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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part 👏 .............enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 18 years ago

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nice part 👏 .............enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

Ok im postin the next part after alot of delay! here u go!

Recap: Nothing happened as such…Except that Sujal is taking interest in Preeti.


Part 13

They had taken their rest and now it was the dinner time…
Muskaan had been in the kitchen since afternoon and was preparing the dinner.
Savita: (comes into the kitchen) Beta….khana taiyaar hogaya?
Kashish was preparing the salad n all..
Muskaan: jee Maa.. bass.. hogaya..
Kashish: jeejee… main khana lagatii hoonn..
Muskaan: haan…

Mihir welcomes them into their house and makes them sit comfortably on the dinning table.
Preeti too comes from the back side of the house and enters directly into the kitchen.
Muskaan: array Preeti.. tum agayee?
Preeti: haan… wohh kya hainaa.. ghar mein bore horahee thii.. toh socha k yahan chalii aoon…
Muskaan: acha kiyaa… chalo tum bhi Kashish ki help kero..
Kashish: nahi … maine khana laga diya hai…uski koi zaroorat nahi hai…
Preeti comes closer to Kashish and takes her on aside..
Kashish: kya hua?
Preeti: wohh log agaye kyaa?
Kashish: haan.. agaye.. bas ab khaana khaney waley hain..
Preeti: ahaan…

Shiv sits on the seat and was ready to eat..and so as Veena and Cg.
Sujal: ufff… barrii bhook lagrahee haii…(says to Pratham)
Preeti: (taunts) kyun? Ghar mein khaney ko nahhi milta kya? ( she was also there by that time )
Sujal: (glances at her.. and preeti laughs)
Pratham: chal na Sujal… beth jaa…
Sujal: hmmm… ( he takes the seat and sits on itt.. but isse pehle k wohh bethta, the chair slips onto the other side.. and Sujal falls down on the floor..)
Preeti starts laughing and so as Kashish.
Veena: Suuujal…
Shiv stands up and then giggles..hehe…
Sujal feels a bit embarrassed… he looks at everyone and then manages to get up
Savita: puttarr… tum theek toh ho naa?
Sujal: jeee.. wohh.. (moves his hand thru his hair…)
Savita: array baap re.. (looks onto the chair) yeh kurrsii toh tttuuutee (broken) huyee hai… (becomes angry) kisne yeh tuutiii huyee kursii yahan rakhiii…??? Kisne??
Preeti feels ashamed cuz she had done tht on purpose…
Kashish: umm… Maa.. wohhh shayad mujhse galatii..
Savita: bakwaas band kerooo..!!
Kashish looked down in embarrassment..while Mihir looked herr..
Savita: uthaoo isse yahan se… aur doossrii le kar aaoo…
Muskaan feels bad too.. and so as Preeti.
Kashish: (her eyes became watery) jeee….
Pratham felt bad as well… and so as everyone.
Kashish picked up the chair.. and walked away with it.. Sujal looked her..
Sujal: (to himself) iske saath toh aise hee hona chahiye…. Kuch zyada hee ghusaa dikha rahee thii mujhe… ab maza aya naa… Kashhhiiisssshh.. ( and then he smirked )
Itne mein she brought another chair..and put it there so that Sujal could sit..
Sujal: (mockingly) Thank You…
Kashish walked away…
Savita: uuhh.. aap log khana shuru kijiyee.. plzz..
Everyone starts eating..
Mihir Savita ko side mein le jaata hai…
Mihir: kya zaroorat thi sab k saamney Kashish per chilaaney ki?
Savita: aap chup rahiye.. maine joh kiya theek kiyaa…(walked away… becharey Mihir ki kaun sunta hai? Lol)
Kashish went up into her room.. and started crying..
Preeti followed her…
Preeti: Im sorry Kashish… Im really sorry…
Kashish: (wipped off her tears)
Preeti: Wohh tutee huee chair meine hee wahan rakhi thi…(feels ashamed)
Kashish: tum ne?
Preeti: I'm sorry kashish..mein toh bas sujal ko sabaq sikhana chahti thi…that's it..mujhe kya maloom tha k meri galati ki saza tumhe mile giii…mein abhi ja ker aunty ko sab kuch sach batadeti hun….
Kashish: nahi preeti tum aisa bilkul nahi kerogii….shayad merii kismet hee aisee hai…
Preeti feels more badd…
Kashish: achaa.. tum ab neeche jaoo… main thori der baad aati hoon…
Preeti: nahi… tum mere saath chaloo… abhi..
Kashish: parr…
Preeti: par var kuch nahi.. chaloo ab…

They both go down.. and everyone enjoy the dinner…
Well.. isi tarah raat hojaati and then subah bhi hojaati hai…

Shiv was gettinn ready for the breakfast…
He was buttoning up his t-shirt…suddenly. .. he thought of Muskaan…. Her smile… her innocent eyes… her face.. n all.. and then smiled…
Veena enters..
Veena: kya baat hai beta? Aaj subah subah bohat khush lagrahe ho?
Shiv: Mom… ab aap se kya chupaana… (he hugs her)
Veena: array…?
Shiv: (feels happy) Mom.. Im in love…
Veena: achaa?
Shiv: haaan…(moves back) im in love with.. Muskaan…
Veena smiles..
Just then Sujal n Pratham enter singing…
Sujal n Pratham: Pyaar toh honaa hee thaa… Pyaar toh honaa hee thaaa…
Shiv: oh Godd..!
Veena: (smiles) sach hee toh kehrahe hain yeh donon… Tumhein pyaar toh ho hee gaya na?
Shiv blushes and then says: haan…
Sujal and Pratham scream out…and then Shiv se hug kerlete hain…

Sab were present at the breakfast… They were having in the garden…weather seemed to be very pleasant..
Cg: Mihir jee… aap se ek baat kehni thii
Mihir:: haan haan…. Kahiye naa…
Cg: jaisa k aap jaantey hain k Shiv aur Muskaan ka rishta pukka ho chukka hai…
Shiv n Muskaan share a glance..
Cg: is liye.. Maine aur Veena ne socha hai k kyun na inki sagayee kerne k baad hee hum waapis Mumbai jayein..
Sujal smiles…
Muskaan blushes..
Shiv feels great…….
Mihir: sagayee?
Savita: haan haan.. is mein bura hee kya hai?? Humein koi problem nahi hai
Mihir: lekin itni jaldii?
Veena: bhai sahab.. aap un sab baaton ki chinta mat kijiye.. hum hainaa… hum sab kerleinge…
mihir: lekin…
cg: mihir jee…veena theek kehrahee hai… ab jab k yeh rishta done ho chukka hai.. toh main chahta hoon k is rishtey ko baandh liya jaye…
Veena: hum sagayee ker k waapis lot jayeinge.. Aur jab shaadi ki date fix hojayegi, tab Muskaan ko yahan se lejayeinge,….
Savita: bahee mujhe toh koi problem nahi hai… Muskaan toh aap ki hee hai… jab chaahein le jayein…
Mihir: parrr…
Pratham: maan jaiye na uncle.. Plzz..
Sujal: plzz uncle..
Mihir looked confused and then luked at Muskaan…
Muskaan just nodded..
Mihir: theek hai.. mujhe bhi manzoor hai…
Cg: yeh huyee na baat…
Veena: aap kisi pandit jee ko bulwa ker sagayee ka muharat nikal waaiye…
Savita: haan.. main abhi pandit jee ko fone kertii hoon…


Well.. Pandit jee acha sa muharat de dete hain.. and sagayee ki date bhi fix hojaati hai… Ghar mein sagayee ki taiyaariaan dhoom dhaam se horahee hoti hain.. Mihir was very bzz.. and he wanted to make the best arrangements as possible..
Sagayee ki shopping bhi hojaati hai…
Sundernagar ki kisi achi jeweler shop se Veena gets a ring for Muskaan…aur wohh bhi Shiv ki pasand kii…

Isi tarah sagayee ka dinn bhi aajata hai.. Everyone was getting ready…
Muskaan looked really pretty in a pink salwar kameez…
Shiv wore also wore a black embroided salwar kurta..

Muskaan was happy cuz ab usse bhi Shiv pasand aachuka tha…
Well the sagayee had started…
Everyone was present at the function.. Cg had invited all of his relatives and cousins from Mumbai…
Cg: I think ab humein sagayee ki rasam kerleni chahiye…
Mihir: haan… ek minute… (calls Savita)
Savita: jeee.. kya huaa?
Mihir: Kashish se kaho k Muskaan ko neeche le aye..
Savita: abhi kehtii huunn..
After a while Preeti and Kashish Muskaan ko neeche le kar aati hain…
Shiv Muskaan ko dekh ker bohat khush hota hai…
Sujal: bhabhi kitni pyaari lagrahee hainaa…
Pratham: haan… after all Bhabhi kiski hain?? (apna collar utha ker kehta hai)
Sujal : merii. ( laughs while Pratham sharminda hojaata hai)

Muskaan stands there on the floor with Shiv..
Shiv: you're looking gorgeous..
Muskaan: (blushes)
Sujal notices Preeti.. . she luked stunning..
Sujal singalled her with his fingers that she looked really pretty… Preeti looked at him and just ignored him..
Pratham: bhool jaa… yahan teri daal nahi galne waali..
Sujal: will you plzz shut up..
Pratham apne lips k aagey haath rakh leta hai…
Cg: acha… ab aya waqt rings exchange kerne kaa…
Veena: yeh lo Shiv beta… Muskaan ko ring pehnaa doo…
Shiv takes the ring from her and then puts it into Muskaan's left hand finger..
Everyone claps…
Ab Muskaan usse ring pehna deti hai…
The sagayee was done.. and everyone kept enjoying themselves.
Sujal: (to a kid) sunnoo…
Kid: jee?
Sujal: ek kaam keroo..
Kid: kyuun??
Sujal: array bola na keroo
Kid: kyuun?
Sujal: uff… agar mera yeh kaam keroogey toh main tumhein ek chocolate doonga .. theek hai?
Kid: kaunsi chocolate?
Sujal: uuuuummm…
Kid: soch kyun rahe ho?? Aap k paas toh koi bhi chocolate nahi hai….main jaraha hoon..
Sujal held him..
Sujal: haan mere paas.. main tumhein dairy milk chocolate doongaa… okay…
Kid: pehle yeh batao k chocolate hai kahan?
Sujal: meri pocket mein…!! Khush?
Kid : acha kerna kya hai??
Sujal: wohh jo saamne larki kharii hai naa.. blue dress waali..
Kid: array yeh toh Preeti didi hain..
Sujal: haan wohee… usse jaa ker kaho k usse koi ooper room mein bula raha haii…
Kid: per kaun?
Sujal: wohh sab choro.. tum usse yeh msg pohancha doo..
Kid: theek hai.. (left)
Sujal: hmm…isse pehle k Preeti ooper jaye, pehle main wahan pohanchta hoon…
Kashish was serving everyone…
Pratham: (looked at her.. and thought) lagta hai k mujhe bhi kuch baat kerleni chahiye…
Pratham walked towards her…
Pratham: hii…
Kashish: umm .. hii…
Pratham: aisa lagraha hai jaise chaand zameen per utar aaya hoo..
Kashish: (smiles) jee… umm… excuse mee…
Pratham: array.. suniye tohh… main mazaak ker raha thaa…
Kashish: mujhe kuch kaam hai… main abhi aati hoon…
Pratham: kaam toh baad mein bhi hosakta hai…
Kashish: (makes a straight face) kahiye… kya kehna chahtey hain aap?
Pratham: wohh.. actually… main yeh kehna chahta tha k … will you dance with me?
Kashish: dance?
Pratham: haan… dance..
Kashish: im sorry perr… mujhe dance nahi kerna aata…
Pratham: is mein mushkil kya hai.. aap aaiye mere saath… main sikhaata hoon…
Kashish: noo.. thanks.. mujhe nahi kernaa…
Pratham: c'mon… you will have fun….
Kashish : nahi…
Pratham: (kept on insisting) c'mon…. ( all of a sudden, the glass in his hand tripped over Kashish's dress)
Pratham: ohhh.. im sooo sorry Kashish
Kashish: oh noo…
Pratham: im really sorry…
Kashish: (worried) its okay… ( she left )
Pratham: (to himself) shitt.. yeh kya kerdiya maine…
The kid had told Preeti that someone was waiting for her upstairs..
Preeti went up to the terrace and started looking everywhere..
Kashish went upstairs to her room to swap her clothes.. she locked the door.
It was dark there…
She opened her cupboard and picked up a dress…
Meanwhile Sujal came out of the bathroom quietly..
He thought that Preeti was standing there…
He walked upto her silently and held her waist from the back…
Kashish tried to scream but Sujal put his hand around her mouth and pushed her back towards the wall..
Kashish tried to scream but still her mouth was covered with his hand..
Sooner he realized that it wasn't Preeti but Kashish.
He looked into her eyes which were filled with terror and fear…
Sujal moved his hand back.. and then she pushed him back hardly
Kashish: how dare you??? (she shouted at him) hotey kaun ho tum???
Sujal: Im sorry… mujhe pata nahi thaa k …
Kashish: shut up….. tumhari itnii himmat k tum mere kamrey mein??
Sujal: relax…….plzzz.. mujhe nahi pata tha k yeh tumhara room hai….(tries to explain her)
Kashish feels disgusted..
Sujal: im mistaken.. misunderstood… im sorry…
Kashish: jab maine tumhein pehli baar dekha thaa toh mujhe yakeen hogaya thaa k tum kis type k larkey hoo
Sujal was getting annoyed…and usse ghussa aaney laga thaa…
Kashish: nihayathee ghatiya aur besharam insaan ho tum…
Sujal: will you just shut up… Tum mere baarey mein kuch jaanti nahi.. aur aise hee bakke jarahee hoo…
Kashish: sach kehrahee hoo main… you are cheap… disgusting….siccck!!
Sujal ko full time ghussa aajata hai.. and then he pushes her towards the wall…. And holds her hand tightly…
Kashish: choro mujhe!! How dare you… …
Sujal: ab agar tumne mujhe cheap keh hee diya hai.. (brought his face closer to hers) toh main tumhein batata hoon k cheap insaan kaisa hota hai..
Kashish was trying to escape her hands.. but she couldn't.. Sujal looked into her eyes…. While Kashish felt more scared…

End of Part 12.

Guys.. do comment!!! 😊


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Posted: 18 years ago
wow wow wow sara dear awesome parrt loved it tooooo gooooood bhai sujal ko ghussa bi attah hai kya 😆 not gooood yaaaaar hehe lol continue soooon yaar..
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part sara dear 👏 ...i hope sujal won't do anything 😕 cont soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey another awesome part dear............uh-huh.......ye sujal ko kya hogaya hai.......inse preeti ko upar kyun bulaya tha........i mean ..........ewww.................sujal......naughty buy..........but preeti ke jagah kashish milo gayi 😆 ..ab kya hoga 😕 continue soon 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
plz continue soon waiting for kashish reaction

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