SKR FF 3:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 144 - Page 23

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Srinivasan.R

Dear..a last pm of this ongoing conversation...for you... check your inbox....💓😊...and yes I read the past two updates fully today....I left them incomplete...😁... but completed it today...and as usual my oxygen giver rocks....😘.... loved it to the core... continue soon.....ab wait nahi horaha... love you... Jai siya ram ♥️.

Thanks Hema.. updating soon...

Stay tuned ❣️😜

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Thank you all, for appreciating yesterday's part ❤️🤗

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Today is ManRat special 🔥😍

And the beautiful song is again suggested by "Goldie"

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Happy reading ❤️

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Vaibhav knocks the door of Kaikasi's room. At night, when Vaibhav returned from the office, Kaikasi immediately shoots him with the n number of questions regarding Suvarna, asking about why he asked her to return soon, and so on. But Vaibhav asked her to wait so that they could peacefully talk after their dinner. The truth was, he was not actually prepared with the words to make Kaikasi understand about the whole situation. The very first thing, to tell her that Suvarna left Chennai, then about her stubbornness to not return and then about the plannings of her kidnapping.

KAIKASI- come in..

Vaibhav opens the door wide as he heard his Amma's permission. He turns to look at his right where Manda was standing, feeling equally tensed and clueless about Kaikasi's reaction. She actioned him to get inside while Vaibhav actioned her to come along.

KAIKASI- come both of you..

Vaibhav and Manda turns to look at Kaikasi, who was resting on her arm chair, backfacing them. She has easily figure out that Manda is present there too, with the long silence and the time Vaibhav is taking to enter the room. After her permission, both of them enters the room, Manda stopping herself near the entrance while Vaibhav moving towards Kaikasi.

VAIBHAV- Amma..

Kaikasi turns to look at him, who was now standing at her left. She got up from the chair and faces completely towards him.

KAIKASI- now are you going to tell me what has happened here.?

Kaikasi questioned him, being impatient. She could very well guess that something is there with them and something is wrong in the family.

KAIKASI- I am observing since I have returned. Kuch na kuch chupa raha hai tum log mujhse. Indrajeet kidhar hai.? And where is Suvarna.?

Manda's heartbeat skipped for a second as she heard Suvarna's name from Kaikasi. Kaikasi turns to look at her who was watching both of them staying silent. She again turns to look at Vaibhav who now took a step closer to her, placing his hands on his mother's shoulders.

VAIBHAV- Amma.. We will tell you everything. But please.. Porumai ventum (Have patience) and listen to me..

Kaikasi scrunched her eyebrows in confusion hearing Vaibhav's confusing words. He took a moment gap, preparing his words in his mind, before actually starting with the revelation.

VAIBHAV- aapka Madurai jane ke baad.. Suvarna.. left the house..

Kaikasi's eyes grew wide in shock, witnessing the actual truth from him. She has been there in Madurai for more than couple of months now, at her younger sister's place. She was having a contact with the family, but she never got to know that her daughter is not in the house. How will she? She didn't bothered to have a talk with her spolied and adamant daughter and Vaibhav didn't had that courage to go against his Anna and guide Kaikasi about Suvarna's behavior.

KAIKASI- what .??

Finally a loud word came out of her mouth, after a pause of some time, as she got out of the shock of the sudden revelation.

KAIKASI- what did you said.? Suvarna left the house.? As in.? Ghar chodkar bhag gaya.?

Kaikasi asked both of them with her more clear words, just to gain the confirmation. Vaibhav nods his head in yes and completes his sentence further.

VAIBHAV- Chennai chodkar bhi gayi hai. She is in Mumbai..

Kaikasi got another shock that Suvarna has not only left the family but also has left the city, and is far away staying in Mumbai. Kaikasi took the support of the arm chair on her side, still trying to cover up while Vaibhav holds her left hand.

VAIBHAV- relax Amma.. have a seat..

Vaibhav guides her to settle down on the chair and Manda immediately moves towards the side table to fetch the glass of water for her. Vaibhav took the hold of the glass and forwards it towards Kaikasi.

VAIBHAV- Tannir (Water) Amma..

Kaikasi took the hold of the glass and took a sip, again giving the glass back to Manda.

VAIBHAV- we tried our best to stop her. But she was way too adamant with her decision..

Vaibhav told her further about their trials to stop Suvarna and how she didn't bothered to listen to anyone.

KAIKASI- aisa kya hogaya.? That she had to leave the family.?

Asked Kaikasi, not exactly meeting her eyes with anyone particular.

VAIBHAV- the same thing Amma. Anna Suvarna clashes..

Kaikasi closed her eyes for a moment, as in she already knew the answer but was still confirming from her younger son.

VAIBHAV- she was in Delhi for a month.. after which she moved to Mumbai and now.. she is working.. there..

Vaibhav said the last line in a stammer, telling her everything about whatever he knows about Suvarna and Kaikasi keeps her hand on her forehead, getting wondered and suprised with the facts.

KAIKASI- and you people didn't bothered to tell me about this..?? Not even Raghvan..??

Kaikasi turns to look at Manda, who was standing at her left side, speaking nothing. Raghvan, was the only one who has warned everyone to not reveal about Suvarna to their Amma. Manda and Vaibhav exchange glances and then again looks at Kaikasi.

KAIKASI- iss ladki ka kya karu me.? Aval paittiyama? (Is she mad?)

Kaikasi started blaming Suvarna's behavior while now Vaibhav and Manda went silent, hearing a mother's frustration for her daughter.

KAIKASI- pehele hi.. kuch kum problem create nahi kiya hai ye Suvarna.. now what she wants ? That her Anna should bury her inside her own grave.?

Kaikasi shook her head thinking about Raghvan's anger towards her behaviour. Vaibhav bends in front of her, keeping his hand on her lap.

VAIBHAV- Anna has planned for her abduction..

Vaibhav's straight and direct words made Kaikasi more shocked. She covered her open mouth with her right hand, still not understanding what she has heard right now.

VAIBHAV- I have asked him to wait till your return and hence Avan errukkontan (He agreed).

Kaikasi closed her eyes in disbelief with the never ending brother sister fights of her children. She looks disappointed, frustrated and sad while Manda placed her hand on her shoulder.

MANDA- Amma.. you are the only one who can make your son understand..

Kaikasi opens her eyes and motioned them to look at Manda.

MANDA- you very know that, this is not a solution. Hai na.?

Manda tried her best to make Kaikasi believe so that she will stop Suvarna's abduction.

VAIBHAV- ha Amma.. please tell Anna to leave Suvarna alone for a while. To let her be for sometime..

Kaikasi bows her head down, narrowing her eyes, thinking about what the two people in front of her are trying to make her understand.

MANDA- Suvarna ko hum ache se jante hai na Amma. She is definitely going to return back. Usme patience nahi hai. She can't handle the world without Lankeshwars tag.

Manda kept on telling her about Suvarna and what they want, that she should be left alone for sometime. Both of them very well know that Raghvan will listen only to his mother, and therefore it is necessary to make Kaikasi agree to their words.

VAIBHAV- agar Suvarna ko Anna kidnap karke le aya na Amma, to wo aur bhi bigad jayega..

Vaibhav tells his worries about his sister for which Kaikasi immediately nods at him lightly.

VAIBHAV- that's why.. it will be better if Anna drops his plan..

Kaikasi again bows her head down, scratching her head lightly, thinking about their words.

VAIBHAV- please Amma.. iss baar apne iss bete ka sunn lijiye..

Vaibhav's request made Kaikasi to look at him again. She could witness the genuine care for his daughter-like-sister in Vaibhav's eyes. She took a deep breath and asked both of them further, after a pause.

KAIKASI- where is Raghvan.?

MANDA- Coimbatore gaye hai..

Manda immediately answered her, when she asked her about her eldest son.

MANDA- tomorrow he will return..

Kaikasi lightly nods her head as she got to know about Raghvan. She went silent, saying nothing further while Manda and Vaibhav looks at each other, praying that Kaikasi will stop the happenings in their family...

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The next morning, the Raghuvanshi kids were about to visit the nearby Lonavala market. They have two days remaining with them, after which they are going to return to Mumbai back. The boys, specially Lakshman and Shatrughan wanted to go for trekking at a nearby tourist place called Lonhagad fort. They have almost convinced Ram, almost finalizing the plan but the smart girls cleverly asked Siya to cancel the plans. The girls were very tired and feeling lazy for something like trekking or any other activity like that. And hence, when asked about what they are willing to do that day if not trekking, they opted for their all time favourite activity, shopping. And as the world goes, the boys had to listen to their wives as now they don't want to make their wives angry with any pointless arguments.

BHARAT- kaha reh gayi bhabhi.?

Bharat looks at the direction of the main door, asking about Siya. Everyone, except Siya and Urmila, were gathered outside the farmhouse ready to leave for their day out. All the four boys have opted for normal t-shirt and jeans today, Red, Green, Orange and Yellow color respectively, seems to be the traffic lights of Raghuvanshi family. Yes, Shruti had commented this sentence, tagging them "traffic signals", when she witnessed all four boys in their wears.

MANVI- yeh Urmila ko bheja tha dii ko bulane.. But ye to khud bhi andar hi reh gayi, batao..!

Manvi shook her head in disbelief, still watching for the other two girls, at the direction of the door. The girls have opted for similar designed tops but with different colors, and jeans to pair with. The colors be like, Blue, Pink, Peach and Grey respectively. When Shruti had tagged traffic signals to the boys, immediately in a counter attack, Shatrughan reciprocated tagging the girls as "band walis" of some "patni union group", as they were dressed similarly.

LAKSHMAN- pakka gappe marne beth gayi hogi.. Delhi se call aya hai na, definitely maa ya chachi ko sab report kar rahi hogi..

Lakshman perfectly guessed what Urmila must be doing.

RAM- Siya...

Ram calls for her for the fourth time now, every now and then we was keeping on shouting for her name, but got nothing in the reply. Shruti giggles at Lakshman's words which he has said a moment back. She got an idea to tease him and continued turning towards him.

SHRUTI- Urmi dii... Dekho to Laksh bhai kya keh rahe hai.....

Lakshman immediately turns towards Shruti, with his eyes grew wide in shock, as she yelled loudly so that to make Urmila hear.

LAKSHMAN- oye Shakuni mama ki bhanji..

Lakshman immediately tagged her with a new name, placing his hands on his waist.

LAKSHMAN- mere acche din aur raat dono chal rahe hai.. kripya ise jari rehne de..

Shruti covered her shocked laughing mouth while Manvi immediately hits Lakshman's back.

MANVI- shut up.. yaha badi bhabhi khadi hai, you care before speaking double and triple meaning words.

Everyone burst into laughter and Manvi controlled her laugh, listening Lakshman's words.

LAKSHMAN- arey? Hamari bhabhiyan to hamari dost hai.. dosto ke samne kya besharami.? Kyu Bharat bhaiya..?

Bharat immediately turns towards other side, hiding his smile from everyone.

SHRUTI- yeh to khud dulhan ki tarah sharma rahe hai..

Shruti points towards Bharat and gave a clap to Lakshman, both of them giggling at their elder brother.

MANVI- tum dono ko na.. sachme thappad padna chahiye..

Manvi points towards Lakshman and Shatrughan, who was standing beside Ram staying silent while Ram smile at their fights nodding in disbelief.

SHATRUGHAN- areh.? Matlab behti Ganga me aap log mujhe kaise bhi daal hi dete hai nahi.?

Shatrughan finally came out of that silent mode, turning towards Manvi and Shruti.

SHATRUGHAN- mene kuch bola aap logo ke bichme? No tell me.. did I said anything..??

Shatrughan immediately saved himself, cross questioning Manvi, looking at everyone to get an answer.

RAM- Siya... Chaliye ..

Ram again interrupts their verbal banter, calling his wife again, for the fifth time now.

SIYA- arahi hu baba...

Finally, an answer came, as they heard Siya. Both the girls came there almost running while Raju too following them.

SIYA- kya hai Ram.? Kitna awaz de rahe hai..?

Siya lightly scolded Ram for which he was about to defend himself but Siya didn't allowed him, again speaking further.

SIYA- pata hai na ghar se call tha.. thoda time to lagta hai na..

Ram sighed nodding his head lightly and then turns towards everyone who were giggling and whispering amongst themselves.

RAM- what.?

Ram questioned them for which no one said anything and at the other moment everyone started laughing.

RAM- areh.? You guys really need to do your check-up..

Ram frowns at them for their odd behavior, placing his hands on his waist.

URMILA- jis bande ko biwi se daant padti hai, wo aise hi bolte hai..

Everyone again burst into laughter while Siya and Ram looks at them getting amused. They both turns to look at each other, when Ram pouts complaining about her scoldings and Siya giggles looking at his reaction.

RAM- suna aapne.?

Questioned Ram folding his hands for which Siya nods her head in a yes, still teasing him. The next moment, she turns towards Raju, who was silently watching their conversation.

SIYA- acha Raju bhaiya.. hum sham me lautenge..

Raju nods at her first and then interrupts in between at the next moment.

RAJU- didi.. nashta banake rakhe?

Siya smile at him and nods in agreement, giving him the permission.

BHARAT- ab chale ? Finally.?

Siya nods at him in agreement, having a pinch of apologies in her expressions. The eight of them, finally leaves from there towards the market place, which was at a walking distance from their farmhouse, hence they were not taking their bus today.

SHATRUGHAN- I don't understand, Mumbai me shopping ke kum jagah hai kya.? That you people want to do it in Lonavala too.?

Questioned Shatrughan as they were walking through the streets of the market.

BHARAT- aur hamara to kam hi nahi tha aaj. Ye charon khud ho aati..

Bharat looks annoyed turning towards the girls when Lakshman interrupts.

LAKSHMAN- hamara kam nahi hai.? Hai na.. Shopping bags kon pakdega.?

Lakshman almost taunts the girls who didn't mind to reply anything back as they were too busy looking around the various stalls and shops.

SHRUTI- dii.. stoles..

Shruti points towards the stall at a corner and then immediately turns towards Shatrughan who was busy talking with his brothers.

SHRUTI- cookie.. come on..

Shruti holds his left arm and dragged him towards the stall, leaving from there.

BHARAT- lo bolo ..

Bharat shook his head in disbelief watching them and then turns towards Manvi.

MANVI- chaliye.. I have to buy that top..

Manvi points him towards the other corner for which Bharat sighed nodding his head in agreement. Both of them too leaves when Lakshman laughed at his "bechara bhai".

URMILA- oye udti patang.. stop laughing and follow me..

Urmila started walking from there when Lakshman scrunched his eyebrows looking at her in confusion.

LAKSHMAN- kaha.?

Urmila do not answered him and already started walking towards the opposite side while Lakshman runs behind her. Ram turns to look at Siya who was traveling her eyes through every shops and stalls.

RAM- you don't want to buy anything.?

Asked Ram gaining Siya's attention towards him. She smile nodding her head in agreement.

SIYA- ofcourse I have to.. but before that, let's go there..

Siya points towards the side at Ram's back. He turns to witness the strawberry stall and then turns to look at Siya who was smiling.

RAM- strawberry.?

SIYA- Lonavala aaye aur strawberry nahi lenge..? Not fair..

Ram smile at her and nods his head, forwarding his hand to hold her right hand. They both crossed the road, moving towards the opposite side towards the stall having lots of varieties of strawberries, as in packed in different packages, few the smaller in size, few somewhat larger, few in actually dark pink color and so on.

SELLER- aayiye didi.. boliye kitna du.?

Asked one of the three sellers to Siya, already taking few packets to pack for her.

SIYA- acha hai na.?

Asked Siya taking a strawberry in her hold and checking it properly and minutely.

SELLER- areh didi.. Mahabaleshwar ki strawberry hai. A one ekdum. Ek baar khayengi na aap to bar bar yaha se hi le jayengi..

The seller, with his typical characteristics to overrate his strawberry, started telling Siya about the fruit.

SIYA- kya rate hai ek packet ka.?

Asked Siya further keeping the strawberry back on the basket.

SELLER- ab dekho didi, ek packet me 300 grams hai. To ek packet ka rate hai, 150 rupay.

Siya's eyes grew wide in shock after listening to the rates.

SIYA- kya.? Matlab 500 rupay kilo..?

The seller lightly nods his head in agreement for which Siya shook in disbelief this time. Ram, meanwhile kept on travelling his eyes between the seller and Siya.

SIYA- bhaiya, 500 rupay strawberry kahi hoti hai kya.? Kuch bhi matlab.?

The seller gave her a light smile and took a fruit in his hold, forwarding near her.

SELLER- didi Mahabaleshwar ki strawberry hai. Ek baar dekhiye to.

Siya shook her hand denying to buy the fruit at that price.

SIYA- areh bhaiya hum log yahi Mumbai se aaye hai, out of India se nahi aaye hai ki aap hume kuch bhi rates batayenge..

Ram giggles watching his wife arguing with the seller, as she successfully guessed the tactics of the sellers to sell their products.

SELLER- kaisi baate kar rahi hai didi.? Sachme yahi rate hai, aap kahi bhi puchiye..

The seller kept on convincing her by again overrating his shop and his product.

RAM- Siya..

Ram, interrupting their seller- customer, to be more precise, lady customer, banter gains both of theirs attention towards him.

RAM- let it go. You want to buy na.. then be it of any price..

The seller got a wide smile listening to Ram's words, who was asking Siya to settle down at the same price.

SIYA- kya aap bhi.? Ye kuch bhi rate batayenge aur hum kharid lenge kya.?

Siya, now turns towards Ram, complaining about the seller.

SIYA- Delhi me jab hum reh rahe the, to mene bargaining ache se sikh li hai. You stay quiet..

Siya asked him to keep mum and again turns towards the seller who was waiting for her words to get complete with her husband.

SIYA- bhaiya.. paanch packets lene hai hume. Theek theek rate batayiye..

Ram shook his head lightly, witnessing her again having a settlement for the strawberries. Daughter of Janak Rajrishi, wife of Ram Raghuvanshi, daughter-in-law of Dashrath Raghuvanshi, is bargaining over a strawberry with the vendor?

SELLER- acha to.. 140 ka packet le lijiye bas..?

Said the seller taking five number of packets in his hold while Siya again shook her head in denial.

SIYA- 100 rupees per packet. Aise, give us five number of them.

Said Siya forwarding her hand towards Ram, asking him to hand his wallet to her.

SELLER- didi.. 100 rupay.? Acha 130 kar dijiye..

Meanwhile Ram took his wallet from his pocket and placed it on her palm, feeling bad about the vendor who was trying hard to convince his wife.

SIYA- aap chahte hai me 100 ke aur niche jau.?

Siya points her finger towards the seller, warning him while he now turns to look at Ram, hoping that he will help him out.

RAM- kya Siya aap bhi.? Jane dijiye na.?

SIYA- shhuu..

Siya whispered looking at Ram and then took the five hundred rupees note from his wallet.

SIYA- chaliye bhaiya dijiye.. ab aapko bhaiya bola hai to, behen ke liye itna to karenge na.?

Ram uplifts his eyebrows hearing Siya's words by which she was giving her best to convince the seller for which the person laughs at her words.

SELLER- theek hai didi. Maan li aapki baat.

The seller finally shook his head, putting the five number of packets in two number of bags. He forwards the bags towards Siya, who took the hold of it and hands the cash to the person.

SIYA- thank you.

SELLER- thank you didi..

Siya gave a warm smile at him and turns to look at Ram, who was already looking at her.

SIYA- what ?

Asked Siya, still having her widened and satisfied smile on her face. Ram took the hold of the bags and nods his head in disbelief.

RAM- kamal hai aap.!

Ram commented a short sentence for which Siya chuckled at his reaction, keeping his wallet back in his jean's pocket.

SIYA- bargaining karna har ek aurat ka janm siddh adhikar hai..

Said Siya, uplifting her shoulders, having an attitude on her face as she could successfully bargain with the vendor.

SIYA- aur waise bhi, bargaining wali chizo ka maza, aap nahi samjhenge, Mr Raghuvanshi.

Siya wraps her hands around Ram's right arm and he smile at her. Both of them started moving from there.

RAM- yes ofcourse. You can get happy in every little thing, let it be the bargaining wali strawberries..

Siya laughs at his words and gave a light pat on his shoulder. Both of them again crossed the road through the zebra crossing and moves towards other six of them, who were gathered at a bellies and shoes shop...

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Song: "Chup tum raho" Iss raat ki subah nahi (1996 movie)

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Bharat slides the curtains of the window, not allowing the outside natural light to fall inside the dark room. The smile on his face, the nervousness in his eyes and the impatient expressions were very clearly seen and thus he don't want Manvi to witness that. In their case, it's always him who feels nervous to take a lead, but when it comes to something about showing love, then he has always made Manvi to bow her eyelids down feeling blushed. He moves towards the other side of the window, to cover the glass with the curtain when he heard Manvi clearing her throat to gain his attention. He immediately turns towards her, and witnessed her dressed in the same pink color short dress with haltered neck, looking down, having her fingers of both her hands touching with each other. Bharat's smile increased watching her while Manvi didn't dared to turn her eyes towards him.

After a pause of some moments, Bharat took a step closer to her, while Manvi immediately motioned her eyes to look at him. He stood in front of her and slowly forwards his hand to hold her hands.

Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe

Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe...


Manvi got a smile herself now and the next moment she bends her eyelids down, watching their touched hands which were slowly making a tight grip with each other.

Khamoshi Ko Khamoshi Se

Zindagi Ko Zindagi Se Baat Karne Do...


Bharat placed his other hand on her bare shoulder, moving closer to her, staring her eyes, for which Manvi gulped closing her eyes tightly. He giggles at her reaction caresses her shoulder, teasing her more.

Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe

Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe...


She turns around, facing her back at him when Bharat stops her holding her waist from back. He moves closer to her, touching her back with his chest now, still looking at her expressions.

Khamoshi Ko Khamoshi Se

Zindagi Ko Zindagi Se Baat Karne Do...


She tilts her face to look at his lightly smiling face and rests her head on his chest, wrapping her arms around his waist. While Bharat rests his hands on her back.

Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe...


He gave a light peck on her forehead and Manvi closed her eyes for a moment, feeling his touch.

Chup Tum Raho...


Manvi motioned her face to look at him and forwards her hand to touch his face, having a smile on her face. Both of them intertwined their other hands with each other, still staring at each other's eyes, trying to read their feelings.

Aankho Mein Kho Jaye Aankhe

Bole Hath Se Hath...


Bharat bends near her neck, giving a light peck on her jaw line for which Manvi holds his back of the head with her other hand, staring the ceiling with her emotion full eyes.

Aankho Mein Kho Jaye Aankhe

Bole Hath Se Hath...


He leaves her hold, staring back towards her face again. Manvi placed her both the hands on his chest and Bharat slides his hands on her waist to pull her close to him.

Baahon Mein Chhupkar

Sanso Se Jaise Dole Rat...


Manvi moves closer to his left cheek having her eyes closed. She lightly touched his cheek with her lips and Bharat travelled his hand towards her back of the neck now.

Ungaliyo Ko Ungaliyo Se

Husano Ko Shokhiyo Se Baat Karne Do...


She rests her forehead on his shoulder for a moment and Bharat takes her hand in front of his eyes, placing a soft kiss on her each finger, which increases her blushing smile.

Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe...


She shrugged off her hand from his hold which made him to turn towards her face. Manvi took a step back from him, still not staring into his eyes and turns to move towards the bed, only to be stopped by Bharat.

Khamoshi Ko Khamoshi Se

Zindagi Ko Zindagi Se Baat Karne Do...


He was having his grip of her right hand wrist and Manvi was backfacing him. He bends near her hand and placed a kiss on her skin.

Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe...


She turns to look at him and he moves closer to her trying to hold her other hand, which he takes in his hold, both of them staring each other.

Chup Tum Raho...


Manvi, now resting herself on the bed, turns towards the other side, away from Bharat. He too turns towards her direction, now without his shirt on him.

Hotho Par Hotho Se Likhe

Bin Shabdo Ke Geet...


He rests his one hand under his head for the support and touched Manvi's head with his other hand index finger, tracing her face with the light touch.

Hotho Par Hotho Se Likhe

Bin Shabdo Ke Geet...


He moved his finger towards her neck and stopped at the moment, moving close to embrace her in him. While Manvi placed her hand on his hand.

Dharati Se Ambar Tak

Gunje Jismo Ka Sangeet...


Bharat lightly moved his face, moving more closer to her crook of the neck while Manvi travelled her hand from his hand towards his shoulder now.

Bekhudi Ko Bekhudi Se

Aashiqi Ko Aashiqi Se Baat Karne Do...


He pulls her closer to him with a jerk, again making her to face towards him.

Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe...


Manvi bite her lower lip controlling her more widening smile and hides her face in his bare chest.

Chup Tum Raho Chup Hum Rahe...


Bharat too hides his face, near her shoulder, pulling her more closer to him and Manvi tightens the grip on his back, holding him tightly near her.

Chup Tum Raho Chup

Hum Rahe Chup Tum Raho Chup

Hum Rahe Chup Tum Raho...


The surrounding freezes for them, not a single minute light falling inside the room to disturb them, to be a barrier between them, and both the loving souls felt soothing in each other's embrace...!

Tum raho...!!!

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How was it ManRat fans.? 😍🔥

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Finally, atleast Vaibhav and Manda put something in Kaikasi's brain, has she really understood what they are trying to say? Will she able to stop Raghvan 🙄

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PRECAP: SiRa special ❤️ and someone making an entry, to be forcefully part of their happy paradise.....

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Nice update❤️

Kaikasi maani ya nahi....reaction se toh pata nahi laga..hope yeh log abduction jaisa naa hi kare🙄

Siya ne itna daanta bechare Ram ko😅......and Siya ki bargaining power😛..that part stole the show today😂

Names given by Shruti n Shatrugan to boys n girls gang were epic😛😛..dono jokers hai..made for each other 😂

And then ManRat romance🤩....it was soo peaceful and beautiful❤️....

Shy Bharat bhi ab bold ho rhe hai Manvi ke asar se🤭....

Continue soon😍

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Posted: 4 years ago

This is the tenth time I am rewriting the comment today because whenever I think of somewords and start typing it doesn't make me satisfy actually I am really not finding appropriate words now to comment on the episode daily , I am really running short of words and actually needs time to memorize appropriate words to fit perfectly in the situation... I just don't know how to praise you girl for the way you described the worry of a not so helpless but hopeless arrogant,rude at a same time concerned mother for her children, or for the way you put such lovely, intimate moments in smooth , beautiful,at a same time in respectful way to not make any of your readers uncomfortable or awkward. It's really not an easy task . And today with such lovely hot sizzling moment between our ever so shy yet bold in front of his wife and our lady dabangg yet shy in case of such moment , you don't know Somu what you have done,God I can feel the heat radiating from the story warming the atmosphere around me in very romantic way that I can't even describe.... And also a big clap for @Golden_aura was such a beautiful song 👏👏👏👏... Sorry I guess yesterday I forgot to mention it for yesterday's song selection too... Literally you and Somu have a very nice song collection man.....

Today after reading Kaikesi's worry and fear I guess she might have understood that she had raised her one son as a gem or he himself had learnt from the starting but failed in case of her other two children....I know it's hoping against hope but I pray that it's late but it's never too late to knock some sense in her other two children or else it's time for the complete destruction only...😔😔😕...

Banda bhale hi kitna bhi powerful angry young man ho but biwi ke naam ke mention hone bhar se banda seham jaata h😆😆😆.. and that Sakuni mama ki bhanji Literally cracked me up 😝😝...

Lakshman day by day kuch zyada hi bold hota ja raha h tabhi to aaj kal unke mooh se nikla har dusra word double meaning vala hota h😉😉🤪🤪.. Aww bechara Shatrughan kuch kare na kare band bajna tay h🤭🤭🤭... Waah ji waah poori duniya ko apni muthi m rakhne ki takat vale The Ram Raghuvanshi khud apni biwi ke control m h😝😝😜😜... Well sahi bhi h shadi shuda khushal zindagi jeeni h to biwi ki haa m haa honi h....

Waah ji waah kya bargaining ki h Siya ne I am proud of you Siya 😉😉...

Ufff uske baad ke episode ko bolne ke liye ☺️☺️☺️...... Vahan Bharat ne curtains band kiye yahan dil ki dhadkan badh gayi aur phir.......☺️☺️☺️☺️...

Love you dear 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

Really Eagerly waiting for the next part.....

Update soon 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago
kaikasi ko shock kyu laga ager suvarna gai to are khushiya banao kyuki ek pagal family se chali gai hai 😂😂 kaikasi ko shak hai ki suvarna mad hai me ti 100% sure hu ke wo mad hai .... lakshman daro jara urmila se abhi abhi sorry accept kiya hai ab kya cahte ho lonavla me bhi Angry bird banke rahe .. manvi meri aur se bhi 1 maro lakshman ko beshram bhabhi ke samne double meaning wali bate .... shatrughan chup hai phir bhi poor shatrughan ke shikayt ker rahi ho manvi ... hamara shatrughan kitna pyara hai kabhi kisi ko pareshan nahi karta 😂 .... shopping ka nam sunker he is boys ki waat lag jati hai ...manvi aur shruti to shatrughan aur bharat ko khich ker lekar gai but urmi ko to ye karna bhi nahi pada lakshman he piche aa gaya patng he na uski 😂 sita ne kya bargaining ke hai wow siya .. siya ne thik kaha bargaining karna woman ka janm sidh adhikar hai ... manvi aur bharat wow 🔥🔥 bharat romantic to ho gaya tha but manvi be use aur bhi romantic ker diya bapre kya romance kiya hai garmi badha di 😳 kal sira ka romance wow ... par kon aane wala hai sira ke life me ? UPDATE SOON ❤❤
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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it Saumya dear

Awesome and beautiful😍✨❤ part 🤗🤗

First if all thanks a ton for considering my request of songs🎵🎵 🤗🤗

Coming to update

Vaibhav ne to sahi time pe Kaiksi ko bata diya she too paid heed to his words but she too knows her daughter well & also the sibling fight ☹️

Good that at least her rational thoughts are in right direction hopefully she will stop her son from this dastardly act

Loo je Siya to typical housewife ke tarah ab bargain bhi karne lagi Delhi main kaafi experience ho gaya hai 😂 poor Ram was amused to see that 😊

I really had urge to laugh on the bartering of all 8 traffic signals really 🤣🤣 & Band waali 😅😅 badiya hai too good👍

Coming to Bharat & Maanvi they were beautiful😍✨❤

I felt like you have given a new passion to this song amazing👍😍🤩

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali00

Nice update❤️

Kaikasi maani ya nahi....reaction se toh pata nahi laga..hope yeh log abduction jaisa naa hi kare🙄

Siya ne itna daanta bechare Ram ko😅......and Siya ki bargaining power😛..that part stole the show today😂

Names given by Shruti n Shatrugan to boys n girls gang were epic😛😛..dono jokers hai..made for each other 😂

And then ManRat romance🤩....it was soo peaceful and beautiful❤️....

Shy Bharat bhi ab bold ho rhe hai Manvi ke asar se🤭....

Continue soon😍

Kaikasi mani ya nahi ye to kal hi pata chalega 😜

Siya and Ram ka moment was damn funny na 🤩😂

ShruGhan made for each other 😂😂

Stay tuned for tomorrow's update ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Khyati55

This is the tenth time I am rewriting the comment today because whenever I think of somewords and start typing it doesn't make me satisfy actually I am really not finding appropriate words now to comment on the episode daily , I am really running short of words and actually needs time to memorize appropriate words to fit perfectly in the situation... I just don't know how to praise you girl for the way you described the worry of a not so helpless but hopeless arrogant,rude at a same time concerned mother for her children, or for the way you put such lovely, intimate moments in smooth , beautiful,at a same time in respectful way to not make any of your readers uncomfortable or awkward. It's really not an easy task . And today with such lovely hot sizzling moment between our ever so shy yet bold in front of his wife and our lady dabangg yet shy in case of such moment , you don't know Somu what you have done,God I can feel the heat radiating from the story warming the atmosphere around me in very romantic way that I can't even describe.... And also a big clap for @Golden_aura was such a beautiful song 👏👏👏👏... Sorry I guess yesterday I forgot to mention it for yesterday's song selection too... Literally you and Somu have a very nice song collection man.....

Today after reading Kaikesi's worry and fear I guess she might have understood that she had raised her one son as a gem or he himself had learnt from the starting but failed in case of her other two children....I know it's hoping against hope but I pray that it's late but it's never too late to knock some sense in her other two children or else it's time for the complete destruction only...😔😔😕...

Banda bhale hi kitna bhi powerful angry young man ho but biwi ke naam ke mention hone bhar se banda seham jaata h😆😆😆.. and that Sakuni mama ki bhanji Literally cracked me up 😝😝...

Lakshman day by day kuch zyada hi bold hota ja raha h tabhi to aaj kal unke mooh se nikla har dusra word double meaning vala hota h😉😉🤪🤪.. Aww bechara Shatrughan kuch kare na kare band bajna tay h🤭🤭🤭... Waah ji waah poori duniya ko apni muthi m rakhne ki takat vale The Ram Raghuvanshi khud apni biwi ke control m h😝😝😜😜... Well sahi bhi h shadi shuda khushal zindagi jeeni h to biwi ki haa m haa honi h....

Waah ji waah kya bargaining ki h Siya ne I am proud of you Siya 😉😉...

Ufff uske baad ke episode ko bolne ke liye ☺️☺️☺️...... Vahan Bharat ne curtains band kiye yahan dil ki dhadkan badh gayi aur phir.......☺️☺️☺️☺️...

Love you dear 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

Really Eagerly waiting for the next part.....

Update soon 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

Yes Goldie has definitely suggested a beautiful song 😍 let's appreciate her.

Kaikasi is indeed lucky to have Vaibhav as her son. But she will not praise him, rather she will care for her dear Raghvan 🙄

Lakshman 😂😂😂 aur uski bate.. Urmila ne sunn li hoti na to ek chanta padta 😂😂

Ram Raghuvanshi to Siya ke samne bann hi jate hai, jal bin machli 😂 kya kare abb.. kash ye Suvarna dekh leti 😈

And you have very correctly defined the romance between ManRat, shy Bharat and dabang Manvi ❣️

Stay tuned for tomorrow's update ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shraddhakonde4

kaikasi ko shock kyu laga ager suvarna gai to are khushiya banao kyuki ek pagal family se chali gai hai 😂😂 kaikasi ko shak hai ki suvarna mad hai me ti 100% sure hu ke wo mad hai .... lakshman daro jara urmila se abhi abhi sorry accept kiya hai ab kya cahte ho lonavla me bhi Angry bird banke rahe .. manvi meri aur se bhi 1 maro lakshman ko beshram bhabhi ke samne double meaning wali bate .... shatrughan chup hai phir bhi poor shatrughan ke shikayt ker rahi ho manvi ... hamara shatrughan kitna pyara hai kabhi kisi ko pareshan nahi karta 😂 .... shopping ka nam sunker he is boys ki waat lag jati hai ...manvi aur shruti to shatrughan aur bharat ko khich ker lekar gai but urmi ko to ye karna bhi nahi pada lakshman he piche aa gaya patng he na uski 😂 sita ne kya bargaining ke hai wow siya .. siya ne thik kaha bargaining karna woman ka janm sidh adhikar hai ... manvi aur bharat wow 🔥🔥 bharat romantic to ho gaya tha but manvi be use aur bhi romantic ker diya bapre kya romance kiya hai garmi badha di 😳 kal sira ka romance wow ... par kon aane wala hai sira ke life me ?UPDATE SOON ❤❤

Kya bola hai Suvarna ke liye ,😂😂

Lakshman aur Urmila se darega ??? Ha kyu nahi darega, bilkul darega 😜

Shatrughan to bematlab hi bichme phas jata hai 😂

Shopping girls ne kare, aisa kaise hoga 😁😁

Aur ManRat ne to aaj...... 🔥 Aag laga di..

Stay tuned for tomorrow's update ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it Saumya dear

Awesome and beautiful😍✨❤ part 🤗🤗

First if all thanks a ton for considering my request of songs🎵🎵 🤗🤗

Coming to update

Vaibhav ne to sahi time pe Kaiksi ko bata diya she too paid heed to his words but she too knows her daughter well & also the sibling fight ☹️

Good that at least her rational thoughts are in right direction hopefully she will stop her son from this dastardly act

Loo je Siya to typical housewife ke tarah ab bargain bhi karne lagi Delhi main kaafi experience ho gaya hai 😂 poor Ram was amused to see that 😊

I really had urge to laugh on the bartering of all 8 traffic signals really 🤣🤣 & Band waali 😅😅 badiya hai too good👍

Coming to Bharat & Maanvi they were beautiful😍✨❤

I felt like you have given a new passion to this song amazing👍😍🤩

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon😊

Yes Goldie very wonderful song suggestion 👍🏻😍

And thank god, Vaibhav ne barabar point pe Kaikasi ke dimag me baat dali hai. Hopefully she will be on their side this time 🙄

Siya ka bargaining wala like a typical housewife correct 😂😂

Traffic signals and band walis kya naam diya hai ek dusre ko 😂😂

And I am glad that I have done justice with the song ... ,😁

Stay tuned for tomorrow's update ❣️

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