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Hi! I am reading your story, and this modern take on the Ramayana is really enjoyable! Eagerly waiting for next updates! ❤
What a serene beautiful update ❣🌼
Shruti handling Shatrughn... was pur bliss
And then the beach ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Great going
Waiting for the update dear ☺️💕....I think you are busy.....take your time and update sooooooon 🤗
Hi! I am reading your story, and this modern take on the Ramayana is really enjoyable! Eagerly waiting for next updates! ❤
Hey welcome to this FF 🤗
Thanks for the words...
Stay tuned ❣️ will continue soon...
Originally posted by: ..Dharma_dasi..
What a serene beautiful update ❣🌼
Shruti handling Shatrughn... was pur bliss
And then the beach ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Great going
Glad you liked it...🥰
Stay tuned ❣️
Originally posted by: Srinivasan.R
Waiting for the update dear ☺️💕....I think you are busy.....take your time and update sooooooon 🤗
Ya actually was busy today..
Hopefully I will be able to update tomorrow...😅😅
Stay tuned ❣️ thanks for the patience...
Hello my happy readers 🤗
Sorry for the late update, I'm running busy 😅😅
So here is today's part...
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*****
LAKSHMAN- bhabhi... I'm leaving..
Lakshman calls for Siya, moving towards the main door, putting his coat button.
SIYA- one minute Lakshman..
Siya shouted from the kitchen while Lakshman started wearing his shoes. His phone started ringing and he receives the call.
LAKSHMAN- yes Sumant ji.?.... Ji.... Ha I am leaving for the site now....
Lakshman started talking with Sumant, tie-ing his shoes laces.
LAKSHMAN- I have the documents with me.....Bhaiya factory jayenge..... Ji ji..... Ok.... Bye..
He disconnects the call and looks at the direction of the kitchen.
LAKSHMAN- bhabhi....
SIYA- ayi baba...
After a moment Siya came near him almost running. He looks at her in surprise.
LAKSHMAN- areh bhabhi aap daud kyu rahi hai.? Aapka per abhi abhi theek hua hai na?
Asked Lakshman in a concern for which Siya smile at him.
SIYA- leave that. And hold this..
Said Siya handing him the lunch box.
SIYA- I've packed two lunch boxes.. one for the lunch time and dusra wala.. jab bhi bhuk lage tab kha lena...
Siya instructs him while Lakshman takes the lunch box from her and nods in disbelief.
LAKSHMAN- do kyu diye bhabhi.?
SIYA- because you're going at other site which is far away.. plus you are coming late at evening..ghar se jyada der bahar rehte hai, to sathme khane ki chiz hamare pas honi chahiye.
Lakshman smile at her care for him. He suddenly remembered Kranti and her same motherly concern for her kids. How she always used to get worried about their food when they used to go out. He nods his head, shrugging off her thoughts and was about to speak something when Siya again interrupts him.
SIYA- no more arguments... Otherwise I'll pull your ear.
Lakshman giggles at his bhabhi's cute scoldings.
LAKSHMAN- acha.. I will leave now.
SIYA- take care of yourself. And do call Urmila when you get time.. Don't forget..
Siya gave him some instructions while he nods in agreement.
LAKSHMAN- Bhaiya ja raha hu..
Lakshman said shouting so that Ram could hear, who was in his room.
SIYA- message me once you reach.
Lakshman nods in agreement and finally leaves from there and Siya locks the door. She turns around to find Ram standing in front of her with his unbuttoned shirt.
SIYA- kya hua.?
Asked Siya looking at his shirt while he showed her the broken button of his shirt. Siya giggles at him.
RAM- aap has rahi hai.? I am getting late Siya..
Said Ram being serious while she tried to press her smile.
SIYA- I'll give you another shirt..
Said Siya and was about to leave in their room when Ram stops her holding her wrist. She looks at him in confusion.
RAM- I want to wear this shirt only...
Ram said folding his hands in a cute pout while Siya laughs at her kiddish husband.
SIYA- you are impossible..
She nods her head in disbelief and moves towards the drawer. She opens the first drawer and takes the needle thread from the box.
SIYA- Ram... Aap roz ye naye naye romance ke ideas kaha se late hai.?
Asked Siya with a smile while putting the thread on the needle's back while Ram grins hearing her question. He moves towards her and wraps his arms around her, back-hugging, giving her a little shock.
RAM- the one who is having the most beautiful wife, these ideas will automatically generate in his mind.
Said Ram in a smirk and hits his head on her back head while she giggle at his answer.
SIYA- hmm..
Siya nods her head in yes and turns to face him. She opens her hand in front of him and he keeps the button on her hand. She attached the button on the shirt's area near his chest, from where it was broken. She gets busy stiching the button, applying her whole concentration while Ram smile staring her.
SIYA- though you're the eldest, but aapke bhai aapko aise dekhenge na they will wonder at your kiddish behaviour..
Said Siya complaining about her husband cutely. He slowly takes his hands near her waist and locked her , pulling her lightly on him while she gets jerk and looks shock.
SIYA- you'll get hurt..
Said Siya indicating him to the needle while he rolls his eyes not caring about the needle. She nods in disbelief and continued her work while Ram started slowly bending on her. She smile and hits him lightly with her right elbow while he looks at her in shock.
RAM- siya.?
Siya giggled at him and again continued her work while Ram kept on watching her with a smile. She bends near his chest to break the left over thread from his shirt with her teeth. While doing that, she kissed his bare chest lightly while he smile at her gesture.
SIYA- hmm.. hogaya..
Said Siya keeping the needle at the drawer and then turns towards him to button his shirt.
RAM- thank you...
Siya smile at him and lightly pulled his nose.
SIYA- you're welcome patidev..
Ram giggles at her words and at the other moment looks at her in a tensed expression.
RAM- acha siya.. you will stay alone at home.? Or else should I drop you at maa papa.?
Asked Ram in a concern while Siya smile at him. She knows he is concerned about whatever she had told him about Jayant. She completed buttoning his shirt and then looks at him.
SIYA- me yaha ache se reh lungi.. don't worry..
Ram smile at her assured words. She wraps her arms around his neck while he kissed her forehead.
RAM- you've to call me in any case. Understood.?
Said Ram giving her the instruction while she nods in agreement. She leaves him and he takes his coat and bag from the table.
SIYA- I am also coming downstairs. I've fetch the flowers from the garden.
Ram nods his head while Siya takes the small bamboo basket and house's key from the key stand. They both leaves from there, closing the door behind them and moves towards the lift...
*****
After Ram leaves from the building in his cab, Siya moves towards the building's garden which was situated at the side of the parking. She smile looking at the beautiful fresh garden.
GUARD- good morning didi ji..
She looks at her side to find the security guard wishing her with a smile. She reciprocated the smile at him.
SIYA- good morning bhaiya..
GUARD- aaj aap ayi hai phool lene.? Mujhe bol diya hota..
Said the guard forwarding his hand near her so that she hands his the basket.
SIYA- it's ok bhaiya.. aaj me le lungi.. thank you..
The guard smile at her and takes a leave from her. Her concentration again went on the colorful eye-catching plants in front of her. She lightly touches the orange marigold and started plucking the "about to fall" flowers, leaving the fresh buds on the plant itself. She started humming a tone while continuously looking at the beautiful flowers. She moves forward towards the white jasmine and inhale it's soothing smell. She started collecting the fallen jasmine on ground and puts them in her basket. She gets up and looks at the red hibiscus plant on her side and went near it to collect the flowers. She lightly touches one fully blossomed hibiscus and her smile widened looking at its beauty. She plucks one of the flowers and keeps it in her basket when suddenly she realised someone at her back. She turns immediately to find no one around her. She gets confused by her sudden illusion and again turns around towards the plant when she gets bumped at someone's chest.
SIYA- aahhh...
She shouted a bit by the sudden scare and the basket falls from her hand, making the flowers to fall on ground. She looks at her front to find Jayant standing close to her and smiling.
JAYANT- hello...
Jayant said in his evil husky voice making her scared. She immediately gets two- three steps back, making a two feet distance from him.
JAYANT- arey..? Aap ghabra kyu rahi hai..?
Said Jayant taking a step towards her while she again gets one step back.
JAYANT- I just came here to meet you.
Siya was breathing heavily because of the sudden shock she got. She keeps her hand on her chest, near her heart to calm her fast beating heartbeats.
JAYANT- yesterday I didn't get a chance to meet you. That's why I thought I will myself meet you today..
Said Jayant with a smile making Siya to look confused. Jayant observed her travelling his eyes from her face towards her hand holding the chest. She watches him observing her and immediately turns at her side, away from him.
JAYANT- aap white suit me... Ekdum... Ekdum.... Parii lag rahi hai...
Said Jayant observing her from head to toe making her uncomfortable. He looks at her white anarkali suit, her open hair which were slightly touching her cheeks. Her silver jhumkas and bangles making noise due to the fast blowing air around them.
SIYA- mind your language..
Siya shouted at him closing her eyes, still not facing him.
SIYA- aap... Aap.. yaha kya... kar rahe hain?
Asked Siya further without looking at him while he smile at her question. He takes a step towards her while she kept on gulping in fear.
JAYANT- aapke liye...
Said Jayant forwarding his hand towards her. She looks at his hand which was carrying a red rose, plucked from the garden itself. She travelled her eyes at him who was having an evil smile.
JAYANT- a beautiful rose for a beautiful girl...
Siya gave him a disgusted look.
SIYA- listen Mr.. whatever you are trying to do, it's disgusting..
Siya started yelling at him a bit loudly, pointing her finger towards him.
SIYA- it's called stalking.. I am married.. aur agar married nahi bhi hoti, tab bhi it is a crime to follow anyone without their wish..
Siya kept on shouting at him while he kept on ignoring her words. He observed her finger which was pointing him. She looks at his direction and immediately takes her hand back.
JAYANT- I am not stalking you. I just came here.. to.. meet you..
Said Jayant with a smile while Siya nods her head in disbelief. She looks at her left and then at her right to find no one around her.
SIYA- bhaiya... Kailash bhaiya...
Siya started calling the security guard while Jayant watches her doing that.
JAYANT- mene abhi abhi unhe bahar jate dekha hai. Kisi kam se gaye hai..
Siya's eyes grew wide hearing him. She was getting scared by his continuous stare. She again gets a step back and decided to run from there. Unknowingly she step her foot on a rock and was about to stumble when Jayant holds her left wrist, balancing her.
JAYANT- be careful..
He looks concern at her while her eyes grew wide looking his hold on her. She immediately tried to push him, trying to release her hand while he didn't allowed her. She gets scared looking at his evil expressions and kept on trying to get out of his hold but he tightens the grip on her wrist.
JAYANT- why are you so scared with me.? I just want to do a friendship with you..that's it..
Said Jayant trying to talk with her but Siya kept on releasing her hand from his grip. Suddenly Jayant felt a strong slap on his face, making him to fall on the ground, leaving Siya's hand. Siya looks at her side from where the slap came and became surprised to find Lakshman looking at Jayant in anger.
LAKSHMAN- how dare you...? How dare you touch my bhabhi...?
Lakshman yelled loudly and moves towards him. He holds Jayant's collars and pulls him to stand on his feet.
LAKSHMAN- how dare you harrass her.?
Lakshman again shouted and gave a punch on his right cheek making him to again fall on ground.
SIYA- Lakshman...
Siya calls out his name getting worried while Lakshman again runs towards him and takes a hold on his shirt.
LAKSHMAN- what the hell you think of yourself.. roadside lofar.. cheap...
Jayant was looking scared, by lakshman's anger while Siya tried to call him to leave his hold but her all efforts goes waste. Lakshman was not listening her and continuously shouting at Jayant.
SIYA- Lakshman...
Jayant gave a push to Lakshman making him to stumble and started running from there. Lakshman runs behind him to catch his hold but Jayant was too fast in his run that he disappeared from there in a blink.
LAKSHMAN- damn it..!!
Lakshman punches his fist in air showing his disappointment. He turns around to look at Siya and runs towards her.
LAKSHMAN- bhabhi.. you are fine..?
Asked Lakshman in a concern while Siya keeps her hand on her forehead, closing her eyes in worry. Lakshman observed her and picks the basket from the ground.
LAKSHMAN- chaliye bhabhi..
He holds her hand to give support to her while she smile at him lightly. She gulped her fear and started moving from there. He takes her upstairs, in their home...
*****
Kranti was sitting in temple area, making arrangements for the morning puja. She was looking pale, disturbed, worried and sad, and yes she was, because of the last night dramatic fight with her youngest son. Her mind goes in flashback, remembering all the bitter words from Shatrughan. How dangerously he has reacted shows how much hurt and frustrated he was with her. His pale face was making her heart to wrench. She sighed a heavy breath when she remembers the words by Bharat, when she has shifted Bharat and Manvi's belongings to Ram and Siya's room. She shivers by the thought when Bharat warned her that he will end his life. He was about to leave the house, leave his mother, leave his wife only for Ram. The next thought came in her mind was of Lakshman. The day since he has left with Ram and Siya, she has not heard his voice. At the time of leaving the house, Lakshman didn't care to meet Kranti once, that much hurt he was. She feels sad for Urmila, as she has to bear the pain without any fault. Afterall, it was none of theirs fault. But all were suffering in some of the other way. A lone tear falls from her eyes and she closed her eyes tightly.
SHATRUGHAN- sorry...
A low voice of apology falls on kranti's ear which makes her startled. She opens her eyes immediately and looks at her side to find Shatrughan standing, with his head bowed down and Shruti standing behind him.
KRANTI- huh..?
Kranti gets confused with the words she heard from him. She really wanted to confirm is he really apologizing to her.
SHATRUGHAN- I said... I am sorry...
Said Shatrughan, this time with a bit clear voice. Kranti gets up and turns completely to face him without having any expressions. Shatrughan silently looks at her.
SHATRUGHAN- mene kal jo bhi aap se kaha. Wo gusse me kaha. My mind was full with office tensions. Aur waha ka sara gussa, I poured out in front of you...
Said Shatrughan looking straight into kranti's eyes. He looks down and gulped his emotions.
SHATRUGHAN- I misbehaved with you. My language was not proper. Ho sake to... Mujhe maaf kar dijiye... Maa...
An immediate smile crept on kranti's face after hearing "maa" from Shatrughan, and that too without any anger. Shruti too smile at him and bows down. Kranti wipes her tears and takes a step near him. She fumble to take her hand near Shatrughan, but gain confidence and touch his cheek.
KRANTI- ek maa kabhi.. apne baccho se... Naraz ho sakti hai ?
Said Kranti with a low voice. Shatrughan kept on looking down, not meeting eyes with her.
KRANTI- me samajhti hu beta.. this is the very difficult time for all of us.. I understand all of yours pain.. but... Heartbreak and anger doesn't go hand in hand...
Kranti tried to explain him about his behaviour while Shatrughan didn't react anything. Shruti looks at Kranti and then watches Shatrughan's reaction.
KRANTI- I know tum sab log mujhse bohot naraz ho. But mere upar ki narazgi, apne behavior me mat dikhao Shatrughan.. it will ultimately effect you and your health..
Said Kranti in a low voice while Shatrughan smile sarcastically, still not looking at her. She understood his reaction and bows down not saying anything further.
SHRUTI- Shatrughan.. come.. I'll prepare your breakfast..
Said Shruti while Shatrughan nods at her in yes. Both of them were about to leave from there when Shatrughan stops in between to look at Kranti. She gave a confused look at him.
SHATRUGHAN- maa... Me aapka ladla beta hu na.?
Asked Shatrughan while Kranti smile at his question. She nods her head in agreement.
SHATRUGHAN- to kya aap, apne iss ladle bete ki, ek bat maan sakti hai.?
Kranti narrowed her eyebrows to look in confusion. Shatrughan moves a bit closer to her and holds her shoulders.
SHATRUGHAN- for once, bhaiya bhabhi ko wapis lane ke bare me sochiye na maa...
Kranti gets surprised hearing his request while Shruti looks at Kranti. Shatrughan was having a light smile on his face, after so many days while talking with kranti.
SHATRUGHAN- they will only listen to you maa.. hum me se koi kitne bhi bar bole, they will not agree. Aap bas ek bar bolengi... To wo maan jayenge...
Shatrughan kept on requesting her with a pain in his voice. Kranti bows down, not wanting to meet his eyes. Shatrughan feels hurt by her reaction but decided not to say anything further. He left her hold and turns around to leave from there with Shruti. Kranti motioned her eyes at their direction. She looks sad when her eyes falls on Sumitra, who was standing at a distance. She came near Kranti and tried to read her eyes.
SUMITRA- I can read your eyes didi...and I can witness the guilt ..
Kranti hides her emotions from sumitra and settled down at her position, continuing her work. Sumitra watches her and continued.
SUMITRA- aap janti hai na aapne kya kya khoya hai.?
Asked Sumitra still looking at her expressions while Kranti kept on looking down.
SUMITRA- apne pati aur apne baccho ko khoya hai aap ne didi...try to make up the damage you have done, as soon as possible. Aapko sab log maaf kar denge...
Said Sumitra with a light smile hoping a positive response from kranti. She gulped and looks at Sumitra with her painful eyes.
SUMITRA- if you want to take some time, you surely can.. bas dhyan rakhna, jyada der na ho jaye..
Sumitra said the last line almost giving a warning to Kranti. She was about to leave when Kranti stops her.
KRANTI- sumitra...
Sumitra turns around to look at Kranti who was facing her.
KRANTI- if you would have been in my place... Aur agar tumhe bhi apne baccho ke liye aisi insecurities rehti... To what would you've done..?
Asked kranti looking straight at Sumitra. She gulped and answer her without taking a second thought.
SUMITRA- maa ko kabhi apne baccho ke liye insecurities nahi ho sakti didi...
Kranti looks startled by her answer.
SUMITRA- insecurities tabhi ho sakti hai, jab ek maa... Apne baccho me farak kare...
Said Sumitra with a smile showing Kranti a mirror so that she could understand what mistake she is doing.
SUMITRA- Ram.. Lakshman.. Bharat Shatrughan... Ye mere bacche bhi hai didi... The difference is that, you look at them as four individuals and I look at them as a one... One weapon of Raghuvanshi family...
Kranti narrowed her eyebrows hearing her answer. Sumitra leaves from there keeping Kranti alone. She goes in thoughts about her behaviour. Did she literally considered her children thinking that they are not together..?? Did the insecurities only took birth by her own.? Like this, multiple questions started building up in her mind...
*****
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That's all for today. 😁😁
What will happen when Ram will come to know about this incident.? 😰😨 On the other hand, is Kranti understanding that whatever she has done is all unnecessary insecurities, will she ever try to understand that.?🙄🙄 To know more, stay tuned ❣️
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Loved it dear
Awesome and beautiful😍✨❤
Jayant has crossed his limits this time & thank God Lakshman was there
I really feel that he needs a psychic treatment .. Cheap looser 😡
Chalo Shatru ka gussa thoda kum hua & finally he apologize to Kranti
I loved how he pester her to think on her decision what she has lost
Sumitra too explains her the same with warning that before it's too late she should rectify her mistake
Last part was a slap on krantis face That her insecurities are because she differentiated between her children
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 🙂
Oh my.... this jayanth is really annoying 😑.... really i don't know his intentions till now....is he wishing to be her friend???..🙄...good that laksman came at the right time....and ram siya part❤️😘...new ideas to romance with his wife 😅...he's really a genius in that😂..he's too adorable toooo.love siyaram...💓😍... waiting to see ram's reaction .... kranti....hope she will understand her mistakes soon...she is in the edge of it...let's see what happens 😌...
Jayant literally crossed his limits...eagerly waiting for Ram's reaction ...i wonder whether it will be possessive or angry😮
I hope Kranti realise soon before things get worsen😌
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