*Do Anjaane* RA (pt 42/pg 74) updated!!! - Page 51

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Posted: 17 years ago
very beautiful part..........ple continue soon...........cant wait for next part............thanks

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey continue soon yaar plzzzz....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey sara!!!!!!!!.........sorry for not been able to comment on your story 4 a long time now!!! 😭 .........i just caught up wt the story 😊......!!!!!!!.........i can't believe that sujal did all that just to know if kashish love's pratham or anyone else 😉 😊 😆 😭 !!!!!!!!!.......kashish tell pratham that she doesn't love him n see him as a friend nothing else .......bechara pratham 😭 😭 😭 .(i think he knows that sujal n kashish like each other 😉 😭 😛 )........sujal asking shiv when he knew that he love muskaan n how 😉 😊 😉........smth is going on 😆.~~~~~!!!!!!!.......sujal n kashish become friend again n ask to forgive 4 wht they have done 😭 😊 😛 ........sujal ask kashsih if she will go 4 dinnner wt him alone, she hestitate but then says yes 😊!!!!!!...........kashish is all happy getting ready 😊.., when muskaan comes n tell her that shiv is taking everyone out for dinner 😊!!!!!!.......bechari kashsih 😭!!!!......sujal gets a call from some riya n tell she ask him 2 meet her 😭!.........sujal see kashish n just keep looking at her 😳 😉 😳..!!!!!!.........yaar sujal haar baar kash se ek hi sawal kyun puchtahe 😆......if she love someone, or someone proposed her 😆 😉 !!!!!...........meet to wanna know who's gonna propose her on knee 😉 😆 😊 😉!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..........she tell her abt shiv plans of going out wt everyone n sujal also tell her that she has to come with him ......n he doesn't care how 😉 😆 😊......n that he's waiting 4 him in the car .....leaving behind a worried kashish 😭!!!!!!!........bechare kashish phasgaie sujal aur apni dee ke biech !!!!!!!!!.............sarra plzzzzzzzzz continue soon .......can't wait !!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part sara 👏 👏 kashish is ina fix now 😕 😕 is she gonna go wid him 😕 cont soon plz sara 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks for commentin guys... i will post so0n as i am w0rkin 0n it...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Recap: sujal asks kashish to go out alone with him. Kashish's confused as she wanted to go with everyone.. ab aagey!!

Part 38

Kashish was wandering here and there…. Muskaan came up to her.
Muskaan: kashish…
Kashish looks at her with a worried face…
Muskaan: kya hua? Tum itni pareshaan kyun lagrahee ho??
Kashish: jeejee.. wohh…
Muskaan: haan bolo…kya baat hai?
Kashish: wohh main…
Just then Sujal comes…
Sujal: muskaan bhabhi…
Muskaan: haan?
Sujal : aap yahan kharee hain… aur bahar shiv bhaiya aapka wait kerrahe hain…
Muskaan: kya?
Sujal: haan…
Muskaan: array haan.. main toh bhool hee gayee.. aaj toh Shiv hum sab ko dinner per le kar jarahe hain…
Kashish looks at sujal…
Muskaan moves out..
Sujal n kashish follow her…

Shiv was seated in the car.. waiting for everyone…
Muskaan sits in the car…
Shiv: chalein?? (questions her)
Muskaan nods…
Sujal n kashish were standing outside…
Shiv: tum donon bahar kyun khare ho? C'mon get in…
Kashish glances at sujal.. and so as he…
Shiv: jaana nahi hai kya??
Sujal leans onto the car window in order to talk to shiv…
Sujal: shiv bhaiyya, mujhe lagta hai k aap donon ko akele jaana chhaiye…
Kashish gives him a look…
Shiv: lekin .. kyuun?
Sujal: actually... hum aap donon k beech, kabab mein haddi nahi banna chahte…
Kashish giggles lightly..
Muskaan: yeh koi baat nahi hoti Sujal.. chalo.. garee mein beth jao…
Sujal: bhabhi ,, aap samajhti kyun nahi hain?? Aap ko ek dusre k saath zyada se zyada waqt guzaarna chhaiye… aur waise bhi aap donon k beech, mera aur kashish ka kya kaam?
Shiv: jab sab saath mein jayeinge, toh aur bhi maza ayega… yun toh main aur muskaan akele bore hojayeinge.
Sujal: kashish.. ab tum hee samjhaoo inko!
Kashish: I think… humein inke saath jaana chahiye Sujal…
Sujal: (was taken aback) what??
Kashish nodded happily..
Sujal: toh theek hai… tum jao inke saath… main nahi jaraha! (walks away)
Shiv: array.. ab isse kya hogaya!
Kashish shakes her head…
Shiv: toh phir kya kerein??
Kashish: shiv jeeju, aap log jaiye.. main ghar mein hee rehti hoon…
Shiv: lekin kashish…
Kashish: koi baat nahi… main phir kabhi chali jaoongi… aap jaiye.. ..
Shiv: r u sure?
Kashish: haan jeeju…
Shiv: hmmm.. okay… ( they both drive off )

Kashish waapis ghar ki taraf jaati hai… she starts searchin sujal.. and finds him nowhere… she walks up to his room…

Sujal chup chaap bed per leta tha… and ofcourse uska mood bhi off tha…
Kashish stepped inside …

Kashish: sujal…
Sujal got up instantly…
Sujal: tum gayee nahi?!!? (said it very rudely)
Kashish felt bad.. but then ignored…
Kashish: tumhein chor ker kaise jasakti thi?
Sujal: apna yeh dhonk band kero kashish…
Kashish was moved by his words…
Sujal: main sab samajhta hoon… tumhara yeh joh jhoota natak hai na.. ab isse khatam ker do… kyunk ab main tumhari kisi bhi baat per yakeen nahi kerne waala!
Kashish: lekin maine aisa kya kerdiya??
Sujal: yeh baat agar tum apne aap se poochogi , tohh im sure iska jawaab bhi tumhein mil jayega…
Kashish remained quiet… still tensed…
Sujal: maine tumse kaha tha na k hum donon akele jayeinge… toh phir bahar sab k saamne yeh kehne ki kya zaroorat thi k hum unke saath chale jayeinge.. haan?
Kashish: maine toh bas… yun hee kehdiya…
Sujal: tum aisa kaise kehsakti ho Kashish!!?!?!?
Kashish: sujal… tum kuch zyada hee over react karahe ho!
Sujal: what?? Kya kaha tumne? Main overeact keraha hoon?? Main?? (points towards himself)
Kashish folded her arms… and tried to be calm…
Sujal: theek hai.. agar tumhein lagta hai k main overeact karaha hoon .. toh then its fine! U may leave now.. (turns to the other side)
Kashish: sujal plzz.. choro yeh larayee jhagra… agar hum aaj nahi jasake toh kya hua, phir kabhi chale jayeinge…
Sujal: nahi… hum kahin nahi jayeinge… never…. Ever…
Kashish was shocked again…
Sujal: aaj tumne saabit kerdiya Kashish… k tum kabhi meri dosti k laik nahi thi…
Kashish was stunned… shocked….
Sujal: (turns to look at her) galati ki maine.. joh tumhari taraf apni dosti ka haath barhaya…
Kashish 's eyes were filled with tears…
Sujal: aaakhir tumne apne chote pan ka ehsaas kara hee diya na…
Kashish started weeping.. without uttering any word…
Sujal: u don't deserve my friendship Kashish…. U don't!
Kashish was still weeping…
Sujal turned to the other side.. and started giggling… he was just joking around with her… aur kashish serious hogayee thi….
Sujal jab peeche mur ker dekhta hai toh finds kashish sittin down on the floor …and she was crying…literally…
Sujal was amazed… yet felt bad for her…
He stepped near her… and then picked her up…
Sujal: Kashish… (held her arms)
Kashish was crying…. And was looking down…
Sujal : c'mon Kashish.. don't get senti yaar… tumhein kya laga k main serious tha?
Kashish looked at him…
Sujal: main kabhi zindagi mein serious nahi hua.. toh phir aaj kaise..?
Kashish narrows her brows…
Sujal: main toh mazaak karaha tha….
Kashish: (wiped her tears) kyaa? (in a sobbing tone)
Sujal nodded…
Kashish: sujal tum…?!?!?! Tum aisa kaise???
Sujal smirked…
Kashish : I hate you.. (started hitting him on the chest.. ehheheheehhe)
Sujal: arreey… sorry yaar!
Kashish: I hate you.. I really hate you.. (continued hitting.. hehe… array kashish toh Hitler ban gayee…)
Sujal: array bola na sorry!
Kashish: kya kabhi serious nahi hosakte tum??? (scolded him in a weeping tone)
Sujal stared her…
Kashish: har baar mazaak mazaaak aur mazaak! Har cheez ko mazak bana ker rakhdiya hai tumne!!
Sujal felt embarrassed…
Kashish: tumne kabhi yeh nahi socha k tumhare mazak se kisi k dil ko chot bhi pohanch sakti hai?? Kabhi nahi socha tumne?!!??!! (frowned at him)
Sujal apni nazrein sharm se jhuka leta hai…
Kashish: (grabbed his collar) aainda agar tumne mere saath phir se koi mazaak kerne ki koshish ki toh.. main.. tumse kabhi baat nahi keroongi… kabhi bhi nahi…
Sujal was stunned…
Kashish: suna tumne sujal?!?!
Sujal nodded lightly…
Kashish: (releases his collar) aise kaise dosti ko khatam ker sakte ho tum? Haan?? Kaise???
Sujal: sorry Kashish… (put his hands onto her shoulders) im really sorry…
Kashish started weeping again…
Sujal wipped off her tears… makin her feel comfortable…
Kashish ran into his arms instantly….and embraced him tightly…
Kashish: dobara phir aisa mazaak mat kerna sujal… plzz…
Sujal: (puts his arms around her too) nahi keroonga Kashish… kabhi nahi…
They both hugged each other …. Both of them had closed their eyes… and for a moment, they were lost into each other…
Kashish opened her eyes slowly.. and realized what she was doing… she moved back all of a sudden..
Sujal too came into his senses.
Kashish turned to the other side… moved her hair at the back…
Sujal: Kashish…
Kashish remained still.. didn't move..
Sujal: mujhe… bhook lagrahee hai…. Kuch khaane ko mileyga?
Kashish: haan.. main abhi khana lagati hoon… (she went outside…)

Sujal remembered their hug scene… and smiled…

End of part 38.
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwwwww..........soooooooooo sweet 👏 . hey sara i loved the part very much dear 😉 .at first when sujal says all that to kashish i was really shocked 😲 and was sooooo damn angry on him jab he was saying that she doesn't deserve his friendship and all i was really pissed off and mad at him 😡 . but was really relieved when he said that he was kidding . but he shouldn't have done like this na .kashish ko kitna hurt hua 😭 .and ohhhhh godddddd.....i loved the way she was hitting him saying i hate u and finally ended up hugging each other 🤗 .inn dono ne na abb pyaar ka izahar karna hi chahiye 😳 .i am just waiting for it 👏 .really exceited to know what will happen next 😉 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzz........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
part was great. but why does sujal trouble kash so much
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww great mam...sukar app nay b likha jus kidding fab yar..
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

part was great. but why does sujal trouble kash so much

yeh toh Sujal ko hee pata ho...😆😆😆

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