~**Jaan-E-Maan**~ Lktff P: 10 pg:6 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
Have you thought about any twist in ur story? I can't wait till the next oar 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yaaaaa plz continue teh next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys thx a lot for ur comments and i will try to make my parts longer...and ya i have a twist in my sotry comming up soon....i will post my next part soon....thx a lot....

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unnati
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
great part continiue soon hope lakshya tells her that he loves her 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
that was excellent, could you PLEASE continue soon.. thanx 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys thx a lot for ur lovely comments and here is my next part....
Part: 4

Lakh goes close and close to feel what kt's heart is saying…..

L: to aab kya khayal hai…?
Kt: who mai jara phool collect karke rakh du phie chalet hai…….
L: lao…mai tumahri madad kae deta hu…[he sits down and start collecting the flowers pattles]

They both r picking up roses pattles and now it's only one pattle that's left and they both at the sametime reaches to get the pattle and their hands touch eachother, kt's heartbeat skips and feel the warmth of laksh's hand then she removes her hand and hets up with a plate of rose pattles….

L: lao…mai rakh deta hu…
[extand his hands and touches kt's hand to take the plate, kt just can't bear it now and tries her best to control her feelings like below….

Laksh can feel and see that what she is feeling….Laksh put the plate by the puja place….
L: aab chale….?
Kt: [gives a cute smile and shakes her head as a yes…]
They both left 4 mandir……

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They went to mandir and were praying with their eyes close…then panditji comes in front of them and says " sada sukhi raho aur tumhari jodi bani rahe…" they bothopened their eyes in shock and sees panditji but then panditji started leaving….
Kt: panditji….?
P: jee…
Kt: jee wo shayad apko yaad hoga ke aaj SN mai puja hai…aur aapko bulaya hai….
P: arre haa…mai to bhul hi gaya…aap loh chaliye mai ata hu…khuch saman lena hai na….
Kt: jee..thik hai….

Then panditji left and suddenly kt realize that she forgot to clear the misunderstanding of panditji about her and laksh…
Kt: panditji…[she turns around but panditji already had left…]
Kt turns other way to leave when suddenly she was jerked back by someone holding her hand….she knew who it was…she looked back….

Kt: laksh mera haath chodo…[she struggles…]
L: [just smiles at her..]
Kt: laksh plzz mera haath chodo na..[ feels shy]
L: [finally gathered courage to tell his feeling to her]
L: kt muje tumse kuch kehna hai..
Kt: [with a confused look] kya..?
L: pata nahi kaise kahu who….muje pyaar hogaya hai…
On the other side kt felt her entire world being shatter [she thinks that he loved someone else not her….] she closes her eyes and tears roll down her cheek; her thought were killing her laksh's words rang in her ears…"muje pyaar hogaya hai.." she just can't hold it anymore, her heart and wants to cry her heart out but she didn't wanted to cry in front of a person who just broke her heart and she runs off home and storms into her room and slam the door shut…she falls on her bed crying…

There in mandir laksh just turns around to face kt and saw that she was not there….laksh looks puzzeled and get worried about her and search all around mandir but couldn't find her…then he shrugs and rushes to home and went straight to kt's room… and knocks on the door…

Kt: andar aajao…
Laksh enters the room and saw kt and feels relaxed that she was here….
L: kt tum mandir se chali kyu aye….?
Kt: muje tumse koi baat nahi karni…plzzz muje thodi dair ke liye akela chod do laksh…[she was standing by the window facing her back to him…laksh walked up to her he leaned against her…his warmth breath on her neck, it was driving her crazy…she just could,t control it any more and tears started rolling down her cheek..she wants to shout at him to leave her and go…
She opened her mouth to call out, but no sound came out… laksh heared a slight gasp from kt..and hold her by shoulder and turns her facing him and saw that she was crying, her striking wide red
L: kt kya hua… tum roh kyu raho ho.?
Kt: [finally voice came out of her and she shouts at him] maine kaha na muje akela chod do, just leave me alone…just go..!!!!!!!!!

i will continue soon....hope u all like it...do comments....without ur comments i won't be able to write my next part....thx a lot

love
unnati
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
awesome part 👏
continue soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
Wow you describe kt's feelings really good. Keep writing. I love reading your parts. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
2 good.. 😆
continue sooooooon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
great job...it seems so realistic 👏 👏
-Nisha ❤️

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