RaYa FF: Twisted Emotions - Ram ki Siya - Page 13 {Re-writing For BALH - Page 7

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Posted: 2 years ago
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SaVick Proposal




Sara and Brinda became friends after they met for the first time. They were just like soulmates and the same time Vikrant proposed Sara in front of everyone in the bakery and they clapped and shout for their friends' happiness.



Brinda hugged Sara, so as Priya and Ram and Adi punched their best friend Vikrant and said in unison, "Abe sale Vicky pyaar ho gaya, ladki propose kar di aur dosto ko bataya bhi nahi"


"Ouch! Maaf kar do yaar sab, tum logo se jyada sali sahiba ka dar tha isiliye nahi bataya," he closed his eyes while saying.


Priya made a pout, "Haw! Waise chahu to abhi bhi de sakti hu ek," and smiled fake.


Vicky closed his eyes tight when Sara asked "Matlab?"


"Ek hug to banta hai na to be jiju ko," and Priya winked and giving a hug said, "My di is so lucky to have you"


"But how will we persuade ma," the worried Sara asked.


Sandy intervene in between, "Ma's favourite daughter is here na, then what is the point to worry"


"Me? No ways, Ma will kill me," Priya replied but Ram took the command in his hand, "Arey yaar sari duniya jisse darti hai wo bhi kisi se darti hai. Don't fake haan"


"I am not faking or fearing, but I respect her that's why," she said.


Brinda smiled at which he said, "Ok ok! We all respect her but baat to karna hai na"


Ram uttered, "I have an idea but you all have to co-operate especially mata Priya"


"Ram!," She shrieked.



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Ram called Meera as per his plan, "Meera aunty where are you?"


"Kya hua bacche? Is everything fine?," She asked him.


"No not at all, I mean aapse to acche se muqalat...I mean mulakat hi nahi hui," he slipped tongue in nervousness at which everyone snapped their forehead.


Meera smiled, "Aisi baat hai to aa jaiye ghar aap kabhi bhi ghar aa sakte hain," and assured him.


"Is that so, but agar Priya aa gayi to sau sawaal karegi," he said at which she asked, "ha!"


Ram replied, "then please at come Sara's Bakery," she agreed and disconnected the call.


Vikrant warned, "Arey oh Ram yahan kyu bulaya"


Ram smiled fake, "Don't you want to witness everything"


"Ha-Ha! Very thoughtful," Priya made fun of him.


Ram ignored her, "you all can hide here except Priya, I will bring aunty here only, fine.," Ram assured everyone.


They all hide behind the counter except Sara and Ram when Meera entered. Ram welcomed her and Sara showed her a fake reaction, "arey ma! Ap yahan?"


"Yeah Ram called me for meeting so...," She replied.


"Ok ok," Sara answered and continued, "please you both can talk I will make coffee"


Ram stopped her, "wait! I make very delicious coffee, let me do it. Aap log bethiye"


Everyone was nervous as Ram didn't even know how to on the stove. He hardly on the stove at direction of Priya, given by her from under the counter. She almost made the whole coffee as Meera's back was facing her.


He sold the coffee with his name to Meera and she said, "fragrance is good"


She took a sip and understood who made it. She called Priya, Ram tried to hide harder but finally he lost.

Edited by AWolfAndParrot - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
#62

Tagging few people who might be interested

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Priya Ki Kismat


Sara was about to leave for choosing the rings of her engagement but Vikrant had a hearing in the court and she too had to complete an order of a birthday bash, which was important.


Hence, Sara decided to let persuade Priya for choosing it out for her, because she has a very judgement about what will Sara like and about original and copy.


But, Priya denied to go alone for choosing so Sara called one of her best friend Ram, "Hey Ram! Me and Vikrant are in a trouble and we don't have another day to spoil after all the D-Day is day after tomorrow and then we will not be able to face each other as ritual"


"But how can I help you?," asked Ram.


"Can you go with Priya to chose the rings out," she asked for the favour.


Ram denied, "I would have but tumhari Hitler behen ke sath no ways!"


Sara dotted, "Can't you do this for me?"


Ram concerned, "I can do anything but it's my very important meeting"


"To postpone bhi kar sakte ho," she pouted but Priya intervene, "let it be di, I will go alone after all he don't treat you as a sister just claim"


Listening Priya, Ram immediately agreed, "Hey she is my sister, and I will go for her by cancelling any meeting, no matter how important it is"


"Whatever," Priya taunted him and Sara happily disconnected the call while warning her sister, "Ab waha ladna mat meri ma!"


"Ok, as you say," she replied.



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Ram and Priya reached jwellery shop where they select the rings and when they were leaving Priya collided with Mahendra Sood, witnessing whom she became numb. Her fingers were shivering with anger but she didn't realise that the ring slipped on the floor from the ring box, when it fell down.


Mahendra Sood picked it up, "Angoothi engagement se pehle zameen pe girna bura Shagun hota hai"


"I don't believe in this," she immediately replied in anger and was about to leave when he said, "Tu nahi manti to kya teri ma to manti hai na"


Ram was oblivious with the identity of man, but he wanted to find out who the hell was this man who was interfering in this matter.


"Ma bhi nahi manti ab to, jab se ap aye aur gaye unki life se Mr. Sood," she retorted.


He smirked, "Maine suna Sara ki kuch hi din mein sagayi hai"


"Are you following all of us," she asked.


"Jo tu thik samjhe," he replied and continued, "Magar meri beti se door rehna, kya hai na manhoos hai tu kismat hi buri hai teri, meri beti pe uska saya bhi nahi padhne dena"


This made Ram enough to understand that this man was Priya Sood's father who has left them years back.


"Apki beti? Kab se? She wasn't your daughter when you left her and her mother," Priya asked sarcastically and warned her father, "Door to aap rahiye meri family se warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga"


But Mahendra Sood wasn't ready to leave the topic and curse her own daughter.


"Shayad Akshay ne ek badi ladki pe hath mara hai paisa hi paisa, tum sab log ek jaise ho na," He laughed and she became angry before Ram could say anything, "Akshay is my brother and she is his would be wife, I wouldn't tolerate a word against them, understand!"


She left but he kept saying, "Apni buri Kismat bechari se door rakhna, sab ko barbaad kar deti hai"


Now, Ram took the charge and warned, "Stop all this, otherwise I wouldn't think I while to handle you over to the police, sadte rehna," and left behind Priya.



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Priya was crying in the rain, struggling with her umbrella which blow off and she drenched. Her tears weren't visible but noticable.


Ram reached and patted her back with which she immediately embraced him tight without realising who was it, "Meri kismat sach mein itni kharab hai ke main sab ko barbaad kar deti hoon"


"Bilkul nahi, what if he has said that nonsense I would love to let marry shivi with Akshay under your guidance because I know you are the best to guide and love her," Ram replied.


She cried, "Akshay don't want to marry because of me"


"He will. I will persuade him," he assured.


"Kaise?," She asked.


"By marrying with you," he announced.


She looked into his eyes, "Aapne suna na main kitni badkismat hoon phir ye mazak?"


"Mazak nahi sach hai," he replied.


She smiled fake, "dil rakhne ke liye na"


"Tumhari kasam," he cupped her face.


"Why don't you want to spoil yourself?," She asked like a child.


He laughed, "bilkul nahi"


"Matlab"


"Jo meeting maine tumhare kehne pe tumhare liye cancel ki wo venture accha hua ki ho nahi paya," he said and continued, "do you know why?"


She nodded head negatively.


"Because he was bankrupt, and me the business man Ram Kapoor didn't know," he laughed.


He continued when she was surprised, "but I came here with you, for you at your saying, and I am saved."


"To tumse shadi kar lunga to usse jyada fayede ka sauda to kuch hoga hi nahi," he kissed her forehead which made her cry and smile together

Edited by AWolfAndParrot - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Thank you, I love it when they call me to see something good)

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👏👏

This is for you🤗🤗❤

Don't make us wait long for the next part🥱

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Posted: 2 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: SEA05

Thank you, I love it when they call me to see something good)


Thank you so much for the feedback

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Poojac2510

👏👏

This is for you🤗🤗❤

Don't make us wait long for the next part🥱


Sure ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Loved it ☺️✨ loved the way ram consoled priya, telling her how he got saved from getting loss in business as he came with her , hugged her , consoled her , asked her to marry him , rather declared he would marry her , kiss on her forehead ☺️✨🤗 beautiful ☺️😇✨

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Posted: 2 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Jiyarao

Loved it ☺️✨ loved the way ram consoled priya, telling her how he got saved from getting loss in business as he came with her , hugged her , consoled her , asked her to marry him , rather declared he would marry her , kiss on her forehead ☺️✨🤗 beautiful ☺️😇✨


Thank you so much dear 😊😊

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Awesome....

Waiting for the next update 🥰❤

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