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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: goldi2

😆 hahahaha lol okk now i think i really know u!! lol! lol u live in missiaga i mean it completly possible!! lol if i did know u i would be soo embarassed it will be hilarious! But, I assure you I don't know any Hina... well, actually don't trust me I am not too good w/d names, so ummm... lol hahahaha lol .. and ur right lol if i found out ur name it woundt be hard to find out ur phone # lol that's it you are so not getting to know my name! tell you what I might play a lil game w/d you till you finally learn my name & have a heart attack j.k you won't!... u know acctully... even ur e-mail will help lol and if ur on face boook then it'll be complty easy!!! my best friend has been convincing me to take up a face book since ages, but I haven't agreed yet & neither will I in the future. lol and omg u bad lil girl why r u behind in studies lol! .. if thats wat u said lol.. u know i have to try and doo rellayy really really good in school cus thats like the only way i can get a cell phone!! hehehehehehe! I love hearing things from you man, seriously you are sooo frank & open... And, especially things that happen to you are so hilarious - btw that sentence was soooo innocently said... i cant wiat to get 1:D:D:D:D and i cant wait tillu continue either:D:D:D... u know wat... u dont HAVE to continue yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! Hina jaan you r a SWEETHEART! And, that is not only b/c you let me off soooo easily, but b/c you really are... I really mean it.... Have you seen some ppl - they say nice things when they want something from you? well, lately I think everyone (excluding net friends) says nice things to me just b/c they want something.. I swear I didn't mean it b/c you asked me not to continue.... lol i rather have u post the part tommarow then post up a complete disaster lol... hahahahaha i would be more mad if u did sumthing stupid with the story then u posting it tommaorw lol soo try to make the wise choise! cus i like really dont wanna hate this story lol lol!!!!! kk i ahve to go clean my stupid room good luck! 😳

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Guys, I am not continuing today! Feel free to throw all jhootes & belans on me b/c I really deserve it.

Instead of reading the next part to this FF go for ---->>"Killing me Softly" by Iqbal Addict on the KAA forum... I just read it today & its the best FF ever!

Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwww..... ur not continuing today!!! its ok... i guess u must b too
tired!!! i dunt really like hockey, but i guess ur a big fan of hockey!!!

i agree with u Sonali... i LOVE tht FF... it is soooooo ROMANTIC!!! 😳

p.s. r u gonna continue tomorrow??? 😳
Edited by berkeleygirl818 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol hahahahaha u know.. i never ended up cleaning my room at the end .. lol my mother is gonna KILL me!! lol but im sure my dad will save me.. lol hahaha he alwasy does:D:D:D plus i dont htink i'll have time to clean tommarow either.. since i have to go out with my brother for lunch in the afternoon lol and i wont be up before 12 or so and when i'll get back from our lunch i'll be hoping to read the next part which u better have posted lol and lol u think im sweet hahahaha wow thats the first most of my frined either think im wierd or a complete freak lol seriosuly man... i mean today i spen more then 30 minutes talking to 1 of my frineds who hats talkni on the the phone lol and all i did was laugh.. and now i cant even rember wat i was laughin at lol u knwo laughing is a good thing right?? hahaha u know laughing reminds me lol once i coudnt stop laughin and my teacher hahahaha he was soo funny lol and he was jamaicin so he had an acceint lol this is was he said to me "u lof like a bounch ov idiohts" lol hahaha try pernouncin it the way i wrote it lol he was hillariouse and he was like the BEST teacher ever lol he hated me soo much once u know wat i did i like stole the unit math test right out of his hand lol but see im nice i gave it back by the end of the day lol god i was soo bad.. but not badder then i was in grade..6 i was REALLY bad lol and then grade 7 went by soo wierd lol i was stuck in class with only 1 girl 2 inclusing me and we both HATED each other!! lol it was fun entertainment for the guy lol u should've seen us fighting o gosh it was crazy loll i'll shut up since im talkin to u nyways lol
just post the part tommarow:D:D i'll be waiting:D lol for SURE:D


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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

yay, u updated, nd i am first!!! 😛
havent read it yet, but will read nd edit later!!! 😆

*edit*

ok... i read it, nd AWESUM prt, like ALWAYS!! Thank youuuuuu! 😳

i CANNOT believe Angad was a BIT nice in this prt!!

hmmm.... shocking!!! 😲😆yes
anywazzz... i know its all a pretense, he is just doing tht to gain her trust
or sumthing like tht!!! 😉nd now WHO is Vivaan, is he evil or nice???
I made a mistake dear! Since, I post a part in the KAA forum as well in my hurry to put up the part i wrote vivaan instead of Josh.
i hope he is nice, coz Angad is as evil as 10000 evil persons put
together!!!
Lol! lol!!! i think the girl is Mishti, i think u mentioned it sumwhere
in the beginning prts, sorry if i am wrong!!!
No, the girl is not Mishty! I did introduce Mishty, but as Kripa's friend only... she will come back soon! 😳i wonder wht REALLY
happened between Angad nd Mishti, or w/e tht girl's name is!!! 😉nd
NOW wht is Angad's plan!!!! i REALLY wanna know!!!
Just wait & watch... I am not going to reveal anything now... just going to remain tight lipped... lol!!! Kripa is sooo
self concious, she cares abt wht other people think
yes, she is veryy self consious, she needs to forget
abt wht other people think, nd just dont care!!!!
I agree w/ you! like Angad said she is
really pretty!!! 😳ya, sum teenage girls ARE really annoying, after all, i
AM a teenager!!!
Lol, yes, we all have gone through that phase before... 😳i know wht they do!!! lol!!! but who WUDNT act
wierd after seeing a REALLY hot guy like Angad!!!!
lol!😳
ok, i will stop babbling now, nd stop boring u
rutu, you can never ever bore me! I really like listening to you! , i cud go on 4EVER!!!! That would be fantastic! lol!!!
anywazzzz.... all i wanna say now is continue soon!!!! 😛

Hi Rutu, How are you? I love reading your comments... you are really cute dear! please please please put up the next part to your FF!

Originally posted by: brainychild92

i knew angad was doing all this for a reason hmmm... and whoo's vivan?? sorry dear it was a mistake on my part... in my hurry to put up the part I wrote Vivaan instead of Josh! is that gurl back.. the oone kripa had sided with yes..... or is it a new one cuz im sure there couold be one 😉

cant wait for the next aprt and im glad u came up with a concept..

cont sooonn

Thank you dear! I love to hear from you....

Originally posted by: princess1_43

hey hi...

that was simply fab... gr8 work ...
aww thank youu!

but there is something thats not adding up....
hmmm... yes... btw i loved ur descriptions... from their feelings to expressions lol it was hilarious they way they were fighting over the bill... i would say u go kripa...but coming bak to the point ... angad is acting my goody 2 shoes.. its hard to believe that a guy would change after his poor lil ego being hurt.. yup. thts one thing they wont compromise on N thts their ego.. sooo true.... so lets see what in store...

coming bak to kripa i liked the concept of chachi and niece... its real and something that has being there... i have liked the way kripa character is shaping up in the story... very sweet and innocent and her talking to the picture frame.. her crying , the insecurity she was surrounded by on the air port. that was sooooo cute yet sad... but a brilliant way to show different emotions...
awww thank youu! I hope I can manage to handle her character nicely, if you find anything out of the blue or completely wrong, then send me a PM straight away... Angad is surely acting like the prince of Cinderella who would come and sweep her off her feet.. or maybe like shahid in vivah... lol lol! Shahid in vivah was adorable! The guy was really nice & decent, its rare to come across a guy like that in reality...wouldnt mind that either lol i personally would love to make him like Shahid!.. ok going much far ahead..cuz it seems impossible rite now. Lol.still.i like the bickering between them... both completely different yet the same... yes....

josh now thats one of my fav character... he is too cute.. i hope he doesnt turn evil because there has to be some good when one is surrounded with evil..
don't worry he won't turn evil... not implying that Angad is evil.. lol just that Mr NoBrainer AKA Mr Kahali Dimagh lol has too many issues surrounded by him ... but lets see the thing thts stuck in my mind is that he said he will make her pay bak..with those gelled hair something is cooking up lol!… ahhh still thinking well, all the cooking up is down the drain isn't it? Now, the poor guy is worried about his life....

i really like this story of urs
i do sincerly hope that you will continue to like it... not taking the credit from Identity (Its like a mystery, n looking forward to it but i remember u had mentioned it would be a sad ending yes, i want to give it a sad ending, but since many readers do not agree w/ it... i have now planned a alternate ending.. 😭) and MM(was completely diff and diff story conveyed yes.. ). but this one its sweet and simple. hope u keep it this way...will try! . alrite i will stop now.. cuz if keep writing it would be endless.. oh & it would be delightful to read your comment.. i would never think it is endless... . i think have gotten used to writing now ..stupid essays... 😕

p.s i read that ur were from Mississauga... i used to work in Mississauga
wow, i don't like Mississauga all that much... Toronto has also been my favourite place, but Mississauga is nice too... over the past four years I have learned to like it..... its ironic cuz i hardly find ppl from Ontario on IF... yes, it hard to find a lot of ppl from Ontario...

take care
you tooo...
Hope u continue soon

Hi Princess, i like your avtaar & sig, must admit its AWESOME w/ AB baby looking veryy cute.... thank youuuu sooo much for your lovely feedbackk...... it reallyyy helps me a lot..... reading your comment now makes me wonder whether the parts following Part 5 were good enough.... Part 5 was my personal favourite in this FF so far... I will definitely try to make the next few parts better...

Originally posted by: candyprincess

Great part…heyyy thanks!.sorry I couldn't make a longer reply last time since had HW, and some other stuff to do not to worry girl, I can totally understand! Definitely give more priority to your studies...…but wow the part was great thanks!…and is Kripa pregnant or something because whenever that throw up thing happens it means girls pregnant???? Hmmm, no Kripa is not pregnant...and how Angad seemed a lot nicer in this part… well, you will see and awwww the hug it was cute it reminded me of some scene in KYPH where Kripa hits Angad's shoulder then hugs him.. yes, i may have gotten it from there! Ohhh yea what happen with the date with Prithiv… poor Prithvi was stood up! since she came with Angad to Mexico and all….i really find Angad very very very very very very very RUDE AND AGNORANT ALSO CONSEDED lol!….and Kripa rreally cries too much but its so cute like she crys as if she's a kids and she didn't get her candy… yes...cont. soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn as possible will try dear!

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

wow. great part. Thank youuu! im excited to read wat happens later in the fan fic especially the stuff about that girl who was pregnant w/ angads kid and wat josh has 2 do w/ the story well, i do hope it was upto your expectations.... kripas so cute but why was she throwing up? Don't worry about the throwing up.... Kripa has acidity probs... the night before she couldn't exactly sleep nor did she have anything the previous day (remember prithvi dropped her lunch?)...Due to which she feels a lil sick... she even demands for Iced tea the next day b/c of that but Angad refuses to let her get it... instead she eats a salad, which isn't exactly that great, and later 'wadapav'... i just hope this makes sense... cont soon.

Originally posted by: rimsibani

wow...great part... Thank youu bani! yer ff is alwaz long lol! yes n dis one really made me happy its actually my fav part so far!.... 😳😳😳...kripa was at such ease wid him... n sow az he...nw i m really waitin 2 hear abt dat preg girl...n wt is angads real intention... just wait & watch... it wont be too long before everything will be out in open! nw i make out dat, dat comment abt her beauty in d end was his attempt 2 take his revenge....haina??? 😃.... no comments....
plz post d next part soon....i m dyinggggggg😳😳

Thank youuu!

Originally posted by: goldi2

lol aww dont be dissapointed lol! lmao lol hahaha its just that i was in a relaly bad mood that day!! How come? lol.. i think lol! :P:P cant rember but sumthin wa sup lol i figured it out!! lol
and right now im soo angry cus i wrote this long comment and then my brother came and he like snatches my laptop lol and he closes the screen!!!!!!
Awwwww...don't worry hun, i can understand... i have been in your shoes before....why do you think i m delaying identity for so long? I almost finished writing the entire part when my computer crashed... this was two weeks back...and i was just about to post it lol! and i'll comment again lol in the morning im soo tired right now you do sound tired! dont worry about commenting hun! So far you have provided such a big package of long comments that i really dont mind if you miss commenting once, though i will be upset! !! but please lol dont be dissapointed its such a huge word lol!! Lol! :P:P and im sure i spelled it wonr im terrible lmao lol hahaha and omg ur from Missisugaa
lol
im from Brampton!!! 😃not too far away!! i have cousins in Missiauge lol but i dont even talk to them.. but non ur age.. i think how olde r u nywyas
17 turning 18... actually just assume i m 18 now.. Barely, 10 days left, its not like i will turn 18 dot on the 26th... lol hahaha:P:P

ok im gonnna go now!! but lol i posted this soo u wont get "dissapointied"
that isssss sooo sweet of your hina jaann! or how ever u spell it lol im terribel!! lol u know i rember in grade.. 8 i had oto read sumthin from a history book my teacher was forcing me and i was like I DONT WANT TO lol!!! and shes like U HAVE TO!!lol! lol and im like NO and shes like YES and then im like AHHHHHHHH FINE!! lol lol lol hahahahaha and then when i started reading i came to this word which spelled liek this >>"policy" and i pronounced it like "POE-LY-SY"!!!! lmao lol and i was like wat the hell is "POE-LY-SY" so i acctuly ask im like ms. smith what does "poe-ly-sy" mean hehehehehehehehehe! lol hahahaha and then alter i found out it was policy lol i can never forget that lol!!! lolllll
o nd naohter hting i can never forget is the time i had to write sumthin god knows what i worte lol and my teachers i like Hina u should try and increase ur vocabulary lol and im like OK so i go home ... and i had it saved and i take ALL the words i worte and i go to synonoms and i find the BIGGEST
hehehehehehe! words and i replace themLOL LOL LOL! lol and LMAO lol u dont even wanna know what my teacher wrote after that Hehehehe.... lol!! u know grade 8 was the best!! i had like 2 main teachers 1 of them was Mr. Tulloc who taught me mathe and scinece and he was my homeroom teacher and the other teacher was Ms. Smith who taught me drama, art, laguage, histoy, geography lol and god knows wat!! and both of them were CRAZY!! Lol! lol ms. smith once got soo mad at me lol she kicked me out of the class room and then she threw like 3 texts books at me threwww??? Oh my god, that is soooo bad! lol!! cus the book shelf was on 1 corner and the door was on the other and when she kicks me out she throughs texts books at me lol and i wa slike 😲lol cus one second she laughing right and shes gooing SOOO red!! omg lol it was scary and then shes laughing and shes like ahahahhahaha YOU!! hahahah GE--HAHAHAH-OUT!! lol and shes like lahgijn like a maniac as she wlaks to the book shelf and then she just expldes lol!!LOL! wow that was a scary day lol!! and all i did was chase a guy around with a chair! Hehehehehehe! Why?????lol hehehehe yaa.. that was funny!! god grade 8 was soo much fun yesss... even my best friend tells me for her grade 8 was the best year... sadly for me that was never the case, in fact grade 8 was the worst year for me.. lol i was soo hyper lol!.. still am lol!! but i didnt get a lot of time in there.. lol i had an extended vacation so i started in mid October! and then i lleft in on April... 4!! lol and never came back when i promised Mr. Tulloc i will cum bac but i never did you miss them don't you???? lol hehehe i went to see him liek.. last week and he was like HINA WHERE IS MY MATH TEXTBOOK!!! lol hehehe:P:P i rember i NEVR worked in math class i always laguhed lol!!!!! lol but then sumthing happend to me and then i turned all good!!! for 1 week i was like an angel!! Wowow! How come? i got like 49/50 on my history test!! and then i told my teacher that the 1 mark she took off wasnt appost ot be tooken off and so i got 50/50 and mr. tuloc was like AMAZED lol every1 in my class was like betting that i was only gonna last that way for less then 3 days lol! lol but i survied 1whole week why only one week? Why not more? Did something happen? lol and after that i went to Pakistan!! 😃lol and never came back!!:P:P:P hey was this toronto?

😳o o!! did i just write all this lol i really need to SHUT UP!!
noooooooooooo wayyy! You are totally not going to shut up! Lmao after that one chat w/ you online... i never saw you... did you block me or something? Mansi & madiha better have not told you my name... guys, i will myself do the honour* lol hehehe ok im gone! lol not another word

Hi Hina, I hope you are doing fine.... I really miss reading your comments man... what happened man? Where have you disappeared? Are you disappointed in part 6 (second half) or something? If you are do not hesitate to inform me! Keep your commentssssssssss coming please....

Originally posted by: goldi2

lol ok u dont have to read the above!! belive me nuthing importand ignore lol..

LOL! LOL! LOL! Now, this message definitely got my attention & i quickly ran back to read your comment....

Originally posted by: lovefaz

hey isn't there is a same fan fiction about shiv and gauri?
right? Yesss! its the same onee! 😛
because this are all the detale that were on that fan fic

Originally posted by: cute_face86

it is beautiful SIMPLY Thank youuuu dear! ......the way u describe ..it feel real ..so real wowwww... thank you.....KEEP IT UP 😃

Originally posted by: Mulle

awesome part Thank you Mulle! continue soon 😃

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part thanks hun!... it was simply amazin... i really luved dis part... it was sooooooooooo sweet!!!! Yes, its my fav in the FF so far...

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

awesome update!! Thank youuu! 😛kripa fainted?? Yes... poor girl! suffering so much! Yup...

aww kripa feels so bad about herself!! maybe angad should buy her some clothes in mexico!!
Well, the way they are trapped right now... they have nooo clothes....😛😛

I loved the hug at the end!! I want one aswell now..(from angad)
you mean from the supposedly nice one or the supposedly evil one?😆😆

looking forward to the next part!!

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

awesum update heyyyy thanks hun! Please do continue your FF....i m waiting for the next update!...it was soo good, luv da way you bring the whole thing to lyfe....continue ASAP

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818



ya, this was supposed to b a SG FF, but EVERY1 insisted tht this b an AK
FF, so Sonali decided she wud post the AK FF over here, nd post the same
FF, but with SG's name in the KAA forum!!!! 😛i think tht was a pretty
smart idea!!!! lol!!! i hope tht helps, nd sorry if it confuses u!!! Rutu, thank youuuu sooo much for responding to lovefaz....that was veryyyy sweet of you... thanks again hun... 😳

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

K first things first, I dont know you so mujhse dosti karogi??? Yup! Would love to be friends w/ you! By the way the movie mujhse dosti karoge is quite nice... very simple & sweet...😛
ur fanfic is just mindblowing....its perfect
perfect? No no, hun, it's not perfect.... i think Mismatch was close to perfect(about 7/10) than this one (about 6/10)....
i love evrythin abt it
wow... i just hope i manage to live upto your expectations guys... now, really all this comments for Part 5 are sooo overwhelming.... i m going to try to make the next part a really nice one.... willl tryy my level best guys..
esp d way u describe evrythin n d way u make ur parts so long 😃plzzz keep dem long like dis in d future!
Lol!
i cnt believe i haven't read mismatch nd identity.... man im missin out!!!
Awww dont worry! Don't read Identity at alll.... no reading that FF pleaseeeeeeeee!😭😭
oh n abt angad....heas meannnn ....poor kripa 😭😭😭i fink his plan will go all rong because hes gna fall in love wid her 😉well i hope he does
it will be sweet wouldn't it?
n awww thats so sweet how he was her idol n stuff til der 1st meeting...hey ejaz khan is my idol i hope d same fing dnt happen 2 me..
it wont hun! It wont... eju is veryyyy sweet....i dnt wna meet ejaz khan no more no, i am sure ejuuu will prove to be a veryy delightful person... 😆😆😆lol jk
cept d only difference between me n kripa is dat i dnt tlk 2 his pic
hehehehehehe! hehehe 😆crazy woman but i love her innocenceeee
n in one part u mentioned abt shilpa shetty or sumthin....so im guessindat da girl who angad was yellin at it was all actin??? dey were shootin for a movie?
Hehehehehe..... hun, i love your idea of shooting for a movie, now if only i knew about that before.... god, i love this idea off shooting for a movie, but no yaar it wasn't a movie... Angad Khanna dates celebrities & the girl (Ana) is also a celebrity... now, wouldn't it be sweet if he falls for a normal ordinary girl next door type of person Kripa Sharma? 😛
write bk soon
sorry hun.... the past week has been soo hectic that i barely managed to take a few mins out.... i hope you are doing fine... just loved reading your comment!!!
mwahz xxx

Originally posted by: griffinmonster

👏i m just at loss of words
u r an incredible write plz carry on i just loved all of the parts its just so beautiful the way u write
keep it up heyyyyy thanks griffy (can i call you that?) will definitely try my level best on the next few parts....👏oh & i m in the process of looking for the right pics... as soon as i find all i will request you for a banner.... i just LOVE your banners....

Originally posted by: goldi2

lol like i told u iwould im comenting again yeeeeeeeeeeee! lol first of all i wanna eat Mexican food lol! lol!! i've alwasy "heared" bout it but never actuly tried it.. im not a fancy restranut type of person lol.. WAIT.. i LUv Taco Bell!1 is that mexican though?? I have noooo idea! lol u see i have absolute no knowledge bout Mexico excpet the cow boy stuff yessss... lol..i read a book about them lol lol.. hehehe the cow boy in the book sounded CUTE LOL LOL! lol hehehe and he was like 14 or sumtin din't you wish he existed in reality?:P.. i think lol
i got confused whent he lady came.. and then im like OOO ok lol cus i was like thwere di she xcum from but then im like ooo shes the waiter dude's mother... ahhhh "waiter dude" 😳lol now thats a memory that can never be forgoten
oh oh oh oh telll me about this waiter dude.... sounds reallyyy interesting especially your words after 'now that's a memory that can be forgotten'....
aww and i felt soooooo bad for KRIPA i mean when she was walking away from him cus .. sumthin sumthin his dignity
lol! lol bbut seriously poor girl!!i feel soo bad ffor her STUPID PEOPLE!!bu i was just like 😳when he said she looked pritii when she cried and threw up lol... hmmm that reminds me of sum1 lol o gosh lol i cant belive im actuly thinknig about this!! I wonder whooo...
lol
but u saiid that eveything was ognna be reveled in the next part!!
Not reallyy.. lol...i didnt see nything geting reveled in this part! u lied!!! LOL!
o wait actully u didnt.. or did u lol cus u did say next part.. maybe this was another1 of ur 1/2 parts i really cant keep track of parts lol but i remvebr u teling me that.. lol dont kill me if im wrong:P:P lol
dont kill me b/c you r right!
hehehehe
im bored now
im gonna go eat ice-cream lol
lol! (gets jealous that you get to eat a ice-cream & here i m stuck w/ a fever, throat infection & cold.... i m soo not getting a icecream for another one month)
bibi
o and continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
and thanks to all the people who pm'd u lol atleast now u know whats gonna happen in the furtue
Yesssssss....... theyyyy reallllyyy helped....lol!! LOL!
SO DONT SCREW UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ohhhh if i do, then feel free to chase me w/ a danda!
lol
lol!
ur dooing really really good
yikess (is there even such a word?)... with IDentitiy im like in love wiht after readint that part i read today how can you possibly love it??? I messed up that FF big time man.. lol
soo keep wrintg the way u do and DONT CHANGE unless its for the good lol
lol!

bii now
i relly wanna go eat that ice-cream
so did you have your icecream? Which flavour?
bii

Originally posted by: pooja1221

aww... angad's cho chweet! Yess he does sound sweet... i jus hope he isn't actin so dat he'll make her miserable later! Hmmm... *gives a evil smile* keep up the awesome work!!! Thank youuuu Pooja! 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: erier101

omg, I finally get time to comment!! So sorry man!! Hun dont beee sorry!! I have been real busy i can understand.... dont yaa worry about not commenting...…a lot going on… news flash: we lost the competition!! Oh my god! There were 21 teams, and we were so excited when we passed the first round and were a part of the top 4 teams! That is good! Congrats! And then, just like last year, we lost to the same team, this time by 25 points!! Oh noooo It sucked!! yesss I was mourning over it yesterday, all day, but im just gonna let bygones be bygones, my teacher told me to forget it, and that's what I am gonna do yes, you have tooo.... "There is no use crying over spilled (split?) milk!" absolutely...

It was just that, I felt that I should have done better and listened to all my team mates because I was the captain, and it was my duty to answer the questions correct

dont think over it jaan... the more you think the more painful it will be... just forget it...!! If I would have given the correct answer to one toss-up, we would have gotten a bonus, and if we had gotten the bonus, we could have tied, and gotten another chance!! Yess... that would have been reallyyyy sweet! UGH yes...!! (another thing I found pretty darn sad, but hilarious at the same time was when they asked us who the villain against spiderman will be in Spiderman 3, my team didn't remember, but since out coach told us to always give an answer, even if we aren't sure if its right, and I said "Evil Spiderman" i dont blame you for saying that answer... you din't know it, so in such cases we tend to say such things.... it was so hilarious, the judges were laughing their a** off! Its reallyyy not that funny... besides, you can never laugh over someone's loss.... 😆)

And the stupid coach for the other team was throwing dirty looks our way

ugh, and when we lost, I said something not-so-nice about what should happen to her i can understand..., and then… like my friends said….karma oh yes..... I lost my iPod !! oh my god! Madiha, i hope you have found it now... if not pretend its around or something... Plz pray that I find it soon, my parents will kill me if they find out!! Well, i hope they dont figure out that you have lost your ipod... but, eventually do inform me... maybe later.. Okies, now I am gonna stop talking about this (will discuss details later noooo man.... you still din't give me too many details yet... ;)) and talk about the part!!

K, so, the previous parts were fab… I was just going wow through the whole thing…. Angad was her idol?!

Yup! That is just plain sad… yess... she trusted her idol so much, and was so expectant about meeting him! I really have a feeling that he isn't bad hmmmm, i do hope sooo tooo......, she just jumped to conclusions or something, she didn't hear him out. I also don't think that he would succeed in his original plan! He will become too nice for that, and won't be that cold-hearted! Its hard to make a man go from cold –hearted to plain nice.... Actually, in reality i doubt it is possible at alll...

I loved how you gave the little thing about the scene at the market or something, when Kripa is fighting with the grocery dude, and then he charges so much for the cauliflower and stuff when he sees richy-rich Angad!!

ppl r veryyy greedy.. That was so funny, I was lmao!! Lol...

I actually was pretty dam* shocked when I read this part, like, angad's attitude in it!

I knowww sudden change eh? he actually seemed so nice and all yeahhhh, that it made me think of the story and stuff that I've mentioned above^^. I really hope that him being nice is actually all coming from the bottom of his heart that willll be just sweetttttttt.... But then he will never come close to Shahid from Vivah... like, seriously the whole conversation w/ Josh in Part 3 was just horrible... and is a reflex. I don't wanttt it to be to gain her trust because then it means that he is not even close to reconsidering his plan!! Yup!!!!

Another thing: This <ST1:COUNTRY-REGIoNMexico</ST1:COUNTRY-REGIoN thing was so out-of-the-blue it makes me suspicious

lol! I dont blame you for being suspicious...…But I'm lovin it (parapapapa im lovin it, <reminds me of the McDonald's ad!! Hehehehhehe... Lol!>) …. Angad was checking Kripa out!! HAHA!! Loved the description of her from his point of view, pretty, in a unique way, the fact that he had seen prettier girls, but she was more angelic and innocent, and how she made a cheap dress look 10 times better, and how she gave a heavenly look to stuff….it was all so….PERFECT!! you are the second person saying it was perfect.... this was my favourite part as welll.... the vegetable bit & the hug in the end were my fav tid bits!

Man, I just reread it

noooooo nooooo never ever ever reread parts... please noooo, because I didn't comment right after reading it…i will let you get away w/ not commenting maybe just once (i cant believe i m saying this), but dontttt please reread parts.... so this will be a bit longer than expected… ohhhhh my god, i love your long comments man......... i reallyyyyy dooo... b/c you describe exactly which bits you liked & that girl reallyyyyy helps....lol….so here I go… LOVED how Kripa described Angad to the little boy, she made him sound so handsome, that he said "Wow, I didn't know I was that good lol" and Kripa realizing that the young boy was checking her out!! LOL!!!

What the heck man???

I knew you would say that! She didn't get her iced tea!! Lol!! She has to do everything the boss tells her to do??? GRRRRR!!! I WANT ICED TEA!! I loveeee iced tea sameee especially lemon flavour!, man, I gotta go tell my dad to buy me some peach iced tea i never had that peach flavour before... i m too happy w/ lemon to go for any other flavour...!! (am obsessed with Snapple :P)

LMFAO!! Angad told the lady that they were married, and then when he mentioned the part about praying for their little kid, I was literally ROTFLMAO!!

Lol... okay, i kinda found it a bit tooo muchhhh...My mom was right behind me and she was like, what is so funny, that you keep on smiling and minimizing the window when I am looking? Lol lol lol lol... I was like, ahem, nothinggggg….😉 hehehehehehe

Aw man, that thing about him marrying her buffalo chachi, was such a rude insult!! That stupid monkey

okayyyy that's it stupid monkey is sooo going in the next part... kripa is definitely pissed off at him & she is for sure going to call him stupid monkey!….but he called her chachi a buffalo😆 😆

"The rest of the journey to the airport went quite peacefully." Thank goodness!! 😆😳It was so sad about how Kripa felt bad about hanging around Angad because he was all rich and stuff

yess... i have to give credit for someone about it.... she asked me to keep going w/ the class difference..., and she looked different..😭But I cant believe he went to the ladies bathroom!! [:))] See, that's the guy I want, a guy that has guts like that!! Lol...

Some teenagers can be so stupid!!

Ohhh veryyyy Girls, especially, I mean what is with the giggling!!😕 Okay, giggling should honestly be banned! I reallyyy feel that...I just wanna strangle them when they laugh continuously for a sarcastic remark, corny joke, or no reason at all!! I agree w/ you... i feel the same... its not like they shouldn't laugh at all, but they really shouldn't laugh at the cost of someone's respect.... i have seen guys like this tooo... this close friend of mine always used to laugh over this other guy... he used to tell me things about the other guy (how stupid he was & stuff) & at times even i found things highly amusing & i would laugh over it only to later feel bad over it... i really disliked this quality in my friend...i told it to him once & he did slow down over it, but still he would tell me 'if the guy is on purpose becoming stupid, its not like we can do anything & if we can laugh over it... we might as well...'😡Its like, can you please shut up, before I do it for you? LOL!!! LOL!! 😆So silly and stupid!- I agree with Angad on this one…

Guys can be a bit more mature in these things, except sometimes teenaged guys get a bit too mature!!

LOL! Guys usually think wisely... they use their brain... but, you know some guys can be veryyy well influenced by the girls!🤢 I would know, having spent so much time with my friends, and all these other guys at school!! They can get a bit disgusting!! (Well, okay, really sick and digusting!!) lolll

K, I am getting carried away once again

i love it whennn you get carried away...!! I loved the little hug thing!! It was so cute and adorable!!😳 Its really hard to find someone to hug like that, a hug which provides such security and comfort, and isn't forced!! And I agree with Angad on another thing—I hate seeing people cry!! Even though I do it as well, sometimes for no reasons (weird and creepy, I know!)

Its no use to waste tears, crying isn't always the cure for things, facing it helps better than just crying over it!! 😊

So yea, here is my comment, wow, its pretty long, I just realized that… well, enjoy reading it…. and now we will be getting another long part I hope!!

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉Cont Soon!

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P.S – Why does Kripa keep on throwing up?😕 Is she ok??

Yes, she is fine don't worry...Was it just the surroundings or something, maybe, Angad forcing her to eat that food when she only wanted iced tea?? Hope it isn't anything too big or serious!! Lol, imagine if she is pregnant w/ Prithvi's kid?

P.S.S- Sorry, didn't get a chance to pm the concept thing to you, I think it's a bit late for that… is it? I think you have it planned out, are getting the gist of it…. it seems that way from the part! If you still need a concept, then tell me, ill write one out and pm it to you!!

Thankssssssssssssssssssss Madzzz!😳

P.S.S.S- "If ever by chance you spot your high school teacher in a store the first thing you do is run away crashing into people, and run as if your life depends on it, only because you do not want to say hi" What was thattt all about???!! Lol!!

Lol! Shhhh.... lets just keep this a secret between you & me...😆Was it just some random thought? Nope... (Randomness is totally my thing...ask Mansi😉....orr...if you read the though boxes in ROMH, those are actually all my thoughts, well duh, anyways, they are all gonna be so random, you have noo ideaa yes...😆) My teacher just said the exact same thing yesterday….creepy…he was all like, when you guys graduate, don't come back to school, hang around here, or something, its just stupid, I hate it. and I was like, I am still gonna come for service hours, if you like it or not. Hehehehehe! LOL!

Okay, Okay, am seriously gonna stop now and go watch Dhoom, I never watched the first one, so decided to watch it. Come on Yahoo so we can talk, mansi and I want to have that conference thing on Monday!!

Madz, i loved talking to you & man....

<3

Madiha😳

Originally posted by: armaghan0

awsome part Thanks! after reading the magnificent i read the marvellously descriptive part of madiha lol! both r simply exquisite 😆well priview seems a bit suspicious angads not planning to hurt poor kripa or somethings fishy anyways con asap

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏awesome dear well writen Thanks Monika! 👏👏

Originally posted by: goldi2

😆can i kill u now?? Nope! lol soo wat was ur address... ?? have i gone mad to give it to you? 😆lol no really where on earth r u!!! Awww sorry jaan... its either univ work or ff's – i really have no life! its been like FOREVER!!! tommaorw i have to go to my cousin's daughter's 2nd b-day party in the eavening soo i wont be home!!
and if u post the part then.. then when will i read it like tuesday... that too AFter school!!!!!! omg thats like centeries away1!!!
Hehehehehe!!!! u have no clue how bored u have made me lol i tried cooking for gods sake!! and all i ended up with is a messed ktichen which i refuse to touch and soar stomach!! Lol! Why didn't you take a picture of it??????? I would love to see it!!! lol and my poor daddy was all like "aww mere bete ne paarata banaiya hai! Hehehehehe!" lol and u should've seen his face when he acctully saw it hahaha hahahaha! lol and he still had some!! lol awwwww hehehe that was fun lol lol i can imaginee... i tried making rotis when my mom went on vacation, and god my dad would be like "beta, you have improved a lot.... reallyyy nice chappatis, but the minute he had eat it..he would make a face.. hehehehehe! Parathas are much easier than rotis, try your hand at rotis & you will cryyy! except now.. my stomch hurts lol lol!.. i dont think it was well cooked hehehehehehe hehehehehehe lol i tried cooking it lol but it was starting to burn so, you took it away quickly??? ... i think it was a little toooooooo thick yes, even i m experiences in making super thick chappatis...and i think i made it wrong as welll... i was checking out how to ACCTULLY make1 and ur appost to take tooo pieces of roti's and put them together.. or sumthin lol i just made a took a round piece of dough first make the dough soft reee.. play around w/ it – imagine its play dough! and mixed everything in it lol NOT the best way to make it... and yuck it took me 3 hours to tkae the dough off of my hands i mean seriously wats up with that!! Hehehehehehe... threee hours????lol owwwwwwwwwwww!lol my stomch still hurting!!!!! Awwwwwwwwwwwww!!! gosh stupid thing!! lol and i think u have sumthing to do with it!! Huh?????see.. if u had posted the part i would've been happy and not bored hmph! Not fair you r blaming me again!!!! This is unfairrr!.. but see i got bored and then hungry.. lol! lol and then i started craving for desi food lol and my moms gone to sum party with my siss.. brother is at work i was to be gooing shopping iwth my firned but she had sum shit gooin on soo she couldnt cum!! BASICALLY i was home alone soo i had to make sumthin on my own lol which is when this entire mess started lol .. soo u did have sumthin to doo with it!! Hehehehehehehe! God, job you are blaming meee noww... you are in troubleee hina jaan!
now before sumthin else happens post the next part ASAP!!!!!
LOLLL! Tell me what else happened since i dint post a part!

Originally posted by: mansi1219

hina hun... i just wanted to say that.. u r the cutest person ever! I agreeeee w/ Mansiiiiiiii!!!... ur soo sweet with the comments.. lol.. u post ur life on here she does doesn't she??.. its nice to kno about it..

ok me done..

mansi

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Originally posted by: goldi2

hahahahaha well u see i was embarased like x3!! lol cus see.. ur comment did most of it but hten i had 2 other very valid reason.. as u probably can tell im a very bad speller HEHEHEEHE! lol soo he asks.. me sumthin and i reply lol and then i was like .. i think i spelt that wrong and hes like YES u did lol and i was like jeee u dont have to be that honest lol!! Heheheheheee you said that???? Girl, you have some GUTS! and then the second thing was like ok im talking to this gril.. who i thought was Maria and i have been tlaking to her for lkiek 3 days in a row and eveyrhitng lol and then we came ot this point when shes like ooo ur soo lucky i never get to be home alone! and im like ... 😕wat?? im like but u said ur moms always wroking soo ur moslty alone.. and shes like WAT?? i never said that and im like yaa u fully did we were stting in tacobell having lunch and u told me rember? and shes like wat i never went to taco bell with u!! and im like Mariya?? wats wrong with u have u lost ur memory cells ehehehehehehehe! or sumthin like that and shes like MAYIA???? im monica hahahahahahahahhahahahaha ***dies laughing*** hina you r just hilarioussss!! lol hahaahhaah soo basically i thought it was maryia but it was monica lol .. soo that was really embarassing lol soo right after that moment i read ur coment LOL! lol and i liek choke on my water lol!! and when im embaraseed.. shy... or w.e lol my cheeks go RED lol soo my dads walking by and hes like giving me that look.. hina.. u ok?? lol hahaha i just hide my face in my glase lol "pertending" to drink heheheheehe lol goshish wat a moment lol lol! You describe things veryyyyyyy nicelyyy Hina!

hahahahaha

Originally posted by: goldi2

well... lol hmm.. im surpised lol very actuly!!! lol like firsti thought salonii was the crazy1 areeee now you have made my name as saloni!! Uffff....lol but then mansi like SHOCKED me lol hahahaha i cant belvie u guys read my coments!!! Oh yesss we do! And, i bet there are so many others who do it as welll in fact i bet ya your comments r more in demand than this FF! Hehehehe hain na mansi & madz???....lol i was tellin my frined lol and shes like hinu baby ur loved all over the world awwwwwwwwwwww that is soooooo trueee! You r friend is absolutely right...lmoa lol hahahahaha gosh lol like seriosuly u peoploe like amze me and this reminds me when r u planing to conintue revolutions of my heart????!!!???? Yesss madz stop being such a bum! lol seriosuly i have this other finred named Arlina and shes in love with ur story i seee that, even i m in love w/ her ROMH as welll! i see her scine class and thats all she talks about lol!! shes not a member in this forum she jsut reads revolution of my heart lol and she LUVES it!! lol soo if u murders me i'll murder u seriosuly lol omg lol this forum is serisouly gonna send me to jail!! Lol! god knows how many people im planing to murder starting with U MISI!!

lol

im joking i wont kill u lol jales seems soo scary YIKES!! even thinking about it freaks me out lol how can 1 live all alone?? lol u know im a big scary cat lol once i was home alone and i was alll the way upstairs and thats like really far away from down stairs lol and no1 was home... and i was home alone and i was in my bathroom listning to my ipod!! lol and then it went out of batery soo it was DEAD silent in the house and the freezer was making ice.. or sumthing and u know how it cose zooooooooooooooooooooozozozoz lol and i got FREAKED!! Hehehehehehe! so like i sat upstairs in my bathroom for like 30 and i wa slike FROZEN!! i was like if i move wat if sum1 cumes upstairs and kill sme i was like evn if sum1 is sneaking into my house they'll take everything and leave lol soo i was thinking when r the gonna finnish lol soo after a while i got out of the bathroom and walked ot the phone and i was soo freked i couldnt evenr ember ny1's phone # lol THEN all of a sudden the pohone rang and i picke dit up and it was my frined Ilona!! i was soo happy lol i wa slike omg ilona u saved my life!! Hehehehehe hina you are HILARIOUS! lol and i told her im gonna run down stiars... and u call me in eaxtly 1 minute and if i dont pick up call 911 lol but i ran and i ran and i ran i almost fell down my round staircase awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Heheheheheheheehe lol serisouly sumtimes i wished my house was ordinary lol but at the end i was safe:D lol soo where did this story sumin from?? Lol! lol o yaa see htats why i dont wanna go to jail!! soo DONT force me to kill u cus if i go to jail then i will be sooo creeped i would die honey if you go to jail, we will come to join you – give you some company, in fact to the guards there jail would have never been more pleasanttttttttttttttttt!! lol!! soo u better ocntinue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111 lol u too Solani! Now its SOLANI? hehehehehe!... i think thats how u spell ur so called name lol lol, i see why your parents kept your name Hina! :P :P :P

Hina

Originally posted by: mansi1219

OMG!! both of u are total kids! Lol! really adorable personalities.. but seriously.. we dont want ahem.. sonali... *cough cough* to get mad now, why would i get mad????.. i think hse wud be more entertained.. I am.... I remember the next day when I came on IF, and saw almost five whole pages had filled up i almost fell down from my chairrr...but still.. lol..

Originally posted by: *guesswho*

oh gosh! so we finally get to see what is that fart-brain up to?? Fart brain??? Hehehehe, i like your title to Angad! what is wrong with him...he's yelling the one minute, kicking girl stall next and huggin the "girl he hates" lol! the last...boys are so complicated (well atleast this one i think all the boys are complicated!)...atleast thank god that she is far away from the 'well-fed' women lol! in her house...anyhoo can't wait to read about the girl and his 'intentions'... well I kinda have an idea...

Originally posted by: Tiaz

hey...ure fan-fic is simply awesome... Thank you! its soooooo good...but to make it even better...plz continue soon... I will......its so addicting....plz continue soon with long parts... aren't we demanding for more now? lol thanks..

Originally posted by: AK_KYPH

hey Nice story, very different and good Thank youuu!.

Originally posted by: rimsibani

hey...wen r ay gonna con????.....its been soooooooo longgggg.....Sorry jaan blame all univ for the crazy work they put on my shoulders.....

Originally posted by: goldi2

this is completly NOT fair i mean how can u just stop writing like this!! LOL!!!! i dont know why ur not posting ny parts... but w.e it is i just hope u havtn lost intrest!!!:p:p:p i mean cum on not this story!! lol i like this story!!! u kno wat.. if u r loosin intrest how bout u continue Identity untill then.. and then cum back to this?? I like your idea! maybe u'll get ur intrest back.. if thats the reason OO wait!! i hope ur not sick i wasn't at that time, but soon i fell sick!!!! Ughhhh..... cus then thats REALLY bad u wont have the energy... hmm how bout u just tell me wat the real case is lol soo i can stop guessing like this lol lol!

let me know ASAP!!

Hina 😛

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

yay cant wait 😛Gud luck on ur finals 👍🏼i hope u stay well 2 Thanks Rutu!!!!!!!!!! 😳

Originally posted by: pooja1221

😛awesome and good luck on your finalss Thankssss poojaa! 👍🏼

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Originally posted by: pooja1221

yay! don't take too long though! Sorryy for all the delay dear! i'll be waiting 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

awwwww..... ur not continuing today!!! its ok... i guess u must b too
tired!!! i dunt really like hockey, but i guess ur a big fan of hockey!!! I am, but it sucks Leafs didn't make it to the play offs this year all due to NY Islanders! Ahhh....

i agree with u Sonali... i LOVE tht FF... it is soooooo ROMANTIC!!! 😳
Yes, i LOVE Killing me softlyyyyyyyyyyyy!

p.s. r u gonna continue tomorrow??? 😳

Originally posted by: goldi2

lol hahahahaha u know.. i never ended up cleaning my room at the end lol! I never do as well!.. lol my mother is gonna KILL me!!my mom is going to do that to me today... lol but im sure my dad will save me in my case even that won't work... .. lol hahaha he alwasy does:D:D:D plus i dont htink i'll have time to clean tommarow either.. since i have to go out with my brother for lunch in the afternoon awwww! lol and i wont be up before 12 or so and when i'll get back from our lunch i'll be hoping to read the next part which u better have posted lol and lol u think im sweet hahahaha wow thats the first most of my frined either think im wierd or a complete freak What is wrong with them???? You are seriously the most sweetest, cutest person i have ever met.... lol seriosuly man... i mean today i spen more then 30 minutes talking to 1 of my frineds who hats talkni on the the phone lol and all i did was laugh.. hehehehehehehehe! (now you are tempting me to give you my number) and now i cant even rember wat i was laughin at lol! lol u knwo laughing is a good thing right?? Yes, i hear that everyday! hahaha u know laughing reminds me lol once i coudnt stop laughin and my teacher hahahaha he was soo funny lol! lol and he was jamaicin so he had an acceint lol this is was he said to me "u lof like a bounch ov idiohts Hehehehehheeheheh! That was harsh, but the way you wrote it ---- its hilarioussssssssss!" lol hahaha try pernouncin it the way i wrote it lol he was hillariouse and he was like the BEST teacher ever lol he hated me soo much once u know wat i did i like stole the unit math test right out of his hand awwwwwwww mannnnn! lol but see im nice i gave it back by the end of the day lol god i was soo bad.. but not badder then i was in grade..6 i was REALLY bad lollol! and then grade 7 went by soo wierd lol i was stuck in class with only 1 girl 2 inclusing me and we both HATED each other!! lol it was fun entertainment for the guy lol!!! lol u should've seen us fighting o gosh it was crazy awwwww man why don't you tape it or something????????? loll i'll shut up since im talkin to u nyways lol never everrrr shut up samjhi tum?????
just post the part tommarow:D:D i'll be waiting:D lol for SURE:D


hina

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

awesome..Thanks!!!! .i just went through your old ff mismatch and that made me smile awwwwww! I am glad it did! , i dont know why but i feel as if that girl whos said she was pregnant with angads child is telling a lie. Yes she is.....or maybe something else...but seriously....kripa shouldnt go weak at angads feet ....if he is using her....she should oppose him..I agreee w/ you completely! If I was in her place, now if only I was in her place...........awesome part Thanksss for replying proud_2_b_myself especially when mismatch is finished!! I really appreciate the fact that you still posted!!! and please continue soon

Thanks a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttt guys for your lovely commentss!!! 🤗I received a lot of comments for this part 😃 & they brought a hugeeee smile on my faceeeee!!!!!!!! Do keep the comments cominggggggg! Theyyyy help me out a lot 😳.. I owee you guys a lot!

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+ Part 6 A –A Fortunate Escape +

"Love makes you do the most mysterious things..."

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan

She walked out of the shower, and reached out for the towel hanging on the side. She wiped the tiny drops of water from her legs first and then proceeded to the top. Tying one of the towels on top of her head, and wrapping her self in another white towel she opened the door.

Humming a tune, she walked out to lift her clothes laid out on the bed. Not at all pleased with the sight of her clothes she made a face. The purple sleeveless top, which looked like a petticoat, except a very short one reaching up to her waist. Maybe this was called a "tank top", then lifting the pretty pink spring coat, which would easily hide the tank top, and reached nicely up to her knees she stood in front of the mirror humming a tune again, as she stared at her reflection.

"I am glad you are out"

The sudden voice freaked her out, dropping the jacket and the top she turned around quickly.

Her sudden movement forced the man in front of her to look up. She noticed him looking at her body, feeling suddenly uncomfortable she wrapped her arms around her self, and stared down at the floor cursing her self for not paying attention. She obviously was so lost in her own world singing out loud that she had failed to notice his presence in the room.

"Relax," he said putting his hands in front, "I just came back to get my wallet" lifting his wallet from the side he looked up at her again, but his eyes again lingered to her body.

She was again feeling so uncomfortable under his gaze. Especially, the look in his eyes as he looked at her body – it was so greedy, there was definitely some sort of fire in his eyes, which she could not quite make out. But, one thing was sure she did not like that greedy look in his eyes at all, it highly resembled the look people get when they see gold or money scattered on the floor, and she did not like to think she was some sort of pricey possession.

He understood her uncomfortable look waving his hand he turned around to walk out, while she sighed, and turned around to wipe her hair, but when he came back saying, "Kripa," she freaked out again and dropped the towel on the floor.

The whole pile of hair sitting on her head hiding beneath the towel, now tumbled out and fell on her face. Cursing her hair she turned around saying, "What?" annoyed with him.

"Ah" he said scratching his head and looking away embarrassed, "your cheeks" he answered a moment later, as he looked back at her

"my cheeks?" she said unbelievably her hand immediately went up to them, "what about my cheeks?"

His presence was making her loose her sanity. She completely forgot about the mirror in front of her.

The guy was starting to make her really nervous with his nice behavior.

She tried to believe it was a dream. A very beautiful dream, and constantly pinched her self, except when she realized it was real. It felt so strange. She literally felt butterflies in her stomach, as she thought about his nice side, which was silly.

"Something is on them," he said, as his hands slipped in his pocket. At his words she touched her cheeks, not feeling anything she said, "where?"

"Right there" he said pointing to the left, she made a face not understanding where, and replied, "where?"

Giving a frustrated look he immediately walked towards her, while her heart started beating quickly, and she held her breath with his closeness. He had barely touched her cheeks when she started walking backwards, and almost fell forward stumbling on something, when he caught her by the waist and managed to steady her.

Breathing hard she pushed his arm away, and stood to the side. God, this man was making her very nervous. Especially his nice behaviour was freaking her out. It was making her damn nervous.

"Are you always this clumsy Kripa? Or just nervous around me?" he asked smirking

Pulling her arm roughly out of his hold she made a face and yelled, "Shut up!".

Holding her face in his palms, and pulling her closer he rubbed something from the side, which she could swear she hadn't even felt – maybe it was just due to his touch on her cheeks, which had burnt her literally.

"Now that's better," he said smiling. Their eyes met, something was definitely different Kripa could sense it.

Why was it so hard for her mind to accept his flaws? Why did her mind always justify his actions?

"would you please do the honour of leaving the room Prince Angad" she found her self asking. His presence in the room was making her really uncomfortable.

"sure," he replied bowing, "my highness" with a wink

"ANGAD!" she screamed when he showed no signs of movement. Something was definitely wrong with this man. Where was the angry person in this guy? Where was that guy with the ego who was ready to murder her for insulting him?

He smiled, and looked up.

"And, what is so funny now?" she yelled placing her hands on her hips

"you......aa" he started, "You look really bad when you are angry", which forced her to stamp her feet or at least she pretended out to be angry and yell out, "ANGAD!" again in frustration.

The guy standing in front of her was an idiot, who would just search for an opportunity to tease her, he was annoying, stupid, a jerk, but nice. He was nice. Like, really nice.

Or was that a dream?

She was so confused now between her dreams and the reality. Since, her dreams usually had the nice Angad, but now the reality also had a nice Angad. She had pinched her self so many times since she just could not believe such a drastic change in this guy. No one changed within a week, but this guy did.

"Angad, get out now or I am calling the security" she said walking in front, and trying to push him

"You won't dare to," he said looking serious all of sudden

"Oh try me" she replied staring at the floor, as she tried to push him, except when he was so strong in front of her that she nearly slipped in her attempt to push him, the towel wrapped around her body loosened.

But, Angad caught it in the nick of time saving it from loosening further, and tied it, almost tickling her, as he did it.

She blushed again. The so-called "anger" flew down the window only to be replaced with shyness again.

God, she had to stop getting shy & learn to be bold. Yes, that would be good – pretending to be all "bold". She would use it later perhaps once they reached Mexico.

"Kripa, why do you always turn red?" said Angad coming closer; looking down she blushed again, as she felt his gaze on her.

'Control Kripa, learn to control your mind' said a tiny voice inside her head, 'remember he has his usual one night flings or maximum a week flings.... he is pretending to be nice just for that'

"Shut up Angad," she replied pushing him and this time she managed to push him nicely.

He pretended to be hurt, and caught hold of her making a loud scream.

"ANGAD, what will people say? Just shut up!" she yelled trying to move

"I don't care about people" he said in pain, "you are such a COW!"

"ANGAD" she yelled again turning red this time for entirely different reasons

"Hun, I get it that you have accepted me as husband, no wonder you call me 'Angad' all the time, seriously its so obvious you LOVE me"

"Cheee Love & you! No wayy" she said making a face, "In fact a chimpanzee looks much more cuter than you"

"You mean Josh!"

"ANGAD" She said hitting him, "that is very rude"

"And, what are you my mom to teach me manners?" he asked

"Noo------" she started, but before she could complete he said, "Actually, you would fit the frame of a mommy, since you are so fat – there is already that buffalo chachi of yours along with her daughter & now you resemble a cow" as he pushed her to the side

"What did you call me?" she said getting up

"COW" he said like a little kid, except the only thing he didn't do was make a face, and add fingers to provoke her

Kripa was already furious, "I am not letting you get away with another one of your insult," she said walking towards him.

"What are you going to do Kripa?" he asked smirking, "If my infinite wisdom serves me right cows don't run"

"Just wait till I catch you Mr. Khanna," said Kripa lifting a pillow from the side

She started throwing pillows at him.

"Kripa," he yelled trying to dodge them, "I was just kidding... now, will you please stop this?"

"No," she yelled lifting the pillows, and throwing them again, except he caught some, and started to throw them back at her.

"Ha! You can't get me" she replied like a little kid running around he threw them again – this time clearly with the intention to knock her off, and she did.

In her attempt to dodge around one of the pillows hit her stomach, and knocked her off balance.

She fell on the floor badly hurting her back, "Awww" she yelped in pain

"oh my god Kripa" he said pretending, which she noticed, "Are you alright?"

"Shut up Angad"

"Sweety, have you ever seen COWS in Wrestling?" to that remark of his a pillow was thrown at him roughly

"You are so PAYING BACK Khanna" she yelled

Lifting all the pillows she threw them all at once, coming in front she hit him on the face constantly with the pillows, which were now all torn, and fell apart – the feathers landed everywhere, while Angad moved backwards slipping on a bench, and falling on the floor.

Kripa was now competing for the title of best female wrestler she almost sat on his stomach, and continued to hit him with the pillows with all her strength when two things happened.

The towel she had wrapped around her body loosened, and the door opened at the same time.

Kripa Sharma awoke with a start breathing hard.

It was a dream. Only a dream.

What followed next was disappointment.

****


After changing in a black pant, along with a thin cotton t-shirt, and a purple jacket hiding the t-shirt and reaching her thighs Kripa walked out of the washroom.

She noticed Josh was busy checking him self in the mirror setting his hair straight. It was funny. Weren't girls the one who spent all their time in front of the mirror? Guys never cared about their looks right or was it just some phrase?

The way he was setting his hair straight made her smile he would make an ideal girl. Smiling she made her way near him and stood next to him in the mirror.

He saw her appear next to him. His mouth fell open, as he took in her appearance.

Her hair was naturally brown he noted. Falling nicely down till her waist curling nicely at the ends, but straight from the top. She looked beautiful.

Now, this was an excellent metamorphosis!

She no longer resembled the simple & vulnerable Indian girl. She looked so chic and modern with the t-shirt hidden by the jacket, those black pants made her legs appear longer – legs any girl would die for & those pencil heels set her high giving her an air of elegance and confidence.

"How do I look?" she asked like a little girl

"Very Very beautiful" he replied with a smile holding her shoulders.

She blushed at his words, and immediately lowered her eyes.

"Ah!" said Josh holding her chin, and lifting it up, "now, my dear don't you do that. This is the 21st century you don't see too many girls, who are shy and stuff. Girls these days are highly modern with a broad mind, these days guys no longer hold power over any girl. And, Kripa my dear you need to learn to be strong" he said touching her heart, "you are weak Kripa, I have seen you break down at the silliest things."

She looked at him quite not liking his words.

He walked up to the window leaving her hold, and looked outside, "you haven't seen anything yet Kripa, not even the start of the storm, which I am afraid if it comes will carry you away." Coming back to his senses he walked up to her, and put a hand on her shoulder, "Remember girl no one is worth your tears and never let any one see your tears. It shows you are weak. No matter what pretend to be strong, even if you break down. The world is cruel, my dear, there are many nasty people out there, and you need to gather any ounce of energy inside you to fight with them"

She nodded her head. Tears came in her eyes, as she was touched with his concern and protectiveness. He was truly her brother. The brother she never had.

"Now, why are you crying?" he yelled, lifting her chin.

She wiped the tears, laughing she replied, "you are so sweet Josh" as she hugged him. He held her in his arms trying to pat her hair.

"Listen Kripa" he said breaking the hug, and holding her shoulders, "I have to discuss something really important with you"

"What is it?" she asked sounding worried, "Are you alright?"

Silence.

"You are getting too friendly with Angad," he said calmly looking at her face. He noticed she did not quite understand his words – she looked very confused.

"What do you mean?" she asked not quite liking his statement

"May I remind you about your unpleasant encounter with Angad Khanna?" he asked looking at her, but a second later he regretted his words, as he heard her say, "How do you know about that?"

"You told me remember?" he said trying to sound realistic

"Really?" she frowned, "I did?"

"Yes. How else do you think I would know?" he replied

"hmm" she replied thinking, "You have a point"

"Okay, so now going back to the original point. Kripa, you are getting extremely friendly with the guy, and from what I can see quite smitten by him" he said observing her

"WHAT?" she screamed or at least pretended to. The truth was that her heart sank when she realized that he knew her "secret" now, and what better way than to scream & pretend to be angry to hide the real feelings.

"Okay maybe my observation is wrong, but would you care to explain the words you murmur when you are asleep?" he replied

"What words?" she asked immediately frightened

"I walked in the room when you were asleep, and I heard you mutter something about Angad. It felt like you were yelling & hitting him" Josh stated

"What are you talking about?" she asked, though a tiny smile was starting to appear on the corners of her mouth. She was very bad at hiding things.

"O you know girl" he replied, "I can see it on your face"

"Whatever" she said

"You are changing Kripa." He murmured not liking it one bit, "Where is that girl who hated Angad? You are actually considering him to be your friend"

"And, why are you so eager to make me hate him Josh?"

She noticed Josh hesitate for a second.

"Because, I know him Kripa," he said, "I know the guy better than you. And, if there is one thing about Angad Khanna you should know its that he has a big fat ego. He feels everyone should do everything as per he wishes. There is no doubt that he was born with a silver spoon in his mouth, but he has built on the riches he already inherited.

He cannot feel anything – the only thing I have seen him feel is anger. I have seen him from childhood, and he has never cared for anyone, because that's the way he has been brought up. I am not trying to justify his actions or anything, but you should be aware that Angad Khanna does not care about anyone, the guy has no friends, no girl friends, nothing. He is a man, who works on his own.

So, if you think your relationship with Angad is changing, then you are highly mistaken. When you go against him you are in trouble, big trouble, he never forgives anyone, the guy holds big time grudges, and takes revenge. I have never seen him stop for anything. Even, if you beg it won't be good enough for him. Angad is not the forgiving type, he is not, just bear it in mind. And, be careful"

"But, Josh, how can someone be all angry?" replied Kripa, "I mean everyone changes with time"

"Don't you dare think like that, Kripa!" yelled Josh, "Angad Khanna doesn't change. In these 26 years he has never changed – what makes you think he will change all of a sudden?"

"Am I missing something here?" replied Kripa

"Look Kripa, the only thing you need to know is Angad Khanna is bad. He is a big bad guy!" replied Josh sounding frustrated.

And, he was. He would definitely have to have a little chat with Angad before they left.

****

"The beauty of love lies in doing things unconditionally... it's all about being selfless..."

Angad Khanna strolled out in the silence of the night. He definitely needed a walk to gather all his thoughts.

The important meeting scheduled for tomorrow was now reassigned to another day, due to some unattended baggage, which had delayed the flight for more than 12 hours. In about an hour they would just take off, when they should have reached Mexico by now.

"Do you mind if I join you?" said a very pleasant voice.

Turning around he found him self facing an angel. Kripa Sharma looked like an angel in that black pant and long purple jacket reaching up to her thighs. Despite the jacket he could very easily make out the upper half of her body, and those sexy legs clad in that black pant.

"Certainly not," he replied turning around, and casually resting his hands in his pockets.

They walked around in silence.

"I just wanted to say Thanks" she said hesitating, as she looked at him.

If there was one quality of Kripa, which was worth admiring was that she always looked at him when she spoke.

"So you followed me?" he asked with a surprised look on her face

Wrapping her arms around her self, she continued walking, and after a long pause replied, "Yes." there was no point in lying.

"Interesting," he replied smiling, he really wanted to label her a 'stalker', but that would take a back seat for now. He had the gut feeling that she was here for something serious.

"What is it Kripa?" he found him self asking after a while when she made no effort to respond. At his words, she simply looked up, and right then a weird thought struck him.

Kripa would make a beautiful wife. Especially, with her out look right now – she looked elegant, classy & modern. She was a true beauty with brains. What more could a guy wish for?

"Why are you being so nice to me Angad?" she asked finally. The million dollar question, or at least that's what she would like to call it.

He hesitated with her question. It was so sudden that it threw him off completely. She had asked that before, and he had answered it already, but now she was asking it again. Kripa Sharma was suspicious. She was surely not convinced that he was a nice guy. And, he had a feeling she would not let him off easily this time.

He could sense she was in a dilemma here.

"What do you think Kripa?" he found himself asking. She made a cute face at his words, as if she was annoyed by his question. This was another quality of Kripa worth admiring, her expressive personality, she was so expressive, especially her eyes, which emoted everything so beautifully & passionately.

She remained silent with his question for a few seconds, and he gave her full time to come up with an answer.

"I am not sure Angad" she responded openly.

"I don't see anything nice in what I have done so far" he replied smiling

"Well, you did help me in the bathroom yesterday." She replied, "You said some very nice things out there. You really helped me out"

"That wasn't nice" he replied, while Kripa wondered about his definition of nice, "you are my PA, and you threatened me you wouldn't come to Mexico, so I had to be there"

"My goodness do you ever think of anything other than your work?" she teased him

He smiled at her words.

"Why do you think I am the 'dare devil' they call me?"

It was her turn to smile now

"I don't know about what people call you, Angad. Some where my heart says behind this dare devil there is a very nice man. No individual is completely bad, its circumstances, which bring out the bad side of a person."

"Oh don't be too sure Kripa" he answered with a smile

****

After a twelve-hour delay on the night, due to some baggage had been left unattended because of which the dogs had immediately started barking, which had alerted the airport officials who had sent all the passengers out. Experts were called forth to check the baggage, while not a soul could be noticed anywhere the Chatrapati Shivaji Maharaj Airport.

The officials had suspected that the baggage contained some deadly object, which would explode any second – killing everyone.

However, the laughing matter was that the bag had meat wrapped in plastic, which had caused the dogs to bark. Of course, the officials looked like they had been slapped on the face, the passengers were furious since their flight had been delayed. And, to add to their misery more individuals had arrived, so the state of Chatrapati Shivaji Maharaj Airport was a mess with huge line-ups, and people constantly swearing out loud, since there was a huge back log now. It would take two days for things to return to normal.

Kripa Sharma stood happily humming a tune with a brand new backpack, which her friend Josh had lent to her.

"What is in the bag?" questioned Angad, as she handed it to him, since she had to use to washroom, "It's damn heavy"

"Girl Stuff." She responded as she walked away, while Angad was left frowning.

"Good, now that she is gone." Said Josh looking at Angad, "we can talk"

Angad looked at Josh, while holding the heavy backpack, which he could swear, was about 20 kgs. Once Kripa was back, he would make sure he would question how she could hold such a heavy backpack, the girl her self was barely 30 kgs.

"What is your exact intention with Kripa Sharma?" said Josh immediately getting to the point. He couldn't beat around the bush this time, since Kripa would be back any second.

"Intention?" replied Angad with his eyebrow raised.

"Yes."

"This is funny. Kripa asked me a similar question a few hours ago." Angad held Josh's shoulder, "Have you been chatting with little Kripa?"

"Yes." said Josh, "would you care to explain your intentions?"

"I think I have made my intentions clear enough" He replied coolly

"You are just playing with her right?" yelled Josh his hands rolling into a fist "That stupid plan of yours?"

"Playing?"

"You admitted a few days ago about making her pay"

"Now, surely my friend, a girl like Kripa won't fall for any of my traps. She is a smart girl. And, from what I can see she can very well handle her self"

"I don't trust you Angad. There is no doubt that she is a bright young lady, but you and I are both very well aware Kripa is too innocent"

"I think I have made my intentions very clear Josh. And, I don't want to sit around discussing this matter anymore." Replied Angad, "I can already see you are quite touchy about Miss. Sharma"

Before Josh could respond, a uninvited stranger walked in, and wrapped her arms around Angad's back.

"Baby," she said kissing his cheek

Angad Khanna instantly turned around looking furious at the sight that met his eyes. God, wasn't that day enough that this female was back yet again.

"I am sorry baby," she said holding his face in her hands

"Just get lost!" he said pushing her away from him

That's when Kripa walked in humming a tune. She never noticed the girl near Angad she was far too busy staring at her backpack

"Thanks Angad" she said picking up the backpack from the side

"who is that girl Angad?" said the girl looking furious. That's when Kripa noticed this girl wearing a real short top & skirt standing near Angad. The girl appeared familiar.

"It's none of your business" Angad responded, as he picked up his jacket hanging on the side.

"*****" the girl spat walking near Kripa, "so that day was all a drama... you did that to get his attention didn't you?"

And, that's when it hit Kripa. This was the same girl from the signal.

For a second all was lost, as Kripa just stood there unable to believe the words coming out of the girl's mouth.

Only when Josh came by and went, "lets go Kripa," as he pulled her away that her chain of thoughts stopped, and she walked away with him feeling stupid.

****

Sorry for the delay friends... Second half for this part coming up tomorrow! 😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

woah!! a long part! will have fum reading it!! 😃 will comment once ive read!!

yep i had fun!!😆😆 it was a dream????😲 so when she didnt wake up she was iching herself in the dream right??😕 i waswondering why angad was refering to himself as her husband!!

josh is really cute!! he's just lloking out for her!! KRIPA listen to josh!! im getting quite worried now esp when angad said ' don't be too sure kripa'😕😕

so i think kripa's misunderstandings about that girl have kind of cleared!'

will be waiting for part B !!

Edited by bugs_bunny - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 gr8 gr8 part!!! lolz their a second part to it??? ittook me forever to read this one 😆 well its good, i loved it!!!!!!!! you describe it all so well i can picture it all in my mind! cont soon please!

ps-more romanctic AK parts or fighting AK parts i like both 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOWO!!! YAY!!! u continued!!! nd its LOOONG!!! havent read it yet!!! 😳
will read nd edit it later... but i know FOR SURE, it will be PERFECT!!! 😛

*edit*

tht was DEFINATELY better than perfect!!! 👏
👏 i LOVED it!!! 😳 i
CANNOT believe this... they FINALLY have a KINDA romantic moment, nd
it is a DREAM???? i was like, NOOO!!! broke my heart!!! 💔 lol!!! jk!!! i
guess Angad's starting to have little bitty feelings for Kripa!!! tht's cute!!!
nd soon enuff, i THINK he's gonna be in love with her!!! 😳

Josh is such a SWEETHEART!!!! i LOVE his character!!! i have NEVER EVER
loved Josh's character in ANY FF, but in this FF, i LOVE his character!!!
tht's wierd, even in my own FF, i dunt like his character!!! lol!!!

NO!!! Kripa's starting to fall for Angad, no Kripa u CANNOT do tht!!! he
will DESTROY u!!! well... she cant really hear me, can she?? lol!!! anywazz..
lets hope she takes care of herself!!! lol!!! why all of sudden a change in
her dressing style??? is it bcoz of the whole bathroom incident?? anywazz.
the way u described her, i thot she looked pretty gud!!! u have an
AMAZING talent with describing things!!! i LOVE it!!! wht is in her
backpack anywazzz??? nd why does it weigh only 10 kgs lighter than
her??? lol!!! u REALLY need to disclose soon enuff wht is in her backpack!!!
nd u ALSO need to disclose how Prithvi will change evrything?? tht's wht's
got me hooked!!! lol!!!

ok... i have kind of a suggestion.. hope u dont mind!!! can u PLEASE make
Angad jealous??? it's just i LOVE jealous Angad... nd none of the FF's i am
reading have jealous Angad... so i kinda miss jealous Angad!!!
anywazzz... hope u dont mind!!!

ok... now WHO is this chick??? is it Mishti??? if it is, she needs to go jump
off a cliff or sumthing!!!! 😡 is she pregnant or sumthing?? i forgot.. i
have to go check!!! lol!!! WOWO!!! i am going to stop writing now!!! tht's
the LONGEST comment i have EVER written, nd if u get bored, sorry!!! 😳
i'm just too hyper nd CANNOT stop talking!!! lol!!! ohh, nd before i forget,
continue soon!!! 😛

xoxoxo Rutu!!! 🤗




Edited by berkeleygirl818 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
yeah!josh is being protective like agood brother.
plzplzplz ccccccccccccccccccont soon.what is angad upto

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