OUR LITTLE SECRET-RECREATING SHIVI (FF)PART 25 PG 64 - Page 39

Originally posted by: virangna2005

when is you soon coming🤭🤭

Sorry I was super busy from last 2 days mai bhul hi gayi thi 🙈🙈

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Arey kar diya hai😆

Sorry I was super busy from last 2 days mai bhul hi gayi thi 🙈🙈

no need of sorry yaar....was just teasing you😁😁😁

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Shivaaa

I so loved it when he said "mere akele rishta thodi na hai, woh bhi haqdar hai" ❤️

Their moments were so subtle.

'She looks into his eyes for permission. Shiva getting the hint leans forward and and tilts his head in affirmation.'

This is something new though we always read about guy asking permission but it strangely feels good to read a girl doing the same😊

loved it.❤️

my shivi are gem💎💎

for that permission part, when I was writing this part just came across my mind..then I felt that this would we very different...🙂🙂me myself never read this in any ff....

Originally posted by: virangna2005

🤣🤣

no need of sorry yaar....was just teasing you😁😁😁

Mai sach mei bhul gyi thi that I have res the post.

Originally posted by: virangna2005

glad you liked it😘😘

my shivi are gem💎💎

for that permission part, when I was writing this part just came across my mind..then I felt that this would we very different...🙂🙂me myself never read this in any ff....

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Exactly.. that's why it caught my attention and made me realise consent toh dono cases mei zaruri hota hai.

Comment for the first time.

I start reading this yesterday night.

Nd today for the whole day, whenever i got time and visit if, just come here to read all the updates.

Its ammmmmmmmazing❤️

It feels like y story m wait ni krna mjhe read krne k liye. Bs continue rhe.

And while reading feel kaash y hoti shivi ki serial m b story.

Really loved it.

Do update fast.

Originally posted by: NidhiMittal1111

Comment for the first time.

I start reading this yesterday night.

Nd today for the whole day, whenever i got time and visit if, just come here to read all the updates.

Its ammmmmmmmazing❤️

It feels like y story m wait ni krna mjhe read krne k liye. Bs continue rhe.

And while reading feel kaash y hoti shivi ki serial m b story.

Really loved it.

Do update fast.

many more good parts are on the way....stay tuned...will try to update soon🙂🙂

PART 22

That day, in evening,

‘please shiva bhai…..last baar…bas iske baad kabhi nhi bolunga tujhe le chalne ko….kuch dino me maa-papa se bhi baat kar lunga’ says a boy to shiva.

‘nhi….peechli baar bhi yahi kaha tha tune mohit…har baar tujhe sneha se chup ke milaane leke jaata hu….kab tak ye chalega….’ says shiva faking his anger.

Yes, it’s shiva’s friend mohit who is dating sneha for almost 4-5 months.And the cherry on the cake is that raavi and shiva are the one who help them meeting secretly in the pretext of hang outs. Back then raavi-shiva were unknown of there feeling, but they still thanks sneha and mohit mentally for making them realise there feeling unknowingly. Shivi relation is still a secret for them.

Mo: (pleading) please bhai…..dekh tujhe raavi ko saath lane ke liye nhi bolunga pakka please…..

Sh: (in mind) usse hi toh lana hai….lekin itni asaani se maan jaunga toh tujhe sakk ho jayega…..(to mohit) acha thik hai thik hai…chal….

Mo: thank you bhai…

Shiva drives to the secret spot of sneha and mohit where raavi and sneha were waiting for them. Mohit gets off the bike and hugs sneha. Taking advantage of sneha-mohit lost in the moment, raavi gives shiva a flying kiss. Shiva catches it and keep it close to his heart. Sneha and mohit break the hug.

Sn: thank you guys…tum dono ne bahut madad ki hum logo ki…..

Shivi: 🤗

Sn: acha shiva please raavi ko ghar chod do….

Mo: vo mai-

Sh: (cutting mohit) hn chodunga iss chipkali ko….

Mo: abhi toh tu mana kar rha tha….

Sh: vo-voh ye chipkali ka kya bharosa….pta nhi kya kaand karde raaste me…..aur phir bhabhi keh rahi hai….(gives an awkward smile)

Raavi rolls her eyes in her mind.

Shivi gets on the bike and shiva drives it off. He stops at his tree. Both gets off and climb up the tree.

Ra: (resting her head on his shoulder) shiva…..

Sh: hmm?..

Ra: (smiling)ek hafte baad humare relation ship ko 4 months pure ho jayenge….

Sh: hn….(smiles) time kaise pankh lagake udd gya na…pata hi nhi chala……

Ra: hn…..(snuggles into him)

Sh: (rests his head on her) aaj aate hue soch raha tha ki hum kitne gadhere the….hume humari feelings bhi snha aur mohit ne realise karayi…..

Ra: aur vo bhi bina kuch jaane….

Both chuckles. Shiva takes her and kisses her plam. Both of them drifts to memories of the day when they realized that they love each other.

FLASHBACK

It had been 5-6 days since when shiva became her savior. All this time,both of them were hell confused about the things they done and felt. They tried best to avoid eye contact with each other.

That day, sneha called raavi and told that she is in love with a guy named mohit. Sneha asks raavi for help her for the secret meeting as she planned to confess him that day. Raavi happily agrees.

Elsewhere, mohit convienced shiva to drop him to the venue sneha called him. he also was sure of his feeling and was determinant to confess that day only. Shiva rolls his seeing mohit’s excitement and agreed to help him.

(next scens are parallel where shiva and mohit are talking while driving and raavi and sneha are at the palce where they need to meet. Dialogues will be mixed. hope you got what I am trying to say😅)

Sh: (while walking) toh tu sure hai ki tujhe sneha se pyaar hai……

Sn: (smiling cheekishly) hn….101% sure…….

Ra: acha….toh tujhe ye bhi surety hai ki voh bhi yahi feel karta hai…..

Mo: yahi darr sata raha hai….dil kehta hn par phir bhi darr hai…..

Sh: baat th sahi hai….(curiously)par ye bata tujhe pta kaise chala kitujhe usse pyar hai?…..

Sn: bas lag gya pata?.....(smricks)

Ra: (hitting her arm) sahi se bata….

Mo: (chuckles) aisa kuch bada nhi hota bas samne waala apko affect karne lagta hai…..usse leke aapke mann me alag tarha ke ehsaas hone lagte hai……

Sh: *thinks of the times when raavi affected him*

Sn: agr vo aapse naaraj ho toh aap chain se na baith pao..

Ra: *remembers her restlessness when shiva was angry with her after the party day *

Mo: jab vo aapko bulaye toh aapko koi aur nazar na aaye

Sh: *remembers how he rushed when raavi called him on the party day*

Sn: agr vo kisi cheez ko leke dukhi ho toh aap edi chuti ka dum laga do usse khush karne ke liye

Ra: *remembers how she searched for his locket just to see him happy*

Mo: koi uske baare me ulta seedha bole toh app khud ko rok na paao….

Sh:*remembers the way his blood boiled when people were giggling on raavi’s condition in college *

Sn: uski baatein aapko seedha dil pe lagne lage

Ra: *remembers how shiva’s words effect her*

Mo: vo dard me ho toh uska dard aapko mehsus ho

Sh:*remembers his heart ache when he saw raavi in that condition on sneha’s birthday*

Sn: jiski baahon me aake raahat si lage….

Ra: *remembers how much safe she felt in his embrace*

Both kept thinking of eachother while connecting the point. They came out of their trance when shiva nad mohit arrived the place. Mohit and sneha shares an eyelock. Shivi’s hearts started beating loudly as they saw each other. ‘you love your chipkali/bhoothnath’said shiva and raavi’s heart respectively. Both smiled brightly at this realization. Both were having tough time to control their happiness in front of each other. Both were so happy that they failed to notice other’s smile. They are gadhedas. All four came out of their la-la land as a vehile passes by. Mohit and sneha thanked shiva and raavi for helping them. Sneha requested shiva to drop raavi and shiva agreed.

Shiva started the bike and gestures her to sit. Raavi held his shoulder and sat. smiles didn’t leave their faces. As raavi sat shiva drives off.

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Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya
Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya
Chun liya
Maine Sun liya
as shiva drived, raavi shifted a little to catch glimpse of his smiling face. When shiva noticed this, she turned away. Shiva smiled brighter. She again turned to him again and looked at him lovingly.
[Music]

Raavi made shiva stop in the starting of market and said that she would go herself. Without listening to him, she ran away but not before taking one more glimpse of her love. Shiva looked at the retreating figure with smiling face.

He drove to his tree while raavi happily ran in the streets of market. Smile never left their faces.

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

shiva reached the tree. He climbed and jumped for there.
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata
he sat down and rested his head on th trunk. He shaked his headsmiling. He took pluked some roses from a bush near by and throws the petals inthe air. He pluked one more flower and kissed it.
Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar
he lied on the heap of old leaves and recalled his moments with raavi.
[Music]

Asraavi ran across the market happily, her eyes land on a ‘S’ shaped pendent. It made her remember of her times with shiva. She chuckled. She brought it and ran towards her house.

Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin

shiva went back store. He entered the store jumping and hugged kaka surprising him.
Udta hi firoon in hawaon mein kahin
Ya main jhool jaoon in ghataon mein kahin

he took handful of jeera and threw it in air. He did same with daniya seeds, rice,wheat and red chilli. Kaka tried to stop, he didn’t.
Ek kar doon aasmaan zameen
Kaho yaaron kya karoon kya nahin
he went inside the storeroom. There is fell on the sacks of cereals and laughed.
Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

shiva lifted himself on his elbow.
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

He took his phone out and opens raavi’s pic. He admired it and kissed it. He held it close to his heart.

Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

He lied back on sacks smiling.
[Music]

As raavi was returning back, she bumped with dhara and suman. Raavi gave them avery bright smile. She hugged dhara and touched suman’s feet. Both suman and dhara got confused at her behaviour but before they could ask she ran away.

Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke

raavi reached her house hopping. She called out her maasi and anita at top of her voice. they both came.
Usne baat ki kuchh aise dhang se
Sapne de gaya vo hazaaron range ke

Raavi twrilled her maasi around first and then anita.
Reh jaoon jaise main haar ke
Aur choome vo mujhe pyaar se
She fell back on sofa laughing. She closed her and felt shiva’s lips on her cheek. She opened her eyes to realise that it was a dream.

Prafulla and anita shook their head at the crazy person in front of them.
Pehla nasha
Pehla khumaar

Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
She gotup and ran to her room and started dancing with her teddy bear.

Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar

[Music]

She bumped onto the bed and fell on it. She picked up her phone and opened shiva’s pic. She kissed it and held it near her heart.

Shiva and raavi lied in store and room respectively smiling like idiots.

Shivi:I love you raavi/shiva💖💖

FLASHBACK ENDS

so here it is guys.....bahut jaldi likha hai....hope it's up to your guys expectations....do tell how was it, especially the song part......

THANKS FOR READING

LOVE YOU GUYS💖💖

I switchrd on the song and read it simultaneously🤩🤩

My god i was literally feeling both of them twirling, smiling and dancing❣️❣️

Great update😘😘

Eagerly waiting for more😍😍