Dil Kya Kare(AK) Part 43@ Pg-119 - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap-angad is really mad at himself for hurting kripa.he is driving madly.josh tells dadi everything.dadi helps angad.dadi and josh make a secret plan,dadi also make some calls.next day everbody is at farm house angad is late
ktripa was doing decorations.she was on standing a stool,she tripped but angad holds her.angad puts her down very carefully and asked
a- r u ok kripa
his voice was calm and was soothing her horror.she noticed the bandages on his hand..she felt like screaming at angad at top of her lungs for hurting himself.angad's voice took her out of her thots
a- i m sorry for yesterday kripa...plz forgive me ...


Part -12

everybody's mouth fell open and in disbelief except josh,he knew this was going to happen but he also got a slight shock becos it was first time ever angad is asking for an apology.kripa is all shocked she stood there bewildered.she took hold of herself she is about to speak but angad speaks
a-(calmly) i know i was rude yesterday...i m also late sometimes(khota(donkey) .he is always late)

the whole incident of yesterday flashed around her eyes.anger took over her.her blood started boiling.everybody noticed that.angad stood there quietly waiting for reply.there is pin drop silence as if there is no one in farm house.finally kripa broke the silence
k- who the hell do u think u r(anger can b easily recognised in her tone).tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum jo chaahoge vohi hoga..pehle kissi ko jo jee mein aaye keh do,hurt karo aur phir sorry keh do.kitna aasan hota hai soory bol ke apni galti ko chupana BUT MR.KHANNA I M SOORY... I CAN'T FORGIVE U FOR YESTERDAY'S DEED

kripa says this and again get busy in her work.she is confused that what she did was right or wrong,atleast angad realised his mistake and asked an apology whereas angad stood there confused.he realised anger raging in him but before he loose his temper he made himself busy in work.he thot"kripa u have to forgive not today then any otherday."he had a satisfying smile on his face .every body was busy in work, josh took the opportunity,goes outside and calls dadi
j-hai dadi how r u
da-i m fine and now tell me what happened
j- dadi i got biggest shock of my life...angad asked an apology(josh said in disbelief)
then he tells everything to dadi.dadi smiles
da- at least ..angad ne meri baat to maani aur tum jaldi koi bahana bana ke yahan aa jao baaki ka plan discuss karna hai
j- noted boss
josh hangs up.he goes inside.misthi sees him coming from outside and asks
m- josh what were u doing outside?
everybody turns towards josh
j- vo main.. main vo..vo
ka- kya vo vo laga rakhi hai
angad noticies but ingores and get busy in his work
kt- josh tum kuch bolne ki takleef karogr ke nahi
j- ek important call karne gaya tha...voh catering waalon ko batana tha ki food mein chinese bhi hoga
by hearing this angad lost control and again got his same hand hurt.he yells in pain
a- aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh
all hurries towards nagad.kripa was first one to reach.she sees angad has removed his bandage.she gets mad in concerns and shouts
k-tumhe bandage khol kar kaam karne ko kisne kaha tha.see u again hurt urself.tumse bada idiot maine apni poori life mein nahin dekha.
kripa is holdong angad's hand.there is so much concern in her voice.she yelling at him but angad is lost in her eyes he was so touched by kripa's concern.he felt as if he was the luckiest person on this earth.those eyes..had so much concern for him.kripa kept on yelling but angad was stairing at her and smiling.aaliya's voice brings him back
aa- omg bhai aap ke hath se to kitna khoon beh raha hai.lets go and do bandage
all are sitting in living room.mishti is doing bandage
m- tumse bada idiot is duniya mein koi nahin hoga angad..trust me
a-(wid lots of innoncence)bhabhi(angad calls misthi bhabhi outside collage)i was not able to do my work properly so i removed my bandage.(looks at kripa)
m-(worried) par angad u shuold b careful.see ur hand's condition.it got hurt twice
a-not twice but thrice(looking at kripa who was looking at angad continously in disbelief)
ka- and how's that
angad realies what he said and he knew he was in trouble now but he handled the situation nicely.misthy was still doing bandage.josh takes a big sigh and speaks
j- kaash angad teri jagah main hota aur itni pyaari or meethi daant mujhe pad rahi hoti
m- shut up josh its not at all funny
ka- is mein josh kya galti hai .after all misthi he loves u..
an- shut up kaavya
ka-(irritaed) ab tumne shut up kyun kaha
an-kyunki ye waqt mazak nahi hai...par main tumhe kyun bata rahi ..meri baat samajhne ke liye dimmag ki zaroorat hai jo ki tumhaare paas to definately nahin hai
ka- what do u mean
an- dekha tum nahin samjhe
j- chillax ..i have to go becos of urgent work ..(turns to angad)angad u better take care of urself

josh reaches dadi's house.he sees both khanna and sharma family sitiing there.he is confused.he greets everybody and hugs nishant.he go to dadi and sits beside her.they all plan something that v all can't hear. all r happy.dilip and vedh hug eachother.


AT NIGHT OUTSIDE FARM HOUSE


angad & aaliya has got the duty to bring nishant and gauri to farm house.every body is there and all are waiting for themall the lights are turned off.
n- tum dono humne farm house par kyun le ke aaye ho
aa- bhai chup chaap andar chalo
nishant and aaliya are having an argument where angad is asking gauri silly quetions.he was bossing over gauri like gauri isv a kis.there was lots of innocence and concern in his voice.
a- app ne khana waqt pe khaya
g-haan
a- app walk pe gayi
g- haan
a- aapne zaida kaam toh nahin kiya
g- naahin
a- aapne rest kiya ke nahin
gauri was fed up now and was smiling at silly questions of angad
g- angad tum to nishant se bhi zaida possesive ho,ye sab to nishant ne bhi nahin poocha mujhse.i wonder jab tum baap banoge to kya hoha...i feel pity on ur wife

angad didn't like the fact that ninshant didn't ask her anything he was to get back at nishant but they all entered out house.as they entered the lights were turned on & all screamed
all-THANK YOU
there was huge smile on gauri's face...naina told four of them to go change.angad and kripa has not seen eachother yet as angad is busy getting mad at nishant not taking care of gauri.kripa is noticing angad and smiling at his silly acts.angad was telling and complainig to everybody that nishant didn't ask gauri all the questions he asked.he was saying nishant irresponsible.all were smiling at angad is upto.kripa was noticing an another side of angad. he was wearing a black sherwaani and red duppataa arount his neck.he was looking adorable she was so confused about angad when dadi joins her.kripa hugs dadi and starts crying.
da- kripa voh itna bhi bura nahin hai
k- aap kiski baat kar rahi hain(getting seprating)
da- kya tum nahin jaanti
k-dadi aap nahin jaanti ki usne kal kya kiya..
da-(interruptig)- main sab jaanti hoon aur ye bhi jaanti hoon ke usne apne aap ko punish bhi kiya aur sorry bhi kaha...tum soch rahi hi ki main toh uski hi side loongi afterall i m his dadi but kripa..
k- main jaanti hoon aap jitni uski dadi hain utni meri bhi hain
dadi smiles but before they can continue kt and lakshya drags them for dance.all r dancing except angad.he is standing beside gauri like her bodygaurd. but josh drags angad too.this was the time when there eyes meet.it was coincident or someting kripa was also wearing a black salwaar kameez with red embroidrey on it.when angad saw her,totally lost in her eyes..


well guys this it all for this part.i hope it is long enough as i was told to make long parts.plz plz plz reply



AS EVER 😉

AMNEET 😳

Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
great part!! awww, lets see wut kripa's reply is....cont soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
Just caught up.
Awesome updates
liked it.
hmmmm...wondering what is Dadi up to 😉 😆 😆
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
Great part!! U must have to think a lot b4 writin..and if u dnt ..thn u must be genius!! lol 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: amber0802

Great part!! U must have to think a lot b4 writin..and if u dnt ..thn u must be genius!! lol 👏 👏 👏

😆😆😆thank you so much. i would love to know what made u think that

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part.. Lol angad was standing beside gauri like her bodyguard 😆 // aww sweetooo angad... plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu-pre4eva

nice part.. Lol angad was standing beside gauri like her bodyguard 😆 // aww sweetooo angad... plz cont soon

thank you so much🤗i know that was funny and angad is the hottest sweetooo

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hello amneet
ur ff is luvvly,awsumm!its brilliant,mindblowing,fantabuluous,fabulous,i dont have words!contnue soon! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_tia

hello amneet
ur ff is luvvly,awsumm!its brilliant,mindblowing,fantabuluous,fabulous,i dont have words!contnue soon! 👏

thank you so much🤗u r such a darling

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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap- kripa refuses to forgive angad.they all get busy in decorations.angad asks gauri stupid questions.all are dancing together. angad and kripa's eyes meet and they are lost in each other.


Part-13

angad and kripa are dancing but thier eyes are in contact.those eyes seems world to him.they always take him to another worls like now.there was something special in those eyes unlike others.he forgets everything,everytime he looks in them.he feels to b on cloud nine when he sees his reflection in those eyes.the smile on her face is best thing ever happen to him.her smile makes him happy to no ends.

kripa was lost in the charm of the person whom she is looking at.she feels like closing her eyes and lock him in her eyes forever.his gaze was making her smile.she wanted to be lost in those chocolate brown eyes.the innocence on his face is making him a totally different person.she remembers thier first meeting.

dadi and josh are noticingthem.suddenly something strikes in dadi's mind.she whispers in josh's ear.josh goes to gauri and tell her something.(ofcousre v r not able to hear it)she smiles.gauri goes to angad but before she couls speak angad starts
a-(angry,stubborn&childish tone)aap yahan kya kar rahi hain
g- listen to me first
a- speak..fast
g-plz sing a song(makes apuppy face)
a-yaahan...no ways bhabhi
nishant listens thier conversation and he also makes a request.angad refuses.everybody is trying to convince him but he is being stubborn,when kripa speaks
k-c'mon angad!after all di is giving u a wonderful gift,u can atleast sing a song for her
a- mike plz and band get ready
everybody is taking thier positions(kripa is still to b included in band,so she is not there now)angad goes to centre stage.lakshya is done with his drums and fells like teasing angad. he goes to angad and speaks in very low voice that only angad couls hear
l- ye sab kya hai
a- kya...kya hai(confused)
l- hum sab ne kaha to nahin maane aur kripa ne kaha to ek hi baar mein yes.hmm
a-(same low voicw with a smile though he is angry,as he is on stage)SHUT UP its nothing like that
kaavya was listening them and he also joins.he also speaks in low voice
ka- like what angad(with a naughty smile on his face)
angad gets furious and address to both of them
a-shut up before i knock u both.got it.guys..its me angad..angad khanna.kripa ki baat mein point tha, so i agreed.whats a big deal about it.u r over exaggerating it .just cut it out.
by the time angad gets the mike.all set .kripa is standing with dadi and gauri
a- THIS IS FOR BHAI AND BHABHI

a-Chudi Saji Hai Haathon Mein
Haathon Mein Haathon Mein
Phir Se Baji Shehnayi Hai

j-Chudi Saji Hai Haathon Mein
Haathon Mein Haathon Mein
Phir Se Baji Shehnayi Hai


m-Mehendi Rachi Hai Pehron Mein
Pehron Mein Pehron Mein
Dekho Khushi Ghar Aayi Hai

aa-happy

ka-happy

l- happy

kt $ an- happy
whole band-Happy Days Are Here Again
Happy Happy Happy Happy
Happy Days Are Here Again

nishant also joins
n-Kabhi Na Kabhi Haan Karte Karte Meri Jaan
Dekho Na Apni To Ho Gayi Shaadi
a-Mehbooba Mehbooba Kal Tak Teri Thi Mehbooba
Bangayi Dekho Aaj Meri Bhabhi

ka-Koyi Na Koyi To Mil Jaaye Kahin Rab Sab Ki banata hai jodiyaan


l-Kahin Na Kahin To Yaaro Kabhi Na Kabhi Mit Jaaye Dilo Ki Dooriyan

naina also joins

naina-Aayi Dekho Aayi Mere Ghar Ki Laxmi Ghar Ko Swarg Banane


nishant-Mere Sapno Ka Mere Khushiyon Ka Jhilmil Sansar Basane


all-Happy Happy Happy Happy
Happy Days Are Here Again
Happy Happy Happy Happy
Happy Days Are Here Again
Happy Happy Happy Happy
Happy Days Are Here Again
Happy Happy Happy Happy
Happy Days Are Here Again


dadi joins
dadi-Yeh Dua Yeh Dua Yeh Hai Maa Ki Dua
Na Kabhi Ab Saath Yeh Chute
Na Lage Na Lage Is Ghar Ko Nazar
Humse Na Ab Kabhi Rab Roothe

a-Humko Kasam Hai Yeh Humko Kasam Hai Mamta Pe Teri Sab Waar De
j-Dekh Ke Hum Ko Duniya Jale Ek Duje Ko Itna Pyaar De
m-Koyi Kuch Bole Ab Koyi Kuch Bole Hum Maanenge Tera Kehna
n-Wada Kiya Yeh Wada Kiya Humme Saath Saath Hai Rehna
all-Happy Happy Happy Happy
Happy Days Are Here Again
Happy Happy Happy Happy
Happy Days Are Here Again

all are dancing together.angad with boys and kripa with girls.thier eyes meet again.all are busy in dancing,nobody is noticing them except two pairs of eyes-dadi & josh.angad and kripa come close.they r looking straight in eachother's eyes and stop dancing.angad takes the opportunity and again asks for apology without blinking his eyes.his gaze was making kripa weak.before she could decide they are brought back by a voice.(v can't see his face)

voice- kripa...

kripa turns and abig smile comes on her face.she runs towards him and hugs him tightly .everybody is shocked.we see back of that person.he is wearing blue sherwani.kripa is still hugging him and starts crying.aaliya is happy to no ends.angad stands there envious and confused,he feels like smacking that person.now we see eyes of that person.he winks at dadi.dadi looks at josh and josh shows dadi thumbs up.there is big smile on dadi's face



this is it.hope u all enjoy this part.and plz plz plz reply.suggestions and scoldings r always welcomed


as ever 😉
amneet 😳

Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago

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