Shivi FF: Broken (Part 12, Pg.31) (finished) - Page 18

As someone who battled with depression for years, I always found it ridiculous how they expected Raavi to move on that easily in the show.

That girl was suicidal and they all expect her to take everything in her stride and not address her mental issues at all.

The slow course of recovery is portrayed brilliantly in your story, Ananya. Kudos!

I loved Shiva and Raavi's bond. Even from the start, Shiva was the only one who could elicit any sort of reaction from Raavi. He was the only one who could calm her down even though they claimed to hate each other prior to the incident.

I absolutely adore the way she worries for Shiva's welfare. She was even willing to face her fears, putting her absolute trust in him because she knows he's not gonna let her fall. That just hits different!

This story is a masterpiece! ❤️

Beautifully written story. Its a masterpiece👏

Beautifully written story ,Ananya .I have read all your works on this forum and you do such an amazing job with each of them.

To be able to write a complete seeti mar story Deewani bhabhi ke nuske and then be able to write broken on a very sensitive topic of suicide and recovery from depressing phase of life isn't an easy feat. Kudos to you . amazing work it is ..

Thank you for writing stories on ShiVi and keeping the spark that's sometimes missing on show , alive.

Looking forward to read a lot more stories from you

Wow... Again, I came here after two days and read all parts of this story in one go.

You are so good in writing all kind of emotions. Writing about depression is not easy and you wrote it beautifully. Great story.. Waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: barbieflora

As someone who battled with depression for years, I always found it ridiculous how they expected Raavi to move on that easily in the show.

That girl was suicidal and they all expect her to take everything in her stride and not address her mental issues at all.

The slow course of recovery is portrayed brilliantly in your story, Ananya. Kudos!

I loved Shiva and Raavi's bond. Even from the start, Shiva was the only one who could elicit any sort of reaction from Raavi. He was the only one who could calm her down even though they claimed to hate each other prior to the incident.

I absolutely adore the way she worries for Shiva's welfare. She was even willing to face her fears, putting her absolute trust in him because she knows he's not gonna let her fall. That just hits different!

This story is a masterpiece! ❤️

Thank you so much. I drew from my own experience while writing this. Even I’ve suffered from depression and it was the hardest thing ever. I’m sorry you went through the same. But now you’re better, and that’s all that matters.

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Beautifully written story ,Ananya .I have read all your works on this forum and you do such an amazing job with each of them.

To be able to write a complete seeti mar story Deewani bhabhi ke nuske and then be able to write broken on a very sensitive topic of suicide and recovery from depressing phase of life isn't an easy feat. Kudos to you . amazing work it is ..

Thank you for writing stories on ShiVi and keeping the spark that's sometimes missing on show , alive.

Looking forward to read a lot more stories from you

Thank you so much. This means a lot ❤️

Originally posted by: NephilimByHeart

Wow... Again, I came here after two days and read all parts of this story in one go.

You are so good in writing all kind of emotions. Writing about depression is not easy and you wrote it beautifully. Great story.. Waiting for next part.

Thanks a lot. This one was hard to write but I’m just glad you all are liking it

Originally posted by: ananya269

Thanks a lot. This one was hard to write but I’m just glad you all are liking it

I m actually loving it 🥰🥰

Originally posted by: ananya269

Thank you so much. I drew from my own experience while writing this. Even I’ve suffered from depression and it was the hardest thing ever. I’m sorry you went through the same. But now you’re better, and that’s all that matters.

I'm sorry too that you had to face a bad place in your life. It's really sad that almost everyone I come across has been through such phases in their lives. I'm glad you're in a better place now.🤗

read the updt once again.......