SKR FF: "Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story. Updated @ page 151 - Page 72

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it dear

Awesome part & too emotional😪

Chalo Manvi ke baat pe react to kiya Kranti ne but Mandira was too much

She has no right to say anything now as she had done it enough

Finally Ram & Siya are leaving the house and so is Lakshman 😔

All are unhappy with this decision & I think bahut bada bawal hoga Bharat ke aane pe

Let's see what happens next

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Continue soon 🙂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Update was so good and heart touching...💚

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Ver emotional and heart breaking update 😥😢💔💔

Waiting for Bharath and shatru reactions

Update soon ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Urmila54

Kranti had losted her mind...

Manvi must have killed Mandira😡😡😡...

Yaar it was just too much emotional..

The departure is just heartbreaking..

Waiting for the next

Kranti... Uff 😭😭😭

Manvi ko sachme maar hi dena chahiye tha Mandira ko 🙄🙄

Let's see what happens next..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it dear

Awesome part & too emotional😪

Chalo Manvi ke baat pe react to kiya Kranti ne but Mandira was too much

She has no right to say anything now as she had done it enough

Finally Ram & Siya are leaving the house and so is Lakshman 😔

All are unhappy with this decision & I think bahut bada bawal hoga Bharat ke aane pe

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🙂

Thanku..

Pata nahi yeh Kranti kaise Mandira ko bardasht karti hai, she has to tell her to mind her own business 🙄🙄

Yes, finally the three of them are leaving 💔💔

Bharat and Shatrughan ayega to pata nahi kya hoga

Stay tuned ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali170299

Update was so good and heart touching...💚

Thanku.. 🙂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: chsripriya

Ver emotional and heart breaking update 😥😢💔💔

Waiting for Bharath and shatru reactions

Update soon ☺️

Thanku so much dear..

Let's see what happens next

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Posted: 4 years ago

Next morning, the phone rang at Rajrishi house and Sunaina goes to answer the call.

SUNAINA- hello..

RAM- maa...

Sunaina's face light up hearing Ram from other end.

SUNAINA- Ram... Me to kal se tum sabko yad kar rahi thi..hogayi puja..?? Sab kaise hai..?? And when is the party now..??

Sunaina asked him a number of questions while Ram sighed, unknown of the answers.

RAM- sab theek hai maa...

Sunaina's smile disappeared hearing Ram's tensed voice.

SUNAINA- kya baat hai beta.?

RAM- Wo... Papa hai..!?

Sunaina feels Ram's voice to be low. She looks confused and was about to ask him but stopped herself.

SUNAINA- aa.bb.. ha.. one minute..

She turns around and calls for Janak.

SUNAINA- suniye... Ram's call is there for you..

Janak came there with a smile.

JANAK- what happened.?

Asked Janak looking at Sunaina's disturbed face. She gave a "don't know" look and forwards the phone to Janak.

JANAK- hello Ram..

RAM- namaste papa... Actually.. I wanted to talk with you..

Janak looks confused while Sunaina observed his expressions.

JANAK- ha.. kaho..

Ram started telling him about the incidents which happened in Raghuvanshi palace since yesterday. While Sunaina kept on looking at janak's change in expression which were changing from tense to sad to worried. She was getting restless about what Ram is saying. Kushal and Chandra also came there and looks at Sunaina and then at Janak. After a while Janak nods his head.

JANAK- hmm.. theek hai..let's solve this together.... Ok..

Janak disconnect the call and turns to face everyone.

SUNAINA- kya hua..? Kya keh raha tha Ram.?

Janak sighed heavily and answered her.

JANAK- Ram... Siya.. and Lakshman are coming here.. today...

Kushal and Chandra became happy hearing him while Sunaina looks confused.

CHANDRA- wow.. Delhi arahe hai wo log.? But bhaiya.. what about Urmila.? Lakshman akele arahe hai kya.?

Chandra questioned him while Janak didn't said anything, looking down.

KUSHAL- aur bhaiya.. Manvi and Shruti are not coming.? I mean.. Bharat and Shatrughan bhi Hyderabad gaye hai.. so wo bhi aasakte the..

Kushal looks confused while Janak again didn't answer them. Sunaina scrunched her brows looking at janak's tensed face.

SUNAINA- kya bat hai..? Aap.. batayiye na.. kya hua hai waha.?

Kushal and Chandra looks at each other getting confused. Janak sighed and moves closer to them.

JANAK- Ram Siya.. aur lakshman.. wo ghar chodke.. delhi arahe hai..

Janak's announcement makes everyone surprised.

SUNAINA- kya..? Gh..ghar.. chodk..chodke matlab..??

Sunaina stammered to ask him further.

JANAK- Kranti bhabhi... Raghuvanshi enterprises ka batwara karna chahti hai..

Sunaina's eyes goes wide hearing the shocking news while Chandra closed her shocked mouth and Kushal looks confused

KUSHAL- what..?? Batwara..??

JANAK- ha Kushal.. unke mann me.. kuch insecurities hai.. may be.. Ram and Siya ko lekar..

Answered Janak making everyone more shock.

SUNAINA- what are you saying.? Wo.. hamare baccho ke bare me aisa soch bhi kaise sakti hai.?

Sunaina questioned about kranti's behaviour making Janak to look disappointed.

JANAK- I don't know that Sunaina. Abhi Ram ne bas itna kaha.. that he don't want to do batwara.. isliye.. wo aur Siya ghar chodke yaha arahe hai.. and Lakshman is also leaving.. Urmila ke bina...

Sudden tears started forming in Sunaina's eyes. She falls on sofa while Chandra runs towards her.

CHANDRA- didi.. sambhaliye khud ko..

Chandra caresses Sunaina's back as she was crying.

CHANDRA- mujhe to yakin nahi ho raha.. kranti bhabhi... Aisa kar sakti hai..?? Wo to Ram ko apne sage beto se bhi jyada pyar karti thi..

Said Chandra getting disappointed. Sunaina kept on crying while Janak sighed in disbelief.

SUNAINA- hamari ... Hamari betiyo ka kya hoga chandra..? Siya.. Urmila... Wo log... Kya...??

Sunaina questioned between her cries while Chandra caresses her to relax.

CHANDRA- bhaiya.. I am sorry if I'm saying something odd.. but.. agar ye bat news me agayi..to tamasha ban jayega..

Said Chandra while the other three looks in surprise.

CHANDRA- sab log.. hamari betiyo ko culprit kahenge.. sab kahenge ki.. unki shadi hote hi.. wo log us ghar me jate hi.. ghar ka batwara hogaya..

KUSHAL- Chandra...

Kushal interrupts her as her words were making Janak and Sunaina more tensed.

KUSHAL- what nonsense are you saying.? Hume logo se kya matlab..? Sacchai to hum jante hai na..

Chandra nods at him in agreement.

SUNAINA- nahi Kushal.. chandra is right.. log to yahi kahenge.. ki hamari betiyo ki wajah se..wo ghar tut gaya..

Sunaina covered her face and again started crying. Janak moves towards her and settled down beside her.

JANAK- Sunaina...

She looks at him and cried in his embrace.

JANAK- don't think about these things Sunaina.. wo hamare char betiyo ka ghar hai.. whatever has happened there, we only have to be with our children.

Janak tried to calm her down while Sunaina nods her head.

KUSHAL- ha bhabhi... Iss time pe hume bas Ram aur Siya ko support karna hai.. khud kamzor nahi padna hai..

Sunaina wipes her tears and nods in agreement.

CHANDRA- aur hamari betiyan to bohot strong hai didi.. dekhna.. iss samay bhi wo log ek dusre ki chinta kar rahe honge aur apne pariwar ke bare me soch rahe honge...

Said Chandra placing her hand on Sunaina's shoulder. While Sunaina nods her head in agreement smiling sadly thinking about her four daughters...

*****

SIYA- सकइ न बोलि बिकल नरनाहू। सोक जनित उर दारुन दाहू॥

नाइ सीसु पद अति अनुरागा। उठि रघुबीर बिदा तब मागा॥

The girls were sitting in front of the temple praying together for the last time. They were emotional, sad and busy in their thoughts, just praying to God for everyone's wellness.

SIYA- Raja Dashrath apne bahu aur bete ke jane ki khabar se bohot dukhi hai. Tab Prabhu Ram ne unke pair chukar, akhri bar unse vida mangi..

A tear drop from Siya's eyes while explaining the phrases and comparing it with their situation. She wipes her tears and continued reading.

SIYA- औरु करै अपराधु कोउ और पाव फल भोगु।

अति बिचित्र भगवंत गति को जग जानै जोगु॥

Siya stammered while reading the lines from the holy book. Manvi looks at her getting emotional while Urmila burst into tears. Shruti keeps her hand on urmila's shoulder to calm her down.

SIYA- apradh koi aur kare, aur uska phal koi aur pa raha hai. Bhagwan ki leela hai ye, use janne wala iss duniya me koi nahi hai..

The girls looks at her hearing the meaning from her. They look at each other and then at Siya who was thinking about Kranti's demand...

SIYA- लोग बिकल मुरुछित नरनाहू। काह करिअ कछु सूझ न काहू॥

रामु तुरत मुनि बेषु बनाई। चले जनक जननिहि सिरु नाई॥

Siya stammered to speak further. Her voice broke as she gets emotional. She controlled her tears by closing her eyes.

SIYA- pariwar ke sabhi log dukhi hogaye, Raja bimar hogaye. Aur Prabhu Ram, apne mata pita se ashirwad lekar, mata sita aur Lakshman ke sath Ayodhya chodkar chale gaye...

Everyone's eyes were filled with tears. They knew that this is going to happen with them soon. Siya wipes her eyes and closed the book, joining her hands before the God. She gets up and the girls too follows her.

SIYA- Manvi...

Siya turns and calls Manvi near her.

SIYA- from tomorrow.. it's your responsibility to read the Ramayana for everyone during morning puja..

Manvi looks sad hearing Siya. Siya hands the Ramayana to her and smile looking at her. Manvi accept the book and keeps it at its place.

SIYA- mere bad.. ab tum iss ghar ki badi bahu ho Manvi.. you've to fulfill each and every responsibility as an eldest daughter in law..

Manvi's eyes gets teary. She lightly nods her head in yes. Siya smile at her and caresses her head.

SIYA- Bharat ane ke bad, tumhe use bhi sambhalna hai manvi.. don't get disappointed now..you've to gain strength to handle him..

Manvi nods her head again. Siya wipes manvi's tears and embrace her in a hug. After a moment, she release her and looks at Shruti.

SIYA- Shruti..

Shruti moves towards her and embrace her tightly while crying.

SIYA- bas...

Siya caresses her back to calm her down. She released Shruti from the hug and wipes her tears.

SIYA- you also have to handle your husband Shruti..tumhe tumhari dono badi beheno ko bhi sambhalna hoga.. take care of yourself and of everyone..

SHRUTI- aap aisa kyu keh rahi hai dii..? You've said na, that you all will return when everything gets fine..?? Fir aap aisa kyu keh rahi hai jaise aap hamesha ke liye ja rahi hai..

Shruti questioned her getting emotional. Manvi bows down shedding some tears while Urmila goes numb. Siya smile at her and caresses her face.

SIYA- ofcourse Shruti.. sab theek zarur hoga. But wo time kab ayega, ye hum nahi jante na..? Isliye tab tak, you've to be strong.. hmm.?

Shruti nods her head in agreement. Siya's eyes falls on Urmila who was silently watching her.

SIYA- what should I advise you Urmila..? Tumne already itna bada sacrifice kiya hai..

Said Siya feeling apologetic while Urmila shook her head lightly.

URMILA- I've not done any sacrifice dii.. me bas apna diya hua promise pura kar rahi hu..

Siya looks at her in confusion while Urmila smile lightly.

URMILA- shadi se pehle, I have promised Lakshman, that I will not come between him and his Ram bhaiya.. unki life me, mein hamesha secondary rahungi, the first position will always be of jiju..

Siya gets emotional hearing her words. She forwards her hand and Urmila holds it softly.

SIYA- we all will always be thankful for your sacrifices Urmila .. apne pati se dur rehna, ek patni ke liye hamesha se sabse buri chiz rahi hai.. and today, you and Lakshman are setting example by living separate...

Urmila gets tears in her eyes. Siya embrace her in a tight hug. After a while they released each other.

SIYA- promise me.. that you all will fulfill your responsibilities as a wife and daughter-in-law properly...

Siya forward her hand asking promise from the three of them. The girls keeps their hand on Siya's hand with a sad smile. They embrace Siya in a hug, crying in her arms while Siya caresses all of them...

*****

Kranti was standing in front of Kaushalya's photo, staring her having tears in her eyes. She heard a knock at the door and turns to witness Ram and Siya standing.

RAM- maa... Hum nikal rahe hai..

Kranti's heart skip for a moment hearing Ram. Both of them enters the room near Kranti.

RAM- Lakshman sathme chalne ki zidd kar raha hai, isliye I'm taking him with me..

Kranti looks sad about Lakshman. She looks at the door to find him but there was no one.

RAM- Right now, it is impossible to make him understand. But trust me maa, thode dino me use samjhakar, mein wapis bhej dunga..

Kranti bows down hearing him about Lakshman. Ram smile at her and moves more closer to her.

RAM- Bharat and Shatrughan are unaware of these things maa. Jab wo lautenge, to unhe sambhalna difficult hoga. But you explain them everything. I believe, wo aapki bat zarur sunenge..

Kranti motioned her eyes to look at him. She was having tears in her eyes.

RAM- I've told papa, to appoint Bharat as MD. Uske Hyderabad se ate hi, papa will do all the formalities. Don't worry..

Kranti looks at Siya who was smiling at her lightly.

SIYA- me ek aur bat kahu aap se maa.?

Siya moves closer to her, asking kranti's permission. Kranti lightly nods her head.

SIYA- filhal ye bat, kisiko nahi pata hai. But tomorrow, it will reach till media..

Kranti gulped hearing her words. She looks other way thinking about the reputation of Raghuvanshi family.

SIYA- ye sab kyu horaha hai, kisliye horaha hai, log puchenge.. bate banayenge..koi aapko galat kahega, koi hume galat kahega..

Kranti again looks at Siya feeling apologetic. Siya holds her hands and caresses it softly.

SIYA- but aap kamzor mat padna. Apne dil par kisi tarah ka bojh mat rakhna maa..kyuki ek maa, kabhi apne baccho ke liye galat nahi soch sakti..

Ram smile at Siya's words. He looks at Kranti who was crying with silent tears falling from her eyes.

SIYA- hosakta hai.. ghar me sab log aap se naraz rahe. Papa aap se gussa ho.. But you have to stay strong. Aap ne apne bade bete Ram ke liye, acha hi socha hai maa. Aur aapka bada beta bhi.. apni khushi se ye ghar chod raha hai.. so don't blame yourself for anything...

Siya tightens her grip on kranti's hand while Kranti nods her head lightly. Ram looks at Kaushalya's photo with a sad smile.

RAM- ab aapko meri maa ka khyal rakhna hai.. inhe kabhi akela mat padne dijiyega..

Ram said looking at Kaushalya to take care of Kranti. While she looks at him lovingly. Kranti caresses Ram's face while Ram smile at her.

RAM- aapko jab bhi hamari zarurat pade, you have to call us maa. Ok.?

Kranti nods her head lightly.

SIYA- maa.. mene papa ki sari medicines pe, timing and dose ka label laga diya hai. Urmila will handle that.

Siya started telling her about what all arrangements she has done while Kranti kept on hearing her.

SIYA- morning puja and Ramayana path.. Manvi dekh legi.. and monthly bills and expenses, Shruti will handle..mene unn tino ko sabkuch bata diya hai. Aur fir bhi kuch ho, to aap unhe sab bata dena..

Said Siya while Kranti keeps her hand on Siya's hand.

SIYA- choti maa, thodi pareshan hai. But she will get fine soon.. you don't worry about her..

Said Siya with a smile and Kranti nods at her in agreement.

RAM- ek bat yad rakhna maa... Hum distance se alag hue hai.. but aapke Ram aur Siya, hamesha aapke dil me hi rahenge..

Kranti started crying hearing their words. Ram and Siya looks at each other and then at Kranti. They bend in front of her to take her blessings. Kranti wipes her tears and keeps her hand on their head, caressing it lightly.

KRANTI- jaha bhi raho.. hamesha khush raho..

Said Kranti in a low voice making Ram and Siya to smile. They gets up to look at her with a smile.

RAM- take care maa..

Ram and Siya turns to leave from there. Kranti was about to stop them but stops herself not saying anything. She turns her back at the door, crying her heart out in front of Kaushalya...

*****

References:

Shlokas: Sampoorna Ramayana - Ayodhya kand

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ye Kranti samajh ke bhi Nasamjh bann rhi h.. She knows very well ki jo ho raha hai sab galath but phir bhi...😡😡😡..

Just Waiting for the family to reunite soon...😔😔

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Posted: 4 years ago

Sometimes i feel pity on Kranti too...all she is doing is just of insecurities and manipulation..😌😌

Hope everyone gets strength 😐

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