;;|A Broken Heart|;;..a-k ending...

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umm, this might be my second ff...but only a-k..

im just doing this for fun but still hope u guys enjoy it..and cOMMenTTT

see, if i get comments i might continue...but if i write it, it'll be after 1 week..so make comments if u want me to continue..

this is ofcoursee an a-k story...

here's the first part...i will continue after 1 week cuz ill be busyy but before this idea slips i wanted to post it (o:

A broken heart

kripa cheerfully went to the disco where angad had invited her..

she went in and saw her best friend mishti (🤢) talking to him. she smiled and went up to them.

k: hi!

a: hey sweety!! wanna go dance?

k: sure...come on mishti

m: okay lets go

they all started dancing and after a while kripa said ill go get me a drink..

a: k

wen she turned around after getting herself a drink, she saw angad and mishti dancing reallllly close, she got confused, but ignored it and was about to go up to them, but saw them kissing..she was shell shokedd!

she droped the glass that was in her hands and stared at them with a million tears andd questions in her eyes..she then saw angad smirk at her. he came up to her leaving mishti ( no one was paying attention due to the loud music..

a: ( GRINNING) wat happened??

k: (still tears in her eyes) ....

she just stared at him..

a: (he held her wrist tightly and was forcing her to the dAnce floor.) forget it,, lets go dance..

k: (more tears in her eyes) leave me!! tum paagal hogaye ho kya?!!!?

a: he just smirked ..

kripa stepped backwards.. and then saw him go back to mishtii she ran from there, stopped at the door and saw angad smirk at her and kiss mishti once more but was staring at kripa,,kripa ran in the parking lot but not before giving angad her questioning eyes...and into her car.. she was devastated..

k: thinkin...--- y did he do that??? oh god!!! i have to go to college tommorrow!! i'll have to face them!! (angad and mishti)she went home and into her bedroom..she cried her hart out..and eventually went to sleep with dried tear stains..

part 1 ended!!

notes:

* kripa lives alone *

* angad lives alone *

* mishti lives alone..but not that important *

* they go to college *

* angad is hot, VERRY flirty, popularest guy in college, changes gf's every week or dayy, WAS kripa's bf..but not after this partt, girls r fidaa over him,,duh!! *

* kripa is the popularest girl, has a horrible past, to which angad did that in the disco, confusing?? ull see y..hot, beautifull, innocent, guys love her which gets on angad's nerves..*

kripa is the daughter of a multi-billionaiire that lives in london..but kripa doesn't live with him..which is part of her horrible pastt. but a, mishti, and k lice in californiaa

kk, thats all

so how was it?? plzz comment,

and sum or even most of u will be mad at angad,,,but oh well,,,stay tuned to find out why he did that..

plzzz comment..and ill write another part in a while ..

but that will be the last part...then ill update it again in a week..

plzz comment!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omgggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!! Wat a dramatic beginning... y did angad do dat... poor kripa!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continue continue continue its a great story i despreatly wanna read the next part cant u put it up like in well 5 minutes please angad issuch a jerk
Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds coool..what is wrong with Angad 😕
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okay,, the reason why im posting such a long part is because i wont be able to continue in a week or two
here it is:

okay...here's a note:::
the next part will be a flash back and a couple of other parts..

kripa woke up in an hour and saw that it was only 4:oo. she was really upset and remembered the first time she and angad met, their arguments, their hatred towards eachother, thier revenges, and a lot of drama.

flashback:

it was the first day of college in california for kripa. college started 2 months ago, but oh, well. kripa woke up late, so she wore the first thing she saw..an oversized orange non-hooded sweater with destroyed jeans and orange flipflops. it was raining so she wore it. she tied her hair in a messy way cuz she was late. on her way, she stopped at starbucks and got herself a cappicino and was about to pay, but a hand pulled her hand and paid himself. kripa looked back and saw that the guy was rather hot!! but she ignored that fact and started screaming. the guy thought she was very hot and cute..
the guy: couldn't take it anymore and pulled her into a corner against the wall.
kripa was frightened by looking at the anger in his eyes.
guy: shut up! im late for college and i dont have time for u screaming ur lungs at me!! i couldn't care less if u screamed!! so dont waste my time!! and by saying that he pulled the cappicino out of her hands and walked into his car. the guy thought she was pretty cute with her expressions from shocked to scared to shoked to sad. he chukled and left.
kripa was stilll shoked and went out completely forgetting her cappicino.
she finally reached college in her car and was about to go in but a hand stopped her. she turned around and saw the same starbuks guy . they were both shockedddddd. the guy grinned.
guy: in angad..is this ur first year??
kripa: (scaredddd) y..yea? (stammering) w..wh..wh..why?
angad: (smirking, he knew this was a good time.)
a: u have to kiss me!!
k: (dead on shocked!) what!!
a: (grining) yea, u heard rite!! im not gonna leave you till u kiss me!!
k: (realizing she was late) f..fine!! she kissed him for a second and was about to go.
a:not yett!!
k: now what???
a: (grinning and came closer to her.) it has to last for atleast two minutes!!
k: ( breathing hard) tried to free herself but angad was to strong..she made a face
angad laughed:.. ur getting late!!
kripa closed her eyes and kissed him!!
she let go after 2 mins and ran to her class.
angad smirked and said: this will be easy!!
and he went in his class also. then kripa saw him and cursed her luck . she was rite next to the door so angad heard her. he chckled. they were all standing for their assigned seats. soon angad mishti prithvi and kripa were left. angad heard her pray to herseld with her eyes closed that she wouldn't be seated next to him. angad grinned. he would make her sit next to him.
teacher: mishti and kripa. kripa finally thanked god and went to her seat while angad was stuck withprithvi. prithvi was popular also but not as much as angad and they hated eachother. kripa and mishti were now best friends. (i no, i said kripa was new and college started 2 months ago, but they got assigned seats..oh well) now kripa was really popular.
one day kripa was going to her house. she reached there and once she was in her room, she was about to turn the lights on but felt someone's hands on her waist pulling her against the wall and sealed her lips with a kiss. kripa tried to push him away but couldn't. she tried harder but stopped cuz it wasnt working. she just let him kisss her and she was standding there like a statue. he then pulled away. she started breathing faster and faster. he opened the lights and was shoked to see angad!
k: tumm!!!
a: (grinning) so how was it?
k: ugh!!! ur discusting!!
a: thnx. sooo, did u like that?
he was comming closer to her.
k: stop comming close to me!! go away!!
a: (cumming even closer) nahh. he held her wrist in one hand and her waist in his other hand. he held her really close. and was kinda hurting her wrist.
k: oww. u idiot!! ur hurting my wrist!! let me go!!
a: no!! im not letting u go!
k: why not!! let me go!! angad i need to go to bed!!
a: (grinning and pushing her towards the bed.) mind if i join you?
k: shut up!! y r u here anyways??
a: ( he pushed her on the bed and fell on top of her.) because i want you!!
k: r u mad?? angad im really tired!! leave!!
a: nahh, i dont want to!! and he started kissing her neck and roufly pulling her hair wich was hurting kripaa.
k: angadddd!!!!!!!
a: he needed to shut her up so he sealed her yet again with another kiss. kripa was trying her best to push him away, but he was strong...she started crying and turned her head to the left then right but angad didnt leave her lips. she kept on crying and then finally gave in. angad wasnt shoked at all by her kissing him. they pulled apart and kripa immedietly pulled him into a hug. angad was grinning from the back..but y?? she finally said:
k: i love you!! but i have a feeling u'll leave me!!

a: no kripa i won't leave you!! she hugged him back and fell asleep in his arms. she felt really protected towards him. she was glad she had him. Angad layeddd her on the bed and put the blanket on her, smiledd and left.
................................................
pretty soon angad and kripa were getting close. they also started going out. kripa thought angad loved her.

Back TO the PREsENT.

kripa now realized wat a big mistake she did by loving him! then she remembered that angad had the keys to her house! the thought made her shiverrr.. he could come in anytime he wanted!! she cried again and went to get herself a cup of coffee and sat on her couch. she was deffinetly going to get her answer! y the hell did angad do that?? and mishti!! she was her best friend!! she hated both of them!! from now on she was gonna do her own thing and never have contact with anyone exept prithvi.. she could always count on him. thinking of prithvi bought a smile on her lips. she was sure he liked her. she went to sleep thinking bout him.

kk....i might not have a lot of flashbacks...i dunno.

thats ittt i will continue in a weeeeeek

commmmmmmmmmmmment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by zeenat_786 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lalal wow she fell for him fast anyways cntinue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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k,, just gonna say wat the next 2 parts will be on why angad did that...but i will continue in a week...or even after that,,

soo comment and srry if it was to icky..or bad.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey. awesome part. ur fan fic is awesome. cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great Fanfic Continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part aww poor kripa 😭 continue soon 👏 👏 👏

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