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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#541

aaki continue soon na dear.. 😭 😭 😭

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@Rajeev_gr8

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Posted: 17 years ago

#542

Kya yar aakkii itna w8 kara rahe ho yar cont karo na 😕

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#543

aakki continue soon na dear... 😊

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saba

@aishwaria

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Posted: 17 years ago

#544

aaakii waada kar keh bhaag gayi 😆 😆 😆 plz continue soon yaar me want some laughing doze 😆 😆 😆

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160991

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Posted: 17 years ago

#545

Avi climbed up to the room through the pipe …..& jumped inside the room through the window ….Angad gave him thumbs up ……

Avi looked into the room …..it was really dark ….nothing to be seen anywhere ….he became ROMANTIC…..

Avi : (softly singing )…..Jaanam Dekhlo mit gayin dooriyaan ….main yahaan hun …yahaan hun…yahaan hun….Yahaan ….

Kaisi sarhaden ….kaisi majbooriyaan…main yahaan …hun …yahaan hun….yahaan hun ….yahaan ….

He started walking towards the bed …..& when he felt that she was there …his eyes burnt with passion …..he just sink his teeth in her CHEEKS …..

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"

an extremely deafening sound shot up the building with thunder ……& he turned cold out of fear …..as it wasn't Bhoomi's sound at all…..

Then the woman in the room….pulled his hair with all the force …she had ….while

someone switched on the light ……It was Bhoomi …..she got the shock of her life for

a moment …..seeing her fianc lying in bed with her mum …..in compromising

condition …& her mum held his hair with all the force she had ….& when her mom

saw …it was her future son in law…..her eyes remained widely opened ….

B: what happened mum !!!!!…(she thought of it …..as the ultimate misunderstanding

ever …)

Her mom started hiding the big blue scar on her face …all thanks to LOVE BITE …..

B: tell me Avi ….what r u doing over here ….in my moms room at ….at 1'o clock….GOD DAMN U …TELL ME!!!!!(she screamed loudly ….)

😆

Avi ran to get a hold of Bhoomi .....with a look of panic on his face ......

"I LOVE U BHOOMI....."

It was all he cud say ...& out of shock he fainted
(It was mere an acting ...hehe)...& u know who was the next one to faint ......Poor Vasu auntie ....hahaha....

A really confused bhoomi went to the window ...to see ...how Avi managed to climb up to her room...as it was immpossible to break the lock of the main door ...n enter her room ....possibly he came by the window.....

There ...she got the shock of her life .....ANGAD ...hehe.....the guy was waiting for his plan to be executed ...little did he know ...that the scene was very soon be going to be ....OUT OF CONTROL......

"ANGAD !!!!"......she screamed at the top of her voice....

Angad was horror-struk to see Bhoomi there ...at the window ....after all ...she had to romance her soon to be husband then....

"W...wh .....what happened ......have ...have u ....I mean ....I jus saw Avi climb up ur window "

"WHAT R U SAYING ......u saw avi like this ...n didnt even bother to stop him....TELL ME .....WHAT's COOKING!!!!!!"

"will u please open ur door lock ...let me come inside ..& we will talk!!!!!"....Angad said softly....

"Okkay...."....said Bhoomi.....

She opened the door lock ...n took Angad inside ....she seemed really confused ....n irritated by the fact that ...her sleep was spoiled ....

She groaned as she entered her room again with Angad ...where on the floor was lying Avi ...& on the bed ....VASU .....the room was all messed up ...& the bed sheet was really crushed ...It took Angad a second to understand ....WHAT ACTUALLY HAPPENED...lol 😆

"I knew he's gonna mess it up all..."....murmured Angad... 😆

"What did u say!!!!!!".....Bhoomi heard a bit of it.....

"oh!!!! ...I mean something happened ...which was intended to happen.....has avi fainted!!!!!"

"cant u see !!!!!!"....bhoomi said Angryly ...& came face to face with Angad ...her back in the direction where Avi lay unconscious or shud I say pretended to be unconscious ...unless He wud have been murdered by now ...by the mother-daughter duo...hehe

Angad looked at Avi ....n saw Avi looking at them with one eye open .....when he saw her back towards him ...he opened both his eyes .....& gave murdereous look to Angad......

"now tell me ...what was intended to happen .......how come Avi got into my room ...."

"SLEEP WALK ...u know ....have u heard bout SLEEP WALK ...."...Angad said fastly seeing avi's dangerous expressions....avi relaxed a bit ....may be this works out

"what r u saying ....."....Bhoomi's voice changed into a worried tone......

"oh ...I wanted to tell this to u .....from 2 nights I've been noticing Avi get up from the bed ....opening the door lock ....& go on walking in the mid of the night .....today ...I mean tonight ...I walked after him ...to see what he does ...& see ....He climbed ur boundry wall ...& when I too jumped the other side of ur fence .....I saw him climbing that pole ...next to ur window ...."

"I see..."....said a worried Bhoomi

"I dint say anything .....it might be that ...he got distracted ...& ended up breaking some more bones ..."

"n u know ...what he did over here .....I think I shud call the doctor ...." 😆

"but tell me ....atleast ...what did he do".....Angad asked innocently...... 😆

Bhoomi reached her mum ...& displayed vasu's Right cheek to Angad ....which had by now turned black...hahahahaha.... 😆

"see ......what he did!!!!!!!...mom ...mom...get up mom ....."....Bhoomi took some water n sprinkled on Vasu's face ......who opened her eyes with a scream ....

"Relax mom ...its okkay ....ur alright "

"But Angad ....I really dont understand one thing .....What's the link between sleepwalk ... then SLEEPCLIMB & BITING MOM "...bhoomi said thoughtfully 🤣

So here's the next part ...with some dose of laughter medicine ...hope u guys like it .....comments eagerly awaited ...n yeah next update will be on ur way really soon ....& will be shorter....7 Sameer- Anvesha scenes will be there too ....so here's aakkii signing off ....tata bye bye

Luv,
Akanksha 😛

Edited by aaakkii - 17 years ago

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 17 years ago

#546

"But Angad ....I really dont understand one thing .....What's the link between sleepwalk ... then SLEEPCLIMB & BITING MOM "...bhoomi said thoughtfully

hahahahahahaha!! thats a very good question.........y not ask avi........hahahahaha! 😆

Edited by togepe30 - 17 years ago

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sidivyapall

@sidivyapall

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#547

😆 omgggggg i knew Avi would mess it up!!!!! 😆 i feel sorry for vasu... 😆 😆 first her cheek turns blue then black... 😆 😆 😆 it was very close for avi... if didn't pretend to faint, the mother-daughter duo toh dou-dou kar maarte usko!!!!! 😆 😆 halarious part yaar!!!!! plz continue soon!

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160991

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Posted: 17 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: sangeee
aku meri jaan
kya mast likhti hai tu 😃 😃 😃
mujhe to yeh story tabhi se pasand hai jab se maine iska first page pada tha 👍🏼
aur ab se to main bhi tere awaiting fans mein add ho gayi hoon 😉
hats off to u for providing ur fans wd some non-kektamayish stuff 👏 👏 👏 .....

Welcome jaan 😛......toh finally aap ban gayin IF ki member ......chal achha hai ....ab meri awaiting fans ki list mein hi rahiyo ....good to see u here ......& luv u for such awesome comments ...(though I know ...ki mere ko chane ke jhaad pe chadhaayaa jaa rahaa hai hehe😆)

Thanks once again ...& from now on Do comment regularly ...warnaa ....janti hai naa😡

Luv,

ur Aku😉

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sidivyapall

@sidivyapall

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#549

heyyyy aakkii!!! yaar aaj Monday hai!!!! part kab post karing!!!??? am waiting!!!! plz post soon!!!

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160991

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Posted: 17 years ago

#550

"But Angad ....I really dont understand one thing .....What's the link between sleepwalk ... then SLEEPCLIMB & BITING MOM "...bhoomi said thoughtfully

"he was singing too .....I heard that !!!!!!"....said a dumbstruk Vasu .....

"Ullu ki dum!!!!!!....bevkoof insaan.....ise lovebite kehte hain...ya DOGBITE..."....mumbled Angad as he looked at Vasu's swollen black cheek.... 🤣

"Hey Angad ...what ur saying ...I'm really fearful ...as of what happened to my sweetie-pie ...why he was out of senses!!!!!!"

"How can I say huh!!!!!!.....I think its better to ask the doc ...n yeah what ur doin...ur hubby ...I mean gonna be hubby is lying on the floor...n ur jus discussing ...what happened ...u dont even think of lifting to ur bed..."

"oh chill ...u know I cant do it alone .....help me out"...said bhoomi

They lifted Avi on her bed ...& Angad went at 2'o clock at night ...in search for a doc ....coz he knew he'll find none

on the way .....an idea ....oh our sex guru's great idea struk him😆...he went to Vidya's place ...rung her bell ....she came out mouthing some cursing words😆 ....but as soon as she saw Angad ....she was like ....IS HE MAD .....hadnt he seen the time ...or was he going to assist her in the midnight ....for.... for what ... but she didnt know ... IT WAS ANGAD WHO NEEDED HER ASSISTANCE AS OF NOW.....

As soon as he got in .....he told her everything that happened ...their plan ...& finally its getting haywire😆 ......after hearing it all ...Vidya was in splits ...she was laughing like crazy ...

"& what is the favour ...u think I'm gonna give u"....she raised her brows .....

"jus go there as the doc ....I mean psychatrist.....I'll give u some acting tips ...n that's all ...easy ..pls yaar ..help me ...unless he's gonna kill me ..agar uski Engagement toot gayi"

"but how can I ...I mean I'm a gynacologist"

"listen!!!!!!".....Angad came close to her....

"U know ur a gyno ....I know too ...but see .....BHOOMI doesnt know that ....".....he said confidently ..& then blinked at the lady ........

He continued

"& as for Vasu auntie .....ANTI-RABIES INJECTIONS WUD DO"

n both of them started laughing as loud as they can ....hehehahahuhu.... 🤣

Here's the next part ....do comment soon....
Bye ...
Luv,
Akanksha 😛

Edited by aaakkii - 17 years ago

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