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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part plz cont the last part soon. 👏
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Epilogue

Kripa got up from the bed and found her being pushed back not even a second later. She look up and blinked at Angad with both their children, her two year old girl and one year old son in his arms, sleeping.
"How did you manage to push me down, love, with these two hurricanes in your arms?"
"Well I'm good. Stay put, I'm going to go and put our hurricanes to bed. Two minutes."
"Two minutes," she mumbled and watched him go out. She took her chin in her hands and looked at the glass shelve across the room. They had added so many new pictures in the last four years. Her oldest daughter, Elizabeth- Kripa had named her after George's wife- her son Rahul. Ben had fallen in love again and was happily married with a son of his own. Eve and Phil had managed just one more boy to their family and then put a full stop to the family picture, which was now completed according to them. Neha, well she was still unmarried, in love, engaged, but unmarried, and still working for the ISS. And, Mia and Yash, well they were currently taking a vacation, finally retired from every responsibility, every worry from life.
In four years, Kripa hadn't quit her job as the ISS chief. She helped when they needed it. But, she gave her family her attention first. She had never thought she would have enjoyed having children as much as she did. And she had wanted to be done after two children.
Too bad Angad had convinced her otherwise. He thought they could have ten children and still be able to raise them all. Of course she was never going to have ten children.
"So where were you going?" He asked looking at her, dreams in her eyes.
"To the kitchen. For water." She took his hand and pulled him down beside her.
"You're supposed to tell me if you need anything." He pressed his lips to her cheek. "Remember?"
"Angad, do you remember that this is the third time I'm pregnant?" She asked with a sour look on her face.
"Well, I still get nervous like you were going into labor for the first time. I'll still worry after we have ten kids."
Kripa blew out a breath. "I'm not having ten kids, Angad."
"Okay, we can have five."
"Five? Five? This is our last one, honey." She patted her stomach, unaware she was carrying twins this time. "Three is more than enough, love." She leaned over and kissed his pouting lips. "How can you want five kids?"
"I want a big family. But, three are fine. If…"
"If? Okay, fine. You can have the other seven with someone else."
He frowned. "No." He caught her face in his hands. "I love you, Kripa."
"But, I was kidding."
"Were you? Damn it!" She gave his arm a hard punch. "Fine, we'll stick to three kids." He got up and walked to the door and flipped the lock.
"Angad? I'm pregnant, hands to yourself." She watched him pull the shirt over his head, with a grin slapped on his face. She squealed when he jumped on her. She was laughing and writhing under him as he gave her wet kisses over her face. "Angad!" She twisted again and tried to move away, but the guy just got stronger everyday. "Angad, stop."
"Okay, fine." He looked down at her. She was still laughing; her cheeks were full of color. He liked her like that. Just like that. "Kripa." He leaned down and kissed her forehead gently. "You're beautiful."
"Well, no wonder we made beautiful children between us." She grinned and kissed his mouth loudly. "So."
"So?"
She frowned. "Are we going to finish?"
"Finish what, honey?"
"I thought…"
"You thought." He played with her buttons, but didn't unfasten them. "What did you think, Kripa?"
She blew out a breath and scowled at him. "I thought you were going to make love with me."
"Oh?" He undid the first two buttons and kissed the exposed skin. It was baby soft and he still felt like he was touching it for the first time. "You've got beautiful skin, too."
"Hmmm." She closed her eyes as he undid the rest of them and lined the kisses. Her hands fisted in his hair. "Angad."
"Yeah?" He looked down at her again. Her eyes were closed, her skin already flushed. And, he thought he couldn't love her more.
"I love you."
"Hmmm." He laid his lips over hers. "I love you, today and more tomorrow."
Hey Guys,
So I hope you enjoyed the last part of the FF. If you want the FF e-mail me @ neha_luvs_who@yahoo.com Make sure you guys comment of the last part!
If you haven't already, check out Married By Mistake- The part part will be up shortly! http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID= 656656&TPN=1
Lots of love,
Neha
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Posted: 18 years ago
Aww twins!! How cute!! Loved the Epi, it was great, nice and short, perfect!!
Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hehe… angad just too cool.. doesn't kripa kno by now? That man is just too romantic!

Hahah.. ten?? Lol..poor kripa wud die!!!

Aw man!! Angad is cracking me up!! Five? Dude.. he better be ok wit the 3 he is having… lol..

Awwwwwwwwww…. TWINS?? I want twins!

Oo that part had my stomach takin those dips.. shooo cute!!

Happy part.. lol..

You really did a fantastic job with this one neha! It was very nicely written.. some parts made me cry while some did nothing but make me smile! Others I frowned over… neway.. an awesome story.. thx for writing it! Looking forward to ur other two… I kno they will be great! I m gonna miss this fanfic! But I kno I can always re-read.. and there will be other ones to keep me busy! Yupp yupp.. there will be.. I'll make sure of it! LOL..

Luv ya
Mansi


p.s. loved the kids names! wat idd she names the twinos? lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was great. i turned into a silent reader for a while lolz, but aww the ending was great. i love how lovey dovey they are!!! great fan-fic and good luck with your other to! Loving Summer Love right now!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwww it was a nice fanfic hope u write another soon! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
itz pver...itz over NOOOOOO plz no
but it was a sweet and cute and short and sweet ending
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awsome FF i acutally lyked thys one than any other ones u wrote... i mean they were kool also
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Posted: 18 years ago
u ended it already 😭 😭 ...but im glad the mystery is solved. But how come George never said anything. I know when Angad asked him, George said that he is sorry and he tried telling them but couldnt he say anything when kripa got shot? He had so many chances and he could have told kripa when he was living with her..that makes me mad, but im glad that kripa and the baby are fine. I loved the last part. aww...shes having twins and at least angad would be happy. Im looking forward to your other ffs and i know they will be just as good as this one.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Nehaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa🤗

Que tal ?

Woaaaa..i wasn't expectin this to end so soon....I was shocked when I saw last part on🥺....sigh....It was a beautiful ff..

Ok, congratz on completin 100 pages again..as u never take time to answer ma comments....just kiddin..😆

& yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....I'M THE BEST!!....lol.....I just can't stop grinnin.......I knew John & George had sumthin to do with the mistery...It just coudnt be Ben for various reasons...It wudnt be u...as it wud be a dramaticaly easy guess..!!🤣

But, man!!!!..I was right...My initial idea was...George hated Kripa for a reason..it cud be coz Lizzy gave her more time than the other 2 kids & etc...& John being rejected twice & visibly hurt wanted reveange...so I thought ..both will join hands & then do trouble..but of course..I knew i was wrong coz George must have known Kripa before the blast...& I really didnt find a reason to hurt angad & his family coz of examz...so I assumed that George will play an important role & John will be 100% involved & sumone stranger will be behind this...

& I didnt really thing much after that coz I was busy..& yeaa when u mention Sana just so suddenly...( I didn't really expected Ben to fall soon ) ..she just appeared from the thin air...I thought..Neha wud end their story wid a baby boy & happy ever..lol..

But here you cum with the complicated twist of biological parents..Natasha & etc....😕

U torture us too much to end the mistery just in one part, lol...it happened fast...😆

& wowww two hurricanes & two more to come.😳..Rahul & Lizzy..brilliant!!perfecto!!..Angad always manages sumhow to have more than 2 children..naa U always manage to make them have more than two..lol😆

Love a/k for lovin each other so much..being so cozy & havin so many kids 😳😳😳

Btw what's the name of the girl Ben has been married to..?😳..Dios...already a son..!!

Love you for writin such lovely ff..🤗

Will email you soon....make sure you have all the parts neatly & correctly written down..am scared...lol..what if u miss to add a part ?

Soft endin...precious ff..!!excellent job!!

lots of love y muchos besos!!

Pinkz 😳

Edited by pretty girl - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was great ful of suspance,romantic,a little sad and funny story 👏 👏 i love the part of lovey dovey.good luck with ur other fanfic

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