Ishq Vishq- New part on Pg 15- finally. - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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fab promo... i ownder how dats gunna happen, unless its a dare or sumfin!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
luw the ff 👏

can't wait 4 next part 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for everyone who commented, if I have atleast 3 more comments by tomorrow then I will give u a veryyy longg updatee! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok i loved the prmo but u r killing me just cont soon i really can't wait till promo one and two happens! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: prem-mukti#1

ok i loved the prmo but u r killing me just cont soon i really can't wait till promo one and two happens! 😉

lol thanks, will try to cont today if possible, i still need atleast 2 more comments lol, btw I really love ur rajeev amna siggy😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great promo 👏 cannot wait for the actual part 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Second Part
(Evening)
Angad calls Kripa.
Angad: Hey krips, r u busy?
Kripa: No...
Angad: Great, I am coming to pick u up. Get ready we are gonna go to the disc.
Kripa: Bu...
Angad: Just do as ur told.
And he hangs up.
After a while Angad comes to her house.
Angad: Hi aunty, How are u?
Bani: hi beta, i am good
Angad: Is krips ready?
Bani: I am not sure, why don't u go and check, she is in her room.
Angad: Ok
Angad goes to Kripa's room.
Kripa: Hey Angad, I am ready, lets go.
Angad: WHAT!! UR READY?
He stares at her from head to toe and toe to head.
Kripa confused: Why, whats wrong with my outfit?
Angad: krips, we are going to a disc! Not a "mandir." God what r u wearing??
Kripa is wearing a skirt that is just below her knees and a sleevless shirt.
Kripa: dude, if i were to go to a mandir then I would be wearing shalwar kameez! 😡
Angad: Whatever,gurl ur gonna ruin my rep.
Kripa: ANGADDD 😡
Angad just goes to Kripa's closet and starts lookig through her clothes.
Kripa: What are you doing??
Angad ignores her and con't to look.
After a while he finds a perfect outfit for her. It's a mini skirt(type of skirts, guys like to see gurls in 😆) and a spaghetii strap shirt that's almost backless.
Angad happy: There, that's perfect 😉
kripa: Angad, I am not wearing that! Its....
Angad: ur gonna wear it.
Kripa coolly: Make me.
Angad gives her a naughty smile and he winks: ooooookkk!
Kripa realises what she said.
Kripa: I..di..dn't mean it ..that...wa..y...
Angad keeps walking towards her with a wide grin on his face.
Kripa continues to walk backwards. From what she knows Angad can do anything... Anything...
Kripa: ok, ok... I will wear it... On mY Own.. 😡
Angad stops: alright, hurry up now.. I will be in the car.

Kripa gets ready again and sits in the car looking very annoyed.
Angad: lookin' HOTT!! 😛
Kripa just gives him a dirty look.



Note: This part is not completed yet, there are still 2 more sections to this part... They will be posted later...

Plz Comment.
Edited by anu-pre4eva - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome part continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg. dat was totally awesome but such a short part. plz write longer parts. and cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Second Part con't .

Angad and Kripa enter the disc and as usual all the girls runs upto Angad and start giving him hugs and kisses. Angad enjoys all of that while Kripa burns with jealousy.
kripa goes and sits in a corner, it seems like Angad forgot that he is the one who brought kripa here.
kripa to herself: What does he think of himself? He brings me and then ditches me.. That stupid monkey, donkey... ahh.. i hate him soo much... 😡 😡 😡
Kripa is dying with boredom, and there is nothing to do there.
She goes to the counter and asks a guy for a pop but he accidentally gives her alcohol.
Kripa(drunk): One more plzz...
she keeps on saying that for another 20 minutes and she drank like 30 glasses already 😲.
She looks arnd to find angad and there he is! Dancing with a B*tch very closely and having fun.
Kripa(drunk) yells: U B*tch, what the hell? Let go of him this instant. Every one turns arnd to look at her
She has a really badddd headache and walks over to where angad is, with her legs all wobbly.
Angad: omg, kripa, did u drink?
Kripa(angry): No I ateee!!! 😡
She looks at the girl beside angad and gives her a tight punch in her face *Ouch*, She hit so hard, she almost knocked her front tooth out(lolz)
Kripa: Nowww Get lostt!
The girl looks like she is abt to cry and runs away fromt here scared...
Angad tries to hold Kripa: kripa, why the heck did u drinkk?
Kripa: shut up! U stupid-idiot-monkey-donkey, ur the one who brought me here and then u just ditched me!!! for these stupid B*tches. She points to all the girls angad flirted with so farr..
Kripa so close to tears and she starts singing in a horrible voice: No body wanna see us together (pointing to the girlss) but it don't matter...
Angad is turning red with embarassment: Kripa, let's go...
Kripa yells: NO!!!
She holds his coller and brings him so close to her,
Angad whispers to kripa(scared): R u like gonna rape mee? 😕
Kripa(sarcastic) wide-eyed: No, But I want to! and she pushes him away.
Kripa starts singing again: I love youu, u love me, we love each othaaaaa, and we are a happy famil...y......with a grt big hug(she hugs angad at that time, but it seems like she is killing him) and a kiss from me to u(and she gives him a kiss on his cheek)... ummm, she taps her chin.. Angad?? What's the next linee??? 😕
Angad has had enough and he simply picks her up and walks towards the car.

Coming Up: A-K's kiss..

Plz do comment guyzz and this part isn't completed yet, i need comments and only then i will continue, and plz don't just write awesome part, grt part, or cont soon...
😛

Edited by anu-pre4eva - 18 years ago

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