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Posted: 2 months ago
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Chapter 10 (Comma to Continuation)

Two Years Later

The Campus Lawn, Convocation Day

The courtyard was swarming with laughter, awkward gowns, flying caps, and teary-eyed parents.
Selfies were being snapped faster than the canteen served samosas.

But at the edge of it all—away from the crowd—stood Soumya Kapoor, holding two coffee cups and scanning the field.

Then—

“Behind you,” came a familiar voice.

She turned.

There he was.

Rudra Singh Oberoi.
No longer just the college heartthrob. No longer her fake boyfriend.
Not even just her real one.

But her person.

He grinned, his convocation stole hanging loosely over his shoulder. “I almost missed the principal’s speech because my cap kept falling off. Why do they make these things so pointy?”

Soumya handed him his cup. “Because college wants one last laugh at your expense.”

He took a sip. “Still no sugar?”

She shook her head. “Still diabetic-in-training.”

A pause. Familiar. Comfortable.

“Can’t believe it’s over,” she murmured, watching a group of juniors pile into a group hug.

Rudra looked at her.

“It’s not over,” he said.

She turned to him.

He dug into his bag and pulled out a worn piece of paper. A sticky note.

The one she’d once slipped into his poetry book.

“You were made to stand out.
I just hope someone stands with you.”

He folded it gently and placed it in her hand. “I’m still standing.”

She looked down at the note.

Then up at him.

And whispered, “So am I.”

He leaned in—softly, reverently. Not for a kiss. Just his forehead against hers.

“Let’s keep writing, Somu,” he whispered. “Comma after comma.”

She smiled, tears pricking her lashes. “No full stops?”

“Only for the bad chapters.”

They stood there, the world blurring around them—two people who had once been a joke, a plan, a hashtag.

Now?

They were a story.

Not perfect. Not always poetic.

But real.

Rumya.

Forever starting again.

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THE END.

Edited by Aleyamma47 - 2 months ago
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Posted: 2 months ago
#12

Thanks a lot for writing rumya bhavya ff on ishq vishk.Surprising that rudra had got many followers on Instagram.nice to know that rumya are best friends.But sad that without understanding Soumya's love,rudra is going behind bhavya.Bhavya liked him,but soumya understood him and that's the difference between them.It really struck me.its true that rudra doesn't know the difference between flirtation and forever.

I liked how you wrote that love doesn't come with declarations but it waits patiently in the background.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#13

I am surprised that for a college trip only couples are allowed.Rudra wants soumya and him to pretend as a couple for the trip.Its true that soumya can't refuse it for the sake of their friendship.but what if this plan back backfires?what if bhavya will think that rumya are really a couple?Soumya's rules were hilarious.sympathy date comment may hurt soumya.king and Queen shirts are cool.but Rudra is going over the board.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#14

Rudra telling soumya that he snores and she won't be able to survive it was funny.Sadly Rudra didn't give any compliment to soumya like she wished and was busy admiring bhavya's looks.Soumya saying that she doesn't feel comfortable pretending to be rudra's gf when he is busy gazing at another girl hints her jealousy.good that she told rudra that she is hurt.good that rudra started doubting his own plan.

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Posted: 2 months ago
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When bhavya told rudra that rumya are not a match I thought she was going to insult soumya. But she actually said soumya is nice but rudra is loud.i felt nice.but shockingly after that bhavya bodyshamed soumya.poor soumya.I loved rudra defending soumya and praising her.loved rudra saying that she is hotter than all the fashion wardrobes and she is not trying to match him.when rudra said I miss you soumya asking him whether he is missing her or the version of her who was willing to be his fake gf was painful. I am surprised that even after all this bhavya is flirting with rudra and giving him a positive signal.soumya misunderstanding rudra that he didn't defend her was sad.but after rudra told her that he had defended her also why did soumya walk away?is it because of guilt or still she misunderstands him?

Edited by jasminerahul - 2 months ago
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Posted: 2 months ago
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Good that rudra shared his actual feelings with soumya.though he succeeded in impressing bhavya whom he wanted always he is not happy.the missing part of his life is definitely soumya. Soumya saying that he is not in love with her...since he had his own moment he wants to back to his comfort and when glamour faded he wants warmth was painful.liked soumya saying that when he feels that she is his first choice come to her.neil soumya friendship is making rudra jealous which is interesting to read.

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Posted: 2 months ago
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I am glad that finally rudra realized that he loves soumya.i liked him telling soumya how important she is for him.but sad that soumya is not believing it.Later rudra confessing his love properly was lovely.but sad that still soumya didn't accept him.but soumya saying maybe is giving hopes.rudra accepting the challenge was nice.i am surprised that Neil proposed to soumya.because in the movie mambo actually loved someone else.the last poem was nice.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#18

I am glad that soumya realized that rudra is not the same anymore.did bhavya understand that rumya are each other's type?rudra saying that soumya has tattooed on her soul was lovely.The kiss was unexpected and romantic.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#19

Neil and bhavya watched rumya together.guess they are fine with it as they realized that soumya and rudra never belonged to them.rumya scene was romantic. I didnt expect their physical intimacy as in the movie payal didn't even let him kiss her.ask you forever was romantic.

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Posted: 1 months ago
#20

Soumya's notes that rudra still snores in his sleep...but she doesn't mind it was cute.soumya's note that he talks in his sleep was hilarious.they hadn't kissed again because Soumya wasn't rushing or rudra wasn't demanding.i liked it.rudra saying that he can't pronounce alumini was funny.soumya saying that if they can fake date doing real hosting will be easy was nice.

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