OUR LITTLE SECRET-RECREATING SHIVI (FF)PART 25 PG 64 - Page 8

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Originally posted by: Jiyakumari

Such a great story yr ❤️ lekin ab or wait nhi ho rha please update na🥺

sure...update by tomorrow morning😊😊

Awww.. this is such a cute concept! I loved how you used the OG scenes but modified them to suit a ShiVi in love ❤️

The mirchi waala scene was too good.. especially SHiva's dialogues there 😆

Raavi calling herself SHiva's proxy was another of my fav scenes in the show.. you re-did this really well here! ❤️

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Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Awww.. this is such a cute concept! I loved how you used the OG scenes but modified them to suit a ShiVi in love ❤️

The mirchi waala scene was too good.. especially SHiva's dialogues there 😆

next part is here😊😊

Originally posted by: virangna2005

CHANGES

As I am continuing it as afan fiction so here are some sort of changes which I included ahead……..

1.As in part 1, shivi are in love with each other but maami’s terms with shiva and pandya family are the same.

2.Whole history is same also that shivi hated each other initially but eventually fell for each other. Ithas been 3 months since their confession.

3.Case of janardhan and his family is all same but rishita is not self-centred. She is same as shown in show now-a-days i.e. practical, sensible, caring and friendly.

4.Dev is raavi’s best friend and saves her from shiva, who is acting in front of him(acc to my story).

5.Pandya family don’t have any info about rishita as in the show but there will be no shaadi drama as raavi never said that she wants to marry dev. being bahu of pandyas is not her dream her.

6.Dhara is not that mahan here. She is the same way she was in initial days of after leap.

Other changes will be told with time being………….

sees the changes I made in the story if haven't seen😊😊

so guys, here is part 3.......as I hyped it so much to some of you, hope that I kept up to your expectations....and do read the changes I gave above if not read☝☝.....happy reading guys....😊😊😊

PART 3

(same scenes as in show :shiva, dev and krish’s kitchen scene……….trio rushing out…….raavi enters the house……….

Changed scenes: as raavi enters the house she sees shiva, krish and dev talking. shiva sees her entering. Raavi caught his sadness. She sees the plate full of vegetables in his hands. She gestures him to throw them on her. He looked her in disbelief.She assures him. Both knew that they need to act again)

‘aee maami ki behn ki beti…….himmat kaise hui teri mere ghar aane ki…..’ shiva says as he throws vegetable on her. She starts pretending to save herself because she knew shiva would not actually hit her. Dev, unaware to their acting, lands b/w tosave raavi. ‘dev…dev…please mujhe isse bachao…..aah’ says raavi hiding behind dev. ‘shiva kya kar rha hai? Usse lag jayegi’ says dev as he tries to save raavi. ‘aree uss maami aur uske jaiso ko aisa hi treatment milna chahiye…..’ says shiva as he goes near them. Raavi smiles at his words. Uske jaiso. Earlier shiva used to think that raavi is also like her maasi but no. she was opposite just opposite. ‘par raavi maami ke jaisi nhi hai…..jis par tu gussa nikal raha hai na……aaj usne bhabhi ke liye stand liya…..apni maasi ke khilaaf jaake……’ dev retorts.Shiva’s heart swelled up with pride at this. Shiva always wanted to have a life partner who loves his family just like he does. Loving people selflessly is the best thing about her. But he need to keep up his angry look. His thought process breaks when he hears dhara. ‘kya chal raha hai yaha…?’ says dhara being confused. raavi immediately took the opportunity to tease her bandar. ‘*fake cries* dekho na dhara di…..ye shiva mere se kaise pesh aa rha hai……..dekho kaise mere upar saare sabjiyoon se attack kar diya……somnath ki sabse sundar ladki ke saath koi aise behave karta hai kya……’ raavi says dramatically as she always does. ‘aee maami ki behn ki beti……..tu sundar….chal hatt…..chipkali hai tu,chipkali…….’ Says shiva continuing the drama to which Dhara glares him back. Raavi smirks seeing this. She loved shiva getting scolded by dhara. Itwas too fun. ‘hn Bhabhi, ye shiva na jab dekho tab bechari raavi ke peeche pada rehta hai…..’ continue dev. Shiva reaction to dev 😠 and thinks ‘ye dev na…..bahut best friend wala ban rahahai…..isse toh main raat me dekh lunga……..’. ‘shiva, tujhe kitni baar samjhaya hai……tu kyun raavi se aise baat karta hai?.....kya ladkiyoon se aise baat karte hai….’. his thoughts ‘ye chipkali na….koi mauka nhi chodti Bhabhi se daat padwane ka…….koi nhi chipkali tujhse toh main dekh lunga….’ He thought. ‘bhabhi ladki ho toh na…….ye toh…..’ shiva retorts for which he earns glares from dev and dhara. Raavi chuckles making shiva annoyed. Suddenly krish, who was busy observing the scene silently, speaks up ‘ek baat samjh nhi aayi…..shiva ka nisaana itna acha phir bhi raavi ko ek bhi sabji kaise nhi lagi……..’ making dev and dhara confused. ‘hn …..mujhe ek bhi sabji nhi lagi…….na raavi ke kapde kharaab hue…….shiva tera nishaan kaise chuk gya raavi par🤨’ continues dev. raavi’s reaction 😲 and shiva’s reaction😦. Shiva was confused what to say now. He says ‘vo..vo main gusse me tha na…toh nishaana sahi nhi baitha….aur agr iss chipkali ko sahi se maarta toh phir dev ko lag jati na…….tu kahan se ye sab observe karne laga…’. Raavi mentally curses shiva for making such lame excuses. Krish grew more suspicious on shivi. ‘maanane ka mann toh nhi kar rha…..par tu kehta hai toh maan le ta hu…..’says krish being not convinced. Shivi sighs in relief. ‘raavi tu iss bandar ko chhod….tu bata….yahan kaise aana hua….’ Dhara says as she turns to raavi.Raavi replies ‘kuch nhi bas aapse milne aayi thi….ab chalti hu…..’. dhara asks dev to drop raavi but just then his phone rings. He leaves the place saying that it is important. Dhara, then asks shiva. Raavi gives widely smile to shiva from behind. But then shiva being shiva says ‘main nhi jaaunga iss chipkali ko chodne……..’. but one glare from dhara, shiva agreed. ‘badi jaldi maan gya…jaise mara ja rha ho uske saath jaane ke liye….’ whispers krish in shiva’s ear which earned him a smack from shiva. Dhara leaves for her room. Shiva brings bike’s key and goes outside. As raavi follows him, she calls out him but he ignores. Raavi frowns at this. Shiva starts the bike and raavi sit. She keeps calling him throughout the way but shiva didn’t budge. Instead of taking her to maami house, he takes her to their personal spot- SHIVA’S TREE. As shiva stops his bike, raavi gets down. Raavi being annoyed says ‘kya hai shiva?...kab se mai-’ but she stops as shiva pulls her and pin her b/w himself and the tree. ‘kya bol rahi thi tu ghr pe…..dhara di ye mere se kaise pess aa rahahai……….hn?’ says shiva raising his eyebrows at her. Raavi innocently and cutely replies ‘toh kya karti main?.......agr tere sabji shots ke baad main dhara di ko complain nhi karti toh…..krish-dev ko ka shak aur bad jata…….’. shiva smiles at his dobi’s matar size mind. ‘sabji maarne ko kyun kaha?’ asks shiva moving closer to her. Raavi looks into his deep eyes with love and concern and replies ‘taaki tere andar ka gussa shant ho jaye…..shiva, maasi ne jo bhi kaha uske liye I’m sorr-’ but before she could complete shiva hugs her. Shiva tightly hugs her and says ‘thank you raavi….thank you mujhse, mere parivar se itna pyaar karne ke liye……..aaj tune jo dhara Bhabhi ki liye stand liya……uske liye thank you……’. Raavi’s eyes gets teary at this. ‘aee bhoothnath……thank you kise bol….maine tere liye thodi kuch kiya……maine toh apne liye kiya…….’ Says raavi to make mood better. Shiva chuckles at this. Shiva sit on tree. He pulls raavi up too. after 2 min of silence, raavi teasingly says ‘dev kitna acha karta hai na….’in order take reaction from shiva. shiva knowing her tactics, rolls his eyes.He turns to raavi and pulls her by waist. Raavi’s reaction😳. ‘tujhe lagta hai ki tu dev ko acha bolegi ya uske saath dance karegi toh main jealous hojaunga😏’ says as he leans close to her. ‘jo mera hai…..uske liye main kyun daru, kyun jealous hu……….hn? aur vo bhi apne hi bhai se……’ continues shiva. raavi gives her big colgate smile to him and hugs him. shiva too hugs her. ‘matlab tu mujhe leke kabhi insecure nhi hoga?’ asks raavi as she breaks the hug.Shiva nods his head in no. ‘hn bikul….. aur kabhi hona bhi nhi…….yeh chipkali sirf teri hai………’ raavi says happily. Shiva smiles at her and says ‘aur ye bhoothnath sirf tera…….’. raavi wraps her hand around shiva and rests her head on his shoulders. They keep mum for some time enjoying their moments. ‘shiva…ek baat puchu?.....’ asks raavi.Shiva being shiva says ‘na mat puch…….’.raavi slaps his arm making him chuckle. Raavi says ‘shiva, agr maasi aur kaki ne humara rishta accept nhi kiya toh……’after which shiva smiles and reply ‘toh koi nhi……bhaag ke shaadi kar lenge 😉’. ‘shiva main serious hu…..’ says raavi in firm voice. At this shiva sighs and says ‘maa ko samjhane ki zimedari meri….tu maami ko samhaal……’. Raavi again leans on his shoulder and say ‘shiva darr lagta hai…..agr main samhaal nhi paayi toh…..mujhe dono families ke beech me pishna nhi hai……..’. shiva knows her fear. It was valid too. always a girl need to make balance b/w the two family. And in raavi’s case it is much more difficult. Shiva gives her assuring smile and says ‘main huna……..main sab dekh lunga….’. raavi loves this caring, supportive and understanding shiva. she knows that he will never allow any problem to reach her. He would always be her home.

so here I end this part.......guys if you have any kind of suggestion or if you finding any thing going wrong, then feel free to tell........and I want you guys to be a bit excited for next one because it's very cute and funny too.......I'm done with the layout of the whole story and it's going to be a long one, so chipke raho and will try level best ki chipka ke rakhu tum sab ko..........

thanks for showering your love till now.....and keep loving it in the same way😊😊😊

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Originally posted by: Anon21

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Originally posted by: Jiyakumari

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