Shayad Yahi To Pyar Hai-AK! pg 4- part 4

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My Fanfic is on the cute couple Kripa and Angad!

Characters :

Dilip Khanna - father of 3 children, always abroad because of his business, loves his wife and children dearly.

Naina Khanna - mother of 3 children, always helping her daughter and son with advice, a good wife and mother

Aliya Khanna - The oldest daughter of Naina and Dilip but the most sweetest and alwayz helps out with her mother. She is 27.

Karthik Khanna - the oldest son of Naina and Dilip, he also look afters the business empire when his father is abroad, Is 25

Angad Khanna - The spoilt son of Naina and Dilip, likes to go for long drives with his friends, goes to university! is 23

Kripa Sharma - Aliyas Best Friend and Also works in Dilips business. She is 22.

Part 1

Angad, Aliya, Dilip, Naina are starting to eat dinner in the living room as it is evening. There is a knock at the door

Angad - Ill get it (He opens the door and a pretty girl stands there holding a folder and is starting to soak in the rain) sorry aap kon?

Girl - Kripa Sharma

Angad - Hmm and who do u want to meet? (sees her dripping wet) O Sorry Come inside! (Kripa walks inside and looks around the house, this is the first time she set foot in this house even though it was her best friends house - she was used to meet her friends outside not in their house)

Dilip - Who is it

Angad - Kripa Sharma. Do You Know Her?

(Aliya came to Angad to see who it was! It was Kripa ! )

Aliya - She is my friend angad!

Angad - (quietly) good choice of friend

Aliya - u sed sumthing?

Angad - No

Aliya - heeey kripa! tum yaha? come in. have dinner with us. (hugged kripa)

Kripa - erm no really aliya..i jus came here to get this file signed by dillip uncle.

Aliya - Come on kripa! its tha first time you have come to my house.

Kripa - Ok! As you wish aliya ( kripa sits opposite the seat to angad she realises he was looking at her)

Angad - Aliya! You have got some pretty friends!

Aliya - Wot?

Angad - Errr Kuch Nahi..dnt worry

(While they were having dinner, kripa and dilip uncle and karthik were all speaking business and After dinner, kripa helped aliya put the dishes away and then got ready to go home)

Kripa - Thanks Aunty Naina and Uncle Dillip, I got to go now i got so much work to do.

Dilip - Beta, how are you going to go home? do u have a car?

Kripa - No Uncle - Ill walk it!

Dillip - Nahi - Angad will take you home. Angad! Come down and take Kripa Home!

Angad comes down and looks at Kripa.

Kripa - Umm Uncle. Its ok ill go home. Bye

Dillip - No Beta! Its dark and its 10 p.m.! Bohat Late Hai! Angad will take you! Angad Jao Na!

Angad - Yes Dad. Erm Kripa Shall we go?

Angad went into the car and waited for Kripa to say her goodbyes. Kripa came and sat in the car. Angad kept glancing at Kripa from the corner of his eyes and Kripa - she could feel his eyes on her. To break the silence, he put his radio on. They were now lsitening to kaise yeh pyar hai title song.

Angad - coughs erm really bad weather - so much rain!

Kripa - Hmmm

Suddenly.....

Please Comment On This and Give Me Ideas !

Enjoy 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

Suddenly their car stops! Angad tries again and again to start it but it won;t start.

Angad - O Great! The Cars Stopped!

Kripa - O! This is so annoying! Why do you just have to..!?

Angad - Excuse me! Its not ma fault that its raining, we hav to be in the same car and the car stops and theres a small hut there!

Kripa - GOD! im not spending the night with you! I rather die!

Angad - Jao Meri Maa! Go nd Die!

Kripa looks upset

Angad - Look, you blame me for the weather, for the car and now for telling you to go and die! Is it me or are these girls all the same! all they do is alwayz cry! Chup! Im tryna think now...

Kripa - Im not crying!Why do i have to be stuck with you duffer!

Angad - Me duffer! Looks Whos Talking...U r jus

Kripa - Hang on! we aint gettin no where if we keep fighting! I just wanna go home now! i dnt cre! ( She gets out of the car and stand outside in the rain)

Angad - Oi Meri Maa! Come inside - before u get a cold!

Kripa - Why do you care if i get a cold?

Angad - Well, if you die of a flu, then itll be my fault nd just dnt ask - its to complicated!

Kripa - Teek Hai! (she sits in the car) Angad! Im bored

Angad - Kripa..its 10a.m. in the night and its raining hard and we are STUCK here, wt else could be fun (sarcastically)

A car comes and parks infront of their car. A man with an umbrella comes out of the car wearing a black suit with shiny black shoes? Who izit?

Enjoy Please Leave Comments 😳

Edited by mizz_sabah - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very interesting! maybe prithvi or josh or shabbir? some jealousy šŸ˜‰ ...... šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Plz continue soon! Maybe the mystery guy can be angad's friend. Can't wait for the next part. By the way, what's your title of the story? I only says fanfic about kripa and angad. šŸ˜•
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: uru_hershey

Plz continue soon! Maybe the mystery guy can be angad's friend. Can't wait for the next part. By the way, what's your title of the story? I only says fanfic about kripa and angad. šŸ˜•

Yeh Im Tryna Think of a Name! Please Tell Me Any if You Have Any Ideas! Thanks for the comments!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I mite not continue as no body is realy enjoying this fanfic! Please comment 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i really enjoy it so pls stop crying otherwise i would have to call you rondooooooooooo šŸ˜† sorry just kidding
really interesting story well maintained so conti soon šŸ‘ 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great ff.
😊 😊 😊
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow very exciting continue soon i wonder who the man will be?
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hm...wonder if the man is related to either of them..well awesum update..continue so0n

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