Some 1 Some where is Made 4 U..(fan fic) - Page 33

Part 23

Angad wa about 2 touch kripa's lips when the door bell rings……
Listening the door bell Angad realizes wot he was about 2 do….pulls his hands back……..kripa's heart is still beating faster…. She has her eyes closed n hands still stuck in aata………
Angad slowly step backwards…. … kripa slowly opens her eyes realizing wot just happened……………….
Now Angad just walks away 4rm there 2 open the door leaving a shocked n tearful kripa behind…..
K( 2 herself): yeh kyaaa ho gaya tha mujhe????? Maine usse aapne itne najdeek aane kaise diya???? Maine usske saath…. Chiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………………… maine yesa socha bhi kaise???????
Then she rubs both her hands in anger 2 get rid of that aata……….( Angad ka gussa aate ke upar)

Now Angad opens the door n yus guyzzz u all guessed it right!!! It's Kripa's mom Gayetri……
G( littile shocked n confused): ummmmm!!!!! Tum Naina k bete Angad ho nah?????
A: jeee aaunti … woh main Kripa se milne aaya tha…
G: it's all right beta…. Mujhe explanation ki koi zaroorat nahi……. Tum jab chahe aasakte ho….
Infact mujhe toh bahot aacha laga ki tum aaye…….actually beta Kripa bahot aalag kisim ki hai……. She's littile reserved kind………. Isse liya uska koi aacha dost bhi nahi…………. Woh kabhi keheti nahi lekin main janti hoon…… uske haste chehere k peeche ek aakelapan hai….. ek tanhayeee hai…… bahot dard hai jo woh kisike saath bhi share nahi karti…….. .pata nahi kyaaa hai uske maan main…..?????
Mujhe tumhe aaj yaha dekh kar bahot aacha laga…. Infact dil ko thodi tasaali hogayeee ki kripa ka koi dost toh hai………..

Now Angad is feeling really sad 4 Kripa…… he is almost in tears but tries 2 hide it ……

G: Ufffff main bhi nah tumse kyaaa kyaa kehgayiii….. waise Kripa kaha hai?????
A: woh kitchen main hai………
G: kripa………. kripa…………..( then she goes to wards the kitchen…….)

Now Angad is left deep in thoughts……………… Gayetri's words made him strongly feel something towards Kripa……. then he just walks away 4rm there……….

G: kripa………….. main janti thi tumse yeh paratha woratha kuch banne wala nahi hai……………..
K: mumma woh actually……..
G: bas bas!!!! mujhe sab pata hai…………. Aab tum jao Angad k pass woh aakela waha bore ho raha hoga…….

Listening Angad's name….. kripa gets annoyed but she just nods her head n walks away……..

Kripa goes towards the hall with that annoyed look on her face………. But she is shocked as well as confused as she didn't find Angad out there……..
Angad in his car:

Angad is in his car… driving back home…… gayetri words r still repeating in his ears… He is really feeling guilty 4 what he was gona do with Kripa……. wot he thought about kripa b4….. ….

Kripa's room:

Kripa is getting all mad at herself as she remembers wot just happened between them………. She throws all her stuffs in anger…. n Ends up criyin..
Okay 2 B continued
Eshika

awwww y did her mom have 2 come n ruin the situation 😡 😡 😡 neways gr8 part, but a short 1. continue soon 😛

attraction starting to begin
plz cont soon

hey eshika ....continue soon......the last part was awesome...

that was one of the best part in ur story keep it up

Never thought patience would be one of my virtues..but I proved myself wrong by reading ur fan fic from page 1 to page 48..couldn't keep away..

Great job..Eshika..aaj se hum be ek fan hai..tumhari fan fic ki..👏👏

Looking forward to more...

😊Anamika😊

that was great, plz continue soon

Eshika Ji! Ur tooooooooooooooooooo good! cont when u can which better be sooN! 😆 😉

your the gr888888888888888888est.....Eshika your just toooo good..i love your fan fic's there gr8 i hope you continue your other(vaada) one to..i'm looking forward to it!!!

luv ya hun..moni

gr8 part but 2 short!!!!!!!!!plz continue soon...