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Posted: 18 years ago
kya!!??....no way!!....matlab azmi ne general ko bata diya saboot ke bare mein...
naina...meet me right away...not at 5...we've got to hurry...time nahi hai....
i've got to save my friend...." he told himself...
"aur haan ..clear away any remaining papers wahaan se...shaayad maine kuch peeche chod diya ho...
i hope i did!! waise bhi wahaan waapis to nahi jaa payenge..."

"theek hain....main aati hoon...oh..doosri baat kya thi??"

"not imp. any more....meet me!...bye!"
............................................

when naina & aalekh reached d embassy they were shocked to the core!!

two men aimed their guns at navin...he was hostage....their faces not visible....
suddenly they turned....& their mouths were curved into a smile...
dey had who dey wanted all along!....

naina & aalekh stared at each other wid wide eyes...
& their jaws dropped!!...

"great!!....not again..!" credit goes to crystalspark(dipika)




Edited by violence_peace - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey great part..plz contniue soon
yoginisahakari thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey great Dipika

great story

thanks for the update
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Posted: 18 years ago
its simply gr8 yaar. 👏 .............. 👏 jst loved every part of ur fiction 😃
waiting for the nxt post 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
when naina & aalekh reached d embassy
they were shocked to the core!!

two men aimed their guns at navin...
he was hostage....their faces not visible....

suddenly they turned....& their mouths were curved into a smile...
dey had who dey wanted all along!....

naina & aalekh stared at each other wid wide eyes...
& their jaws dropped!!...

"great!!....not again..!"

"tum dono yahaan kya kya kar rahe ho??"
aalekh asked...visibly shocked...

"kyon qaidi??....akele hero bana phirta hai...
humme bhi to ek mauka de..." huda smiled & rushed over to aalekh...
hugging him tightly....

at d same time yudi hugged navin & den naina....

"u know wat??...navin ki shakal dekhni chahiye thi...
wen we placed a gun on his head..."

"haan...saale ki phat gayi thi!!" huda smiled....

& so did everyone else....
dey were all ecstatic to be together again...
even though dey were on a mission....

"i'm glad to see u guys here...
raj bhi bahut khush hota..."

she regretted her words the moment dey were out...
for she couldn't control the tears dat followed....

"naina...we understand how u feel yaar...don't worry....
we'll all do something..." yudi gave her some emotional support...

she faintly smiled...but her eyes remained teary...

"waise naina...tune dhoka diya yaar..."
huda stared at her grimly...

"dh..dhoka??!"she asked confused...

"remember wen we met last time...maine tujhe kaha tha ki agar
tu kisi bhi problem mein hogi...to tu humme batayegi...but u??
chup chaap...akele saara dard sehti rahi...u didn't let a word out...
yeh kaisi dosti hai yaar??"

"main jaanti hoon huda...maybe i should've told u guys...
par main khud itni tension mein thi ki kuch soojha hi nahi...
bas main is sab mein fasti hi chali gayi....
aur kuch sochne samajhne ka time hi nahi mila...
bhabhi bhi naaraz hai......"
she ended...disappointed wid herself..
*Rajeevian* thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
"hum us se milkar aa rahe hain...she's in shock...
par recover ho jaayegi....tu tension mat le..
badi mushkil se usse wahaan roka hai....don't worry...
woh raj ki mom se milne gayi thi..
aunty ki haalat bhi kuch theek nahi hai naina...
she was damn worried..."

"i know..pehle uncle aur ab raj...she's fearing she'd lose him...."
she wished to see aunty...
dey both were goin thru the same thing afterall...


"by the way...tum dono ko abhi ne yahaan kyon bheja??"
navin asked ...angry at abhi...

"kyon ...humme dekh kar khushi nahin hui??"
huda looked at him bewildered....
he had expected navin to be happy to see them..

"khushi!!! i feel like strangling abhi...

ek to already hum chaar is fasaad mein fase hue hain...
aur ab usne tum dono ko bhi yahaan bhej diya hai...

maine itna dard sahaa hai huda...
i don't want my friends to be in d same spot..ever!!
....already r...raj...he's in a terrible state guys....
worse dan u can even imagine...
barely alive...zinda laash ban chuka hai woh...
dat's how naina put it....isn't it sis?"
he shook as he picturised him

she barely nodded...
"usme...zara bhi himmat baaki nahin hai...he's ...."

she couldn't describe his condition...& she didn't need to...
her silence portrayed the intensity of his condition...

yahaan sab itna badal gaye hai...huda wondered...
navin didn't want us here...
he cares far too much to see us dead...!
aur naina....raj ke bina yeh bhi ek zinda laash hi to hai....

it pained him to see dem all so crushed...so demoralised...
but one thing remained...& dat was their friendship....

yudi too was in deep thought...

itna kuch ho gaya...par humaari dosti wahi ki wahin hai...
in fact its deepened...
ab shaayd hi hum sab ko koi alag kar sakta hai...

he stared at the three of dem...
dey looked far too matured..& tired...
kamaal hai....life plays pathetic games on us sometimes...
& god...he's always trying us...
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Posted: 18 years ago
haven't dey already had enough??
ab to inhe chain lene do bhagwaan....
please sab kuch jaldi theek kar do!...
huda prayed..

"abhi told us everything & we have a plan....
aur haan...here's d address of our new hideout....
he wanted us to change location...."yudi told dem

"waise bhi karni hi padti...
d enemies attacked d previous one today....aur..."
navin didn't hv d heart to continue....
he felt far too guilty..

"bad news huh??" huda inquired....

"haan...we lost all proofs against dem....
aur bhaai maine ghar check kiya...
nothing remains left...aap sab kuch le gaye the..."
naina answered for him...

dey all could see dat navin was angry at himself...

dey had to free him of his burden...
par usse aasaani se maaf kiya to
he'll continue to blame himself...so ...

"wat??!!...how could u navin??"
huda shouted...faking temper...

understanding the game d others joined in..

"waise u've always been careless bhaai.."

"haan...itna kuch faaltu sahaa tune...hadh kar di..."

"stop it!!...jaan kar to nahi kiya na maine..."

"saale jaan kar karta to ab tak zinda nahi hota!"
aalekh answered..

"watever!!...ab chalein yahaan se...
u can shout at me later..!"

& he moved on...surprised dat he felt lighter....
meri koi galti nahin thi!!...
he was relieved of some tension..

seeing his confident steps...d others smiled....
"god knows yeh baccha kab bada hoga!!" yudi smiled...

.................................

as dey discussed their plan in d car....
naina was more convinced wid every passing
second dat it wouldn't succeed...

"look humaara waala plan to ab bhool jao...
but urs...u'r talking impossible!!"
naina answered...
"isse to sab ki jaan aur khatre mein padegi"

"dekh naina...apun ko aur koi raasta nahi dikh raha...
maana ki stakes bahut high hai...
par...tu bata aur kya kiya jaa sakta hai?
...yehi plan theek rahega..."

"stakes!!?...d chances of success seem nil aalekh!...
apni jaan ki koi fikar nahi hai mujhe....par..."
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Posted: 18 years ago
"raj ko kuch nahi hoga naina...
trust me sis..aur naa hi humme..."

"u can't predict the future bhaai!" she shouted

"neither can u den naina...we've got to do dis...."
he responded to her softly...but she didn't respond back..

"gr8!! do wat u feel like..."

ignoring her rebellious mood dey continued..

"wat makes u think dat i'll stay out of it all!!?
main bhi jaaoongi!"

"shut up naina!...we've no time for your stubborness now..."
navin quietened her..

"cheek mat yaar us par...naina...u've zero military training...
apun ko lagta hai..ki...ki..teri wajah se..."

"bol aalekh...yahi na ki mission khatre mein pad sakta hai...."

she was subdued...she thought for a second...
maybe dey were right...
kahin maine koi gadbad kar di to...

"fine...i'm stayin out...par..
i need to meet raj one more time before all dis...
i hv to tell him sumthing important"

"no way...tu phir wahaan nahi jaayegi!...
i won't let u!" navin shouted...

"navin!!...chid kyon raha hai...if she can do it once she
can do it again...yeh jaayegi..." huda supported her...

"huda's right dude...
waise bhi raj tak plan ki information honi chaahiye...
he has to be ready for it...
aur haan shaayad woh humme bata
sake who can help us from inside..."

"theek hai!...par yeh akele nahi jaayegi..."
he finally agreed...distressed at his decision...
he wanted her to stay out of the line of fire...

"apun hai na....naaz ka cameraman!..."
& he winked at her...
as she smiled back...
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he'd begun to find pleasure in dose beatings now...

agreed the pain was tremendous...
but dey sumhow reminded him of her...

of d fact dat she was very close to him...

the energy pains she'd given him were a blessing for him..

it kept his mind active...alive!
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Posted: 18 years ago
he was in a dilemma...
he hated himself for getting caught in d mess...

for it brought her here...her life was in danger...

she was playing wid death...

he wanted to escort her back to nainital in her cozy room....

safe & sound....wanted to see her sleep peacefully again....

she'd shocked him...wen dey last met...pale...thinner ...
red eyes...dark circles...he'd remember every bit of her face...

she was way too tired...depressed....
as if she hadn't slept in ages...
yes...she needed to rest!

the other side of his heart had been glad to see her...

he'd missed her terribly...horribly...
wondering how he'd
survived without her for so long...

she'd come to tell him something...
but he'd acted like a maniac...

& almost ravished her...

he blamed dat on 3 things...

first...he loved her like hell...
second..he'd been separated from her for too long...
& third...well...his raging hormones!!

the memory of dat kiss brought a smile on his handsome face...

i want to terribly see u again...
but i don't want u to come here...

great...god bhi kaisi tricks play karta hai...

& he was lost...lost in d beauty of dose days again....

chand lamhaat ke vaaste hi sahi,
muskura kar mili thi mujhe zindagi,
teri aagosh mein din the mere kate,
teri baahon mein, meri raatein kati,

aaj bhi jab woh pal ,
mujhko yaad aate hain,
dil se saare gumon ko bhula jaate hain...,

dard mein bhi yeh lab muskura jaate hain,
beete lamhe humein jab bhi yaad aate hain...
beete lamhe.........

stay out of dis naina...go back...

nothing...no one can save me now...

don't waste time on me....
go find youself a guy who'd love
you more dan me...
someone who'd keep u happier...if dat's possible!

i love you...will love you till i breath my last...
which i know is hardly a week away now!

... credit goes to crystalspark(dipika)
Edited by violence_peace - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey very good update 👏 👏 👏 ...........ia m so happy that naina and rajveer are meeting again..........i love the 3 reasons.... 😆

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