Koi Apnaa Saa- Mahi & Shabd....Pt-12 6/19

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Part-6

Aaj ki subaah ki roshni aisi lagti hai jaise mano ki Shabd aur Mahi ke zindagi ka nazara hi badal de.

(In Hotel Sunshine)

Adi: Shabd, kal raat Mahi se tune baat ki. Mera matlab tune uske pyaar ka izhar to kiya naa.

Shabd
(Laughs hard): Pyaar aur main. Tu to janta hai muje ladkiyaan mere liye sirf one night stand hoti hai. ladkiyaan najuk phool ki tarah hoti hai jo subaah hote hi murja jati hai. aur shabd sareen ko best chiz istemal karne ki aadat hai.
Adi: To tu Mahi ke saath is tarah se kyun.

Shabd: lagta nahin tune aaj ka paper padha. Jake pehle paper padh phir meri baat tere dimag me aayegi.

Adi
( paper ko haath me leke padhta hai): "Kal ke Kapooor industries ne jis Vidheshi company ke saath contract kiya tha woh rato rat paisa hadap karke nikal gayi." Shabd tu saaf saaf bata meri kuch samaj me nahin aata.
Shabd: Tune kya kaha tha ki yeh project hamare kis kaam aa sakta hai to sun. Muje pehle se hi pata tha ki yeh videshi company ek bahot bada fraud hai. Is liye maine tuje project se tender last minute pe nikal ne ko kaha taki yeh project kapoors ko mile. Aur aaj se thik do din baad uski company ki nilami hogi jisse hum no3 se no2 per aajayenge.

Adi
(confused) Yeh baat to meri samaj me aa gayi lekin usse Mahi ka kya taluk.
Shabd: Maine ek teer se do nishana kiya hai ek kapoor industry or dusara Mahi.

Adi: Muje lagta hai ki jo tu kar raha hai bahot galat hai. maine Mahi ki aankhon me tere liye pyar dekha hai. Kisi ke pyaar aur jasbatoin se khelna bahot bhari pad sakta hai.

Shabd: Just wait and watch Shabd sareen ko.

Adi: i am warning u Shabd.

Shabd: whatever.

(In Kapoor mansion)

Dadaji: Rajveer, Mahi jaldi aao.

Sab gharwale daud ke hall me aate hai.

Rajveer: Kya baat hai is tarah subaah subaah. sab kuch thik to hai naa.

Dadaji: Yeh lo padho aaj ka paper.

Rajveer reads the paper and sits on the sofa with heart broken. Yuvi sntches the paper and read loudly.

Yuvi: "Kal ke Kapooor industries ne jis Vidheshi company ke saath contract kiya tha woh rato rat paisa hadap kake nikal gayi." Dad yeh sab.

Mahi: Papa bank ka loan aur abhi tak to hume zameen ke papers bhi nahin mile.

Yuvi: lagta hai Dad bank wale hume nahin chodege.

Shalini: Tu chup kar kuch nahin hoga. sab kuch thik ho jayega.

Dadaji: kuch nahin thik hoga. Ab to yeh ghar aur office dono nilam hoke rahega.

Rewa: Iska matlab hum sadak pe aa jayenge.

Rajveer: Kuch nahin hoga. main koi na koi bandobast karta hoon.

Mahi: Papa, ab tak to woh log paise leke nikal gaye honge aur bank ko lautane ke liye hamare pass sirf do din hai .

Dadi
(bahar se): Rajveer beta, yeh press wale bahar chila rahe hai. Kya hua koi kuch bolta kyun nahin.
Rajveer: Mahi, Yuvi tum jaldi se taiyaar ho jao. hume office ke liye nikalna hai.

Yuvi(
someone called from office): Sir, yahaan per bank wale aaye hai aur woh log hume do din ki notice deke chale gaye hai aur kahan hai ki agar do din me paise nahi lotaye to woh office aur ghar dono ko seal kar denge.
Mahi: main dekhti hoon aise kaise seal kar denge.

Rajveer: chalo jaldi chal ke dekhte hai.

(In Kapoor office)

Yuvi and Rajveer are trying to call their business friends to help them in their loss but no one agrees to help them.

Mahi
(In her office) Apne aap se: Main kuch nahin hone dungi mere parivaar ko. kuch nahin ho sakta. Koi to hoga jo hume is muskil se bacha sake.
Someone knock on door and is none another than Shabd & Adi.

Mahi
(without looking at door in anger): Maine kahaan ki kuch dair tak muje akela chod do. main kisi se baat nahin karna chahti.
Shabd: Hum se bhi nahin.

Mahi(
Lift her face and sees him): I am so sorry. Mera matlab aapse nahin tha. woh press wale pareshan karke rakha hai. Aap se ek request hai ple muje kuch dair tak akela chod lijiye. Main bahot badi samsya me hoon. ple.........
Shabd: Aap ki is samsya ka upay hai mere pass.

Mahi: Main samji nahin.

Shabd: main tumhari company ko bachcha sakta hoon lekin.

Mahi: lekin kya.

Shabd: Iske bad is company ke share holders mere hoge 75% aur.

Mahi: aur kya chahiye.

Shabd: Tum aur main aur bas ek raat.

Someone enters the room and slaps Shabd real hard.

Rajveer: Samajte kya ho tum. mere business me loss hua hai aur iske liye main sadak pe aajaunga lekin apni beti ko. kabhi nahin. Isse pehle me tumko dhake markar nikal doon. chele jao.

Before they leave, Mahi leaves the office crying and Shabd is shocked to see her reactions in her eyes.

(In car)

Adi: maine tuje kahan tha ki yeh tere type ki ladki nahin hai. Kya zaroorat thi Mahi ko is tarah hurt karne ki. Ab jo hogaya woh hogaye ab hum dono kal Neev ki shaadi ke bad nikal jayenge ki jaise kuch hua hi nahin tha.

Shabd: Nahin, ab to main mahi aur uske baap se is thapad ka aisa badla longa ki dono zindagi bhar is aag ke taap me jalenge.

Adi: Meri baat maan abhi tu bahot gusse me hai, thande dimag se sochte hai.

Shabd: soch to liya hai ab to sirf karke dikhana hai .

(On the middle of road)

Mahi(
apne aap se): Kyun har baar ki tarah is baar bhi muje hi dard mila. aise kaise ho sakta hai ki jisko apni jaan se jyada chaha usse hi sabse bada dhoka nikla. kyun mera dil ab bhi manne ko taiyar hi nahin hai jo usne kaha. Maine ne use sachche dil se chaha badle me ek hi asha thi sachche pyar ki. kyun kiya bhagwan aapne mere saath. aaj mera pyaar perse hi vishwas ud gaya.
(Song in back ground from move Musafir)

Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba

Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba

Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo…

Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba............

Jaate jaate koyi meri khushiyon ko le gaya

Suni suni akhiyon ko gham, koyi de gaya

Aas jo lagaayi hai, aankh bhar aayi hai

Itna bhi koyi, sataaye na rabba

Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba

Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba

Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo…

Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba............

Aur woh zameen pe bethke zor se rone lagi aur tabhi zor se baris hone lagi aur woh baris me big rahi thi tabhi achanak uske samne ek car aakar rukti hai. aur usme se Shabd bahar aata hai.

Shabd
( Holding umbrella): Dekha, aaj bhi tum yahaan big rahi ho aur bhagwan ne muje sahi jagah sahi samay pe sahi chiz ke saath bhej deta hai. maine tumse kahaan tha ki tum jab bhi koi muskeli me hoti ho to tumhara subh chintak banke me aa jata hoon. agar aaj tumne meri baat maan li hoti to abhi tak to tumhari company ke papers tumhare haath me hote.
Mahi
(lifts her eyes and shabd sees pain in her eyes): Kya aap muje mere haal pe akela chod denge.
Shabd: Chod aur tumhe. tumse to abhi is thapad ka hisab lena hai.

Mahi: Mere pass na to khushiyaan hai na gum aap ke saath batne ke liye hai. hai to sirf aapke diye huye yeh aanshu.

and mahi stands and left. Shabd looks at her with angry look in his eyes.

(In Kapoor mansion)

Mahi is sitting in her room when rewa enters.

Rewa: Aaj tu office se bhi jaldi aa gayi. kya kuch hal nikla hamari pareshani ka.

Mahi: Nahin Di. Rasta to hai mere samne lekin mera iman aur is ghar ke sanskar muje rok rahe hai.

Rewa: Samji nahin tu kis raste ki baat kar rahi hai.

Mahi: aap phikar mat kariye. Mere hote huye is ghar pe koi muskeli nahin aayegi. Aap ne suna kuch nahin hoga.

Episode ends on mahi's face where she has tears in her eyes.

Edited by goodkashish - 18 years ago

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Part-7

It is very bright morning in shimla. Let's see what happen today in shabd and mahi's life.

(In the temple)

Mahi subaah subaah kisi ko bataye bina mandir chali jati hai.

Mahi
(bhagwan se): Hai Bhagwan, tu to hamesha apne bacho ki kasauti karta hai. per Dadi kehti hai ki rasta bhi to tu hi batata hai. Aap ne yeh rasta to bataya lekin me apne parivaar ki izzat aur sanskar ki chita nahin jala sakti. main yeh rasta apnau usse pehle me mar jana pasand karungi lekin apne aap ko bik ne nahin dungi. Bhagwan meri aur mere ghar ki izzat tere haath me hai. Maine aaj tak tuj se apne liye kuch nahin manga aaj apne liye apne parivar ki khushiyaan mangti hoon. Koi to muje sahi rasta bataiye. koi to hoga jo mere dil ki haalat samjega. chalti hoon me bhagwan aaj se mere kasauti ke din suru huye hai. muje aashirwad nahin denge.
Mahi sidiyon se neeche utar rahi hoti hai ki woh samne Shabd ko dekhti hai. Mahi jaldi se apna rasta badal deti hai lekin shabd uska haath piche se pakad ke rakta hai.

Mahi
(In very angry and rude tone): Mera haath chodiye.
Shabd
(with smile): Shabd ne jo haath pakda hai woh to woh wasool karke hi rahega. Aur tumne aur tumhare papa ne mil ke jo meri behjati ki hai uska badla to abhi maine liya hi kahan hai.
Mahi: Shayad aap bhul gaye hai ki mera jawab tab bhi naa tha aur aaj bhi naa hai. Aur rahi baat aap ki behjati ki to woh aapne khud karwayi hai. Aap ko aapka tamasha karne me maja aata hoga lekin muje logo ke beech apna tamasha karne ka koi shaukh nahin hai.. so aapke liye behtar hoga ki aap mere raste me naa aaye.

Shabd: Raste me to aap aahi gaye ho bus dair hai to aap ke dil aur dimag dono ko yeh rasta apnane ki. Chalata hoon sham tak apna faisla tai kardena kyunki kal dopahar ke ek baje tumhare company ki nilami shuru hone wali hai.

Mahi: mera faisla tab bhi wahi tha aur rahega.

Shabd: Phir bhi main aaj sham ko tumhara intazar karunga. Neev ki shaadi per. aue shabd wahaan se chala jata hai.

Tabhi Yuvi mahi ko dundta hua wahi aata hai.

Yuvi: yeh kya Mahi tum kisi ko bataye bina mandir chali aayi. Pata hai ghar pe sab log kitne pareshan ho gaye the. ab jaldi se chalo usse pehle dad pure ghar ko sir pe le. Mahi tum Usse kya baat kar rahi thi.

Mahi: kuch nahin. kabhi kabhi insan ko asliyat ka aaina dikhna padta hai. Ab chalo bhi.

(in Kapoor house)

Mahi and yuvi enter.

Rajveer: Mahi. kahaan chali gayi thi subaah subaah. pata hai na tumhe ki main kitna pareshan ho jata hoon tumhe na dekhe.

Dadi: itni bhi aadat mat dalo iski. Beti hai ek din to use apne sasural jana hi hoga.

Rajveer: Pata hai maa lekin main meri beti ko kisi aise rajkumar se shadi karunga ki jo meri beti ko duniya ki sari khusiyaan de aur uske chehre se kabhi muskurahat na khoye.

Mahi: papa, aap jaldi se taiyaar ho jaiye. aaj to hamari board meeting hai naa.

Rajveer: Aaj se tum office nahin aaongi. Main aur yuvi aaj se sab sambhal lenge.

Mahi: Per papa aap aisa kaise.

Rajveer: maine jo keh diya woh keh diya. aur waise bhi tumhe aaj prachi ki shaadi main nahin jana.

Mahi: Aap nahin chalenge.

Dadi: nahin beta tum to hamare ghar ki halat janti ho. hum nahin to kya lekin tum bachche sabhi jayenge. thik hai.

Mahi: ji dadi.

(In Rewa's room)

Mahi: Di, aap bura mat mano to main aapse kuch pooch sakti hoon.

Rewa: Isme puchne ki kya baat hai. aa beth bol kya baat hai.

Mahi: Di, agar aapko kisi ek ko chunna ho to aap kisko chunegi. apni khushi ya apne parivaar ki khushi.

Rewa: Matlab kya hai tumhara.

Mahi: bataiye naa Di

Rewa: Meri khushi mere parivaar se hai is liye main apne parivaar ki khuchi chunti kyunki aakhir me main bhi is hi parivaar ka hissa hoon.

Mahi: Aap nahin janti ki aap ne meri mushkil hal kar di.

Rewa: Mujse tu vaada kar tu koi galat kaam nahin karegi is ghar ko bhachane ke liye.

Mahi: Main vaada karti hoon aur kya aapko apni behen per itna bhi yakeen nahin hai.

Rewa: Ab jaldi se jaa ke taiyaar hoja hume dair ho rahi hai shaadi ke liye.

And mahi and rewa taiyaar hokar prachi ke ghar pe jati hai.

(In Prachi's room)

Rewa: Wah Prachi, aaj to kehna hoga ki tum bahot hi kubsurat lag rahi ho. bhagwan kare tuje kisi ki nazar na lage.

Mahi: Thik keh rahi hai Di, Aaj main bahot khush hoon jo tumhe tumhara pyaar jo mil gaya.

Prachi: Waise lag to tu rahi hai kamaal ki. Aur tuje bhi to woh kya naam tha Di.

Rewa: Shabd. Yahin nahin tha.

Prachi: Waise aaj tu kahe to tera mamla bhi main Shabd se fit karva sakti hoon.

Mahi: Aisa kuch nahin hai. Kabhi kabhi insaan ko pehchan ne main dhoka ho jata hai. Ab to shayad mere pyaar per se yakeen hi nahin raha.

Prachi's aunt comes in and tells them to take prachi down to the mandap.

Mahi Aur rewa Prachi ko lekar neeche aate hai.

(In the mandap)

Neev........................................................ Prachi

Shabd....................................................... Mahi

Adi............................................Rewa

Ek taraf Ladke neev aur uske aas pas adi aur shabd hai aur dusari taraf Prachi, mahi aur rewa khade hai. Prach and Neev dono ek dusre ko haar pehnate hai aur shadi ke liye beth jate hai.

Prachi's aunt: Waah, kya baat hai tum dono ki. kya huye the tum us din. haa, made for each other couple. lagta hai sach hi hai. dekho kitna same to same color ke kapde pehn ke aaye hai. Bhagwan tum dono ko sada saath rakhe. kahin meri hi nazar na lage tum dono ko.

Mahi: Main abhi aayi. Aur mahi janehi wali thi ki aske saare ka pallu Shabd ke watch me atak jata hai.

Prachi's aunt: Yeh lo jee, Ab to rab ne bhi haa kar di hai. oye Mahi putar tere Mummy daddy nahin aaye warna teri bhi is munde shaadi karwa deti. main chali tum dono aapas me baatein karo.

Shabd
(mahi ki aur dekhkar): Saree ko nikalte huye. waise usne aunt ne kuch galt to nahin kaha. hume dekhkar koi bhi dhoka kha jayega lekin use nahin pata ki Shabd aur shaadi wahin galti kar bethi bechari.
Mahi
(Saree ka pallu khichke): Aap is shaadi me nahin mante lekin ek pal aisa hoga ki aap apni marzi se yeh shaadi ka pavitra rista samjenge. lekin tab tak bahot dair ho chuki hogi. bala ho us ladki ka jo tumse shaadi karegi. Aur yeh kehkar Mahi chali jati hai.
Neev and Prachi are taking pheras. Shabd is keep staring Mahi and Mahi ingnores him. Shabd mahi ki aur phool phekta hai lekin Mahi kuch kahe bina hi wahaan se chali jati hai. Neev aur Prachi mandap me shadi ke baad bethe hai sab log usko badhiyaan dene aate hai. Shabd Neev ki ek dum pass me betha hua hai. Tabhi woh same Aunt Mahi ke pass aakar use Mithai Ki thali deti hai aur use naye shaadi ke jode ko mithai se muh mitha karvane ko keh ti hai.

(song in the back ground from movie Yaadein)

Aye dil, dil ki duniya mein
(Mahi Mandap pe main thali lekar aati hai)
Aisa haal bhi hota hai
(Mahi Hasne ki koshish karti hai)
Baahar koi hansta hai Andar koi rota hai
(Lekin hasne ke bavjood uske aankhon me aanshu aate hai)
Aye dil, koi pehchaana nahin Kisi ne yeh maana nahin Kisi ne yeh jaana nahin Kisi ko bataana nahin Dard chhupa hai kahan

Aye dil, dil ki duniya mein
(Neev: Are Mahi abhi to prachi gayi bhi nahi abhi se tum)
Aisa haal bhi hota hai
(mahi: aisa kuch nahin hai)
Baahar koi hansta hai Andar koi rota hai
(She was about to leave when that same aunt tells her to give sweet in shabd too)
Seene mein uthte hai armaan aise
(Mahi first put mithai into Adi's mouth and then she goes near to shabd)
Dariya mein aate hai toofan jaise
(Mahi gave mithai into Shabd's hand)
Kabhi kabhi khud hi maajhi (
Neev: yeh kya baat huyi adi ko muuh me aur shabd ko haath me. chal shabd rakh mithai vapas)
Kashti ko dubota hai
(Prachi: Chal Mahi ab shabd ko bhi mooh me de hi de taki yeh ladke wale kabhi shikayat na kare)
Aye dil, dil ki duniya mein
(Mahi looked into Shabd's eyes)
Aisa haal bhi hota hai
(Mahi looks down and tears came down from her eyes)
Baahar koi hansta hai Andar koi rota hai
(Mahi puts mithai into shabd's mouth without looking at shabd)
Aye dil, koi pehchaana nahin Kisi ne yeh maana nahin Kisi ne yeh jaana nahin Kisi ko bataana nahin Dard chhupa hai kahan

Aye dil, dil ki duniya mein
(Mahi bina kuch kahe chup chap wahaan se chali jati hai lekin ek bar mud ke shabd ko dekhti hai with teary eyes)
Aisa haal bhi hota hai
(Shabd bhi use dekhta hai lekin kuch samaj nahin pata)
Baahar koi hansta hai Andar koi rota hai

Neev aur Prachi vidaay lete hai.

Mahi Prachi ke Dad se baat karti hai. shabd aur Adi yeh sab kuch sun rahe hai.

Mahi: Uncle, aap to jante hai ki hamare business ke haalat.

Prachi's dad: haa janta hoon tumhare saath bahot bura hua. lekin

Mahi: lekin kya uncle. aap jante hai ki jab aap muskil me the to papa ne aapki kitni help ki thi aur aap.

Prachi's dad: Janta hoon lekin abhi mere saare paise is shaadi me aur zameen me ruke huye hai.

Mahi: lekin kuch to ho sakta hoga aap se.

Prachi's dad: Muje tum sharminda naa karo to achcha hai. galti tum aur tumhara parivaar kare aur madad hum kare.

Mahi: bas kijiye uncle. aapko jo kuch kehna hai muje kahiye lekin mere parivar ko bich me lane ki koi zaroorat nahin. aap ka bahot bahot sukriya ki aapne hume shaadi me bhulaya.

Mahi gusse me apni car lekar nikla ti hai.

Adi: Shabd, muje lagta hai ki Mahi bahot gusse main thi aur woh koi galt kaam kare usse pehle tumhe use rokna chahiye. Go shabd.

Shabd: thik hai. tum hotel jao main mahi ko dekhkar aata hoon.

Mahi is driving like a crazy girl aur woh ek khai ke pass jakar apni car rokti hai.

Mahi
( apne aap se) : Muje maaf kar dena Papa. lekin mere pass aur koi dusra rasta nahin tha. Main mere samne apne parivaar ko raste pe aate nahin dekh sakti.
Shabd sees mahi's car and ran to her. Mahi was about to take a foot step

Shabd
(with scream) "MAHI" .... and he pulls her hand ..........Kya kar rahi ho tum. Pagal ho gayi ho kya.
Mahi: Haa..haa. pagal ho gayi. nahin jina chahti main. Aise jine se kya fayda jahan main apne gharwale ko khushiyaan na de saku. Kyun bachaya muje.

Shabd: Tum chalo mere saath koi to rasta hoga.

Mahi: Rasta aur tum muje dikhaoge usse pehle main mar jaoungi and she tries to run to Khai.

But Shabd slaps her tight and she faints on shabd.

Shabd; Mahi..........Mahi............apni aankhen kholo. oh no......ab isse kya ho gaya. Kya karoon iska.

Episode ends on Shabd's confused face.

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In the temple we saw that Shabd is putting sindoor in Mahi's mang and Adi goes to the sight to stop auction of Kapoor industries.

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Part-8

Shabd Mahi ko apne saath hotel ke kamre me le aata hai.

Adi
(with shocking expressions): Shabd, yeh sab kya hai. aur Mahi ki yeh halat.
Shabd: Kehne ka waqt nahin hai tu jaldi se doctor ko phone laga.

Adi: thik hai main kar raha hoon.

Adi calls the doctor and doctor checks Mahi and gives injection to mahi

Doctor: Aap inke kya lagte hai. Muje kuch zaroori baat discuss karni hai.

Adi
(with broken words): woh.......hum log...
Shabd: Woh meri wife hai. Adi looked at Shabd with shocked face.

Doctor: Dekhiye Mr. sareen aapki wife ne pichle do din se khana to kya ek bund pani bhi nahin piya. Aur woh pichle do din se ek pal ke liye bhi soyi nahin hai. Aisa lagta hai ise kuch aisa tension hai jise yeh bas apne dil me chupakar rakha hai. Behtar hoga ki aap inse apne dil ke gumm bante. warna...........

Shabd: warna kya doctor.

Doctor: Aisi halat me insan ek hi rasta apnata hai. khud khushi ka. I hope Mr. sareen aap meri baat samaj rahe ho. is waqt aapki wife ko aapke pyaar aur saath ki bahot zaroorat hai. aur haa filhal maine ise neend ka injection de diya hai. subaah tak hosh aajaga aur subaah use bina kuch khaye kahin mat jane dijiye varna hume ise hospital me admit karna padega. Chalti hoon waise meri koi zaroorat pade to muje phone kar dijiye ga.

Adi: Aaiye doctor main aapko bahar tak chod deta hoon.

Shabd
(calls someone): Hello Main Shabd Sareen bol raha hoon. Maine aapko is liye phone kiya hai ki Mahi hume raste me behosh mili thi is liye hum use apne saath lekar aaye hai aur doctor ne use injection diya hai woh subaah tak thik ho jayegi.
Rewa: Per aise kaise woh tumhare saath raat bhar.

Shabd: Dont worry. woh kal subaah main use chod jaunga. tum gharwale ko bata dena ki woh kisi dost ke yahaan hai. Aur haa mahi ko kuch nahin hoga.

Rewa: Janti hoon ki Mahi tumhare se jyada kahin safe mehsoos nahin karengi.

Shabd: Matlab kya hai.

Rewa: Kyun Mahi ne tumhe bataya nahin ki woh tumse kitna pyaar karti hai. Shabd ab main phone rakhti hoon lekin subaah jaldi aana.

Shabd; Like in shocked ...........ya zaroor.

Adi came back to the room and stands next to Shabd.

Adi: Yeh sab kya hai meri kuch samaj me nahin aata.

Shabd: Mahi pahadi se khudkhushi karne jaa rahi thi.

Adi: to phir doctor se jooth bolne ki kya zaroorat hai ki woh tumhari biwi hai.

Shabd: agar main aisa nahin kehta to yahaan per mahi aur hamara police station me tamasha ban jata aur rahi baat meri patni hone ki to woh to banegi aur woh bhi kal subaah.

Adi: Tu janta hai tu kya keh raha hai. Lagta hai tu us din ka tamasha nahin bhula. tu muje bata ki kya irada hai tera. haa kya chal raha hai tere dimag ke andar bata tu muje...

Shabd: Main Mahi aur uske baap se badla lena chahta hoon aur isse achacha mokka muje nahin milega dono ko alag karne ka aur waise bhi mahi ne kya kaha tha " bhala ho us ladki ka jo mujse shaadi karegi". Ab main use bataunga ki woh ladki kaun hogi.

Adi: Lekin shabd mahi raaji kaise hogi.

Shabd: Tu uski phikar mat kar main janta hoon ki muje kis insaan se baat karni hai and then he call some one and all talks happen we see in mute.

it is 10o' clock in the morning and Shabd is sitting in hotel lobby as Mahi is still sleeping in the room. Someone came to shabd and delivers some papers and left after sometime Adi comes and sits.

Adi: Yeh le jo tune mangvaya tha woh main le aaya. Lekin main ab bhi keh raha hoon ki itna bada faisa jaldbaji me nahin hota.

Shabd: muje jo sochna tha woh maine soch liya aur Jab Shabd Sareen koi faisa karta hai to use koi nahin badal sakta... koi bhi nahin. Ab tu ruk main Mahi ko dekh kar aata hoon.

Adi : tuje yaad hai naa tuje kya karna hai.. tere pass sirf do ghante hai.

Shabd: Whatever

(In kapoor house at dining table)

Rajveer: Rewa kal raat to mahi tumhare saath thi to aaj subaah dikhai kyun nahin de rahi.

Rewa: Woh papa kal shaadi main Mahi ko apni delhi wali saheli milli thi aur woh use jabardast apne saath apne ghar le gayi. keh rahi thi ki kitne dino ke baad mili hai. haa maine bas kuch hi dair pehle unse baat ki woh bilkul thik hai aur khush bhi. woh mahi ne kaha ki use dair ho jaye gi aane me aaj.

Rajveer: thik hi hai kam se kam aaj nilami ke waqt woh maujod to nahin hogi.

Yuvi: thik keh rahe aap. papa hume jalde se chalkar ek baar bank wale se request karni chahiye.

Shalini: Pata nahin kise mere parivaar ki nazar lag gayi hai. lekin main janti hoon ki meri Mahi ke hote huye kuch nahin hoga is parivaar ko.

Rajveer: thik keh rahi ho. Mahi sach me hamare liye bahot lucky hai. jab woh hamari duniya me aayi uske saath saath hamare ghar me lakshmi bhi aayi.

Yuvi: Chaliye papa hume dair ho rahi hai.

Yuvi and rajveer left for the office.

(In the hotel room)

Shabd opens window and sunlights gets on mahi's face and she opens her eyes slowly.

Mahi
(kamre ko dekhkar): Main kahaan hoon aur muje yahaan per kaun laya.
Shabd
(with glass of juice): yeh lo ise pilo. doctor ne kaha hai.
Mahi (
with anger in her eyes): tumhari himmat kaise huyi muje chune ki. kya chahte ho tum haa. bolo tum.
Shabd: Kuch nahin bas ek simple si deal.

Mahi: Mera jawab pehle bhi naa tha aur aaj bhi naa hai.

Shabd: pehle meri deal to sun lo. Yeh hai tumhare Kapoor industries ke paper jo tumne woh vidheshi company ko diye the aur woh log jail ke piche ja chuke hai. agar yeh papers leke tum 1 baje tak nilami me pahoch jao to tum apne parivaar ko bachcha sakti ho lekin uske badle me

Mahi
(with cofused face): Badle me kya.........
Shabd: Tumhe mujse shaadi karni hogi.

Mahi
(shocked): Shaadi aur tumse.............Main marna pasand karongi Mr shabd sareen lekin tumse shaadi kabhi nahin.
Shabd: Thik hai tum marna chahti ho to maro lekin kya isse tumhara parivaar raste pe aane se nahin rukega. Main tumse shaadi karna chahta hoon pure izzat ke saath. aage faisa tumhare pe hai. agar tumhara faisa haa hai to yeh rahe tumhare kapde hume 1 baje se pehle mandir me jakar shaadi karni hogi aur agar naa hai to main vaada karta hoon tumhari zindagi main kabhi dakhal nahin dunga.

Mahi walks out of the room without saying anything. she is walking in hotel lobby like walking dead body when she hears somthing " kya mehtaji aap bhi yahaan kapoors ki nilami ke liye aaye hai. bahot bura hua unke saath. khair business hai bhai. yeh sab to chalta rehta hai."

Mahi turned back and runs to shabd's room and she shabd is sitting on sofa reading newspaper. she comes in and sits on her knees and she is crying like she is in hell.

Mahi: Tum jeet gaye........main haar gayi...........tum jaisa chahte ho waisa main karne ko taiyaa hoon.......main kuch bhi kar sakti hoon apne parivaar ko bachane ke liye...........tumse shaadi bhi.

Shabd (stands up from the sofa and comes close to mahi and lift her up) : Thik hai tum jaldi se ise pehn lo hamre pass waqt bahot kum hain.

Mahi just noddes her head.

Shabd is waiting in the lobby with adi when mahi comes and shabd cant take off his eyes from Mahi as she was looking stunning in red saree.

Mahi........................................................ .................Shabd

Mahi and shabd left for the mandir and Adi left to stop nilami of kapoor industry.

(In the temple)

mahi and shabd are standing infront of the god.

Mahi : Main tumse kuch kehna chahti hoon. isse se pehle hum yeh shaadi kare.

Shabd: Tumhe meri izazat lene ki koi zarorat nahin hain. Hum dono pati patni banne ja rahe hai. aur pati patni ke rishte me koi formalities naa ho to achcha hai.

Mahi: shaadi ke baad me main apni pichli zindagi ko chodakar nayi zindagi shuru karna chaungi ek naye saher me ek nayi zindagi ke saath.

Shabd: muje manjoor hai. muje tumhari pichli zindagi se nahin balke tumhare aanewali zindagi se matlab hai.

Pandit comes and gives manglesutra and sindoor to shabd to put in mahi's mang.

mAngalyam tantunAnena mama jIvanA hethunA |

(Shabd ties the manglesutra around mahi's nace)

kaNThe: badhnami subhage! sanjIva Sarada: Satam ||

(Shabd Puts sindoor in mahi's mang as he puts tears runs from her eyes)

pandit decleres them as husband and wife.

shabd: Chale, Mrs. Mahi Sareen.

mahi was shocked and to herself " kaise ek pal main insaan apni pehchan se apni puri zindagi gawa bethta hai."

Shabd (puts his hand on Mahi's shoulder): Mahi ab chalo bhi, tumhe nilami ko nahin rokna hai.

(in kapoor industry parking lot)

Rajveer and Yuvi are trying there best to convince bankers. when Adi comes and gives the papers to rajveer.

Rajveer: tum aur yrh papers tumhare pass kaise.

Adi: woh main nahin balke shabd ne yeh bheja hai.

Rajveer: per woh hamari madad kyun karega.

Mahi

(from behind her father's back): kyunki woh aapki beti ka pati hai aur aapka damad hai.

Rajveer and yuvi turn and both are shocked to see Mahi and Shabd as husband and wife.

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Posted: 18 years ago

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It's awesome! 👏
Plz con soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago

#27

awsome I just luv it but plz try 2 continue soon I just can't wait

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Posted: 18 years ago

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wow amazing writing skills!!! I wish there was an actual show like this! 👏

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Part-9

Shabd, Mahi and Adi come to the Kapoor house. Mahi was about to step in the house when

Rajveer
(very rude tone) : Jahaan khadi ho wahi raho. Tumhare liye is ghar me koi jagah nahin hai. Aaj se main tuhare saath apne sare ristey todta hoon.
Mahi
(tears in her eyes): Papa, Ristey tutne ke liye nahin bante. Yeh aap bhi jante hai aur main bhi hum chahkar bhi yeh rista bhula nahin sakte ki aap mere papa hai aur main aapki beti.
Rajveer
(in anger): Shalini, ise kehdo ko yahaan se chali jaye. muje isse kuch baat nahin karni.
Mahi
(comes close to rajveer): Papa main aapki nafrat sehen kar sakti hoon lekin aapki narazgi nahin. aap muje datiye kosiye lekin mujse baat kijiye. Chali jaungi aapki zindagi se itni dur ki mera saaya bhi is ghar pe na pade. Lekin papa jate jate apni beti ko aashirwad to dijiye.( Mahi bends down)
Rajveer walks off and tells Rewa to pack Mahi's luggege. Rewa goes upstaries.

Shalini: Utho Mahi. Main tumhe maaf to nahin kar sakti kyunki main tumhari maa hone ke saath saath ek patni bhi hoon aur main apne pati ke khilaf nahin ja sakti. Lekin ek maa hone ke naate tumhe tumhari nayi zindagi ke liye prarthna kar sakti hoon. ja meri bachchi jahaan rahe sukhi rahe.

Mahi: Mamma, Maine kaha tha na ki mere hote huye koi aapka yeh ghar nahin chin sakta. dekho mamma maine apna vaada nibha diya.

Shalini
(roti huyi) : Tu jaa yahaan se usse pehle me tuje kuch aur kahoon. And shalini goes to her room.
Mahi
(goes near Dadi) : Dadi, kam se kam aap to meri zindagi ke liye aashirwad de dijiye. And mahi bends down.
Dadi: Sada suhagan raho. Prarthna karti hoon ki tumhe duniya bhar ka pyaar tumhare sasural me mile.

Mahi: Dadaji aap to mujse naraz nahin hai naa.

Dadaji: Muje tujse yeh imeed nahin thi. Leela andar chalo.

Rewa
(in Shalini's room) : Mamma, Mahi jaa rahi hai. aap use bida nahin karonge.
Shalini:
(lookes at Rajveer) Mujse yeh nahin hoga lekin ek maa hone ke nate yeh lo maine mahi ke shaadi ke liye banvaya tha.(she gave rewa a necklace)
Rewa: Mamaa main aapki halat samaj sakti hoon lekin main bhi uski behen hoon. Mamma Mahi Shabd se bahot pyaar karti hai aur shabd bhi. Muje pura yakeen hai ki woh hamari mahi ko bahot khush rakhega.

Mahi was alone in the hall sitting on floor and crying hard. when someone put hand on her shoulder when she looks up it was shabd.

Shabd: Chalo Mahi, aaaj se tumhari nayi zindagi ki suruaat huyi hai.

Mahi just noddes her head. Rewa comes to mahi.

Rewa: Betho yahaan. tum bhi shabd. tune to muje teri shaadi me samil nahin kiya lekin badi behen hone ke nate mere bhi kuch farz hai.
(Rewa Mahi aur shabd ko tikka karti hai aur un dono ki aarti karti hai) Shabd main janti hoon ki tum Mahi ko woh pyaar aur sanmaan donge jo ek patni ko milna chahiye lekin phir bhi shabd kabhi bhi meri Mahi se galti hojaye to tum uski aankhon me aanshu nahin aane donge vaada karo mujse.
Shabd: Rewa main vaada karta hoon ki Mahi ko main apni palko pe sajake rakhunga.

Mahi Rewa ke gale lagkar rone lagti hai.

Rewa: Yeh kya Mahi kaisi patni ho. apne pati se tumhare kiye huye vaade khud hi tod rahi ho. Ab yeh aanshu phoncho aur chalo tumhe tumhare sasural jo bida karna hai.

Mahi and shabd step outside the house.

Adi: Rewa, ruko main Mahi ka luggege uthata hoon.

Rewa: Adi, waise muje yeh kehne ka hakk to nahin hai lekin phir bhi main nahin janti ki Mahi ne aur Shabd ne is tarah kyun jalbaji me shaadi ki lekin mere khatir unka khayal rakhna. Woh bahot akeli hogi use ek dost ki zarorat hogi to main chahti hoon tum uska khayal rakho.

Adi: Tum fikar mat karo main tumhe Mahi ki khabar deta rahonga. Aur vaada karta hoon ki Mahi kabhi bhi Apna Maayke ko miss nahin karegi.

Rewa: thank you adi so much.

Mahi, Shabd and Adi about to get in the car when Mahi saw Yuvi sitting on bench in the garden. Mahi runs to yuvi and sit next to Yuvi. Shabd also goes and stand next to yuvi.

Mahi: Janti hoon ki muje maafi mangne ka bhi koi hak nahin hai. Maine tujse diya hua vaada tod diya. Tujse vaada kiya tha ki tu hi meri doli ko ruksat karega.

Yuvi: Chup ek dum chup. bahot kuch bolne lagi hai. itna bada faisa kar liya lekin ek bar bhi apne bhai ka khyal nahin aaya.

Mahi: Khayal to sirf tum sab ka aaya tha. Main sab se jooth bol makti hoon lekin tujse nahin. Maine yeh shaadi is ghar ko bachane ke liye ki hai. Agar aaj main yeh shaadi na karti to aaj papa tut jate aur hamara parivaar raste pe aa jata. lekin tu mujse vaada kar ki iske bare me papa ko koi khabar nahin lagni chahiye kyunki main papa ki nafrat seh sakti hoon lekin use sharmida hote huye nahin.

Yuvi: Aaj pata chala ki tu kitni badi ho gayi. Main tujse vaada karta hoon ki jab bhi tu muje yaad karegi muje wahaan payegi.

Mahi: Pata hai tu mujse chota hai lekin phir bhi tujpe zimedari chod ke jati hhon ki is ghar ka khyal rakhna aur khas karke papa ka. Kabhi bhi apne parivaar se dur mat hona.

Yuvi: vaada karta hoon ki is ghar ki zimedari me nibhaunga. Chalo Shabd tumhara intazar kar raha hai.

Mahi hugs yuvi and sits in the car.

Edited by goodkashish - 18 years ago

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Hi Freinds. I would love to thanks these people for supporting me in my ff. but i am liitle bit disappoint bcoz i am not getting enough feedback as i need. i would love to have comments after reading my parts like what is your favorite character of the part or what diaolog u like. I would need your support to continue this ff. so ple reply my story. thanks again for reading it.

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