~:I wonder what this is?:~ Part 6 pg 14 - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: angeliclooks_me

dat was a ROCKIN comebak dearu! 👏 i gues da parcel contains some kinda animal... rite?? 😃 mayb a mouse...rat...or cockroach(chii 🤢 ) or something like dat.... am i rite?? 😳 nyways... plzz do post da next part asap! 😳

thnxx Kukku!!🤗 n ya..will post d next part soon😳..den jus see wat d parcel contains?!!😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: yyyy

Finally u continued....thank god i was missing ur story very much.....i wnt say as awesome part bcoz there was no raj 😭 😭 and it was small 😭 😭 ...(just kidding)...it was very good to see mr tapori with kaira 😃 😃 ...i wish kaira becomes best student of raj also then naina will burn into ashes 😉 😉 ...plzz continue soon and by the way how was ur exams prerna??

thnxxx Neetu Di!!🤗 dont worry..Raj'll definitely be dere in d next part..!😳 n my xams were gr88!😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnxx!😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
hey

finally u are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 😊

well how were ur exams?

nice part again 😆

well presented
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keep up the good work 👏 😳

hope to see the next part soon 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
hey

waiitng for ur next part

pl post it

Please
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
hey 😉

waiitng for ur next part 😃

pl post it 😳

Please dont make us wait 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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FINALLY!!! Welcome back Sweety.. the wait was a looooooooooonnnnnnnggggg one.. uff ye zaalim exasm.. anyway, hope you continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
hey

waiitng for ur next part

pl post it

Please dont make us wait
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-5

Kiara leapt out of her bed, shrieking like a maniac....she ran towards the lights but before she could switch it on,the room door opened and the almost the entire composition of the girls' hostel hurried in,lead by Lolita. "What on earth is going ON Cadet Sinha??" she demanded..

"Ma..a.....aaaaa....mmmm" she stammered...

"Yes..I'm listening.."

but Kiara just kept mumbling,too scared to even speak. "Oh for God's sake Cadet!!! Have you lost your voice??" Just then, Cptn Rajveer stepped in.."Yahaan kya chal raha hai?" he asked.

Lolita explained the situation to him. He looked towards Kiara and saw her still white with fright. "Cadet Kiara, I think aapko ek glass paani peena chahiye..please come.." and he gently lead her to her bed, but just before sitting down,Kiara shrieked again! Rajveer held his ear, "Cadet Sinha..kya hua?" he asked patiently..

"Woh...Sir..yahaa..mere bed mein..woh.."

"Haan..main sun raha hoon.."

"Woh...main..woh.."

"I got it till there.."

"There is a mouse on my bed Sir!!" she cried, literally in tears. A giggle went up the watching crowd of girls,now joined by the guys too. Kiara shot them a deadly stare.

"That's IMPOSSIBLE!!" said Lolita.."Yahaan koi choohe nahin hai!!"

"I swear Ma'am..there is a mouse here..i swear..."

"Okay okay..abhi dekh lete hai.." said Rajveer and pulled the bedsheets aside...a tiny brown mouse leapt down and scuttled around the room.."AIIIEEEEEEEE" the girls began screaming loudly..and the room turned into utter confusion..in between this..Lolita jumped onto the chair.."Take this thing awayyyy!!!!!!!!!!!" she cried..."Take it away!!!!"

"Oye.......tu chuha tu..teri toh.....wai guru di kasam, tune meri Lolita ji ko daraaya..tu ab nahin bachega!!!!" and with this,the mighty Suriji rushed in carrying a huge rod..the room changed into chaos chamber with Suriji running after the mouse and Lolita screaming from the chair.."Wahaan Surji..there!!!" the girls still shrieked and the guys watched in shock.."abbbe...apun ne toh kabhi nahin sochela tha..ki ladkiyaan aisi hai.." muttered Alekh with a shocked expression on his face..Kiara couldnt help noticing,he looked kinda cute..she smiled a small smile....

"STOP!!!!!" the voice boomed over the confusion and for a second,there was pin-drop silence...even the mouse stood still..Raj walked forward holding up his hands..."not a SOUND!!!"he slowly walked towards the tiny brown mouse with a piece of paper in his hand...carefully picking it up, he walked towards the low window ledge and let it jump out..the room breathed in relief...

"Lolita ji..aap ok hai ji?" asked Suriji as he helped her climb down...Lolita brushed her clothes and nodded..."oye thank you Cptn Rajveer.." said Suriji turing to Raj gratefully..Raj smiled.."it's ok Suriji.."

"But question is.." said Lolita.."woh cheez yahaan aaya kaise? Main har kamra perfectly saaf karaat hoon...i want to know how that mouse got in!!"

"I know.."said Kiara stepping forward...she turned sharply towards Naina.."Don't think I didn't see you smiling away jab yahaan sab itna darr gaye the...you put that mouse in there...hai na??? I'm sure you did..you..."

"Hey....listen..maine asia kuch nahin kiya!! Aur kiya bhi..toh kya..tum yahaan toh soldier banne aayee ho na? toh itne se hi darr gayi..ha ha ha!!" shot back Naina..

"Naina Singh!! I will NOT spare you!!!!!" Kiara screamed again..

Raj stepped forward to intervene.."Please,please control yourself Cadte Sinha"

"NO WAY!!!! Is baar NAHIN!!! Naina, you are DEAD!! And NO ONE DARE INTERFERE IN THIS MATTER!!" yelled Kiara..

"Cadet SINHA!!"

"NO SIR!!! aap kuch bhi keh le..i wont spare Naina...and main bhi dekh loongi, ki yeh academy kya karegi mere saath....zyaada se zyaada mujhe expel kar degi na? Great...well and good!!!"

and with this astounding statement, Kiara turned round and walked away...leaving a stunned crowd behind her...

Preview for Part-6

"So,will you help?"

"Apun ne no kab bola?"

"Toh yes bhi toh nahin bola.."

A few seconds of silence..

"Yes.."

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Heyy everyone!!! 😃 😡
firstly..THANKS A LOT LOT LOT 4 ur amazingly awesum responses last time!!!🤗

m really sry dat m nt very fast at posting d parts..but since m in 10, wid so much study pressure, m nt getting time..m really really sry guys 😭 😭 😭 ...i will try n be more regular but till my summer vacations,it'll be tough 2 post regularly,but will surely try...
i wanted 2 post after d xams but we only had 3 days holiday at skool.. 😭 😭
but neway..i hope u guys like dis part 😳 😳 ..i no its a bit small,m sry.. 😭 😭
but plzzz plzzz do comment..ur comments r wat keep me going.. 😳
thnx a lot guys 😳 ..luv u all!🤗

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