SKR FF 4:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 145 - Page 80

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Posted: 4 years ago

Mate.................................... Aapke charan chune he hume. What it takes to write such a thrilling episode? I want to know, your readers want to know. Since yesterday I was assuming many things about how actually you will show this part and when I read it I went dumbstruck. Couldn't found isse acha SiRa milan in any modern Ramayan part. Hats off to you, take a bow, zordar taliya aur sitiya aapke liye Saumya ji.

Kya ek se badhkar ek scenes dikhaye yar, matlab I was sitting on the edge while reading this. Har ek scene ke bad I took heavy breaths to control my excitement. Right from the start where Kaikasi slapped Raghvan, then Ram and others fighting with the gunda log, then Siya and Sulochana running, then Malhar locking Siya into a room, each and every scene was thriller.

Then finally the time when it was Ram and Raghvan standing in front of each other. Mujhe laga hi ki ye Raghvan mara nahi he. Bhai itne asani se kaise marega ye, isko to Ram goli marega na I mean I don't know how you are going to show this. Me koi risk nahi lungi sochne me qki you always surprise me.

Aur fir wo ghadi agayi jiska sabko intezar tha. SiRa standing in front of each other. I had tears of happiness and joy looking at them. Speechless, really I don't have words how should I praise you and your writing Saumya. Itne bade bade paragraph likhna wo bhi itna emotional way me, how you do it? I could actually feel them their emotions, wow ............

And then the cliffhanger expert, you stopped at that point jo mujhe laga hi tha. But now I think it will be a final fight between Ram and Raghvan, that too in front of Siya. Super excited.

Love,

Sammy

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it Saumya dear

Awesome and beautiful part 👏✊👍

I really don't know in bhai behen ko kya kahu they still don't understand that what happened was because of them only

Siya & Sulochna run to save themselves but got caught Kaiksi for the first time slapped Raghvan for assaulting his wife I hope she would have did it before then Raghvan would have been a better person & was saved

Raghvan & Ram faceoff was well written & now final round of Ram vs Raghvan begins ... Both are calculating each other powers & finally Ram thrashed Raghavan down in his villa

Finally Ram & Siya meet after a long time & that scene was a highlight of the update ... Emotions & reactions were penned beautifully 🤗🤗 absolutely apt & natural & that hug was beautiful 😍💓

Now Raghvan again comes in between firing on sira but now he has nothing left with him everything is ruined by himself

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🙏💕

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Posted: 4 years ago

Superb update🧡

Yeh Raghavan toh monster kehlane ke bhi layak nahi hai.. basically kisi chez ke bhi layak nahi hai... apni khud ki wife ko hi jo aise treat kare voh kis layak hoga...and Kaikasi ne jo aaj thappad mara hai voh agar pehle mara hota toh yeh sab shayad hota hi nahi...

Finally shero ki entry ho gayi chuhe ke bil mein....and voh bhi itni dhamakedar ki sab chuhe down at once😂... everyone won the show today actually....they all played important part till now...

Sulochana - Siya bas bhagne hi wale the itne yeh Malhar aa gaya.....Raghavan ke log sab hopeless hai....

And Ram-Raghavan yudh ho gaya finally... good and bad are fighting amongst each other now...and we all know who should win ..

And then last scene..jiske liye hum sab itna zada wait kar rahe the...SiRa milan🥺...itna emotional, peaceful, soothing and what not.....they remembering their last dialogues said to each other and after meeting again it was their first dialogue to each other, this was very beautiful...aisa laga they have fulfilled their promise given to each other...Siya waited and Ram arrived for her😍

And last mein phir cliffhanger par chord diya tumne..not fair😔

And cheers for completing 100 pages😍

Continue soon 😍

Edited by Sonali00 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Yess Ram aur Siya aakhir kaar mil hi Gaye! Dono theek hai ab lekin Raghavan itna ghatiya hai aakri dum Tak Siya ko nahi choda. Woh toh acha hua Ram ne push kar liye. Ab dono theek hi honge aisa main pray karti hoon. Baap re baap kya update tha. So gripping. Sulochana ne puri koshish ki Siya ko bachane ki aur Manda toh Raghavan se bhid gayi. Kaikasi ne Manda ka saath diya. Waah!! Yeh miracle hua kaise?! Anyways good going but left in the cliffhanger. Update soon ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Cliffhanger 🥲🥲


Cliffhanger ke bina story story Nahin reheta writer side bolta


Ahhh cliffhanger mere sanse atki huyi hain aage jane ke liye reader side bolta..


🤣🤣 Ishko ignore marte huye aage badhenge i guess goli kisine recieve karli🥲


Raghvan ne Manda ko gala pakad liya yeh bola Manda se shadi biggest mistake toh yeh ulta hain ns Manda ke liye... Bolna toh cahati thi Manda wife hain aishe behave nahin karna cahiye par Lankeswars toh hain hi aishe


Kaikesi yeh thappad agar salo pehele maari hoti toh Raghvan aisha na hota abhi akal aayi budhiya ko 🥲 cidiya toh khet cug cuki hain ab bas rone ki bari🥲


Finally inki entry hogayi.....


Ram Vs Raghvan mujhe Laksh vS Injerjeet fight yaad dilaya dikhane ke style ek tha which is center of attraction


Finally Sira mile 😍 siya ko aishe dekh Ram ur bhi toot gaya but sb tootne ki baari nahin Ravan ki Lanka todne ki baari hain I know Ram aisha karega


Baki action scenes ka kiya hi bolun both awesome main ishme description dene main buri huin toh maaph kare



I guess goli kisine recieve karli unhe bachne ke liye....



Abhi sab thik hone ja raha....2nd sepration na aajaye 2nd separation aaye bhi toh plz bahut late lao ur chotu sa least painful🥺 abhi ko hamko bas happy moments cahiye ohhh bhi bahut sare🥺

Edited by Arpita00001 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

@Same123: goli kisko lagi.? Kisiko nahi.... Ram saved him and Siya both. But now, the final fight is coming up.!


@Ria: maza aata hai cliffhanger dene me.! Haha.! Raghvan itne asani se kaise khatam hoga? Abb tak to Ram Raghvan ki fight jyada hui hi nahi. SiRa union everyone waiting for, yesss finally it happened. Emotional yet happy moments for us.

And answering your question, then Raghvan ne goli chalayi Ram and Siya ke taraf aur lagi kisiko nahi coz Ram saved both of them.


@Sammy: awww that was so sweet of you Samruddhi, I don't know about other modern stories but if you say so then I will take all the tarif, hahah.! I know today's part was so dramatic and full filmy, anyway itna drama to banta na boss. Talking about SiRa union, then those paragraphs are the reason I took time to update today. I have edited that again and again just to have that perfect emotions, and I guess I did that.


Thanks for the comments guys ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago

@Goldie: Kaikasi, bht der kar di meherban aate aate, like that Kaikasi ne bht der kar di thappad marte marte. Ram vs Raghvan fight, yes, both of them testing their powers and still the final battle is remaining. Today's highlight, SiRa union and yes we all were waiting for that. Thanks for that you love it, glad glad glad.!! Anyway, we all know the result, so yes next part is the end of Raghvan.


@Sonali: Raghvan, chalo chodo he is anyway dying in the next part, bhrasht buddhi ko aur kitna galiyan de. Yes, finally sheron ki entry hogayi chuhe ke bill me, and kya fighting hua hai boss. Ram vs Raghvan, for the first and the last time. Still the half part is remaining...

SiRa milan, finally they fulfilled their promise, she waited and he came. They are together again, yes.!


@Karu: Ram Siya mil gaye, but dono bhai behen ki nazar abhi hai unn dono par. Raghvan and Suvarna are still not ready to leave them. Yes you are right, dono theek hai. But abb Raghvan theek nahi rahega, qki Ram will kill him. Cliffhanger, I know excitement badh gaya, but we all know the result. Bas dekhna hai kaise hota hai..


Thanks for the comments guys ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Arpita00001

Cliffhanger 🥲🥲


Cliffhanger ke bina story story Nahin reheta writer side bolta


Ahhh cliffhanger mere sanse atki huyi hain aage jane ke liye reader side bolta..


🤣🤣 Ishko ignore marte huye aage badhenge i guess goli kisine recieve karli🥲


Raghvan ne Manda ko gala pakad liya yeh bola Manda se shadi biggest mistake toh yeh ulta hain ns Manda ke liye... Bolna toh cahati thi Manda wife hain aishe behave nahin karna cahiye par Lankeswars toh hain hi aishe


Kaikesi yeh thappad agar salo pehele maari hoti toh Raghvan aisha na hota abhi akal aayi budhiya ko 🥲 cidiya toh khet cug cuki hain ab bas rone ki bari🥲


Finally inki entry hogayi.....


Ram Vs Raghvan mujhe Laksh vS Injerjeet fight yaad dilaya dikhane ke style ek tha which is center of attraction


Finally Sira mile 😍 siya ko aishe dekh Ram ur bhi toot gaya but sb tootne ki baari nahin Ravan ki Lanka todne ki baari hain I know Ram aisha karega


Baki action scenes ka kiya hi bolun both awesome main ishme description dene main buri huin toh maaph kare



I guess goli kisine recieve karli unhe bachne ke liye....



Abhi sab thik hone ja raha....2nd sepration na aajaye 2nd separation aaye bhi toh plz bahut late lao ur chotu sa least painful🥺 abhi ko hamko bas happy moments cahiye ohhh bhi bahut sare🥺

Areh sorry for late comment, mene tumhara comment dekha hi nahi 🥺

Cliffhanger ke bina mera story complete nahi hota, aisa bolte hai 😂😌

Raghvan Manda ko bola raha hai, because of her his life is spoilt, we all should laugh at this dialogue hai na.? Kaikasi, that slap she should have dared bohot Pehele. But alas, Raghvan ko koi farak nahi padta.

Ram vs Raghvan, this fight has to be highlighted. Good vs bad, angel vs evil, fighting with each other and we all know who is the winner.

Finally SiRa met, that has to be a special moment for all of us. Finally they are one, but before that Raghvan has to be dead..!!!

Will update soon, stay tuned ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Array di its not a big deal😌


That's true😂


Yes we should laugh at this😂 and Raghvan toh bura ban cuka hain ur kiya sudhrega hath se chut cuka hain doobara thodi aayega


Yess yesss that's what i was telling 🤩🤩


Yes Raghvan ko toh marna hi hain...



Yes i'll waise di iss week mera admission hai toh kam hi dekh paungi..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Somuuuuu diiiiiiii! Where r u??? Pls update as soon as possible!💕💕💖💖🙏🙏 Eagerly waiting!😅💕💕💖💖💖

Edited by UnicornPrincess - 4 years ago

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