SKR FF 2:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 146 - Page 51

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it dear💕

Awesome and beautiful part 🙂

I really feel that now all 3 should calm down not instantly but should trust Kranti

Hopefully itna sunne ke badh Siya & apni wife se teeno sochenge to zaroor 🙂

I really loved last part between Siya & Dashrath that was sweet🙂 siya was really happy seeing Dashrath happy as everything was going to be normal

Ab navmi se pehle boys maaf kar de then happiness will be doubled for celebration

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

Tino iss mamle me Kranti par gaye hai 😂😂 samajh ane me time lenge tino 🤪

Yes, finally we could see Dashrath happy, and he deserves the happiness 😊

Ram Navami is coming soon, hopefully the Raghuvanshis celebrate it with the boys forgiving Kranti...

Stay tuned ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Good morning 😀😄🤗

Here is today's part ❤️

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*****

Ram was working in the study room when his cellphone beeped as he received Siya's message. He checks his screen to read her message- "How long you are going to work 🙄 it's 11.. come now." Ram giggles reading her message, he could easily figure out her complaining face while typing this message. He has been working since their dinner and now it's time to wrap as he got a warning message from his wife. He shut his laptop down and gets up from his place, switching the lights off and moving towards the door. Ram was about to close the door behind him when his finger got hurt.

RAM- aahh...ss..

He cried in pain as his finger immediately changed its colour to red while blood started oozing out near his nail.

KRANTI- Ram...??

Ram turns to look at Kranti who was running towards him hearing his cry. Her eyes immediately falls on his injured finger.

KRANTI- hey bhagwan.. what happened..?

Asked Kranti getting panicked and taking his finger in her hold.

RAM- kuch nahi maa.. wo.. door se lag gaya.. bas..

Said Ram while his voice was seems to be painful and ofcourse he was feeling pained.

KRANTI- kya kuch nahi.? Kitni chot lagi hai..

Kranti seems to be panicked looking at him and then at his finger.

KRANTI- you come with me..

Said Kranti and holds his right arm. He didn't got a chance to deny her as Kranti started pulling him towards the living room. She made him settled down on the couch and then brings the first aid kit from the drawer.

KRANTI- kitni carelessness Ram.? Kaha dhyan rehta hai.?

Kranti scolded him while Ram smile at her lightly. She started cleaning his wound with the cotton applying detol to it.

KRANTI- jal raha hai kya.?

Asked Kranti looking at him while Ram shook his head denying with a smile.

KRANTI- why are you smiling like that.?

Questioned Kranti in confusion for which Ram looks at her.

RAM- you always get scared when something happens to me.. hai na.?

Kranti gave an obvious look for his words.

KRANTI- ye kaisa sawal hai.? Baccho ko chot lagti hai tab maa pareshan hoti hi hai..

Ram's smile widened hearing Kranti's care for him. He keeps on looking at his mother while Kranti was busy in her work of applying the bandage to him.

KRANTI- but you kids never think about that. Ye nahi ki khudka dhyan rakhe, warna maa pareshan hojayengi..

Kranti nods her head in disbelief complaining about him while Ram smile at her.

RAM- thank you maa..

Kranti motioned her eyes to look at him.

KRANTI- hmm.. maa se itne mahine dur rahe to thank you bolna shuru kar diya itni si bat pe.?

Questioned Kranti as she thought Ram is thanking her for applying the bandage to him. Ram lightly shook his head in denial.

RAM- thank you.. for everything you are doing..

Kranti stops her work hearing his words. She again looks at him while Ram smile at her.

RAM- janta hua maa, ye sab aapke liye bhi difficult raha hai. You were struggling between your mind and heart. But still you've taken a stand, a decision..

Kranti smile at him. She envelopes his hand between her hands.

KRANTI- mujhe yahi decision lena tha Ram, because this was right..

Ram could see the genuineness and confidence in Kranti's eyes.

KRANTI- time laga mujhe samajhne me.. but then.. better late than never..

Ram nods his head in agreement. Kranti started keeping the cotton and antiseptic bottle in the first aid kit when Ram interrupts her.

RAM- maa aap se ek bat puchu.?

Kranti looks at him nodding her head in yes giving him the permission to ask his question.

RAM- aap ne.. apna decision le liya tha. To.. hospital me hi, papa ke discharge ke time, kyu nahi roka hume.?

Kranti smile hearing his question. This question was making round in Ram's mind ever since they have returned. He waited for her to speak when Kranti keeps her hand on Ram's hand.

KRANTI- tumne meri khushi ke liye ye ghar choda, apne bhaiyo ke liye khud apne sare haq chod diye.. I just wanted to give that back to you with all respect...

Ram kept on looking at Kranti with an emotional smile on his face.

KRANTI- me khud Delhi akar, tumhe aur Siya se, pure haq se lautne ke liye kehna chahti thi. Khud tum dono ko wapis lana chahti thi..

Kranti's words made Ram to bow his head down controlling his emotions while Kranti smile at him lightly.

KRANTI- aur fir.. agar me tumhe hospital me hi ghar chalne ke liye kehti, to shayad tumhe lagta ki.. me tumhare papa ke health ke wajah se tumse lautne ke liye keh rahi hu..

Ram immediately shook his head in no while Kranti placed her palm on his cheek.

KRANTI- me tumhe kisi aur ke liye ya kisi aur ke kehne par nahi, khud apni marzi se lautne ke liye kehna chahti thi Ram..

Ram felt out of the world due to happiness hearing Kranti's words. At that moment, he felt that Kranti's all insecurities have been vanished. At that moment he felt that he has got his mother back. The same mother who used to love him a lot, who used to trust him, who has always been pampering him...

Dil se dil ka rishta juda

Pal do pal mein mitta nahi

Bandhan dilon ka tootta nahi

Bandhan dilon ka tootta nahi...


Ram takes Kranti's both the hands in his hands and placed a soft kiss on her palms while Kranti smile having tears in her eyes. Ram motioned his eyes to look at her and smile nodding his head.

Tere dil ka mere dil se

Rishta purana hai...


He forwards his hand near her eyes and wipes her tears away while Kranti closed her eyes feeling Ram's touch, the touch she has been missing a lot. Ram wipes her tears from the other eye too smiling at her.

In aankhon se har aansoo

Mujhko churana hai

Mujhko churana hai

Mujhko churana hai...


Their moment was witnessed by Siya who was standing near the stairs. She was moving towards the study room to call Ram when she witnessed the mother- son sitting in the living room. She smile looking at them spending an emotional moment.

Tere dil ka mere dil se

Rishta purana hai...


She looks at the direction of Sumitra's room and runs to call her. Siya holds Sumitra's hand and brings her near the living area asking her to look at Kranti and Ram. Sumitra got an automatic smile watching Kranti crying in Ram's embrace while he was caressing his mother's back.

In aankhon se har aansoo

Mujhko churana hai

Mujhko churana hai

Mujhko churana hai...


Ram release Kranti from the hug and asked her to smile for which Kranti nods at him in agreement. He rests himself on the couch, keeping his head on Kranti's lap for which she gets surprised first and then happy.

Tere dil ka mere dil se

Rishta purana hai...


Ram looks at her face while Kranti placed her hand on his forehead. She started lightly caressing him while Ram takes her other hand in his hold smiling at his mother.

Teri bechaini ka, teri tanhayi ka

Ehsaas hai mujhko sun...


Siya and Sumitra look at each other getting emotional and happy. Siya wraps her arms around Sumitra from back, keeping her head on her shoulder while Sumitra caresses her head in a motherly affection, both of them looking at Ram and Kranti.

Main jo saath tere hoon

Phir tujhe hai kaisa gham

Dard baant lenge hum sun...


Ram and Kranti were talking and laughing remembering various incidents of his childhood and young age. Kranti teases him for few incidents related to Siya before his marriage while Ram smile getting embarrassed with his mother's words.

In palkon mein khushiyon ka

Sapna sajana hai...


Upstairs, Urmila and Lakshman were standing witnessing them having their moment. Urmila was smiling happily looking at Kranti while Lakshman didn't had any expressions on his face. Though he is angry with Kranti, but somewhere he knows that Kranti has genuinely asked her apologies from Ram and Siya.

Tere dil ka mere dil se

Rishta purana hai...


Lakshman sighed looking at them and turns to leave from there towards his room. Urmila looks at him going getting sad. She nods her head in disbelief looking at Lakshman not paying attention to Kranti. She again turns to look at Ram and Kranti and smile, praying for their togetherness...

*****

Next morning, the girls were in the temple doing their morning prayer while the boys were in the living area, doing their office work.

LAKSHMAN- thank god.. hum sabko Ram Navami tak ka time mil gaya hai, to take rest.. papa ne, bhaiya ke MD banne ki party ke bad, office join karne kaha hai..

Exclaimed Lakshman giving a high-five to Shatrughan for which Ram nods in disbelief.

RAM- but that doesn't mean ki kam se bhi chutti hai.. we have to cover up the work from home..

Said Ram typing something in his laptop. The boys looks at each other and then at Ram.

BHARAT- ha bhaiya.. we will complete our work for sure..

Ram smile looking at them for a moment and then again got busy in his work.

SHATRUGHAN- filhal to.. Aram wale din chal rahe hai hamare..

Shatrughan streched his arms in air.

SHATRUGHAN- ab to bas.. kuch acha sa khane ko mil jaye..

Said Shatrughan peeping towards the direction of the kitchen while Bharat slaps his own head.

BHARAT- oh god.. I don't understand, hamara bhai Shatrughan hai ya bakasur..

Lakshman chuckled hearing Bharat's words while Shatrughan pouts at him. The girls moves towards them, interrupting their talks.

SIYA- guys.. what you all want to have for lunch.?

Asked Siya sitting beside Lakshman while Shatrughan's eyes twinkle getting happy.

SHATRUGHAN- aaj me bhagwan se eight pack abs bhi maang leta na, to ye bhi wo mujhe de dete..

Said Shatrughan giving a flying kiss to Siya while the boys giggles at him.

URMILA- matlab..?

Questioned Urmila getting confused for which Lakshman answered her.

LAKSHMAN- matlab ye ki.. Hamari choice ka khana banne wala hai.?

Lakshman looks surprised for which Manvi hits him on his shoulder.

MANVI- jaise ki roz to hum log puchte hi nahi.!

Lakshman giggles looking at Manvi's anger.

SHATRUGHAN- ha but.. itne pyar se.. to aap log kabhi kabhi hi puchte hai na..

Said Shatrughan pulling Shruti's cheek who was sitting beside him.

SHRUTI- lo batao.. inse pucho to problem, na pucho to problem.. you all are impossible..

Shruti nods in disbelief for which Urmila agreed.

URMILA- correct.. inn husbands ko na.. hum log samajh hi nahi payenge..

Lakshman's jaw drops hearing her allegations.

LAKSHMAN- ek to na.. aap log bechari banna band kar dijiye.. because none of you is "haaye bechari, julmi pati ki mari" ..!

Said Lakshman in a taunt for which Siya slaps him on his back.

SIYA- bas ab.. har choti bat pe ladne lag jate ho tum log..

Ram giggles at them nodding his head in disbelief. Their conversation got interrupted by Kranti who has came near them.

KRANTI- Sumitra NGO se agayi kya.?

Everyone looks at her when Kranti asked about Sumitra.

URMILA- nahi maa.. choti maa bas ati hi hongi..

Answered Urmila for which Kranti nods at her. She looks at the boys who got busy in their work, going silent after Kranti came there.

KRANTI- aa..bb.. lunch ka kya hua ? Anything decided.?

Asked Kranti again looking at the girls for which they shook their head denying.

SHRUTI- wohi to puch rahe the hum log inse.. but they were busy pulling our legs..

Said Shruti nodding in disbelief while Kranti giggles at their banter.

SIYA- maa.. jaisa aap ne kaha tha, hum log bana lenge. You be with papa..

Kranti smile at her and leaves from there towards Dashrath's room. The boys looks at each other getting confused and then at Siya.

BHARAT- matlab..?

Siya sighed and answered him with a smile.

SIYA- maa ne kaha hai humse, ki jitne din aap log ghar par hai, aap logo ki choice ka acha acha khana banaye..

The boys gets startled hearing the revelation from Siya while Ram watches their reaction.

MANVI- ha.. maa thinks that unke bechare bete kitna kam karte hai. That's why she wanted to do something for you all .

Said Manvi nodding in disbelief for the pampered behavior of Kranti towards the four boys.

URMILA- now tell us jaldi.. kyuki hume bhi bohot sare kam hai..

Said Urmila to the boys sounding angry.

LAKSHMAN- we are fine with anything.

Answered Lakshman in a low voice. The girls looks at him in confusion. Manvi was about to speak something when Siya stops her by nodding her head in no.

SIYA- ok.. fine..

The girls got up to leave from there. After the girls went towards the kitchen Ram looks at the boys who were still thinking about Kranti.

RAM- maa to.. maa hi hoti hai..

Said Ram in general, gaining everyone's attention. He sighed and continued looking in his laptop.

RAM- bhale hi bacche unse kitna hi naraz ho, kitna hi lad le.. par wo apna pyar jatana kabhi nahi chodti..

The boys motioned their eyes to look at Ram. They very well know that Ram is indirectly making them understand about their behaviour towards Kranti.

RAM- since childhood, na jane humne kitni galatiyan ki hogi. Aur kitni baar, maa has forgiven us, without a second thought..

The three of them looks at each other and then at Ram while he continued speaking, still looking in his laptop.

RAM- maa papa agar apne baccho ki har galati maaf kar sakte hai.. to baccho ko bhi unhe maaf kar dena chahiye.. specially tab, jab wo really sorry feel kar rahe ho..

Ram gave a look at the three of them. The boys bows their head down and got busy in their work while Ram smile lightly looking at them...

*****

The ladies were settled at the dinning area, busy in their office work while Sumitra was telling them about her NGO.

SUMITRA- and you all know what, even minister sir was happy about the charity event.

Said Sumitra for which the girls became happy.

URMILA- wow choti maa.. iss bar lagta hai, bohot grand way me event hua hai..

Sumitra nods at her in agreement.

SIYA- acha hai na choti maa. Itne time bad, you got satisfied with your work..

Said Siya with a smile for which Sumitra touched her cheek lightly.

SHRUTI- choti maa. From next time, take us with you.. I am so excited to hear you giving speech and all..

Said Shruti in an excitement for which Sumitra laughs at her.

SUMITRA- I am not at all good at that.

Said Sumitra nodding in disbelief when Manvi interrupts her.

MANVI- aap to kabhi khudki tarif karengi nahi.. let us decide that, you only take us with you..

Manvi said in an orderly tone for which Sumitra nods at her in agreement. Her eyes falls on Kranti who was moving towards the stairs from the kitchen.

SUMITRA- didi..

Kranti turns at Sumitra's direction when she heard her call.

SUMITRA- ayiye na.. bethiye hamare sath..

KRANTI- ati hu Sumitra.. inhe bas ye medicine de deti hu..

Said Kranti showing her the tray which she was holding. Sumitra nods at her in agreement while Kranti started climbing the stairs. Suddenly her leg got twisted and she was about to fall backwards.

KRANTI- aahh..

Lakshman and Shatrughan holds Kranti from back saving her from falling while Bharat holds her hand and the tray she was holding.

SIYA- maa..

The ladies immediately runs towards the stairs watching the boys with Kranti.

BHARAT- maa.. kya kar rahi hai aap.? Aap girne wali thi.. dhyan kaha hai aapka.?

Asked Bharat taking the tray from her and almost scolding her. Kranti sighed keeping her hand on her chest near her heart feeling her increased heart beats.

LAKSHMAN- and why you are doing this.? Ghar me itne log hai.. why you have to do..?

Questioned Lakshman sounding irritated. Indeed the boys were scared looking at their mother like this.

SHATRUGHAN- Shruti.. what you were doing.? Can't you help maa with her work.?

Shatrughan shouted at Shruti who was looking at him saying nothing. The girls looks at each other and then at the boys who were sounding hell worried for their mother.

BHARAT- you leave it maa.. papa ko medicine hum de denge.. aap.. aap chaliye baithiye shanti se..

Said Bharat holding Kranti's hand. She became teary plus surprised looking at the boys'care for her.

LAKSHMAN- and maa please.. from next time dhyan se chaliye.. ye to acha hua.. hum log the.. warna... Aap.. aap gir jati maa..

Lakshman too had tears in his eyes. Kranti smile at him lightly controlling her tears.

SHATRUGHAN- aap apni bahuo ko batayiye. They will do everything.. you don't have to run everywhere..

Shatrughan scolded her taking her hand in his hand and holding her tightly. She could feel the shivers holding his hand. Immediately the reality strikes them and the boys looks at each other getting surprised for their care towards Kranti. The girls smile looking at them while Kranti wipes her tears.

KRANTI- me . Me theek hu.. beta.. I am fine..

Said Kranti finally breaking her silence. The boys sighed looking at her. She takes the tray from Bharat and smile looking at the boys.

KRANTI- ab me dhyan rakhungi.. don't worry..

The boys lightly nods their head saying nothing further. Kranti leaves from there towards her room while the boys looks at the girls who were staring them with a light smile. Shatrughan moves towards Shruti and lightly pats her cheek.

SHATRUGHAN- I..I am sorry.. for yelling at you..

Shruti smile at him and blinks her eyes indicating him to not apologize to her. The boys leaves from there towards their respective rooms without waiting for the girls to comment anything regarding their behaviour. Siya turns to look at Sumitra who was having a smile on her face.

SIYA- dekha na choti maa.? Maa ki chinta to hai, but they don't want to accept that..

Siya complaints to her about the boys while the girls nods at her in agreement.

SUMITRA- Kranti Raghuvanshi ke bete hai na.. unhi ke jaise honge..

Said Sumitra in a joke while the girls chuckled at her words. Sumitra keeps her hand on Siya's shoulder and looks at the four of them.

SUMITRA- don't worry.. hojayenge apne aap theek..

The girls smile at her and nods in agreement hoping that her words come true soon...

*****

Siya enters the room to find Ram searching his clothes in the wardrobe. She smile at him and runs towards him wrapping her arms around him in a back hug making Ram startled.

RAM- arey..? Kya baat hai.! Badi khush lag rahi hai aap.?

Questioned Ram with a smile while continuing his work. Siya released him from her hold and stands beside him.

SIYA- ha.. hu me khush..

Said Siya folding her hands while Ram smile looking at her.

RAM- garden me ek phool khil jata hai tab bhi aap khush hojati hai.. but this happiness is something else.. what happened.?

Siya giggles at his words while he takes his clothes and towel from the wardrobe.

SIYA- Unn tino ke mann me, maa ke liye soft corner jo hogaya hai..

Ram immediately turns his head to look at her getting surprised. Siya smile looking at his reaction.

RAM- sach..?

Siya nods her head in agreement. She takes a step closer to him and wraps her arms around his neck.

SIYA- bilkul sach..

Whispered Siya while Ram became happy at her revelation. He pulls her in a tight hug out of his excitement.

RAM- I am so happy hearing this..

Said Ram closing his eyes while Siya giggles at his reaction. They both looks at each other, getting released from the hug, staying in same position. Siya could witness the light tears in Ram's eyes.

SIYA- areh.? Why to get emotional.?

Asked Siya wiping his tear away from the corner of his eyes.

RAM- soch raha hu, maa will get so happy hearing this.. she will be finally feeling relived..

Siya nods her head in agreement while smiling thinking about Kranti.

SIYA- today it seems like.. hamari puri family, sahi mayne me ek hojayegi..

Ram's smile widened hearing her words. He again pulls her in his embrace while Siya closed her eyes folding his back tightly...

Bharat was standing in front of Kaushalya's photo in the living room. He was having lots of questions to ask her which were there in his heart. But he couldn't say anything, his tears doing the conversation with her photo. Manvi came there searching for him. She looks at his direction and became confused. She moves towards him and found his eyes to be teary.

MANVI- Bharat.?

Bharat immediately wipes his tears and turns to look at her.

MANVI- what happened.?

Asked Manvi looking at his sad face while Bharat just shook his head.

BHARAT- I am fine..

Answered Bharat in a low voice. Manvi smile at him lightly and keeps her hand on his shoulder to gain his attention.

MANVI- maa se bat karne ka mann kar raha hai.?

Asked Manvi for which Bharat became surprised. She has correctly guessed what he is thinking and feeling about. He bows his head down saying nothing while Manvi takes his hand in her hold.

MANVI- itna mann kar raha hai, to jakar bat kar lijiye na unse..

Manvi suggested him for which he didn't react anything. She lightly caresses his hand.

MANVI- don't kill your emotions Bharat. I know you are eager to have a talk with maa..

Bharat motioned his eyes to look at her. She smiles at him and wipes his tears away.

MANVI- just remember one thing that you all are her children and she is your maa.. you don't need any more reason to share your feelings with her..

Bharat gets more tears in his eyes. Manvi again wipes his tears while he tightens the grip taking her hand in his hands and giving a light peck to her...

Lakshman was searching something in the drawer getting frustrated while Urmila was watching him sitting in front of the mirror, combing her hair.

LAKSHMAN- kaha rakh diya hai mene..

Said Lakshman sounding angry. He takes his laptop bag and throws the files and papers on the bed from the bag. Urmila gets up from her place and watches him.

LAKSHMAN- ek chiz jagah par nahi milti.. pata nahi kaha rakh deta hu me..

Lakshman kept on getting angry on himself while Urmila nods her head in disbelief. She moves towards the table and takes the pendrive which he was searching since long. She moves towards Lakshman and forwards the pendrive near him. He looks at her hand and then at her.

URMILA- chize samne hi hoti hai.. bas hamari nazar nahi padti unpar..

Said Urmila looking at him. Lakshman takes the pendrive from her hold and again looks at her.

URMILA- gussa shant karna hai.?

Asked Urmila for which Lakshman didn't reacted or said anything. She moves closer to him and cups his face with her hands. Lakshman kept on looking at her while Urmila pulls him in her embrace. Lakshman closed his eyes and sudden tears started coming down his cheek. She kept on caressing his back making him to calm while Lakshman started shedding more tears.

URMILA- sshhu.. bas... Shant hojayiye..

Urmila caresses his head with her one hand and Lakshman wipes his tears. He released her from the hug and Urmila looks at him.

LAKSHMAN- sorry..

Said Lakshman under his breath wiping his tears while Urmila smile at him.

URMILA- mujhe nahi.. unse kahiye jinse aap kehna chahte hai..

Lakshman looks at her immediately hearing her words.

URMILA- but isliye nahi keh rahe, kyuki aapka ye faltu sa ego bichme araha hai..

Said Urmila pulling his nose lightly while Lakshman smile at her lightly. She again cups his face with her both the hands.

URMILA- jane dijiye na Laksh.. bhul jayiye ab.. aap tino bhi maa se bat karna chahte hai.. to kar lijiye na..

Said Urmila in a request for which Lakshman again gets tears in his eyes. Urmila immediately wipes his tears and shook her head asking him to not cry for which Lakshman smile at her...

Shatrughan was moving towards his room when he stops in between. He turns to look at the direction of Kranti's room. He remembers the incident happened at evening when Kranti was about to fall from the stairs. His heart wrenched thinking about the result if that would have happened. He was about to move towards her room but again stops himself. He bows his head down and closed his eyes not able to figure out what should he do. Shruti slides her hand in his hand gaining his attention. He turns to look at her who was smiling at him.

SHRUTI- par me rahungi sada... Usi tarah... Teri.. baho me bahe dal ke.. har lamha... Har pal...

Shruti sings some lines of a song making Shatrughan to smile at her lightly.

SHRUTI- this is our favourite song.. hai na.?

Shatrughan lightly nods his head in agreement.

SHRUTI- wo bas favourite yu hi thodi hai. I seriously follows the lyrics it has..

Shatrughan's eyes started getting moist hearing her words. She smiles at him and lightly patted his cheek.

SHRUTI- itni himmat karke, you've decided to let go the things right.? Ab aur thodi himmat karke, maa se bat kar lijiye..

Said Shruti caressing his cheek lightly. Shatrughan turns his head down closing his eyes while Shruti kept on waiting for him.

SHRUTI- me hu tumhare sath cookie.. you don't have to feel embarrassed.. maa aap logo ko na datengi.. na naraz hongi..

Shruti tried to make him understand while Shatrughan kept on having his eyes closed.

SHRUTI- apni hi maa se bat karne me, itni kya jhijhak.?

Shatrughan opens his eyes immediately. He again looks at her.

SHATRUGHAN- me theek kar raha hu na.?

Questioned Shatrughan while Shruti's smile widened hearing him. She nods her head in agreement.

SHRUTI- absolutely right..

Shatrughan nods his head lightly. At the next moment, he asked further.

SHATRUGHAN- maa.. maaf kar dengi na.?

Shruti sighed hearing his words. She released her hold from his hand.

SHRUTI- wo maa hai, wo naraz hongi hi nahi..

Shatrughan smile hearing her confident words. He wipes his tears looking at the direction of Kranti's room while Shruti smile at him...

*****

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Bharat, Lakshman aur Shatrughan Kranti se baat kar payenge? Kya Kranti unn tino se khud baat karegi.? 🤔

Janne ke liye, stay tuned for tomorrow's update ❣️

Dhanyawad, Shukriya, Aabhar 🙏🏻

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Song: "Tere Dil Ka Mere Dil Se" Koi Aap Sa (2005 movie)

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Tusīṁ kadē vī mainū hairāna karana vica asaphala nahīṁ hudē..Tusīṁ hamēśāṁ mērī savēra nū cagā baṇā'undē hō..Tuhāḍā sōcaṇa dā tarīkā bākasa tōṁ bāhara hai..Hara bhāvanā nū zāhara karana dā tuhāḍā tarīkā mērē dila nū chūhadā hai..Hara rōza khuśahālī phailā'uṇa la'ī tuhāḍā dhanavāda..

Really the way you have portrayed the inner turmoil going in the heart of Raghuvanshi brothers was like a treat to our eyes while reading..

Well starting from the beginning.. Mr Ram Raghuvanshi who never get scared even in front of biggest problems of the world is scared of his wife.. not bad not bad 😝😜😝... Ram's situation was like work load ya social pressure se darr nhi lagta sahab par biwi se lagta hai🤣🤣🤣. Tabhi to Biwi ka ek message and itni jaldi sab pack up karne m lagg gye ki ghayal ho bethe... Kranti's panick stricken face after seeing the minor injury of Ram and her reaction was so natural and words spoken by her that a mother always cares for her children were so true that it brought a automatic smile on my face.. Finally Ram got the answer for his turmoil that why Kranti did not stop them by going back and Kranti must have also felt relieved that someone is there to whom she can say whatever is in her heart...

Bharat ne kya naam choose kiya hai Bakasur🤣🤣🤣.. aww our all time hungry Raghuvanshi wants six pack abes but ab kise impress Krna h six pack abs bana kr kyunki Shruti to already pati patai hai🤣🤣😆.. pr ye teeno ek mauka nhi chodte apni biwiyon ki taang kichne ka... Ram's way of indirectly showing the mirror to his brothers about their behaviour towards Kranti was best ... Sumitra is more like a friend than mother in law for the girls whom they can demand anything, share anything... Sudden reaction of boys towards Kranti when she was falling Literally confirms that they don't hate Kranti neither they are angry with her anymore but it's just their false ego that is stopping them from talking to their mother.. aur ho bhi kyu na Like mother like children😆😆😆😆.. the way sisters are handling their husbands when they are behaving like a five year adamant boy who is not willing to talk to his mother because she took away his candy is really appreciable...

Eagerly waiting for boys apology...

Update soon dear 💖💖💖💖💖

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Kya kahu? Kaha se shuru karu? L-O-V-E-D today's update. From the beginning to the end, it was full of emotions. Loved Kranti and Ram's mother-son moment, loved how Siya called Sumitra to share the joy, loved how Ram was advising his younger brothers, loved how Manvi understood Bharat, loved how Lakshman could be vulnerable infront of Urmila, loved how Shruti gave Shatrughan courage. Everything was to the point ❤

Yesterday's update was not short, but it was that good ki maan nehi bhara, as today's one. But that's the magic you create 😊

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My god, the update was so emotional. It feels like I was watching a movie or show and I could feel the scenes in front of my eyes, though it were only written. You really do a magic yar, what a graceful writing you have. Starting from Ram and Kranti's scene, one of the most emotional song. It perfectly matches them, the lyrics, the feelings, so beautiful. Then Ram making the boys understand by indirectly telling them about a mother-children relationship was so beautifully written. The scene where Kranti was about to fall and the three of them saves her, I became teary reading that part. And last scene, charo couples ke kya kehne. Each one of them have a different understanding level between them. How beautiful, how emotional, how wonderful and the words are falling short. Thank you for the update, waiting for their apologies.

Love,

Sammy

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Posted: 4 years ago

Haaye kya update tha.. lively and emotional at the same time..

Haan maa ne kitni baar maaf kiya hai. Ek galti ke liye maafi toh milni hi chahiye na maa ko..

Shatrughna ko abs banane hai?? Ab kya faayda Shruti toh pat hi gayi hai na..

Aur Kranti ne ladkon ka favourite khana banane ko kaha.. pyaarrr 🥰🥰🥰

Bache bhi samajh gaye 😅😅

Sab jaante hai Kranti ke bete unhi ke jaise honge 😄😄😄

Ab agle chapter mein tissues leke baithna padega 😢😢

Koi na..😄😄

Thanks for PM

Waiting eagerly for next chapter..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it dear💕

Awesome and emotional part🙂

I really loved the conversation between Kranti & Ram pure mother son bond 🙂

Even when she slipped all 3 caught her at the right time rebuking her for carelessness

Sumitra said correctly Kranti ke bete hai na ziddi to hoonge he 🙂

I loved how all three sisters were convincing their husbands to talk to Kranti

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very beautiful update 😍

Ram n Kranti's moment was best ☺️...finally they are back😁

And boys saving their mother and getting scared for her was too good ☺️

Ram's dialogue to Siya 'garden mein ek phool bhi khil jata hai toh bhi aap khush ho jati hain'😜....mast tha

Girls convincing session was next good part 🙂

Hope boys understand now...

Continue soon...

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A light hearted update full of happy moments 😊...ram😅..."come now"😅😅😂🤣...I loved it 😘...ram is literally jhoru ke gulam 😂...cute😚....and ram kranti sequence was tooo emotional..I was Soo happy reading it💓...and I loved how ram and siya make the boys realise what they are doing..and yes I am sure they are going to apologise to kranti any time soon...and I too loved the dialogue of ram to siya......that phool Wala dialogue 😊...it was soooo cute 😚...and yes waiting for sira moments more.... desperately..😜... continue soon darling 😘... love you..💓..Jai siya ram ♥️.

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Originally posted by: Khyati55

Tusīṁ kadē vī mainū hairāna karana vica asaphala nahīṁ hudē..Tusīṁ hamēśāṁ mērī savēra nū cagā baṇā'undē hō..Tuhāḍā sōcaṇa dā tarīkā bākasa tōṁ bāhara hai..Hara bhāvanā nū zāhara karana dā tuhāḍā tarīkā mērē dila nū chūhadā hai..Hara rōza khuśahālī phailā'uṇa la'ī tuhāḍā dhanavāda..

Really the way you have portrayed the inner turmoil going in the heart of Raghuvanshi brothers was like a treat to our eyes while reading..

Well starting from the beginning.. Mr Ram Raghuvanshi who never get scared even in front of biggest problems of the world is scared of his wife.. not bad not bad 😝😜😝... Ram's situation was like work load ya social pressure se darr nhi lagta sahab par biwi se lagta hai🤣🤣🤣. Tabhi to Biwi ka ek message and itni jaldi sab pack up karne m lagg gye ki ghayal ho bethe... Kranti's panick stricken face after seeing the minor injury of Ram and her reaction was so natural and words spoken by her that a mother always cares for her children were so true that it brought a automatic smile on my face.. Finally Ram got the answer for his turmoil that why Kranti did not stop them by going back and Kranti must have also felt relieved that someone is there to whom she can say whatever is in her heart...

Bharat ne kya naam choose kiya hai Bakasur🤣🤣🤣.. aww our all time hungry Raghuvanshi wants six pack abes but ab kise impress Krna h six pack abs bana kr kyunki Shruti to already pati patai hai🤣🤣😆.. pr ye teeno ek mauka nhi chodte apni biwiyon ki taang kichne ka... Ram's way of indirectly showing the mirror to his brothers about their behaviour towards Kranti was best ... Sumitra is more like a friend than mother in law for the girls whom they can demand anything, share anything... Sudden reaction of boys towards Kranti when she was falling Literally confirms that they don't hate Kranti neither they are angry with her anymore but it's just their false ego that is stopping them from talking to their mother.. aur ho bhi kyu na Like mother like children😆😆😆😆.. the way sisters are handling their husbands when they are behaving like a five year adamant boy who is not willing to talk to his mother because she took away his candy is really appreciable...

Eagerly waiting for boys apology...

Update soon dear 💖💖💖💖💖

I think by the end of this FF, I am going to get an appreciation in each and every language in this world from you 😂😂🤪🤪

That line from the song suits Ram- Darta jahan humse, hum tohse darte 😂 Siya ka ek msg aur chal diye Ram apni biwi ki bat mante hue ...

Yes, finally Kranti and Ram are getting like before, the ice between them is breaking and that's a good news ❤️

Sahi kaha, Shatrughan wants eight pack abs but Shruti to pat gayi, to ab kya hi abs and kya hi kuch 😂😂

True, Sumitra is like a friend to all the girls, they surely can share everything with her without any hesitation ❤️

The boys concern for Kranti was so genuine, but jaisa Sumitra ne kaha, Kranti ke bete, kuch to asar hoga na unpe, Kranti ka 🤪

So let's see what next update brings.. stay tuned ❣️

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