~**New!Bin Bulaye Mehman (From Kaajjal)~*

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Hi guys, hope u enjoy!!!!

Chapter One

A crescent moon peeked behind from the clouds. It was raining heavily. Droplets of rain spattered against a screen door in Goa. A very beautiful girl, only 20, gazed out the see through door. She had wavy hair, that was light brown with dark brown, natural highlights. Her big eyes were filled with wonder and compassion. She opened the door and gracefully walked out.

She started dancing in the rain.

"kaajjal!!" shouted an elderly lady, Kaajjal's bua.

"undar ajao beta, thand lag jayegi!"

K: Nahi bua, aaj ka yeh mosam zaroor ek nishaan hain! Pyar ki ek nishan! Bua, aap bhi mere saat nachiye, yeh mosam sirf ek hi bar ata hain! Ajao!

B: Chup pagli! Jab dekho toh pyar vyar ki baatein kar rati hain! Then come inside and drink some garam garam chai!

K: Chai! Eww, meh toh Hot Chocolate drink karne wali hoon.

B: Kaajjal, beta, you are 20! Kuch toh sharam kar! Drink Chai

K: Buaaaa….(kaajal looks at bua with watery eyes)

B: thik hain thik hain, hot chocolate peena!

K: I love u bua

B: maloom hain, sab maloom hain…sirf tumahara woh nikama baap kuch samajtha hi nahin! Tumhari shaadi hone ki umar ho gayi hain aur tum parai sharai kar rahi ho…beta samaj karo! Aaj kal ki larki toh aisi hi bigarti hain

K: No way bua. Meh aapna jeevan saathi kudh hi chune wali hoon jab sahi waqt ayega. Aur waise bhi, remember motu? Kitna mota tha! Woh kheta tah ke kaajjal, pehle meh zindagi jeyunga, phir shaadi!

We see a very skinny, lean, strong guy putting his wallet in his back pocket of his pants.

B; Haha mujhe sab yad hain, yad hain jab bhi woh humare ghar par ata tha apni who choti si tricycle par!

K: hehehehe mujhe bhi yaad hain keh woh bada aamir sa bana chata tah! Aur hai hai, uski ma kitni aachi thi! Mujhe ab bhi woh gifts yaad hain, kabhi choodiyan, kabhi dresses! Usne kabhi koi farq nahin kiya between me and motu!

We see the same guy, but no face, going with style in a car and arriving in RJ Rock Corp. The building was big and looked very modern.

K: Phir ek din, woh chala gaya, (she says that quietly) mera sab seh acha dost…

B: Ha, his father died in a car accident. They had to leave for Mumbai in the next day. You cried so much!

K: yea, I wonder how he is now.

We see a man, none other than Apurva! , turn around and yell at a man on the phone.

Man on the phone: Dev sir, sorry I don't know how this mistake happened. The shipments were supposed to be shipped to America but somehow the men shipped it to Goa instead! I am really sorry! Please understand…

D: What do you mean understand? MY SHIPMENTS BETTER BE IN THE US MARKET BY NEXT WEEK OR ELSE I WILL PERSONALLY COME TO GOA IN YOUR COMPANY! Do you understand that?

Dev is breathing heavily, and looks mad.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great Job Vinisha!! continue soon plz. I love you fanfic, its really good!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz feel free to write back comments both negative and positive!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woww that amazing Vinisha 👏
loved every bit of it 😳 so first dev was fatty in his childhood and then he turned skiny 😛 i even started imaginig it 😆 wonderful idea yaar 👏
very good job 👏 👏
waiting patiently for your next part 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice.Love it when he shouts.He's called 'yell' sir!! 😳
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Nice job Vinisha, continue soon!!

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