Tere Bin- AK ff, part 5, pg 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
AWESUM prt!!!!! 👏 👏 cant wait for Kripa's entry!!!! 😉
continue soon!!!!!! 😃


p.s. can u PLEASE write in English, its kinds hard to read Hindi!! 😳
sorry about that, THANXXXX!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

its been 5 years now, dilip has died in a car accident, which made somany secrets to come out

angad got to know that their business is in total loss, dilip has taken so much loan but was not able pay it back, after his death, bank people sealed the company, even angad's fees for his MBA was paid with the loan taken on their house , hearing all this angad canceled his london trip everyone tried alot to make him go to london and fulfill his dream, but angad decided to take over business and pay all the loans which made him a workolic he worked so hard for 2 years which won him young acheiver award, the cool aatitude of him is gone, naina was worried looking at angad, he smiles just to make his family happy , even prem and his father both tried alot to help him but he denied their help

new character

Josh mehtha: he is angad's lawyer cum advisor and a good friend, angad met him when he was searching for lawyer who can help in reopenning his company . at that time josh was also looking for a case to prove his talent .

josh and angad became quick friends, josh helped him alot and he got to know angad alot as a friend, as a boss and as a person

now angad is a successful MD of khanna empire, he spreaded his company throughout India and asia, mukthi got married to prem and they both shifted to london where prem is looking after his dad's business and mukthi is pregnant now, naina is going to stay with mukthi for while

in khanna mansion

angad is busy in his study room looking through some files ,

na: angad

a:(still looking at the file) kya bath hey mom, apne packing karli kaal subha ki flight hey apki aur app abb thak soye(slept) nahin, is something wrong mom

na: angad goto sleep

a: mom i will just let me finish this file , and i am no more a kid

na: i know that beta but ...........

a: mom please this is the last file

na: angad why can't you come with me it will be a change for you

a: no mom i am fine here and i have so much work to do

na: angad from past 5 years you are just doing work nothing other than your work, you earned more angad rest for a while now

angad closed the file he was looking at, went towards naina and made her sit on the small couch , he sat down and kept his head in her lap , naina started carresing his hair

a: mom i wish i can go back 5 years where i was having just fun and enjoying my life, where i had my dad with me who thinks about me and fulfills my wishes before i can ask him, we can see tears in his eyes, even naina has tears in her eyes

na: slowly said, even i wish the same angad

next day at the airport angad, dadi, josh and naina are arguing

na: angad take care of yourself, time pe khalena, aunty app iska dhyan rakhna mujhe tumhari phikar rahey ghi, josh take care that he doesn't work continously for days

j: aunty, i will take care of him and dadi bhi tho hey yaha

a: mom app jao varna you will miss your flight

da: tum jao naina, aur mukthi ko mera pyaar dhena main iska khayal rakhunghi , thik hey

na: angad tujhe yaad hey na main london se athey hi thu shaadhi karegha

a: haan mom i remember now go

atlast naina left after taking promise from angad that he will marry when she comes back from london

angad dropped dadi at the mansion and left for his office along with josh, on the way to office josh is driving and angad is working on his laptop

j: i am happy for you angad

a: why, did we get the paris contract again this year

j: kya yaar, do you always think about work and nothing more than that

a: kyun abb kya huva

j: i was talking about your marriage and you are talking about business

a: meri shaadhi?

j: haan, you just now promised aunty that you will get married as she cames back from london

a: i promised to make her happy josh , its nothing more than that

they reached office

j: get a life man, jindhaghi main kaam aur money hi sub kuch nahin

a: josh as we reached office lets talk about work not about personal life

j: murmured, when did speak something other than work

a: kuch kaha

j: nahin tho

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next part: kripa's entry

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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
awesome fan fic...plz cont soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
Awesome part.... i preferred da old angad, i think kripa is gunna change him bck n cnt wait for her entry
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Posted: 18 years ago
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only 2 comments in 6 days

noone liked it 😭 😭 😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
great part continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
cant wait for kripas entry...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28

Part 4

its been a week naina went to london, its night 1'o clock , angad is still working in the office ,phone started ringing, angad recieved the call without looking at the caller id

a: hello

???: thu abhi thak office main kya kar raha hey

a: josh.......i am driving , ghar ko jaa raha hun, kuch kaam hey kya

j: hello Mr. Angad Khanna, aghar thu drive kar raha hey tho office main kuan hey tera bhooth

a: what?

j: maine office ko phone kiya tha, tera cell koo nahin

a: oh actually i am about to start

j: dadi tere liye pershan ho rahi hey, and tumhari mobile contect nahin ho rahi thi

angad looked at his cell phone, its battery is dead " meri cell ki battery katham hoghayi hey yaar, main abhi ghar jaovungha"

j: jaldhi kar yaar

a: ok ok bye

angad disconnected his phone, packed his files and started driving, after a 10 minute drive suddenly angad's vision got blurry, he was loosing the balance, he is trying to balance but not able to

we see girl carrying a huge bag, and a car passes her almost hitting her, she moved and fell down, she got up and started shouting

g: dhikayi nahin dhe ra kya , rukhja thu, thu rukh

same car stops after a small distance hitting a tree, she goes towards the car and looks throw the window, we see angad his head is bleeding, and he is unconcious

g: abb kya kare yaha as pass main koi dhikayi nahin dhe raha hey, she shakes angad but no use

josh who got call from dadi that angad is not back home yet, drives towards the office, on his way he sees a girl asking to stop the car

g: rukhiye rukhiye(waving her hands) ,

he goes near the car and looks at angad and gets shocked

g: oh main yaha se jaa rahi tho, ye achanak vuss paide(tree) ko thakra ghayi

josh called the ambulance, he said that he will be coming in the car, he looked at the girl and said " please kya app unkey sath jayenghey"

g: thik hey

j: apka naam

g: kripa ( now we can see her face and its kripa she is wearing a rajasthani dress lehngha and blouse with a dupatta(scarf))

j: thanks kripa and he went to khanna mansion to take dadi along with him

when dadi heard about the accident she got worried, she was about to call naina but josh stopped her saying everyone will get worried over there, josh and dadi went to the hospital where kripa is waiting for josh

josh and dadi came to where kripa is waiting for them, jsut then doctor came out from angad's room

j: how is he now

doc: he is fine, i think he is stressing himself alot , he just needs some rest and his left hand is fractured and 4 stiches on his head, within 3 weeks he will be fine

j: thanks doctor , can we meet him

doc: abhi oh hosh main nahin hey, in 2 hours he will gain concious then you can meet him

j: ok

josh informed this to dadi and he looked at kripa who was sleeping in the chair outside angad's room, josh went near her

j: kripa

kripa woke up

k: abhi unko kaisa hey , thik tho hey naa

da: josh kaun hey ye ladki

j: haan oh bhilkul thik hey aur dadi ye vohi ladki hey jisne meri gadi ko rokha tha

da: bahuth shukriya beta , tum nahin hothi tho patha nahin kya hotha

k: (innocently) main nahin tho koi dhusra apka madhath kartha tha

j: dadi app isse batey karo main jakar angad ko dekhtha hun

da: tumhe kaha jana hey beti, josh tumhe vaha chod dhegha

k:aaaaaaaaaa( starts crying)

da: arey beta kya huva , kyun ro rahi ho

k: oh kya hey na, hum rajsthan se a rahey tey, lekin dhono alag hoghaye

da: kuan dhono beta

k: ramu aur main

da: ramu

k: (sharma tey) haan main aur ramu ek dhusre se pyaar kartey hey, hum dhono ghar se bagh kar ayetey, phir patha nahin kya huva main bus main so ghayi thi uth kar dekhi tho ramu nahin raha, subha se vusse dhund rahi hun, mujhe yaha koi patha nahin hey

all the while josh is inside angad's room

da: koi bath nahin beta tum humare sath raho, mera potha jaise hi thik hojayegha oh tumhe ramu ko dhundney main madhath karegha

k: (exccited) sach main

da: haan beta

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thats for now

next part: fun begins

thanks for writting comments and please do write comments

luv

sweety

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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
lol pota bhi theek ho jayega and ramu ko search karne ki bhi koi zaroorat nahi hogi...........

awesome fanfic
continue soon
ck
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
hehe.. who is ramu??
anywayz, continue soon
i cant wait to read the next part
i want angu and krips to meet fast, and...argh just forget abt that ramu...there's no need to find him

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