Shivi FF - fighting for love part 9 updated on page 16(completed) - Page 7

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Thus is such a beautiful story.

Loved all the chapters.❤️

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Great update. Finally Shiva is moving in the right direction 😆

Waiting to read what he does now :)

Beautiful update👏

Loved how you handled the man handling part👏

Finally Shiva realized that he can't leave without his chipkali and will do anything to win her back❤️

Shiva should be romantic and soft but maintain his aggressive side

amazing

please update next part ❤️

PART -6

Raavi looked at herself in the mirror.she was wearing a yellow off shoulder blouse and a skirt, and her dupatta swayed on the side. She had worn golden earrings.her hands were bare because she was going to apply mehendi.she decided not to wear any necklace. She looked simple and ethereal.she remembered an instance for the past.

Flashback

Dhara, rishita and raavi were sitting in the hall and were looking at their wedding pictures.

" Dekhiye na Dhara Di ,Mai kitni rotlu lag rahi hoo Sare pictures Mai." Raavi whined.

" Pictures hi to hai raavi, kya fark padta hai " dhara said

" Aise kaise fark nahi padta dhara bhabi, Shaadi ke pictures hai.zindagi Mai ek hi Baar hoti hai.bhale hi aapki aur gombi ki Shaadi bhi majboori Mai huyi ho,par Aapke photos kitne pyare hai " rishita said

Dhara noticed her pictures.rishita was right, she and gombi looked like a so in love couple even on their marriage day.raavi was looking devastated in their marriage pics.

" Dhara bhabi, ek idea hai..hum Na hamari pehli anniversary par shiva aur raavi ki phirse Shaadi karwayenge.. Kitna maza ayega.ache pictures bhi aajayenge aur tab tak to Inn dono ke beech pyar bhi ho chuka Hoga" rishita said winking at raavi

Raavis eyes twinkled like an excited child .dhara smiled seeing them.it was actually a good idea.

" Hann...yehi karenge hum.par abhi ladko ko kuch mat batao. Tab surprise karenge unhe " dhara said

Rishita clapped her hands in excitement while raavi blushed.

To be honest more than the pictures she was bothered by the emotions behind them .Whenever she thought of her marriage , she shuddered. The feeling of the noose around her neck resurfaced.what the hell was she thinking? Ending her life over Dev? seriously..such a fool she was.thank god her bhootnath came in time.raavi wanted to replace this memory with happy ones.

She was brought out of her trance by her maasi ma's voice.

" Are raavi jaldi se neeche chal.tere aur dhara ke iss plan ke wajah se na bahut kharcha ho Raha hai."maasi whined

Raavi shook her head, and hugged her maasima.

" Kya maasi ma , mehendi aur haldi ek din Mai Karke Mai Aapke paise hi to bacha rahi hoo.aur apni beti ki khusi ke liye Aap thoda Haath dhila to Kar hi sakte ho " raavi said

" Are Mai to hamesha yehi chahti Hu ki tujhe duniya ki saari khusi mile.bass iss Baar us dhara ko koi galatfehmi na huyi ho...agar iss Baar Uski wajah se tujhe Dukh hua na..to Mai.." Her maasi said with tears in her eyes.

"Are maasi ma...sab thk Hoga.aap tension mat lo.yeh aansu mere bidaai ke liye bachake rakho."Raavi consoled her wiping her tears.

Pandya house

Shiva wore a black kurta.his family was surprised seeing him so decked up.

" Are Aap log abhi tak taiyar nahi huye.woh chipkali ke Ghar function ke liye nahi Jana? Akhir rishtedaari to nibhani padegi." Shiva said with a smile

Dhara was tensed seeing him like that.did he know about their plan? Why was he acting like this ?

" Shiva Tu.." she begun.

" Are bhabi , Mai pehle Chala jata hoo... mujhse to Uska khaas rishta hai na.aap log baad Mai chale ana" shiva said and left leaving everyone surprised

Raavis house.

"Mehendi par kya naam likhu " the girl asked raavi.

" Shiva..."she whispered shyly.

" Par Aisi jagah likhna jaha dhundna bahut hi mushkil ho" raavi added

Her mehendi looked beautiful.she was admiring them and clicking pictures when a message popped up in her phone.

Apne kamre Mai aa - bhootnath

She frowned.why is he calling her to her room?she had thought that he will come to the function and create a ruckus to spoil it, but he always surprised her . She sighed and got up to go.

She entered the room, but it was empty.

" Shiva..." She looked around when she felt her dupatta slide off her shoulders.

She stopped and slowly turned around, her hands crossed over her chest.she looked up to see shiva looking at her intensely holding her dupatta with one hand, he threw away the dupatta and put his hands on her bare waist to pull her closer.raavi couldn't push him due to her mehendi laden hands.

" Shiva...chod mujhe.." raavi squirmed under his grip

" Kabhi nahi chodunga " shiva whispered near her ear .

Raavi looked up to see his eyes.something was different today.

Shiva took a few steps back holding her with him and brought some haldi from a bowl on the table he had bought with him, without diverting his eyes from her.

He smeared the haldi on her cheeks, slowly bringing his fingers down to her neck.raavi closed her eyes and arched her head backwards subconsciously, giving him a better access.he continued to apply haldi on her neck. His hands travelled downwards and stopped just above her cleavage.he had an urge to just Rip her top off, but he controlled himself and held her shoulders, turning her around.

Now raavi was standing with her back facing shiva, he took some more haldi and smeared it on her belly.raavi gasped feeling the coolness of the haldi and the warmth of his hands.he took his own sweet time and let his hands linger there.he kissed her ear while doing so. Butterflies were dancing in her stomach.he traced his hands from her arms downwards and entwined his hands with her, and hugged her from behind.he rubbed his cheeks with her's to make sure some haldi rubbed off him as well.

"Yaad hai... pichli Baar bhi Teri haldi mujhse hi shuru hui thi." He whispered near her ear

Raavi smiled as she remembered their haldi banter from the last time.

" Are raavi beta...kidhar chali gayi tu " maasi screamed

Shiva cursed maamis timing.raavu panicked and pushed shiva inside the bathroom.

" Are yeh kya pili pari bani huyi hai...Shyam tak intezaar to Kar leti " maasi whined.

" Hann maasi ...Aap jao..Mai abhi nahake niche ati hoo " raavi said pushing her maasi out of the door.she was scared that she may blurt out their plan.

" Hann..jaldi aa ..phir Mandir bhi jaana hai."maasi said.

Raavi locked the door and heaved a sigh of relief.

She turned around to shiva standing at the door and smirking.

He forwarded his hand and gestured her to come near.she took it without a thought, as if that was the most natural reaction.

" AA... Teri madad Kar Deta hoo." Shiva said.

" Kya? " Raavi asked confused.

" Nahake niche Jaana hai na tujhe...ab Maine Teri yeh halat ki hai to saaf bhi Mai hi karoonga na" shiva said and took her under the shower.

Raavi looked at him with big eyes.what has gotten into him? Since when did he turn so shameless?he always averted his eyes when she was in a vulnerable position, and today he is talking about giving her a bath?

Shiva turned on the shower. Raavi grabbed him by the shoulders as a reflex when the cold water fell on her . She stared at him, they were so close.there bodies were pasted to each other and the water didn't help the situation.

Shiva noticed her carefully.her innocent eyes, crimson cheeks, and quivering lips.he had to kiss her once.god knows how many times he had dreamt of kissing those lips.he slammed his lips on hers.raavi stood still for a moment, then reciprocated the kiss. She grabbed shiva by the hair and shiva's nails dug on her waist.they parted when they were out of breath.

Raavi was too shy to look up.she felt a wave of new emotions hit her. She was getting overwhelmed by the reaction of her body to his touch.

Shiva saw her shivering form.her top had got transparent and was sticking to her like a second skin.his eyes darkened with desire, he pulled her closer again by the waist and removed her hair to one side.he leaned down and kissed her bare shoulders.

" Shiva.." raavi moaned softly

His name sounded so beautiful from her lips.

He sucked in that area and gave a soft kiss later.his hands were roaming all over her back.he unclasped the hook of her blouse.her eyes opened at this and she pushed shiva away all flustered and holding her blouse to stop it from falling.

Shiva took a minute to get back to reality, and steadied himself.he turned the shower off. He had come here to tease her a bit and confess his love, but got carried away.what was he doing? What she must be thinking about him? First he gave her the divorce papers and after a day he is making out with her.he slowly walked towards her, turned her around and hooked her blouse.his hands were shivering, but he quickly did the task at hand, trying not to look at her bare back.he handed her a towel and headed out without giving a glance at her.

That was the 6th part guys🤗

Thank you for all the love and support. I will end this in another part or two.do let me know how you felt about the upadte. I am apprehensive about the make out scene . should I have made it more elaborate? Plzz give your opinions and comments.❤️

I liked the make out scene ..Given that Shiva thought they were going to be divorced this was apt ..

The update was beautiful 🤩🤩

Rishita telling that they should have a remarriage of Shiva Raavi was a great touch

amazing ❤️❤️

shiva getting carried away lmao 😂😂

cant wait to see how he confesses ❤️

do update soon

Read all the 6 chapters in one go.

Love the story! 💕

Amazing update👏

Shivi's make out scene was beautiful❤️

Shiva's feelings in the end was beautifully described😊

Let's see how Shiva will confess his feelings

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