show romance, fights enemities between two charachters sadnness happiness everything which makes the fanfic really intresting and makes the reader want 2 read more.

the song u added was really nice and it went with the scene.

the actors did a good scene by acting as the bank manager and the poor will thank tushar 4 giving them a lot of money.

👏

Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 17 years ago

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sofia

@mystified

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Posted: 17 years ago

#866

hey very nice part👏👏

very good planning by sujal,angad and kavya...⭐️⭐️

loved the way akshat irritated tushhar.🤢..the bank scene was very clear...

i loved the way both sk were teasing each other...they are cute wen they argue...😉😉
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nice way to celebrate their first meeting....😳😳

hope they are succesful in getting rid of tushhar soon and may their dream come true...

keep up the good work

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Aalia

@Kashish_88

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Posted: 17 years ago

#867

man oh man completely luvd it...the story is going superb n i love it even more now bcoz of the plan ... i luvd the office scene where they irritated tushar lol....i also luvd how they arranged a fake bank.... or farmhouse scene ka to yaar bas kia hi kehna...first of all mera favorite song n then second it was just too adorable n cute .... i hope sujal ka sapna haqeeqat hojaye...

cont soon yaar cant wait for the next part....completely luvd it...👏

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#868

kashish dear main aagayi apne comments lekar.. hope tumko mere comments pasand aaye..😊 well dear parts bohat achche jaa rahe hai... jis tarah pehle kashish kii dilemma thi... the way she din't want to mess around with the villain party.. woh aise chahthi hai kyunke kashish ke liye sabse zyada important uski family hai..uska aur sujal ka saath hai.. aur woh apne parivaar pe ya phir apne aur sujal ke rishthe par koi aanch nahii aane dena chahthi... is wajah se kashish ko thodi gabrahat ho rahii hai..she is right at what she is thinking... lekin jaye jaye tho even sujal is right..i support sujal more... kyunke yahaan sujal wants tushaar to pay for his mistakes.. he wants tushaar to be held guilty.. sujal usse itni aasani se nahii chod na chahtha , and he is absolutely right... i just can't wait to see kab us dushmann party kii baand bajegi.. mazaa aayega... waise jis tarah angad ne tushaar ko irritate kiya.. mazaa aagaya.. i loved it...aur jis tarah ka plan sujal ne banaya wowwww toooo goodd.... us tushaar ko tho baite-baite dus crocre ka nuksaan hogaya aur usko tho is baat kii khabar bhii nahii.... waise main tushaar se kehna chahoongi,tushaar yeh tho bas shuruwaat hai, agar shuruwaat aise ho, tho anth mein tumhara anjaam kya hoga tum tho iska andaaza bhii nahii laga sakthe.. waise tushaar aur dushmaan party ka anth dekhne mein bada mazaa aayega.. mere dil ko bohat sukoon milega....😉 dear sujal,kashish ke beech ke scenes were too sweett..very damn cute... hamesha hii unke scenes bohat hii bhadiya hothe hai... kitna achcha tha... sujal,kashish spending time alone..koi nahii un dono ko disturb karne waala... unke beech kii baatein... unke beech ka romance.. their dance.. hailaaaa.. all this were ek dum mast, totally zabardast... sujal,kashish ke pyaar par main mar jawaa... sujal,kashish ka pyaar dekhkar mujhe gaana ka dil bol raha hai "marr jawaa , mitt jawaa , marr jawaa ishq mein sujal,kashish ke dil kya jaan bhii main de jawaa...marr jawaa..." sujal,kashish itne pyaare hai.. kahiin unko meri hii nazar na lag jaye.... their romance is first class..perfect.......when i read sujal, kashish ke romantic scenes main sharam se paani-paani ho jaathi hoon... i become redd like a tomato....😳 dear for the next coming up parts i think dushman party kii aur baand bajegi... sujal,kashish ke beech romance hoga... aur saare pariwaar mein bohat si khushiyaan hongi...... so dear kya main sahii hoon......😉
dear next part jaldi se post karna... me waiting for it very damn eagerly......😊😛😃

Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#869

kashish dear tumne part post kar diya aur main aagayi apne comments lekar..i hope tumko mere cmments pasand aaye..😊 is part kii shuruwaat tho badi achchi hui..angad aur akshat ne itni achchi baat joh sunayi.. bechare tushaar kii tho baand baj gayi.. aur usse ehsaas hii nahii abhi thak... tushaar ka tho jaise diwala nikal gaya..aur usse iski kaano-kaan khabar hii nahii hai.. i really would love to see tushaar ka woh barah baje hue chehra.... mere dil ko bada hii sukoon milega , seeing him like that...for now i'am very happy kii sujal ka plan bohat hii sahii jaa raha hai..it is right on target....sujal aur uski planning is just too good... kya dimaag lagaya hai sujal ne..maan gaye sujal ko... and sujal ka yeh idea bhi mujhe bada achcha laga kii he is not ready to leave the dushmann party so easily.... sujal na eent ka jawwab pattar se dena jaantha hai... ab us dushmann party kii baand bajegi... aur mujhe bada mazaa aayega... yahaan sujal and others feel it is time for celebration.. mera bhii mann karr raha hai kii main bhi party karoon.... waise yeh sujal na , uski shaitaani aaj thak kum nahii hui hai... uske kaan kheechne chahiye... kashish ko darra diya usne.. he is so naughty.. sujal har kaam mein maahir hai chahe woh romance ho, ya phir shararat... lekin ek baat tho hai sujal jaantha hai kii uski shararatein sirf kashish ke pass hii chalengi... issi wajah se tho he takes that liberty with kashish aur shararat kartha hai.. the room scene between sujal, kashish was too goodd... sujal ka romance par uthar aana... kashish ka promising him kii they will continue their romance once they are back... hailaaaaa..they are so cutee.... really sweeettttttt.... the restaurant scene , was simply fantastic.... jis tarah everyone relived their pyaar kii pehli mulaqat , was absolutely superb.... har kissi kii love story kii pehli mulaqat was very nice.. i liked reading... khaas karke sujal aur kashish kii pehli mulaqat... angad ne kaha na hye..hyee... marr jawaa... sujal, kashish kii pehli mulaqat ke baare mein padkar mere bhii mann mein yahii baat hai.... the dance , the song was too good..absolutely perfect... har sujal,kashish ke scene se sujal,kashish ka pyaar jhalaktha hai..un dono ka beshumaar pyaar.... the last bit of the scene were sujal , kashish ke saath romance karne mein busy tha , aur kashish usse sawaal pe sawaal pooche jaa rahii thi.. i think kashish was doing this just to tease sujal.. lekin yahaan sujal kaunsa kumm hai.... he knows how to handle kashish very well.. i loved the last scene very much.... mujhe sujal,kashish ke pyaar ke baare mein padkar sharam aa rahii hai... very well written yaar..absolutely too good...keep up the good work going... every emotion was perfect in the part chahe woh romance ho , ya phir khushi, ya phir pyaar.. everything was perfect to the "T"...☺️ ab kashish dear coming to mu guess on the next part... sujal aur sabhi milkar the dushmann party ko aur bhii zyada phasayenge.... the dushmann party par shikanja khastha chala jayega..and they will be in deep trouble.. by the time the dushmann party will realize what is going on, it will be too late for them to act upon.... aur doosri taraf everything will be fine , bas khushiyaan hii khushiyaan hongi in sujal's house... and i think there will be emotional moments , romantic moments between sujal & kashish... and i also think bohat jald dushmann party kii baand bajne waali hai... aur yeh baand bajayega humara sujal.....so kashish dear this is my guess for the next part... tho kya main sahii hoon..mujhe zaroor batana.. i really want to know, ki kya mera guess sahii hai ya ghalat.....😉kashish dear next part jaldi se post karna..me waiting for the next part very damn eagerly..😊

Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 17 years ago

#870

amazing part

finally we got 2 hear the good news that sujals finally gained 70% shares of tushars company and he doesnt even no about it hope he doesnt find out untill the last minute and sujals plan is sucessful.

the scene in which sujal was teasing kashish was really cute.

the way u described how each couple met was really good anjali and kkavyas meeting was intresting and i liked the way anjali made the first move.

the song that sujal and kashish danced to was really good.

i really enjoyed the way u added the romance element in the part between sujal and kashish it was amazing.

👏

Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 17 years ago