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Posted: 20 years ago
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Sumayya will put full stops in for you
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Posted: 20 years ago
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the dots are to have a break

disha wakes up and see the time it is 8 clock she get up and goes to have a shower she comes out and go near the dressing table and wear her sindoor and muglsuter she is happy .and then goes to littel tample and prays to god and she has a pooja plate after she has prayed she goes to cook breckfast . dk wakes up and goes to take shower and comes out he is wearing his coat he comes out and go to the table he calls out for one of the servent disha hers him she understands he wants brecfast .she quickly takes the pranta of the pan and take it to dk she puts it on the table dk looks up and see disha he gets happy .he say are you awake disha say i woke up at 8 clock dk say thats why you made brecfast for me thank you she say there now need to say thanks she was going dk holds her hand and say have breackfast with me she goes and sits next to him they both are eating in the same plate disha feels bit uneasy .she stops dk say why are you not eating disha say i am full dk then gets up and wears his coat and say to disha i am going to office disha gets up they both walk up to the door disha stops dk says bye and disha say come back early dk says i will she say i will wait then dk goes disha has a smile on her face .she thinks of cooking a meal for dk when he come home she then goes to her room she thinks of ringing suhas she picks the phone up and then say i will go and met them she puts the phone done she then thinks less cook dinner for dk and then i will go to aai .she goes to kitchen she see around for the stuff she has not got all of them she tells the servent to go to the market and buy the stuff he goes and she goes to dk room and cleans his room she finds drinks bottles she trows the bottel away and she goes in the kitchen and starts to cook .and the servent has bought the stuff she has cook lot of dishs and she has finshed nearly she just has to leave the rice for while she goes and gets ready she is wearing dark blue saree it is see- thru she has and nice naklece and earings matching .she goes to the kitchen she is waiting for the rice to boile dk is back disha does not now dk is back she is takeing the rice of the gas .dk says disha dk goes to disha room but he does not see her there he goes to the hall he does not see her dk sit on the sofe there he could smell nice food he walk up to the kitchen he see disha cooking food .he watch her and then goes up to her and say disha disha looks back she and say dk when did you come he say just now disha say go and freshen up i will set the table dk goes and disha buts everthing on the table dk is coming down there stairs.he comes and sits near the disha disha is serving him she has some aswell dk say to disha thanks for making the lovely dinner they talk and laugh .and then dk say disha what happend to the bottel of wines she say i put them in the bin you promised me that you are not going to drink so they i thought you are not going to drink now more so put them in the bin dk thanks here bye saying you have really changed me for good disha smiles they finshe of there dinner. disha and dk go and sit on the sofia in the hall dk say disha we are going to have my friend around with his wife they will come .he is not a friend he is like my brother i now him since i was a kid he lived next door he and his family were really good people his mam and ma were freinds. so i wanted to now if you are okay with this they will stay here in our house for a while and then they will look for a house he is going to shift his bussinse in here bombay disha say thats alright i don't mind dk disha talk for a while it is late night disha say to dk you are going to office tommorow go to sleep dk say yes i have a very inportant meeting tommorw so i have to wake up early disha gets up and say good night and dk say it aswell they both walk to there rooms disha goes to her room and dk goes to his.

i will write tommorow😊

Edited by TD.FAN - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#23

nice one

keep it up td fan

u have a good talent

keep coming the story

with love

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Yay..I didn't have to read in one breath! 😳

Thanks

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Posted: 20 years ago
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That was great!!!👏

Thanks!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey TD

this is going great👏

keep it up😉

love KP😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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BRILLIAND PLZZZZZZ CONT SOOOOOON😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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i am sorry i will come at night time 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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tat was gud!! wat is with the seperate roms?? plz cont wen u get chance!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😊

disha wakes up and it is sunny out side she gets up from her bed and goes near her window and she could see her garden it has flowers every wear and chairs and a table there is a bench .disha looks the other side and see dk sitting in the car she looks at him the time and she say omg dk has gone she runs out of her room tell she get outside dk has gone she just stands there and looks at the car gone she goes back in and rembers that dk said he has important meeting .she is upset the servent comes and say to disha madam to you want tea disha says no she goes to her room and sits on her bed she is upset has a shower and changes her saree she is wearing a puple saree she is sitting in her room she is getting bord dk is in his office he thinks i have not seen disha in the morning he then picks the phone up and rings disha . disha mobile rings and it is dk she picks it up she is happy she says hello and dk say hello dk say today i never sore you in the morning are you alright disha say yes i walk up and came to the widnow and sore you going tell i came done you were gone h dk say sorry i never sore you and then disha say it okay then taj comes to dk cabin and say sir are you ready for the meeting dk say yes i am coming he then say to disha i am going for a meeting i will talk to you later .disha goes out to the garden and sits on the bench. she is thinking and looking at the flowers and rembering the good days in the house with mammji and dk .and then some one come and taps disha shoulder she looks back and see azuba she gets up and hugs him he to hugs her and say my daughter how are you she say iam fine he say i came to see you disha ask him how is suhas and rano he looks down and say are you not going to make sit disha say yes come with me we will go to my bedroom they get there azuba sits on disha bed disha goes and make tea for him .she comes back and give azuba his tea she then ask azuba about rano and suhas he say ther are okay he then tells disha that i have tell you some thing disha gets tense azuba say suhas and rano both don't like you the talk about you and say you are a murder suhas has told avery one in the house to not let you in boshla house she does not want to see your face disha says what but i never done anything .azuba say i now that but the don't they still think your a murder in there eyes disha say i will tell them azuba say inder said that you are insent but they never belived him disha was going to say some thing but azuba say today you have to promise me that you are not come to boshla house and you are going to stay here with dk and live as his wife i now you love dk and i want you to for get you past and think about your future disha is thinking azuna say i want you to promise me and he puts his hand in front of disha she is thinking azuba say disha she looks at the hand she slowly picks her hand and moves it to azuba hand.he then say i am happy today becuse my disha has today thought about her.disha is happy she has a smile on her face but from in side she is upset she does not show it .dk is looking from out side he is happy to he goes from there and sits in the hall and thinks disha has made promise that she will saty here as my wife i will give her the full right and then azuba and disha come out they see dk siting on the sofa dk see them dk gets up and goes to azuba and live long life dk and disha smiles disha say i go and set the table we will have dinner toghter disha goes and azuba say to dk could i speack to you he say yes they go and sit on the sofs azuba say i wanted to talk to you about disha dk looks at azuba . azuba say i want you to take disha hand and give her the worlds happenies give her rights she has done so much for you she ran away on her wedding day just for your love. dk say i now that i want to give her the full right of a wife and give her the happenies she will stay happy in this house she will have now problems i love her i will do any thing for her and i will promise to give her rights azuba is happy then they hug .disha is standing at the door she is happy dk and azuba see her they smile disha say to them come dinner is ready the all go and sit on the table they talk about disha food after they eat azuba say i have to go now disha and dk get up they all walk to the door azuba say i am happy to see you both like this dk and disha look at each other azuba say to them he say i will come to see you again some other day and say bye.

why are there in diffrent rooms?

becuse i want them to get married and want dk to give disha the full rights

i will write the next part tommorow😊

Edited by TD.FAN - 20 years ago

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