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Posted: 4 years ago

Bahut accha chapter tha🖤🖤🖤🍁

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Aww This was beautiful ❤️❤️


Loved the scene where Raavi opens up about her feelings. And Raavi-Krish bond is always my fav! 71% is considered D here, but I'm sure it's great for Krish considering his desire to study. But he is planning on branching out from PS. I really like here how everyone is doing their bit to contribute in the family financially as they grow because profits from the PS can only go so far!


And the ending...are we moving towards ShiVi family planning?!

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Ahhh finally!!! I've been waiting for this😃

This is amazing! I love how they are realising that bachpan se toh it has always been them and no one else😍

Beautiful update! ❤️🤗

Maybe the next would be here sooner?😃

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Originally posted by: barbieflora

Ahhh finally!!! I've been waiting for this😃

This is amazing! I love how they are realising that bachpan se toh it has always been them and no one else😍

Beautiful update! ❤️🤗

Maybe the next would be here sooner?😃


Thank you so much for the love, Kia🤗

I was hoping to update sooner.

Maybe tomorrow, if I manage to finish😉

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Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Aww This was beautiful ❤️❤️


Loved the scene where Raavi opens up about her feelings. And Raavi-Krish bond is always my fav! 71% is considered D here, but I'm sure it's great for Krish considering his desire to study. But he is planning on branching out from PS. I really like here how everyone is doing their bit to contribute in the family financially as they grow because profits from the PS can only go so far!


And the ending...are we moving towards ShiVi family planning?!


ML🤗

Thank you so much. ♥️♥️

Yeah, even KriVi is my fav. Actually anyone with Krish is enjoyable to me.

@bold- So glad you liked my approach. I personally have seen in a family like that not all children gets into family business but they do follow the idea, making their own business.

The ending wasn’t written with that in mind. But how did you get it? I am writing in that contest only.

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Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Bahut accha chapter tha🖤🖤🖤🍁


Thank you Dii,🤗

Are you well?

Waiting for your OS

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Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

The beauty with which every lesson follows the other and the way you write is commendable !

Also this chapter turned out with a cute lil surprise as I happen to have the same name and nickname as one of the twins. Reading the name brought a sudden smile on to my face ❤️


Thank you ♥️

@bold- what a coincidence. I actually love that two name and wanted add them to my story. So glad it made you happy.🤗

Also, don't know your name 👀

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Originally posted by: freebird_dd

This one of fav ff

Loved it ....

Thanks


Thank you so much 🤗

Keep loving ♥️

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Originally posted by: Scarysea

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Sweet update 😃


Thank you Chikki🤗

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Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Beautiful update👏

Shivi's conversation about Raavi's parents and their relationship was beautiful❤️

Loved the family moment😊


Thank you so much🤗

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