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Posted: 17 years ago
This part is dedicated to all those people who wanted to kill me 4 wrioting the last part & getting Swyam & KAshish married. i was a PRANK by me...
it had been ages since i pulled up a prank so i thought y not my readers in this forum get a dose of my nature...
sorry if i hurt any1... it was meant to b harmless... i didntmeant to hurt any1's feelings
hope u guys forgive me...
love Adi
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Posted: 17 years ago
After that is done Swyam puts sindoor on her forhead. All the time Kashish's eyes r closed as she doesn't want to b a witness of her own destruction. When all the rituals r done her eyes open to view Swyam's face with an evil grin plastered on his face as Kashish starts cursing her ill fate.
Kashish was brought out of her trance as the girls asked her to sit down next to Swyam in the mandap. Making her realize that she was just dreaming… she was not married to Swyam… still not married to him.
Kashish is waiting for Swyam to put mangalsutra around her neck but he doesn't. She opens her eyes when she feels the presence of Sujal. She looks up to see Swyam's hands being handcuffed by Sujal dragging him away from Kashish. Kashish felt an instant rush of energy flowing through her entire body at this site.
Swyam gave an evil glare to Kashish & said.
SW: so u don't keep ur promise… a RAW official didn't keep her promise…. What a shame???
KA: oh but I did keep my promise… I told u I will walk down the mandap 4 u… which I did… I never said that I will marry u??
With a cheeky smile she turned to others as they started arresting Swyam's men. She straight away went to Sujal & gave him 1 tight slap shocking evey1.
KA: is this the time to come? Y r u so late??? The guy almost got married to me. What would I have done if it had happened?? The entire case would have gone in the drain including my time which I spent 4 this case…
She was continueing when Sujal cut her off in between.
S: was I my fault that u didn't leave any clues 4 me. What do u think I would have a dream abt ur whearabouts? Don't blame me 4 ur stupidity.
KA: hey I left a note stating abt where I was being taken.
S: well v didn't find any…
KA: u don't know how to carry a search. Thank god Naina had given me that tracer or otherwise I would have struck with that idiot Swyam all my life.
S: pity now that I am struck with u all y life.
Before she could understand what he said or before he could take back the words he just said they head Angad shout.
A: WHAT?? HOW CAN IT HAPPEN SO SOON?? SHE STILL HAD A MONTH… NO ITS JUST A MISCONCEPTION…. I am not ready yet… I have to finish the shopping yet…
When Sujal & Kashish are basically standing on Angad to know what has happened?? They r able to heard Adi's voice on the phone from other side.
AD: Angad cut the crap & just listen to me. 1ST STOP BECOMING HYPER & 2ND & MOST IMP THING IS TO COME OVER HERE QUICKLY AS I HAVE NO EXPERIENCE IN THIS DERPARTMENT & I think I am the 1 going to faint in nervousness & not ur wife who just went into labour.
KA: (snaching the phone from Angad) WHAT??? KRIPA WENT INTO LABOUR. I am coming… just wait.
Kashish just hrusted the phone in Angad's hand & ran from there towards the car with Angad & Sujal on her heels. Angad was abt to mount on his bike when Kashish stopped him & shoved him into the car.
KA: if u drive in this condition I wil have to visit 3 people in the hospital instead of 2.
Kashish drived out of the place in full speed being proud of the fact that she was a racecar driver. They reached the hospital in a record time.
When they reached hospital they saw Veena, CG, Om & Parvati were already pacing the corridor while Pia was just sitting comfortably on the bench & sipping coffee. While Sur was being entertained by Huda & Adi in another room as Sur was shocked by seeing her other in so much pain.
Angad directly went to see the doctor while Kashish went towards the other family members, as they knew nothing that had happened in the last 8 months. All the elders knew just 1 thing that Kashish had a big fight with every1 else & had just left to b out of state.
Every1 was surprised seeing Kashish & more surprised that she was in her wedding dress without Mangalsutra or sindoor. Of all of them Pia is the most surprised 1 as she knew that Swyam was going to marry her today & he would take Kashish away never to come back in Pia's or Sujal's life. Before Parvati or Om could go towards their daughter to b with her Pia went to Kashish & started to fight with her.
P: how dare u show ur face here after what u have done??? (Kashish looked at Pia as who was having tears in her eyes) becoz of u Sur was abt to b handed to Swyam. U wanted to get married to him then y r u here???
Every1 was shocked to hear this. It was a new piece of information being hidden by their kids. Veena came to the pair as the others were not able to digest the information till that time.
V: what r u saying Pia??? Kashish can never do this… she loves Sur a lot…
P: no aunty she did it… she was the 1 to start the case of custody.
Parvati came for the defence of her daughter as she disgested the information being given by Pia. Parvati knew her daughter & also the fact that her daughter would never repeat the same mistake. Her daugher had trusted Swyam once… she would never do it again…
PA: u don't know what non sence u r talking…
P: oh I very well know what I am talking… its just that u don't know what ur daughter really is.
PA: I know her well & I don't trust u…
V: neither do i…
P: fine don't trust me… trust Sujal… u can ask him if what I am saying is true or not. (as soon as she spoted Sujal entering the hospital with Naina & Alek.)
Before the 3some could ask abt Kripa's condition Pia preety much started with her questioning.
P: Sujal tell them that Kashish started the case of Sur's CUSTODY & that she got married to Swyam.
S: (with a big smile) she started the case 4 custody (he watched the shocked expression of Mr. & Mrs Sinha &also of his parents with a smile on Pia's face) so that she could make him loose the case permanently & he could never reopen or even try to win the case.
The elders including Pia had a confused expression on their faces as their eyes kept moving from Kashish to Sujal & vice versa. Angad entered the room with now a calm Sur in his arms followed by Huda & Adi & said.
A: Kashish was giving us evidence against Swyam so that he loses the case badly & can never reopen the case… she just did it the my daughter stays with me forever…
KA: (eyeing Pia) & I don't think so any1 has or should have any problems to what I did as its results were positive.
No1 spoke a word for sometime when finally angad broke the silence.
A: mom, dad, uncle & Aunty I have no problem with what Kashish did… infact me & Kripa r greatful to her that becoz of her our daughter will b with us forever. U cant be angry with her…
OM: beta v r not angry with her… v r just sad that my daughter went through all this without even telling me…
KA: papa… its ok… I am sorry. Next time I do something stupid like this I will surely tell u before hand.
CG: now lets leave the past behind v have a new life entering our life…
Now there was a complete silence in the room except for the sound of breathing of som many people present in the room with a usual tapping of foots. Sujal went to Angad who was pacing the room & occasionally looking as a sleeping Sur in Veena am's.
S: u know u have the permission to go in & b with her…
A: so???
KA: (in a teasing yet tensed tone) go in & b with Kripa.
A: I cant bear to see a tear in her eye then how can I see he crying in pain like this… when Sur told me how badly she was crying I couldn't take it… how will I b able to see it actually…
S: scardy poo…
A: no I am not scared… I just love her too much & I cant see her in pain like this…
KA: listening to this, I wonder how u got inn in thi field.
The doctor came out of the labour room with a smile on his face as every1 in the room surrounded him with ancious eyes.
DOC: it boy…
There was a roar of joy in the whole corridor. & a wave of excitement rushed throught the entire place with this news. Sur woke up due to all this noise & went to the doc. She pulled his pants to get his attention to which he replied by bending down & Pulling the child up in his arms.
SU: is my mom ok?
Doc: yes… she is perfectly fine…
SU: will she cry now if I go in her room now??
DOC: no she will not… infact u will find a new person with her I that room…
SU: who is it??? Every1 I know is with me here.
DOC: well ur mom & dad got u a small brother. I think so u will want to meet him.
SU: yes… I want to tell him that I love him a lot & I have gotten him all the toys I could…
DOC: ok… u can go in with ur dad now. (looking at the others) u can go in 1 by 1.
Angad took Sur from Doc's arms & went in.
Kripa was looking a bit week but she had a new glow on her face. She was intently looking at her new born that she didn't even notice Angad & Sur coming in till Sur was running to the crib to meet her little brother. Angad just went & Hugged Kripa.
A: u ok??
K: never felt better… Kashish???
A: she is ok. V reached on time. She is waiting outside.
Sur came to them as they separated.
SU: dad I cant see his face plz get him out of that lock.
A: its not a lock princess… its called a crib. To keep the babies safe. So that they don't fall.
Angad made Sur sit in Kripa's lap as he went to get his boy out. He picked up his son with trembling hands. He had never seen such a small kid… hardly an hour old. He was is… his own son… his own flesh & blood. The child was in the world becoz of him. Angad was just staring at the kid with love in his eyes. Sur was becoming impatient to hold her brother… to play with him.
SU: dad bring him here I want to play with him.
Angad placed the child in Kripa's arms as Sur began to play with him… telling Angad & Kripa even abt the breath the child was taking. Angad just got up & Kissed Kripa & hugged his family as Kashish & sujal entered arguing as their usual self.
KA: I will go in first… after all I am the masi.
S: no I will go in first I am his chachu.
KA: no me…
S: no me…
SU: y r the 2 of u arguing when both of u r inside the room. Look Masi I have got a really cute little brother. He has my eyes but he is sleeping right now so u will not b able to look at it…
Sur kept on praising her little brother & at the same time comparing all his activities with herself as the room began to pile up with all the known faces.

ONE WEEK LATER:
KHANNA MANSION:
BREAKFAST TABLE:

Kripa & the baby were back home & life was preety much normal. Kripa was serving breakfast to Angad when Kashish came in with Sur & a lunch box in her hand. Also she was having a cheeky smile on her face which was a replica of Sur's face. Angad & Kripa both looked at the 2 of them in suspision. Angad raised an eyebrow as Kashish looked at him while the two (Kashish & Sur) were sitting on the table.
KA: what??
A: y r the 2 of u smiling so much???
KA: its just a beautiful day…
K: the day is like every day… I haven't seen the 2 of u laughing like this everyday…
KA: u r just thinking too much sis. Here I have made some Pasta… try it out… now I can cook… well or worst u can decide.
Angad tasted the Pasta 1st which to his surprise was good. Kripa was abt to take a bit when Sujal entered & helped himself with some. Strangely enough he was smiling like Sur & Kashish. But Angad & Kripa ignored it knowing that they were not going to get an ans from the 3some. So Kripa just changed the topic.
K: v have to pick up a name for the baby.
S: how abt Arman…
KA: resembles flirt… how abt Vikram???
A: traditional…
K: Shikar…
S: not suiting…
SU: how abt Abhimaniyu… v can call him Abhi…
A: I like it…
K: perfect…
S: done…
KA: I agree… (picking up Abhi in her hands) so from this day this little hansome guy will b called Abhimaiyu.
At this instant here was a huge scream from Pia's room which made it hard for Kashish, Sujal & Sur from laughing while Angad & Kripa understood what the 3 of them were laughing abt. The 8month long morning silence of their home was broken again. All of them rushed to Pia's room & saw her looking like a hen or a gost… or acombination of both which couldn't b guessed.
She was covered from head to toe in white powder like stuff above which there were white feathers making look like a ghost. Also something very sticky… something like a gum was spread on her body like cheese on a cheese pizza. Seeing this all of them started laughing more loudly.
Feeling more humiliated than ever Pia went to Sur with rage evident in her eyes & was abt to slap her when Angad came in between & held her hand which she had lifted to strike Sur. The angry in his eyes was nothing any1 had seen before. Angad turned to Sur & asked her to be with Abhi as the little child couldn't b left alone to which Sur readily obliged.
Pia was finally able to free her hand from Angad's strong grip & said.
P: if u keep saving the kid like tis there will b no difference between her & the street kids…
A: don't woory still she will b better than u in each & every case.
P: I don't know y u keep saving her?? She is not ur daughter…
A: just shut up u bi***… 1 word against her & I will give u to the Police.
P: on what charges??? Trying to improve the condition of ur daughter???
KA: no on the charges of helping Swyam to kidnap her.
Listenting to this whatever colour was present in Pia's cheeks vanished completely. She looked with disbelief towards Kashish while Kashish had a big grin on her face.
KA: I had heard the 2 of u talking…
P: that's a lie. (she turned towards Sujal) Sujal say something to her… she is damaging my image…
S: y do u think I should interfere???
P: I am ur fianc… u trust me more that u trust her… right…
S: wrong… I trust her more… & as for the fianc part I am breaking the engagement right now.
Sujal just removed his engagement right & throwed it on Pia's face & removed her engagement ring from her finger knowing very well that she will not give it on her own.
P: u guys cant do this 2 me…
K: wrong v can do this & more. Now leave this house immediately & never come back. If u ever do ten v will give the police ll the evidence stating that u kidnapped Sur…
Saying this all of them left Pia alone in the room & went to enjoy their breakfast. When they were done they saw Pia leaving the house in a huff.



comming up next: a proposal

hope u guys have forgiven me for the earlier parnk & u have liked how this story has proceeded. plz do leave behind ur comments.
i have decided to end this fick & start another but i have 3 main ideas 4 it which i have posted in this poll... plz read & vote for ur option https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/897346/which-fick-should-i-start
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Adi 😆
Edited by sujalangad_rock - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow adi i am goin to kill u 4 the prank as far as this part is concerned it just could not have been better cont sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow adi i am goin to kill u 4 the prank i cant help it... the people who know me very know that i have a big prankster in me. some times they dont even trust me when i am telling the truth becoz of my this habbit. believe me once i got my friend married to a jerk of our college due becoz of my prank hope u guys enjoyed it like me 😆 as far as this part is concerned it just could not have been better cont sooon



& thanks 4 ur comment
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Posted: 17 years ago
i forgive u.lolz....ok the part was awesome..lol..loved the prnl..heheh

sam.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: chocolate p

i forgive u.lolz....ok the part was awesome..lol..loved the prnl..heheh

sam.


i loved it 2
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part.
finally pia is out of their house.
as far as ur prank concerned i will say good one....u got us! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: deeya123

great part.
finally pia is out of their house. after hoil there should b good all around u
as far as ur prank concerned i will say good one....u got us! 😊that wa the idea


& thanks 4 liking my prank & this part
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awwhhh Bother........Thank god it was just a prank.......I was wondering ab kya hoga kashish ka.......ahaan....precap is a proposal.....Im guessing it SK or is it Alekh-Adi........Hmm...I hope its SK.......

I luvd the pia bhagao andolan........hehehe!

Continue soon!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
aaww the part was perfect 😛
angad's little abhi 😳 😆
love the prank of yours and the prank that SK and sur played on pia 😆 😆
can't wait for next part 👏

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