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Part 4
Excellent update.... finely written
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Part 4
Excellent update.... finely written
Part 2
It was surprising twist that Raghav and Aradhana were good friends. Poorna being Raghav's crazy fan was surprising. Aradhana revelation about Poorns to Jay and Reyansh could be shocking to them. Aradhana's anger on Jay and Reyansh for their suspicion of her jealousy was right at its place. However, that how the investigators interrogate people involved in that case.
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Reyansh went to a Salon.Reyansh told the man over there:I want to do the best facial.
The man:Fruits facial is the best Sir.
Reyansh:Then do fruits facial for me.
The man:Which fruit Sir?Mango,orange,lemon,papaya...
Reyansh thought:Is this a Salon or a fruit shop?
Reyansh:Take the best fruit and do my facial fast.I have no time to waste.
The man did Reyansh's facial.
Reyansh was really excited.
He thought:My skin maybe glowing now.Aradhana will be flattered by my looks.
Suddenly he saw Jay coming out of another room.Both were stunned to see each other.
Reyansh:Why are you here?
Jay:I did facial.Look at my beautiful skin now.Aradhana will love it.
Reyansh got irritated.
Reyansh:Your skin has no change even after the facial.
Jay felt embarrassed.
Reyansh:I also did facial.Aradhana will find me more handsome.
Jay laughed:You and handsome...no match.So don't dream too much.
Reyansh got irritated.
Reyansh:You also don't dream too much.
They kept arguing and because of the nuisance the salon owner threw them out.
Reyansh and Jay looked at each other in shame and slowly burst into laughter.
Aradhana was thinking of her moments with Reyansh and Jay.Malini came there.
Malini:How was your meeting with Reyansh and Jay?
Aradhana:They both sang songs for me.
They both laughed.
Malini:So a triangular love story is happening.
Aradhana:I think so.
Malini:Are you interested in them?
Aradhana:Maa,how can I be interested in both the boys?
Malini:I mean do you mind choosing one of them?
Aradhana:Both are good guys.So may be....
Malini smiled.
Malini:Who is the one who captured your heart?
Aradhana:I have no clarity Maa.I need more time.
Malini:You take your own time.Because choosing a life partner is not silly.
Aradhana nodded.
Vikram shouted at Reyansh and Jay:You both forgot about the case after getting immersed in romance.Shame!
Reyansh:When did we romance?
Vikram:Don't try to act innocent.I saw you both singing along with Aradhana.
Jay and Reyansh were embarrassed.
Jay:We were just singing.There was no romance.
Vikram:I know that both of you love Aradhana.But don't let it affect your case.You both have drifted away from the investigation because of the crazy love.That should not happen.
Reyansh and Jay became dull.
Vikram:Don't forget that Ajay Sir is important to both of you.
Reyansh and Jay felt guilty.
Reyansh:We promise that our love life won't affect the case.
Jay:Yes.It's a promise from us.You trust us.Right?
Vikram:I trust both of you.After all both of you are my friends.But let me remind you both that a triangular love does not have a future.Aradhana will choose only one of you.The other one has to back out.Don't let it affect your friendship.
Reyansh and Jay became dull.
Reyansh and Jay called Aradhana to their office.
Reyansh:Aradhana,Raghav has told you how Poorna looks like.Right?
Aradhana:Yes.
Reyansh introduced a guy to her:He is Vinay.He can make good sketches.He will make the sketch of Poorna if you tell him how Poorna looks like.
Aradhana:But Raghav has not seen Poorna yet.Poorna has described herself in her letter.Based on that only Raghav told me how she looks like.
Jay:But let us see whether it will help us to find out Poorna.So you say Aradhana.
Aradhana:Ok.
Aradhana described Poorna's facial features and Vinay made a sketch according to that.
Aradhana,Reyansh,Vikram and Jay looked at the portrait.
Aradhana:Is this Poorna?
Reyansh:She has to be Poorna.
Jay:Vikram,figure out if a woman with this face exists in real.
Vikram:Sure.
After some days....
Aradhana reached the office 'Jay Rey Associates'.
Aradhana:Why did you call me?
Reyansh:We will say.
Jay brought a pastry for Aradhana:Have it Aradhana.It's the time to rejoice.
Aradhana took the pastry from him without understanding anything.
She took a bite and asked:What's the matter?Please say fast.
Reyansh:We had promised you that we will find Poorna soon.Like we promised we found out Poorna.Vikram enquired and it became clear that the woman in the sketch really exists and her name is Poorna.
Aradhana was surprised:Really?
Reyansh:Yes.
Aradhana:Thank you so much.I want to meet Poorna.
Jay:We will go there together.
Aradhana smiled.
Reyansh.Jay and Aradhana went to a building.Aradhana tripped and was going to fall down.
Aradhana:Ah!
Both Jay and Reyansh tried to catch her.But it was Jay who caught her.
Jay:Your leg got sprained?Is it paining?
Jay lifted up Aradhana in his arms and looked at her romantically.Reyansh became dull seeing it.
Jay looked at Reyansh with a victorious smile as Aradhana was in his arms.Reyansh became jealous.
Aradhana:No Jay.I am alright.I got scared whether I will fall down.That's why I screamed.
Jay:Oh!
He released her from his arms.Reyansh was relieved.
They walked towards a flat.
A woman opened the door.
Aradhana:Poorna?
The woman was shocked.
Aradhana:Are you Poorna?
The woman nodded.
Poorna:Yes.I am Poorna.
They smiled.
Part 3
During Poorna's investigation, Reyansh and Jay got attracted to Aradhana. Both became rivals when it came to impress Aradhana. Reyansh's move was sky enough to attract Aradhana's attention. The meeting place for discussing about the case seems personal and professional. Reyansh asking Bani to engage Jay with her to get a personal space with Aradhana was a clever move. Hope he succeeds in that.
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Just loved it 😄
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Salon scene was hilarious, even they couldn't hold their laughter. Why do I feel no boy among them would be able to capture her heart and it would be some other person only? Vikram is right. They made the sketch of Poorna, who knows it might be real. Finally they found her. Jealousy scenes sometimes makes me laugh. Wonder who plays Poorna. Waiting for next, perfect pics
Finally they found Poorna
That salon scene reminded me of when Reyansh was forced to get a facial in the show
Thanks a lot.
Really?Unfirtunately I have not seen that scene in Barsatein. '
Originally posted by: heavenlybliss
Finally they found Poorna
That salon scene reminded me of when Reyansh was forced to get a facial in the show
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Part 5
Outstanding update....splendidly written
Part 5
Fantastic Update
Reyansh, Jay and Aradhana all on mission to find Poorna
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