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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok every one next part comeing in a few mins 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww that was sooo sweett!!!

cant wait till next part.. will check this fanfic in couple mins.. lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 6

angad put a pillow under kripas head and then put a blanket over kripa and then put his pillow besides kripa and coverd himself with his own blanket. both went to sleep looking up at the stars

5am usually it was angads habit to wake up at 5am to get ready to train the troops but this moring he didnt wake up. this moring he had a sence of lazyness creep up inside of him so instead he stayed asleep untill 5:30am and as his eyes opened up he relized that he was out side and next he relised a large group of soilders gathered around him and third he relised that kripa was starting to wake up relizeing the samethings as himself

angad and kripa saw about a dozen or so of faces with a delighted look on there face thinking that they got something against there genral that could get him court marshalled because every soilder knows that a genral sleeping with a soilder in a middle of a peace time in war would put you in jail for life.

what made the scean even worse for angad was the fact that last night he didnt bother to change and he was still shirtless

a-this is so not what you think it is

soilder-uh hu realy thats hard to belive

angad turned to look at kripa to see what she thought but it was hard to tell on a count of her face seemed blank

soilder-well, well, well looks like we found the genral in a bit of a fix

another soilder- you see genral khanna for this insident we could have you court marshalled...

soilder-but we desided that what if we end up getting an even tuffer genral then you

another soilder-now that would be bad

soilder- so we desided that we make a little deal

another soilder-you stop training us like crazy and we will pretend like this never happend

angads head was boiling in anger because he did nothing wrong but he knows that if he said no deal then there would be about 100 soilders ready to testify against him

a-ff-f-fine deal

angad had a hard time saying so on a count of him being so pissed off at being considered guilty over something he didnt do

soilders-we dont feel like training today, i hope you dont have a problem with that

angad gave off an angry stare and then said bitterly

a-no why would i have a problem with that

happly the soilders went away to get some more sleep others went to the coffe house to get something to drink

finly after every one left kripa said something

k-iam sorry angad about what happened

angad was about to explode when kripa said this but right when he was about to blow up on her. kripa touched his hand and it was like all the anger went away. angad relaxed his face then took his pillow and blanket and stood up to leave. after angad was gone kripa did the same


hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up-soilder party(those that have read my fan fic before know what comes next. where theres a party theres drinking where theres drinking theres bound for something big to happen) 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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[SHOCKED] well not much but i cant believe they actually...!! lol

cant wait till the next part.
continue sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

[SHOCKED] well not much but i cant believe they actually...!! lol

cant wait till the next part.
continue sooon

angad and kripa didnt do anything together the soilders just assumed that angad and kripa did something

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i am shoked!! 😆 😆 😆 cont. sooooon!!! i like it so far!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part! cant wait to read what happens next!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was just fabulose
can't wait 2 read the next part it is goin 2 be even better so continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part..can't wait 4 the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part.. just caught up with the whole ff... ihave read all ur other ones.. tehy are really good..

mansi

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