Some 1 Some where is Made 4 U..(fan fic) - Page 36

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Posted: 20 years ago
oooooooooooooooo, very nice! 😉 😆
Cont soon! 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago

Part 26

Now Angad n kripa sees a small cottage near by……… they both starts running towards the cottage…..but there was a small bridge inbetween………

K( scared): angad…..!!! mujhe bahot daar lagraha hai……. Mujhe nahi lagta main chal paoongee…
A: aarey kripa… itna chota sa toh bridge hai…….. kuch nahi hoga…. Tum chalo mere saath…
K: nahi angad… main nahi chal sakti……mujhe bahot daar lagraha hai…
A (yellin): toh kyaaa kare bolo?????? Ish barish main yehi beteh rahe kyaa?????
Kripa 4 god's sake zid mat karo….. aaur chalo mere saath…..

K (cryin): maine kaha nah… main nahi aarahi……

Now angad calms her down….. he holds her cheeks and says….

A: kripa….!!! tum kuyn itna daar rahi ho…??? main hoon nah tumhare saath….. mere hote huwe tumhe kuch ho sakta hai kyaa???? Meri aakho main dekho kripa… Kyaa tumhe latha hai ki maine tumhe kuch hone doonga……….??

Aapni aakhein band karo … mera haat tham lo aaur chalo mera saath…..

Now kripa is all shaking n trembling with fear……… then angad strech out his hand …. Kripa holds angad's hands……… and walks with him with her eyes closed……. But unfortunately……. When they reach the middle of the bridge.. … kripa loses her balance n falls in the water………..

A (screaming): KRIPA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He then jumps into the water n saves kripa……. ..
Kripa is unconscious ………. Angad carries her in his arms n finally they reach inside the cottage…….
Angad is really worried n tries 2 wake uo kripa
A: kripa…… kripa ……..
He shakes her hands n warm up her legs…….
After a while Kripa opens her eyes……… as soon as she opens her eyes Angad hugs her….Angad has tears in his eyes…..
K: angad tum………
A: meri chodo tum batao…… tum thik toh ho nah???
K: angad tumne aaisa kyun kiya?????? mere liye aapne jaan khatere main kyun dali angad kyun????

Now Angad holds kripa's face ….. he looks deep in her eyes….

A: mujhe ek pal k liye laga…. Jaise meri zindagi meri aakhoke samne jaaraho ho….. tumse ek pal ki bhi duri ka eshsaas mujhse bardast nahi huwa kripa…….
Tum nahi janti….. aagar tumhe kuch hojata toh…. Main kyaaa kar beth ta……???
Then kripa wipes angad's tears n was about 2 hug him back…… when she remembers angad n josh's conversation….

"Angad khanna ne kabhi kisi se harna nahi sikha….. toh woh chahe tum ho ya koi aur!!!!!!!!!!! Aagar yesi hi baat hai toh I accept ur challenge Josh!!!!!!!!!
Agar maine uss behejee ko babes banake aapne pyaar main pagal nah kiya toh mera naam bhi Angad Khanna nahi!!!!!!!!!!!!!"


Then kripa just walks away with all those pain n hatred in her eyes leaving a confused Angad behind…..

Kripa has tears in her eyes n stands near the window…….. the cold wind is blowing in her face………as she gets all the flashbacks of the scenes where angad insulted her… the challenge between josh n angad………

K( 2 herself): yehh kyaa horaha hai mujhe???? Mera dil kyun tumrahi har jhoot pe yakeen karna chahata hai……???? Jab ki main yeh janti hoon ki tum sirf mere dil k saath khel rahe ho……
The she closes her eyes in pain………..

Okay guyzz 2 b continued
Lov ya
Eshika
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Posted: 20 years ago
that was really good.
i think anged's finally realising his love for her.
continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago

that was too short..esh..counting on u to give us in multiple parts soon...its the weekend yaar..jaldi..plzzz.

😊Anamika😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome part plz continue soon!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
that was great eshika love the part
jaldi likna next part
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Posted: 20 years ago
that was great, plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 27


Kripa closes her eyes in pain……then she turns around n sees angad standing in front of her………..
A: kyaa huwa kripa???? tum yese yaha chali kyun aaee???
K: kuch nahi……. Angad

Kripa was about to go when Angad catches her hand……..he holds her hand tight n pushes her towards the wall……….

A: nahi kripa….. kuch toh hai….??
He comes more n more closer…….. looks deep in kripa's eyes…….
A: kyaa hai huh kripa??????? tumhare aaur mere beech…..???? mere kadam kyun hamesha tumhare aaur badti hai……. Kyun tum hamesha mere dil aaur dimag pe chayeee reheti ho…..???
Main kyun tumhe har waqt aapne kareeb mehesoos karta hoon…kyun kripa kyun????

K (tryin 2 free herself): angad chodo mujhe…. ….

A: Yeh kaisa rista hai huh … tumahre aaur mere beech……yeh kaisi kashish hai jo tumhe aaur mujhe hamesha kareeb lati hai….

K: angad mujhe jane do….. leave me I said…….
Angad u r hurting me……..

He looks more n more deep in her eyes………
K: angad plzzz stop it….. dekho aagar tumne mujhe jane nahi diya nah…. Toh pata nahi main kyaaa karoongee tumhare saath…???

A: kyaaa karoogee…. Marooge mujhe????
K(angry): haaan mardaloongi tumhe…..

Angad comes more n more closer….. kripa is now all surrounded by angad's arms….

A: okay…. Kill me…. Common kripa kill me…..
Then he gives a cute smile n slightly kisses kripa on her cheeks……

A: common kripa …kab tak jhoot bologii mujhe….. aaur mujhse jyaada khud se….. !!!! main janta hoon ki main jo tumhare liye feel karta hoon tum bhi mere liye waisa hi feel karti ho…..

The kripa pushes angad in anger……………

K: NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kuch feel nahi karti main tumhare liye…… kuch nahi hai mere dil main tumahre liye.. siwaye nafrat k…………….

Angad is shocked n confused……

K: haan….. thik suna tumne…… naafraat karti hoon main tumse sirf naafrat……………. Jante ho kuyn??????

Aarey tumhe isse kyaa farak padta hai ki main tumse pyaar karoo ya nafraat?????? Tumhe isse kyaa farak padega ki main tumhare bare main kyaa soochti hoon…..???

Tum toh sirf mujhe jeetna chahate teh nah????? Mere pyaar ko hasil karke mujhe pana chahte nah………...??? aaur baad main ussi pyaar ka majak bana dete…….
Kyun main thik keherahi hoon nah Mr Angad……………

Angad is damN shocked n also has tears in his eyes…….

K: kuyn ??? chawk gaye nah angad????? Heraan ho nah… k main yeh sab kaise janti hoon…………… ????
Aagar main yeh sab nahi jaanti toh….. main toh aagayee hoti tumhari baato main……..ek pal k liye toh mujhe saach main laga ki tum mujhse………………………

Khair aacha hi huwa jo mera bhram toot gaya…………….main hi bewakuff thi jo tumahari baato main aagayeee thi ek pal k liye…………….

K (taunting angad): Aab chup kuyn ho bolo…..!!!!!! bolte kuyn nahi……???? Kaho ki tum mujhe pyaar karte ho……. kaho ki tum mere bina jee nahi sakte……kahooo nah… aab bolti kuyn band ho gayeee……????

A: HAAN HAAN HAAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Haan main tumse pyaar karta hoon….. haan main tumhare bina jee nahi sakta…………. Lekin dukh ish baat ka hai ki isska ehsaas mujhe der se huwa………
Yeh saach hai ki pehele main tumahra dil tod nah chahata tha…. Tumhare saath sirf pyaar ka natak karna chahata tha……..
Lekin yeh natak karte karte mujhe kab tumse saach main pyaar hogaye mujhe khud pata nahi chala……………….

Jab bhi tumhara dil tod ne k bare main sooch ta tha… uss soch se hi mujhe takleef hoti thi…… tumhe takleef dene k khayal se hi mujhe dard hota tha………..

Kripa is listening 2 angad with all those tears in her eyes………….

A: yehh kab huwa … kaise huwa….. kyun huwa… mujhe kuch pata nahi……. Main sirf itna janta hoon ki…. Aab meri zindagi ki sirf ek haqueekat hai… aaur woh haqeekat tum ho kripa sirf tum…………………. .

Main janta hoon ki tumhe meri baato pe yakeen nahi hai………….. tumhe sayed aabhi bhi lagta hai ki. Main jhoot bolraha hoon…….
Lekin aaj jo maine tumse kaha…. Uska har ek laabz mere dil se nikli hai…. Aur yahi saach hai kripa……..
Aab tum chahe mujhpe biswaas karo ya na karo…… aab meri zindagi main tumhari jaga koi nahi le sakta koi nahi………….jitna pyaar main tumse karta hoon utna sayed zindagi main kisi aaur se nah karsakooo…………………..

Then angad just walks away… leaving all tears in Kripa's eyes……………….

Okay guyzzz 2 B continued……
Lov ya
Eshika
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Posted: 20 years ago
loved it eshika it was awsome!!!
Edited by simplyconfused - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome part eshika. continue soon.

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