Life and Crime( Cont.) - Page 7

Your fanfic is really very good 👏 👏 👏

thanks for sharing with us, but you better get copy rights first 😳

please include

my Aman Verma


as the main villian in your next case 😳 but please don't shoot him 😳

and include him for only one case if you like thanks 😃

oh god Kim .You want your hero to be main villain. 😊 That's something i am watching for the first time but i promise i will definitely try toinclude him and togive him a good role. Next part will be up soon. By the way i don't get your copy right comment 😕 ? Will you please explain 😊

Originally posted by: SAMAR KAPOOR

oh god Kim .You want your hero to be main villain. 😊 That's something i am watching for the first time but i promise i will definitely try toinclude him and togive him a good role. Next part will be up soon. By the way i don't get your copy right comment 😕 ? Will you please explain 😊

Thanks😃

Yeah, because you already have cool heros and will need lot of villians so why not a stylish one😳 if you don't mind😊

copy rights, is that you register your story for $50.00 or less and if someone ever steal your story from online and make a serial or movie on it, you can sue them no matter which country you or they live in.

because your story is really, really good and have very strong chance to be stolen😳

thanks a lot Kim. That's the most beautiful comment i have ever got. i will post the next part soon 😊

wow great parts!!! ur an awesome..lol cant wait to see some more cute scenes between mahi and shaurya 😳
plz cont soon 😃

thanks a lot for the comments. I will try to do justice with all the characters 😊

Deepika, Mahi and Shaurya were sitting in the office.

Deepika: So , what are your plans for the1 month break we are taking?

Shaurya: i don't know. What are u going to do?

Deepika: Well, i am going to Shimla tomorrow . I am going to spend sometime with Bhoomi as her summer vactations are going to start.

Mahi: That's great maam. I think u deserve that.

Shaurya: Ya Deepika deserves that? But what about u?

Mahi: What do u mean?

Shaurya: I mean u know... Comeon Mahi we all know that work is your life so what's the use of this break for u? U will definitely feel bored in this break, so why not u join CID for one month.

Mahi(in anger): Just mind your own business ok. I know what i have to do. u mean to say that i am a boring person who don't know to enjoy life .

Shaurya(adding fuel in her anger): Comeon Mahi. I didn't say that. I wasjust helping u . As u don't have any friends........

Mahi(cutting him in short): How do u know that i don't have friends. I have a lot of friends but i don't discuss my private life in my office .

Shaurya: Oh so u have friends? I feel pity for them.

Mahi: What do u want to say?

Deepika who was watching all this from a long time interruptes inbetween before the matter becomes serious.

Deepika: Ok ok enough for today. I think it's time for us to leave from here. I have to do the packing so i am leaving. And u too leave right now.

Shaurya: Ok ok Deepika. As u say. Say my hello to Bhoomi.

Mahi: From my side too. I miss her too much.

Shaurya: Copycat.

Mahi: Just mind your tongue.

Deepika: Ohhho. Just leave right now before i shoot both of u.

Both of them leaves from there without wasting a moment.

Deepika sits down there holding her head. She takes a tablet for headache and leavesform there.

Deepika: Thank god they leaved.

Thinking this, she too leaves from there.

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Next day, Deepika checks out from Shimla Airport and leaves for her house in Shimla in her car. She was passing through the hilly areas when her car suddenly stopped.

Deepika: Oh god . What happened? (To the driver)What happened Raghu?

Raghu: Sorry maam. There is some problem in the engine.

Deepika steps out of the car.

Deepika: Oh god. What should i do now?

She was thinking something when a black honda city which was passing nearby her suddenly stopped and starts moving back. It stops near her , the door of the car opens and a familier face comes out of the car.

Arpit: May i help u Deepika?

Deepika looks at the person . It was someone familier but she was unable to identify him.

Deepika: Do i know u?

Arpit(a little bit shocked ): Ofcourse you know me. I am AB. Arpit Bajaj .Remeber.

Deepika: Oh i am so sorry, i was not able to recognize u. But what happened to u . U r totally changed.

Arpit: Oh . Nothing i will tell u later. Is there any problem?

Deepika: Yes, there is some problem in the engine.

Arpit: Don't worry. There is a garage just 2 kilometer away. I am coming in a moment.

Saying this, he sits into his car and leaves from there . Meanwhile Deepika sits on a rock and starts thinking something. As promised , Arpit came back in 10 minutes with the mechanic .

Mechanic: The problem is not big. But it will take one hour.

Deepika: Oh no. I will be late.

Arpit: Don't worry Deepika. I will drop u wherever u want . Your driver will bring your car later on.

Deepika starts thinking something as generally she doesn't like to take lifts.But there was no other option.She takes out her luggage , gives necessary instructions to the driver and sits into the car with Arpit and they leaves from there.

Arpit: So where should i drop u?

Deepika: St. Thomas private school.

Arpit: Oh great. It means that we are going at the same place.

Deepika: You too?

Arpit: Ya. U know Brahmaraaj studio. I am going there.

Deepika: Oh ok any special reason?

Arpit: Ya i am going to meet someone special there.Waise why are u going to St. Thomas private school?

Deepika: I am going to meet my daughter there.

Arpit was a little bit shocked after knowing that.

Arpit: Oh that means u r married? Great.

Deepika(a little bit tensed): No, i am a divorcee.

Arpit suddenly applied breaks and the car suddenly stopped with a sound. He looks at Deepika who too understands his condition.

Arpit(unable to speak anything): Ummmm......i ....am.... i am sorry to hear Deepika.

Deepika: It's ok Arpit. I am not. Sometimes the relationship becomes so complexed that's it better to end them rather than carrying them like an unwanted load. I am happy in my own world.

Arpit: That's good.

Saying this, he again changes the gear, presses the accelator and the car again starts moving on its path.

Deepika: Waise what's the reason for your changed look? I mean u look totally different without your beard and moustache?

Arpit: Oh that. That was only for the case. The person i am going to meet would definitely kill me if i go in that make up.

Deepika: Ok i understand.

They both smiled and the car keeps on moving on the road.

In Mumbai, Shaurya was sitting with one of his GF's in a multiplex enjoying a movie.Suddenly he felt some familier voice from the next seat. He looks at the seat and closed his eyes tightly with embarassment . He was unable to beleive his luck. How could it be possible?
The person too was shocked to find him there and was equally embarassed .Shaurya opened his eyes with a famileir voice.

Mahi: What are u doing here?

Shaurya (thinking): Oh god she is really here.

Shaurya looks at here who was looking at him angrily.

Mahi: What are u doing here?

Shaurya: What a silly question it is? i think we are here to watch the movie.

Mahi: I know . But is it the only theatre left in Mumbai?

Shaurya: I didn't knew that i will find u here otherwise i would have never entered here.

Mahi: Same here.

The people behind them became embarassed by their arguement and asks them to shutup.

They both gave an angry stare o each other and focused their attention on the movie.

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Shimla

Deepika was sitting with the principal Mother Mary i nthe office.

Mm: You know, she was waiting for u since the morning.

Deepika: I know mother. I am too dying to meet her.

At the same time, Sister Swetlana enters into the office with a six year old and sweet girl who resembles very much with Deepika.

Mm: Here she is.

hearing this, Deepika turns around from her chair and finds the girl standing there and looking at Deepika, her face becomes birght with a cute smile.Deepika's eyes too filled with tears of happiness . She gets up from her chair and spreads her hand open.

Deepika: Bhoomi.

Bhoomi(running down and hugging Deepika tightly): Mumma.

Deepika too takes her into her arms and lifts her up.

Deepika(kissing her cheeks): How's my baby?

Bhoomi: You know mumma? I was waiting for u since morning.

Deepika: I know baby. That's why mumma is here.

MM and Sister Swetlana were watching all this.

Deepika: May i mother?

Mm: yes yes , why not my child. All the formalities are clear.(To Bhoomi) Enjoy your holidays Bhoomi.

Bhoomi: Thanks mother.

Deepika picks up Bhoomi's bag and they both leaves from there

MM: May God bless u both.

Aprit had reached at Brahmaraaj studios. He parked the car outside and enters inside. As he enters, he found the person right in front of his eyes shooting for a program and his eyes starts spakling as he watched her. The director says cut and the girl named Riya Kapoor sits down on the chair and starts relaxing. Arpit reched near her as she was lost somewhere. He extends his hand for autograph .

Arpit: Autograph please.

Riya found the voice so familier and as she looks up she was stunned. It was the most pleasent surprise she had ever got.

Riya(getting up from her chair): Oh my god...... I ....I can't beleive this.

Arpit gives his million dollar smile. Riya hugs him tightly in her arms and he too takes her into his arms.

Riya: I am so happy. Finally u got time.

Arpit: Ya i thought it's the best way to make u happy.

Riya(releasing him and looking at him in a naughty manner):Oh not bad Mr. Arpit Kapoor. But how do u know that i am here?

Arpit: You forgot that i am a police officer. So it's not difficult for me.

Riya: Ya, i totally forgot that. But now let's go from here. I have to tell u a lot of things.

Arpit: Ok , but first finish off your shoot. I can wait.

Riya: But i can't. (Looking at the director) I think Shivam don't have any problem in that.

Shivam: Oh no. You both can proceed.

Riya: Thanks a lot.(holding Arpit's hand)Now let's go. I don't want to waste a single moment.

Saying this, she takes away Arpit literally dragging him from there.

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Mumbai:

The movie finished and both Shaurya and Mahi takes a deep sigh of releif. Shaurya came out of the theatre with his girlfriend.

Sheetal: I really enjoyed your company Shaurya. U r really hot.

Shaurya: Really. Then what about lunch tommorow?

Sheetal: Oh it will be a pleasure.

Shaurya: Then at sharp 2 pm. I will be waiting for u outside taj.

Sheetal: Oh i will definitely come.

Shaurya: Ok then see u tommorow.

Saying this, they both kissed and as Shaurya turned around , he found Mahi there angrily staring at him. He rolls his eyes and starts whistling trying not to pay attention to her.

Mahi: U will never change na?

Shaurya: I am Shaurya Khanna. And i just love the way i am? Anyway have u came here with ur boyfriend?

Mahi became too embarassed with his question.

Shaurya: Oh how could i forgot? Boyfriend and u? What a joke? Who will commit suicide by coming with u?

Mahi: Just stay in your limits Shaurya.

Shaurya: Oh i am so sorry.

Saying this, he leaves from there with his idiotic smile whereas Mahi keeps on staring at him with anger.

At the same time, Mahi's friend Shayla comes there with her car.

Shayla: Comeon Mahi, let's go.

Mahi was about to leave when her eyes stops on a red pocket diary. She picks up the diary and looks at the numbers of girls. It was Shaurya's diary with the no. of all her girlfriends.Her eyes starts twinkling as a plan comes into her mind.

Mahi: Wow, thank u god. Now u watch Mr. Khanna . Now u will understand what Mahi Sharma is.

Saying this, he puts diary into her bag and leaes from there with Shayla.

this was gr8!but wat is ab's relation wid riya?i hope she is his sis!!!!!!though their actions dont speak this!!!!!!!!plz pair deepika and AB plzzzzzzzzzz