'EHSAAS'-KYPH ff part 59(the end) pg 58

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armaghan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#331

amazing really cute aand touching loved it

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sweetmittal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#332

amazing part and very touching and emotional. i hope kripa forgive him soon and they get together again. 😊 😊 😊

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Madiha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#333

fab part!! very touchinggg!! continue soon 😭

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mad

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Posted: 18 years ago

#334

nw its going to b fun
angad n kripa having cute fights in ramgarh

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cheeselova

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Posted: 18 years ago

#335

aww that was an awesome part

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

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thanks everyone. Angad has finally realised the impact of his insult on Kripa. The name Sharma for his son and wife is a slap on his face. Let's see how he wins his love back 😊

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ardis

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Posted: 18 years ago

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yes angad finally got some sense into himself to go back to ramgarah hope they get back soon together.

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

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thanks everyone 😊 Here are parts 51 and 52:

PART 51:

As the effects of the anesthesia wore off, Kripa woke up and looked around. She was startled and frightened to see herself entangled amongst tubes and catheters. Her movements set the monitor alarms off.

"Oh…Oh…relax relax Ms Kripa…..aapk ko hosh aa gaya……congratulations aap maa ban chuki hain!" Sister Molly turned the pause button on the monitor.

"Yeh sab kab hua? Abhi tho mujhey 2 mahine baaki hain." Kripa asked worriedly.

"Ms Kripa, aane waala Lord ki marzi se aata hai….uspar hamara koi control nahin hai!"

Kripa remembered, "mujhey yaad aaya, main tho chai banaa rahi thi….aur phir Aaliyah ko phone kiya tha……uske baad mujhey kuch yaad nahin…..kaun laaya mujhey yahan?"

"Bas yeh samajh lo ki ek farishta laaya tha tumhey…..tumhari aur tumharey nanhe munne se bete ko bachaane!" Aaliyah said as she walked in.

"Aaliyah? Thanks…..lekin yeh farishta kaun hai?" Kripa turned her head and smiled at Aaliyah.

"Someone is out there looking after you……ab zara baatein bandh karo…let me check you out!" Aaliyah purposely shut Kripa up.

"Kaisa hai mera beta? Kahan hai wo?" Kripa asked with tears in her eyes.

"Abhi wo 2 mahine premature hai, iss liye NICU mein hai…..jaise hi tumhara BP kum ho jaayega, you can go and visit him there as he won't be able to come here.

"wo theek tho hai na?"

"He is perfect…..bahut cute hai, bikul tum par gaya hai, bas naak Ang…..," Aaliyah paused as she was about to say Angad's name.

"Aaliyah….chup kyon ho gayi? Aakhir sachchai se kab tak bhaagte rahenge…..wo hai tho Angad ka hi khoon,"Kripa said emotionally. Kripa turned her head and saw the dozen roses at her bedside, "sister…yeh phool kahan se aaye?"

Sister Molly looked at Aaliyah and then remembered Angad's orders, "Ms Kripa…..aaj yahan sab patients ko roses miley hain….hospital ki taraf se," she lowered her eyes as she lied to Kripa.

Kripa tried to reach the flower vase, "lagta hai hospital waalon ko meri pasand achchi tarah pataa hai."

Sister Molly's eyes became a little moist as she sensed the pain in this young couple's relationship.

Gayatri, Kartik and Harshini all came to visit Kripa and congratulated her. Gayatri was one proud 'nani.' No one mentioned that Angad had brought her to the hospital, or he was there the whole time she was delivering.

Kripa felt much better by the evening, and was allowed to go and see her son. Harshini wheeled her to the NICU in a wheel-chair.

Kripa was shocked to see her little baby in an incubator. He had a tube in his nose and a little catheter in his tiny hand. She started sobbing silently. This was not the way she had envisioned her baby would look. The nurse helped her hold the baby in her arms. As soon as she held him, the initial shock and fear vanished away. Her maternal instincts poured out; she held him close to her, "Prateek….tum mere pyaar ke prateek ho……tumhari mama tumhey kabhie chhod kar nahin jaayengi……I will always be there for you beta," she kissed his forehead and little hands. She realized, how vulnerable and fragile he was- she would protect him from the rest of the world; he was her goal in life now; she had left her past behind-there was no more room for tears or sad memories from Angad's betrayal.

The nurse took him back from Kripa's arms and placed him in the incubator, "Abhi tho baby ko tube feed hi de rahe hain, par 1-2 din mein aap feed kar sakti hain….jab tak yeh incubator mein hai, wo yahin rahega, tho aapko har 3 ghante mein aana padhega."

"Sister, main tho har waqt yahin rehna chaahti hoon."

"Aapko apni health ka bhi dhyaan rakhna hai madam…aapke husband bhi aa sakte hain." The nurse said.

"Nahin, Prateek ke koi papa nahin hai!" Kripa said in a shaky voice.

"Oh…I am sorry Ms Kripa." The nurse apologized.

Harshini placed her hand on Kripa's shoulder, "ab chalein di?"

Kripa nodded. As she turned her face to leave, she saw the familiar statue of the Ganapati inside the incubator, "sister…yeh kahan se aaya?"

"Oh…yeh? Pataa nahin…main jab duty par aayi, tho mujhey yahin dikha tha yeh murti….aapke bete ki raksha karenge bhagwan….aap fikr mat keejiye." The nurse said.

As Harshini wheeled Kripa back to her room, "Di…Prateek naam kab socha aapne?"

Kripa was lost in her thoughts, as she tried to put the pieces together….roses…..ganapati ki murti……farishta…….Angad tum kitni bhi koshish kar lo, ab bahut der ho chuki hai….main tumhari baaton mein nahin aaoongi…..kyunki mera dil ab toot chuka hai….ab kabhie jud nahin sakta…...just leave us alone!

"Oh Prateek? Bas usey dekhkar aisa hi laga ki wo hi ab mere aur Angad ke pyaar ki nishaani hai……wo pyaar jo kabhie tha aur bahut tha Harshini….lekin ab sirf ek prateek hai…….hakeeqat nahin!"

"Di…..aap ek baar jiju se mil lo….ho sakta hai aapke beech ki galat fehmi door ho jaaye," Harshini hesitatingly spoke.

"HARSHINI! Please aaj ke baad kabhie aisa mat kehna! Hamare beech ab koi galat fehmi nahin hai…… meri galat fehmi tho usi din door ho gayi thi jab Angad ne mere pyaar par shaq kiya tha….galat fehmi pehle thi ki Angad mujhsey sachcha pyaar karta hai….par ab sab kuch saaf saaf dikhta hai Harshini." Kripa said tearfully.

"sorry di….mera matlab aapko rulaana nahin tha….mujhey bas aisa lagta hai ki jiju ko apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai." Harshini defended Angad.

"Harshini…..main Angad ko kabhie maaf nahin kar sakti! Please don't ever talk to me about him again! I just want to focus my energies on Prateek now…..leave the past alone!"

Later, Kanan and Nishant also flew in from Bangalore to see their nephew. Kanan was very happy for Kripa, 'ab meri Sur ke liye ek chota bhai aa gaya hai khelne ke liye."

"Sur bhi tho ek saal ki ho gayi na? Kahan hai? Maine tho usey abhi tak dekha hi nahin." Kripa smiled as she received a sisterly hug from Kanan.

Nishant walked in with his little daughter, "yeh rahi….wo bhi apni maami ko milna chaahti hai."

Kripa held Sur in her arms, "bilkul Kanan di jaisi hai…..iski naak tho bilkul Prateek jaisi hai," she exclaimed without realizing what she had just said.

"Kyon nahin hogi…..meri aur Angad ki naak bhi tho ek jaisi hai!" Kanan laughed, but became quiet when she saw Kripa's color fade from her face.

Kanan and Nishant exchanged glances and kept quiet.

"Hum NICU jaakar Prateek se miltey hain, tum Sur ko thodi der yahin rakho," Kanan got up and left with Nishant.

As they were about to take the elevator to the NICU, Kanan spotted Angad waiting in the hallway.

Angad ran towards Kanan and gave her a hug, "it's so nice to see you both!" He had tears in his eyes; his lonely heart had at least someone he could call his own.

"Mubarak ho bhai!" Kanan pulled away and cupped Angad's face, "ab usey bhi manaa le…..I can't see you both suffer like this…..aakhir ek bachcha paalna itna aasan nahin hai…..Kripa needs her companion and her love back."

Angad nodded, "I will try my best di! I have decided to move back to Ramgarh. I have talked to several architects and a contractor…..main ek hospital banwaaoonga wahan…..a modern hospital with all facilities…..mere kuch doctor dost bhi invest karenge usmey, and will come and work there too….I am really excited di."

Nishant congratulated Angad, "Angad….that is great…I would like to help in anyway I can….I will talk to my company also, they like to contribute to charitable causes every year…you know for tax reasons…..this would be a great cause….I am proud of you!" he hugged Angad too, "we are all with you Angad….don't hesitate to ask for any help….Kripa achchi ladki hai aur tumse bahut pyaar karti hai….trust me, she will be back with you soon!"

Angad nodded and wiped his tears, "thanks jiju….main bhi issi umeed par jee raha hoon. By the way, where is Sur? Uski itni photos dekhi hain, but now I am dying to hold her."

"Wo Kripa ke saath hai….hum abhi aate hain….don't go anywhere." Kanan followed Nishant to the elevator.

Angad peeked into Kripa's room. He was happy to see her awake and looking happy. She was playing with Sur. Her room was full of flowers, cards and balloons. She had received good wishes from a lot of her fans from all over the country. Angad was pleased to see that his red roses still stood out amongst all the other gifts and were right next to Kripa. He thought, "kaash main aaj ek gulaab hi hota…..kum se kum tumhare itne kareeb tho hota!"

Song to express Angad's feelings:

"Tu jahan main wahan" from "salaam namaste"

http://www.dishant.com/lyrics/song-25806.html

(tu jahaan main wahaan
sang sang yu chalu tere
jaise tera aasmaan ) - 2

jo dhup nikli chaya ban jaaunga
jo ho tu akeli saaya ban jaaunga
jo uljhan mein ho mann main behlaaunga
tum aa gaye ho toh jeena aaya hain
khushiya ka tumne yeh jaal bichaya hain
khoya hain khudko yah sab kutch paaya hain
tu jahaan main wahaan
sang sang yu chalu tere
jaise tera aasmaan

ho gam ke badal mujhpe tham jaane de
bechainiyo ko mujhse takrane de
dukhti ho koi baat mujhpe aane de
dil sochta tha ke koi apna ho
koi raaz na ho jo uss se rakhna ho
aankhein na kholu main shayad sapna ho
tu jahaan main wahaan
sang sang yu chalu tere
jaise tera aasmaan

…to be contd….

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bheegi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#339

PART 52:

After about a month or so, Prateek was discharged from the hospital. He was bigger and stronger now, and not dependant on any medical support any longer. Kripa had recuperated from her surgery well.

Aaliyah also tried to talk to kripa about Angad, but Kripa was adamant about her decision.

"Kripa….tumhey tho ab sab pataa hai ki yeh sab Mishti aur Prithvi ki chaal thi, ab tho Angad ko maaf kar do," Aaliyah pleaded.

"Aaliyah…Angad koi doodh peeta bachcha nahin hai ki kisi ke behkaave mein aa jaaye; kal agar koi aur aakar usey behkaaye, tho wo phir mera dil thod sakta hai….main aise aadmi ke paas ab kbhie nahin jaa sakti……usey apne pyaar se zyaada aur logon par vishwaas tha….aur aage bhi yahi kar sakta hai…..Aaliyah, I can't keep getting hurt again and again…..main ab sirf Prateek ke liye jee rahi hoon….Angad se mera koi rishta nahin hai!" Kripa said firmly.

Aaliyah knew it would be hard to convince a determined woman like Kripa. Aaliyah and Shabbir had agreed to work at the new Ramgarh hospital once it was completed. They would devote at least 1-2 days a week there, and also had invested in the hospital financially. Aaliyah kept that a secret from Kripa.

"Aaliyah….tumhey chhod ne ka mann tho nahi hai, par ab humein wapas jaana hi hoga…..thanks for all your help." Kripa hugged Aaliyah as they left.

"Apne logon mein thanks thode hi bolte hain. Ab main Prateek ki maasi hoon…..so no thanks whanks…OK?"

"Maasi?" Kripa was surprised, as Aaliyah had always wanted to be Prateek's 'bua'

"Haan Kripa…..itne din tumhare saath rehkar mujhey aisa lagta hai ki tum meri behen ho……main shayad Angad ke bhi itne kareeb kabhie nahin thi," Aaliyah said tearfully.

Kripa hugged Aaliyah again, "you are a wonderful person Aaliyah……khuda tumhey aur Shabbir ko hamesha salaamat rakhe."

After bidding a tearful goodbye, Kripa, Gayatri, Harshini, Kartik and Prateek all drove back to Ramgarh.

When they were almost home, Harshini pointed out to some new construction on the way, 'dekho maasi….lagta hai koi nayi building ban rahi hai?"

"Arre haan…zara padhna tho wahan sign kya likha hai?" Gayatri took her glasses out to read the sign posted on the partially constructed building.

Kripa said loudly, "Maa….yeh tho….DR MISRA MEMORIAL HOSPITAL!"

They all looked at each other in pleasant surprise.

"Aakhir yeh nek kaam kaun kar raha hai?" Gayatri asked

"Maa….lagta hai maamaji ki itne saalon ki sewa ko aakhir kisi ne pehchaan hi liya…..is duniya mein abhi bhi achche log baaki hain." Kripa said.
Harshini had overheard Shabbir talking to Angad about the new hospital on the phone one day. She kept quiet, but was pleased to hear something complimentary about her jiju, even if indirectly, from her cousin's mouth!

Angad was overwhelmed with the positive response from his old friends and corporate sponsors about the new hospital. They had managed to raise enough money for the project. They also worked on building staff quarters for all the visiting doctors. Angad was amazed to see how many young doctors really wanted to work in the underserved areas, as long as good facilities and living conditions were available.

Angad had sold his mansion and was living in a small apartment now. He had invested all his savings in the new project. The project would take almost 6-9 months to complete. He continued to work at the Bose Surgical center till then, more to earn money for his new project, than for job satisfaction.

One day, Angad received a surprise visitor at his office, "Prithvi? What are you doing here?" he said angrily.

"Calm down Angad! Main yahan ladhne nahin aaya hoon…..bas tumse maafi maangne aaya hoon." Prithvi said

"Maafi? It is just a little too late for that Prithvi! You have ruined my life forever, so don't want and don't care about your apologies!" Angad retorted.

"Angad, trust me….even I was taken for a ride by Mishti….you won't believe it, after you kicked her out, she tried to trap my dad into marrying her- in fact he actually fell for her evil charms. Wo tho maine unhey rok liya….warna aaj wo mere dad ko bhi barbaad kar deti. That is when I saw her true colors and became a police informant. She even tried to get you killed!" Prithvi said.

Angad calmed down a little bit and sat down, "thanks for saving my life Prithvi and I am sorry to hear about your dad….good thing you saved him from that evil woman!"

"I know, this will not compensate for what I have done to you and Kripa, but I would like to give you this check for Rs 1 crore on behalf of me and my dad for your new project…..we want you to really succeed in this venture…..we all feel responsible for your loss…..balki main Kripa se bhi baat karna chaahta hoon." Prithvi offered him the check and got up.

"Thanks Prithvi! Par Kripa kisi ki baat nahin sunegi….I have wronged her the most; it's no one else's fault but mine…..I appreciate your honesty and help." Angad shook his hand; he wanted to hug his old friend but things would never be the same again with Prithvi, even if he wanted to!

The next six months flew by in frenzy. Angad was busy shuttling between Mumbai and Ramgarh. He would every so often sneak outside Gayatri and Kripa's home, hoping to catch a glimpse of his family. He had seen Kripa go out on walks with little Prateek in the stroller. Prateek was now a chubby little one; his cheeks almost touching his shoulders. Angad was always tempted to pinch or kiss his cheeks. Kripa had lost most of her pregnancy flab; she was back to her slim but curvy self. How he wished to hold her and caress her. His heart, soul and body ached for her nearness.

Even though, she would never admit to it, Kripa also missed Angad terribly. She knew he would have been a wonderful father, even though he failed miserably as a husband. The teddy bear Angad had purchased for their first child had become a constant companion for Prateek. He had nibbled the teddy's ears and face so many times, that it looked worn out. Kripa's expert hands performed surgical procedures on the little teddy time and again, so it would not fall apart completely, "Prateek…..tumhari mama bhi tumhare papa ki tarah plastic surgeon ban gayi hai, tumhare teddy ko fix karte karte!" she said affectionately when they were strolling on the street. Angad overheard that comment from behind a tree; his eyes welled up, "Kripa…..I know you miss me as much as I do…..kya hamari poori zindagi aise hi door door rehkar kategi?"

Song to express Angad and Kripa's yearning for each other:

"O sanam O sanam" from "jurm"

http://www.dishant.com/lyrics/song-21766.html

O sanam o sanam kash hota agar
Tum nibha jate yeh zindagi ka safar
Hum bhi tanha na rahete yu umar bhar
Tum saath hote agar
Tum saath hote agar

O sanam o sanam kash hota agar
Tum nibha jate yeh zindagi ka safar
Tu tanha na rahete yu umar bhar
Tum saath hote agar
Tum saath hote agar

Itni mujhe hai khabaar
Tanha bhikaar jaoonga
Tere tamana liye
Mai kuch bhi kar jaoonga
Kash humko bana lete tum humsafar
Tum saath hote agar
Tum saath hote agar

Apne labo ki hashi aye kash dedo tujhe
Mere khushi lele tu
Gaam apna dede mujhe
Kash hoti tumhe mere dil ki khabaar
Tum saath hote agar
Tum saath hote agar

O sanam o sanam kash hota agar
Tum nibha jate yeh zindagi ka safar
Tu tanha na rahete yu umar bhar
Tum saath hote agar
Tum saath hote agar

……to be contd….

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sweetmittal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#340

wow that was amazing. poor angad and kripa. u know something you expressed their feeling so nicely in the ff that i actually imaging it and i cried. good job

continue soon 😊 😊 😊

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